WE WILL BE TOGETHER~ASYA DRABBLE!!

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Posted: 11 years ago
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I AM ON A ROLL🤢
I KNOW IT'S REALLY DISGUSTING THAT I AM NOT UPDATING MY FF...BUT I HAVE THESE THOUGHTS WONDERING INTO MY MIND...
I HAVE WRITTEN THAT TOO...BUT WILL UPDATE AFTER EDITING AND FEW FINAL TOUCHES...😳
TILL THEN READ IT...

IT'S NOT A FLUFFY FLUFF

****WE WILL BE TOGETHER****

Souls connect...

Hearts beat in sync...

When two lovers unite, they just feel the emotions...you and me can't understand!!

Zoya waited and waited...today she'll once again FEEL her Asad.

She had waited for him to come back to her since five months.

He was busy.

Saving the citizens of the country...having sleepless nights himself.

HE WAS A SOLDIER!! A FIERCE ONE...

When they got married, Zoya was ecstatic...she loved him from the college days.

But she grew sad when she realized they had to drift apart...

For Major Asad Ahmed Khan, his duty was his priority.

She cried, he consoled.

He promised to be in touch.

They drifted apart and since then Zoya just waited.

He came back once...she had rejoiced in the feel.

They surrendered to their feelings that day.

They became one in all senses...and that night they sealed the promise to live with each other...forever!!

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About a month back, she received his letter...

I am coming jaan!! Just a month more...

Yours,

Asad!!

A tear drop fell on the letter which she was reading once again.

She heard loud noises from outside...she knew he had come.

She rushed to take him in his arms...

The soldiers saluted her.

Dilshad and Najma looked at her with tears in their eyes.

Zoya sat down beside him and opened the box...her Asad!! She caressed everything with utmost care.

Just like him, his belongings held his presence...his fragrance.

This was all that she was left with!!

His belongings...

His memories...

And his seed...within her!!

She caressed her belly.

He never broke his promises.

He had left himself in her...she won't be alone.

They would always be together in the GROWING LIFE that she carried.


I KNOW IT'S DIFFERENT FROM WHAT I ALWAYS WRITE...BUT BEING A HUMAN I TRIED VENTURING OUT OF MY TERRITORY.

I HAVE NEVER WRITTEN SAD TILL NOW...DO GIVE YOUR PRECIOUS REVIEWS...

P.S- BUDDY srashti21 FOR PMS...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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RES FOR FB- AKS, PARROT MAM, MOMO, TIA, SHISH, PRI, GOWTI

N Aseela Di...milu ...sadia too 😆
Edited by -Crazy4AsYa- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Resss 😛

Nooo!!!!! This is really heart wrenching!!! 😭

You made me cry with this OS!!! 😭

But I liked the way it ended...

Anyways it was a good one dear!!!

Do pm me for more of your works!!
Edited by --Aishwarya-- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Mine



Goosebumps!!!!!!




😭

😭

😭

😭

😭




Kyon rolaya mujhe 😭
If u r angry with me.. Then try sumother way na


It was... Just.. Just...
I dnt hv any words 😭
Edited by gowtu - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Crazy4AsYa-

RES FOR FB- AKS, PARROT MAM, MOMO, TIA, SHISH, PRI, GOWTI



Hmm I m surprised... I thought u all frgt me
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Posted: 11 years ago
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yeh kya hai..

Asad soldier.. and he died..😕

thts a sad story..😒

nicely written..

but write a romantic OS not a sad one plz..
Edited by ImmortalLove - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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So emotional drabble srash..
U made me cry 😭 😭 😭
Asad was a solider and he died 😭
Zoya waited for him bt he never come..
She accepted the reality and lived with asad belongings and their child 😭
Awesome work 👏
Edited by aYASHIKA - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice one

Different yes!!!!

He died a soldier 😊

Leaving behind his mark in zoya

Amazing 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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very emotinal part but superv
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Posted: 11 years ago
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that was soo sad!
it was soo nicee..




-fuii-

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