Short OS: After Backhug(Slight mature) :)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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My dear RR family,


I couldn't sleep...RR has spoiled me...


My imagination ran wild after the back hug wanting for more..So I am trying a short OS without any prior writing knowledge other than my "Positive Ramblings Analysis Posts". So senior writers please bear with the scribblings..




Rudra was fuming...Paro could see the burning jealousy in his eyes so decided to tease him more giggling..."You know Major Saab whenever he smiles, it brightens up the entire room and look at his dimples...Aww..he's so cutee" .


Rudra was nearly in the verge of smashing the chair he was holding on but controlling to his last nerve and turning his back to her said " So you do think he has something special..Uhh" ...Paro now realizing his temper smiled and said "Ya..he may have something special but not like my Major Saab" and hugged him tighty from back.


Taken by surprise by Paro's sudden hug, Rudra felt good in her embrace but he couldn't let go of his ego and freed himself from her hug. Paro hugged back again knowing Rudra's possessiveness but he again pushed her hand and now Paro was taken aback for his cold behavior. She stood still hurting unable to understand her husband's mood for a minute.


Rudra realized he has hurt her and slowly pulled her soft hands back to his chest holding tightly with his hands with Paro resting her head on his shoulders happily. Rudra felt a deep sense of satisfaction and moved his head towards hers and asked softly "Paro.do you really think I am special? I mean I can't sing, I can't cook ..I ..."


Before he continued Paro came to the front and hold his cheeks with her hands caressing said " Major saab , I love you more than anything in this world, more than my life. You don't have to be special in anything because you are more special the way you are to me". Rudra was overwhelmed and looked deeply in her eyes. Paro slowly tiptoed and placed a hard tight kiss on his cheek slowly moving her fingers around his neck...


Rudra now with new sense of arousing passion and love hold her dainty waist tightly and brought her closer and slowly bend towards her ears. Inhaling the fragrance from her free flowing hair caressed her lower part of her ear with his nose and started trailing upwards. Paro too blinded by passion turned her cheek towards his, and her nose brushed his mooch and their eyes met with their lips not an inch farther. Rudra cupped her face caressing her cheeks came closer with Paro immersing her fingers in his silky hair. They were almost about to kiss...dang..."Paro, dinner is ready , please come with Devarsa", maithili quipped.


Suddenly coming back to reality Paro jerked and pushed Rudra slightly blushing shouted back "Ji Jija, we are coming" and ran to kitchen.


Rudra was bewildered, and thought "Shit first jug , now dinner , now I have to kidnap my own wife from this damn haveli to kiss her freely" and kicked that poor chair in frustration which survived the first time..



So how was it..Was it Ok or I shot myself in the foot?


Cheers🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Just logged in during lunch hours and got a lovely OS to read. Very nice dear. Wish we could have seen this is the show but alas the hug was cut too short.. I am sure Parud can sizzle more on screen based on the 20th June foreplay and hoping for more romance in this week. Fingers crossed.😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I think just a week ago u introduced yourself to this forum and now u are making variety of posts and all posts were good positive posts. Yes I read all of them and liked and commented as well.now coming back to your very first attempt of writing os, well its pretty good and I really admire your guts cos I have never dared to write an os even when I have so many thoughts and ideas floating in my mind.Keep it up buddy 👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very nice dear.Lovely OS to read. 👏 👍🏼

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very nice OS ... I wish the makers had taken the scene this way, they cut the hug far too short
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Posted: 11 years ago
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A cute OS, made my day actually. 👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
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This was short and sweet, just the way it should be. I wish they had done the hug like this in the show! I like seeing this side of Rudra, and Paro is so cute when she teases her Major saab. Gosh, he should understand that she only has eyes for him, but what can you do? Sometimes our Major saab will never change.


But seriously, the show should've done it this way. There would've definitely been quite an increase in forum activity after that. 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: SPraba

Just logged in during lunch hours and got a lovely OS to read. Very nice dear. Wish we could have seen this is the show but alas the hug was cut too short.. I am sure Parud can sizzle more on screen based on the 20th June foreplay and hoping for more romance in this week. Fingers crossed.😉


Aww..Thank you so much dear... Me too hoping as always 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: instantconnect

I think just a week ago u introduced yourself to this forum and now u are making variety of posts and all posts were good positive posts. Yes I read all of them and liked and commented as well.now coming back to your very first attempt of writing os, well its pretty good and I really admire your guts cos I have never dared to write an os even when I have so many thoughts and ideas floating in my mind.Keep it up buddy 👍🏼


Yes Buddy. I have seen ur comments in my other posts as well but couldn't reply because of my Newbie rule..Juz today I became Groupbie so happily commenting everywhere..

Thank u so much for the encouraging words.. Please do write ur posts...I always believe everything has a start..👍🏼 Life is short .I myself didn't know I can write an OS till today..Expecting ur posts soon..we will encourage you👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: blue_rose1605

Very nice dear.Lovely OS to read. 👏 👍🏼


Thanks dear for your kind words 😃

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