Kalpana's Love FF Last Chapter pg 92

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rani214

@rani214

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#111

Nice update

Spoilers also sounds interesting

Continue soon dear

I luv ur writing really wit each update story jus getting more n more interresting

🤗 4 u

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Priya

@priya_remix

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Posted: 11 years ago

#112

Originally posted by: AWriterAtHeart
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Unres!

WIll unres the previous one here too 😆 but Aria I'm loving this one! The twists and turns are absolutely mind blowing. Girl what are you on about not being a good writer? You're amazing! It's all in the creativity of the author and voila! You have one fine piece coming your way. I'm not sure if I like Babli or if I don't but then again, considering that she's one of the pivotal characters I'll let her hang in the shadows and let you work your magic.

I'm genuinely curious as to what's the story behind Babli's birth and Kalpi's lie to Raghav. Also, I'm quite interested in the equation between Babli and the Kapoors.

Lol, for some reason, Priya reminds me of Pakhi. Besides the fact she's Pakhi's daughter but the equation of Priya-Zayne-Babli is something that is similar to Pakhi-Raghav-Kalpi but let's see what happens.

Aria darling, I loved every bit of it and please continue soon. I'm eagerly waiting for the next update sweety!

Lots and lots of love with a big big hug!
🤗❤️

Edit:
I just realised I was first. 😲

I know Rags Aria keep on going about her first time and all but I feel she is writing like a pro! Girl u r a born writer! Right from the first chappy you have us hooked on! The mystery, the emotions, the drama everything in the right proportion!!!

Love your ff Aria! U r doing a fab job!

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Priya

@priya_remix

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Posted: 11 years ago

#113

Loved ur chappy 10!!! And I dont hate babli I just pity her! Poor kid was brought up without a father and probably this is the frustration she is taking out on Raghav!

She is so much like her father that it makes me smile to see their confrontations,just love them! Baap beti ka competition is really interesting!

Someone getting married and someone getting pregnant? Are these someone one n same person or two diffrnt ppl? Then toh big prblm!! LOL

Zayne is confusing me like hell! And ya Kapoor family is so crazy. Baap beta behind maa beti LOL

Curious to know how Neetu managed to separate RagNa and why Kalpi hid the truth about babli from Raghav!

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Kiaraah

@Kiaraah

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#114

Awesome update yaar. I don't think anybody will hate Babli. We can understand that kapoors are responsible for her misunderstanding Raghav. As I'm going on vacation I will be reading rest of your updates after a week. Will comment later. Also pm me when you update. Gotta go, bye.

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sampa79

@sampa79

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Posted: 11 years ago

#115

Eagar for next part update soon

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Aria

@Cinnamonn

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#116

Originally posted by: chahat4u
Oh Aria...it's different, and completely creative in a good way! At the moment I am hating Babli...and I don't like her at all! 😆 hope everything sets right soon.

thank you charu you 🤗 hate my sweet babli but soon you'll hate her more 😆

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Aria

@Cinnamonn

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Posted: 11 years ago

#117

Originally posted by: ragna_luv
Awesome update yaar. I don't think anybody will hate Babli. We can understand that kapoors are responsible for her misunderstanding Raghav. As I'm going on vacation I will be reading rest of your updates after a week. Will comment later. Also pm me when you update. Gotta go, bye.

will pm you deary have a safe and good trip and thank you 😃

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Aria

@Cinnamonn

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#118

Originally posted by: priya_remix
Loved ur chappy 10!!! And I dont hate babli I just pity her! Poor kid was brought up without a father and probably this is the frustration she is taking out on Raghav!
She is so much like her father that it makes me smile to see their confrontations,just love them! Baap beti ka competition is really interesting!

Someone getting married and someone getting pregnant? Are these someone one n same person or two diffrnt ppl? Then toh big prblm!! LOL

Zayne is confusing me like hell! And ya Kapoor family is so crazy. Baap beta behind maa beti LOL

Curious to know how Neetu managed to separate RagNa and why Kalpi hid the truth about babli from Raghav!

thank you priya 🤗everything will come out but there has to be drama right married and pregnant is the same person 😉

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Aria

@Cinnamonn

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#119

Chapter 11 part (a)

Babli smiled at her.

Babli-Your'e Raghav Singhaina's Mother,how come you're so nice

Gauri-Your'e my Granddaughter.

Babli kissed gauri

Babli-Thank you,I'll get going.

Babli saw kalpi and Raghav by the kitchen door,she watched them and left.Raghav and kalpi hugged gauri happliy.

Night came

Babli came home and saw Priya and Zayne watching a movie,Priya saw babli.

Priya -Babli come and watch with us

Zayne listened

Babli-No priya i have to go somewhere tomorrow,i have to get up early

Priya-Okay good night

Babli smiled and left.

Priya-Zayne I think babli likes Avi

Zayne watched Priya

Priya-I'm sure she was with him,she was out whole day

Priya smiled

Priya- Both does look cute together

Zayne was irritated,he got up and left,Priya watched him confused.

In Raghav's Room

Kalpi stood behind ragahv

Raghav-I'm clueless Kalpi

Kalpi watches him

Kalpi-About what?

Raghav-Babli

Kalpi was Nervous

Raghav-Kalpi how was babli born why didn't see and know about her?

Kalpi watched raghav and remembered kamla telling her to tell raghav when she's ready.

Ragahv-Why didn't i see babli?

Kalpi-Because i Hid her.

Raghav was shocked

Kalpi-Neetu Aunty is Responsible for me Hiding babli from you

Raghav turned and watched her shocked

Ragahv-What do you mean Neetu is responsible! You hid babli from me why did you do that!

Raghav walked up to kalpi and held her shoulders tightly in anger,Kalpi was in tears.

Raghav-Why did you do this kalpi,why is neetu responsible?

Kalpi was in tears

Raghav-When We where seperated i never touched you once then...

Raghav watched kalpi.

Raghav-Its either someone else touched you or Babli is Illegitimate

Kalpi was shocked

Raghav-Answer me kalpi!

Kalpi broked down.

Kalpi-I was pregnant we where happy,do you remember the day we where in the hospital?

Raghav-Yes,but you were moody

In Singhaina's Mansion Kalpi is 9 Months Pregnant,Kalpi breathing in and out

Raghav-Kalpi are you okay

Kalpi who was irritated watched raghav and grabed his shirt

Kalpi-I'm going through Labor pains do i look Okay!

Gauri seperated kalpi from raghav and rubbed her back

Gauri -Raghav Go and get some water for kalpi

Kalpi-Mom its just pains it will go away I'm not due till next week,

Gauri helped Kalpi up,Raghav gave kalpi the water but she didn't take it

Raghav-Kalpi take the water,whats wrong?

Kalpi put her hand on her stomach

Kalpi-My water just broke

Garui and Raghav was shocked and rushed kalpi to hospital.

In the hospital

Kalpi was in a room breathing in and out,when raghav's phone kept on ringing kalpi watched him.

Kalpi -Raghav can i see your phone?

Raghav-Sure but I'm expecting a call.

Raghav gave kalpi his phone,Raghav's phone rang and kalpi answered it.

Kalpi-Hello this is Kalpana Singhaina speaking my husband is in the hospital because I'm going through labour! Don't you dare call back this phone!

Kalpi flinged raghav's phone on the wall,Raghav watched her scared.

Raghav watched kalpi

Raghav-What does Neetu have to do in all this?

Kalpi-Raghav Babli isn't Illegitimate

Raghav was shocked

Raghav-Then?

Kalpi-She's Adi's Twin

Raghav was shell shocked

Kalpi- we had twins

Raghav watched her

Kalpi-When you left the room after i gave birth i went to check on Adi and Babli then i saw neetu aunty holding her she tried to inject something in her but i slaped her and she ran.

Raghav was shocked

Kapli-Then i called aai and gave her babli and told her to hide her away from you because i had to show that i had a baby so i kept adi with you,

babli had her life without you raghav,Paakhi tried to kill me,Neetu Aunty Tried to kill babli and Adi what else could i do?

Raghav-Adi had his life without his mother and sister,You could've trusted me.

Raghav left from there kalpi sat on the ground and sobbed.

sorry if it didn't make any sence im just spaced out i'll do the second part later 😛