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Posted: 11 years ago
vish first sory ws busy so late cment.😔
I hope ur headache wl cure soon, take proper rest.😊
dis nt fair, u write update n blame to ur finacee😉 n who said u r nt good in romance scene 😲 its totaly wrong dear never think like dis.

As usual marvelous update 😃
ofice trophy competition win by kalpi dat too ltl diference, i realy like d way u make it cz u didnt put kalpi so high by putting other employee low. U made kalpi n richa on same path n cz of ltl fault richa lost. Realy its superb thought. 😊

payal kalpi wow wat an amazing understnding again n today kalpi undestnd payal, dat showing equal frndship. I hope dis akash is nyc guy n he wl put payal happy.

Roka its small scene bt kalpi sharing dat thing wich she evn didnt share wid rags n its showing trust n so much bonding btwn dem. N u knw frm dat song it is realy so romantic yar, dnt say u cnt write romantic scene.
"Kalpi moves a bit on this and
covers her face with her scarf.. Machal Rahi Hai
Mere Dil Me Did Ki Hasrat
Wo Daale Chehare Pe
Neela Nakaab Neend Me Hain
" i ltrly rofling 🤣
love whole updaeawm🤗
Edited by shonali164 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: appyK

Res

Unres..

Fabulous update...I know i'm behaving like total besharam but more than the past thing i think kiss is what is roy's gift coz she didn't share it even with rags😳😳😳
Continue soon..hope so RoKa ke first kiss ko koi interrupt na kare😆


Thank u Appy.. Who knows that kiss will be complete or not.. 😆

Well.. I understood that people here including me are GM so it's nothing new that u r concentrating on kiss. I won't mind giving a long kiss in further updates.😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Chalo blank hi sahi.. reply kia!! I m filling it for myself.." vish nice update.. it's going good and m enjoying it..". LOLz!! Seju.. see I made ur work easier😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: renuloves

Wow
Plz plz plz is baar next update jaldi kariye
Can't wait for a day

updating in a while

Thank u dear.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sunyy

Awesome update. Loved how kalpi and toy go on a trip. And don't warty the songs r awesome. Waiting for trip please continue asap 😛


Thank u dear.. M happy that u liked the song.. I thought it was bit infamous,😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: shonali164

vish first sory ws busy so late cment.😔
I hope ur headache wl cure soon, take proper rest.😊
dis nt fair, u write update n blame to ur finacee😉 n who said u r nt good in romance scene 😲 its totaly wrong dear never think like dis.

As usual marvelous update 😃
ofice trophy competition win by kalpi dat too ltl diference, i realy like d way u make it cz u didnt put kalpi so high by putting other employee low. U made kalpi n richa on same path n cz of ltl fault richa lost. Realy its superb thought. 😊

payal kalpi wow wat an amazing understnding again n today kalpi undestnd payal, dat showing equal frndship. I hope dis akash is nyc guy n he wl put payal happy.

Roka its small scene bt kalpi sharing dat thing wich she evn didnt share wid rags n its showing trust n so much bonding btwn dem. N u knw frm dat song it is realy so romantic yar, dnt say u cnt write romantic scene.
"Kalpi moves a bit on this and
covers her face with her scarf.. Machal Rahi Hai
Mere Dil Me Did Ki Hasrat
Wo Daale Chehare Pe
Neela Nakaab Neend Me Hain
" i ltrly rofling 🤣
love whole updaeawm🤗


Shona 🤗
No issue about late comment.. i know that u will comment.

Blamin about my fiancee.. Well, Girls always need someone to blame so they make bfs.. Unfortunately my bf is now my fiancee. So it's his fault..

That PaKa scene was inserted just to show that Kalpi has not forgotten Payal but she is as imp to her as Roy.
RoKa.. well more scenes and lots of songs are on the way.. I hope u like them too. updating in a while.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sasir

nice

loved it
plz update soon


Thank u.. Updating now.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hello guys.. As promised m giving double update.. This part m dedicating to AppyK also known as Arpita.. As I have stole car ride idea from her FF. Neways sorry m not going to precap scene right now as the ride became bit long.. but will try to give that scene in next update.. Till than enjoy this current update.. Sorry for all the mistakes.. Lyrics credit to some site found on google. And that

The flight has landed.. A guy with a board of Roy's name was standing at terminal.. Roy and Kalpi goes to the car with them.. Kalpi sees a red beetle car with a detachable top.. She remembers the day when she described such car for ride..


Flashback

PaRoKa sitting in Roy's cafe chatting and enjoying.. When a silver beetle car stops in front of the cafe.. Kalpi looks at that and says "WOW, this is my favorite car.. I wish someday I can purchase it. But not this black color.. bloody red with convertible top!! It's one of the item of my bucket list.. I want to cover all India.. Visits different places in it."

Payal(teasingly) : Mungerilaal ke hasin Sapne

Kalpi : first u told me to share everything n now when I have learned.. u r making my fun.. Fine!! I will not take u with me.. Only me and Roy will go..

Flashback ends


Kalpi laughs on remembering it.. Roy tells her to share the reason so that he can also laugh..

Kalpi : Do u remember the day I told that I want to travel whole india in exactly this type of car and tols Payal that we will go alone and won't take her.. Exactly that's happening today.. We are going to travel in my dream car without Payal.. Do u remember it??

Roy : Off course I do!! That's why I told my frn to send this particular car!!

Kalpi realizes that Roy hired this particular car for her.. They share an eyelock when driver disturbs them and handover key to Roy. Kalpi dumps her bag in the backseat and slumps on the seat.. Roy takes driver seat.. Kalpi excitedly switch on the navigator placed in the car and types her school name.. It starts giving direction..

Kalpi : Follow it properly as I do not want to get lost in night... We will reach our destination in 5-6 hours that is max by 6 am.

Roy : When u have the beautiful companion than who worries about the destination.. I won't mind getting lost with u..

Kalpi blushes a bit and start looking in the left... The dark night was making the atmosphere romantic.. It starts drizzling and she starts enjoying it by extending her hand..

Kalpi : U know I just love mumbai rains.. U never know when it starts raining.. This lonely roads.. drizzling water droplets.. n chilling wind is perfect for..

Roy(before she can complete) : Perfect for romance.. Only music is missing..Let me switch on the music system...

Kalpi : No it's perfect for masala chai...

Kalpi points towards the tea stall on the road side and requests Roy to stop the car.. They steps down.. Kalpi was shivering with cold and tells the vendor to give two masala teas..

Roy : I don't like tea.. I want coffee..

Kalpi : Shut up!! Bhaiya u give tea only... Come'n roy.. Try it for once.. u will forget ur coffee..

Roy : Anything for u madam..

It starts raining heavilly.. Vendor tells them to sit in the car and he will give them tea there only.. RoKa runs towards the car and Roy covers the car top to stop from getting wet.. Kalpi looks at him in disappointment..

Roy : No Kalpi.. not today.. We still have to cover big distance and I do not want u to catch cold coz of wet clothes so try to understand.. Now enjoy the music.. give me ur ipod.. u have nice collection of song..

Kalpi : No... It's time for Raat baaki.. My fav radio show.. Tune into fm plz.

Roy switches on the radio...

RJ : So we were talking about expressing love.. So have u expressed ur feelings to the person u love..If not than dial our number and we will help u in expressing ur feeling to ur partner.. So here is our first caller of the night.. Hello whom with I am talking..

Caller : I am Sunil..

Rj : So sunil.. whom do u love..

Sunil : She is my best friend Pooja.. This is her favorite show and she must be listening it now.. I just want to tell her that I love her a lot.. I always feared to not share my feeling with her coz I don't want to lose our friendship but today I want to tell her that I love her a lot and can't live without her..

RJ : Well Sunil.. I just hope that Pooja is listening us right now.. Pooja, Sunil really loves u.. Plz accept his love. So guys, Sunill expressed his feelings but what about u.. r u still struggling.. Than this song is for u...

While listening this Roy and Kalpi were lost in each other.. When Tea boy breaks the eyelock by giving tea to the,...Roy takes the tea and gives him money.. Kalpi finds a leaf on Roy's head and advances her hand to remove it.. Roy glares at her sweetly.. Kalpi tries to give explanation but stammers.. She shows the leaf to him and he nods as if telling her it's fine... Song plays on the radio..

Jab kisiki taraf dil jhukane lage
Baat aakar juba tak rukane lage

Aankho aankho me ikraar hone lage

Bol do agar tumhe pyaar hone lage
Hone lage, hone lage

Roys take the sip of tea and burns his tongue.. Kalpi shows her concerns and takes the cup from his hand.. She blows the surface of the cup and takes a sip from her cup.. With eyes she gestures him to follow her and handover the tea to him.. He takes a sip and dislike it's taste but smiles at Kalpi and with his hand gestures that it's awesome.. Kalpi too smiles on it..

Chahane jab lage dil kisee kee khushee
Dillagee yeh nahee yeh hai dil kee lagee

She takes out the hanky to wipes the mustache Roy made coz of tea... She wipes it.. Roy holds her hand and takes the hanky and wipes her mustache.. She hesitates and turns her face..

Aandhiyo ko dabane se kya fayda
Pyaar dil me chhupane se kya fayda
Jan se pyara jab dildar hone lage
Bol do agar tumhe pyaar hone lage
Hone lage, hone lage

Kalpi looks outside to avoid his gaze and She closes her eys and remembers their moments of bangalore.. They way he lifted her.. She smiles unknowingly and turns her face towards him.. He is busy in driving.. She keeps staring at him.. Song keeps playing..

Usakee khushabu agar apanee saanso me ho
Usaka sapna agar apanee aankho me ho
Jab naa dil ke behelne kee surat lage
Jab koyee jindagee kee jarurat lage
Aur jina bhee dushwar hone lage
Bol do agar tumhe pyaar hone lage
Hone lage hone lage

She remembers Payal telling her to live in present and not in past.. Song ends..

Jab kisiki taraf dil jhukane lage
Baat aakar juba tak rukane lage
Aankho aankho me ikraar hone lage
Bol do agar tumhe pyaar hone lage
Hone lage, pyaar hone lage

Roy feels the awkwardness in Kalpi and decides to talk.. He asks her about the competition and she excitedly tells him how she prepared the plan and what all she had in her mind.. Kalpi was speaking non stop and Roy was just a good listener.. They dint paid attention to what RJ was saying and which song was playing.. Kalpi was just sharing about everything related to her office and Payal and Akash.. Just a song catches their attention..


Yeh Tumhari Meri Baathein, Hamesha Yuhin Chalti Rahe
Yeh Hamari Mulakate, Hamesha Yuhin Chalti Rahe
Beete Yuhin Apne Saare Din Raat
Baaton Se Nikalti Rahe Nayi Baat
Phir Wahin Baathein Leke Geet Koi Hum Likhe
Jo Dil Ko Haan Sab Ke Dil Ko Chu Le
Baathein Suron Mein Yuhin Pighalti Rahen
Baathein Geeton Mein Yuhin Dalti Rahen

They laugh on it and Kalpi start singing with it loudly.. roy looks at the happy kalpi and stops the car..

Kalpi : what happened?? Panchgani is still 80 kms away..

Roy : U just sit the way u r sitting right now..

He takes out his camera and takes her snaps.. She too poses in different style in the car n on the car .. Few selfies and few pics of happy Kalpi.. They resumes their journey.. Kalpi gets tired and sleeps in few minutes.. Roy keeps driving.. They reaches Panchgani.. He stops outside her hostel.. Sun has just rose.. he looks at the golden rays on sun falling on beautiful hill giving it a golden touch.. Thru window it reaches Kalpi's face.. She gets startled and wakes up.

Kalpi : We reached..Why dint u wake me up?? When we reached??

Roy : Just now.. I dint want to lose the opportunity to look at sleeping beauty hence dint disturb u.. Did anyone told u how beautiful u r..

Kalpi(confidently) : Yes.. U only told me few days back.. Now let's go to the hostel..

Roy : Everyone must be sleeping.. U want us to disturb them??

Kalpi : It's hostel.. not ur home.. It's already 6 pm and everyone would be awake by now.. u just come with mer..

Roy and Kalpi reaches the hostel... She did some formalities at door and runs towards the warden room.. Warden looks at Kalpi carefully trying to recognize her..

Kalpi : Madam.. u don't remember me??

Warden : Silent Topper.. Kalpana Jadhav,, How can I forgot u.. U were my favorite student..

Kalpi hugs her and introduces Roy as her friend.. She tells Warden that she has come here to show Roy her hostel.. Warden welcomes them and tells Kalpi them to stay in hostel.. Kalpi in girls and Roy in boys.. She tells Roy not to cheat as boys are not allowed in girls hostel but kalpi can go to meet him Roy laughs and tells her that he is not a naughty boy and will follow the rule.. Kalpi tells Roy to freshen up and she will see him at breakfast after that she will take him to meet her Amma.


Regards
Vish
Edited by fairylover - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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may posble wl unres 2marow
m sleepy sleepy 😆
unres finaly
wow amazing, fabulous, awsm, marvelous, n so romantic.
Vish i feel whole journey, its like m doing dis journey.
Its realy superb.
Kalpi deserves roy who is so protecting, caring, n nt posesive.
Just lv update.
Edited by shonali164 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update darling loved it😛

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