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Posted: 11 years ago
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I am a silent reader of this forum. Following the show from last two months. I am a horrible writer :-P but I love to write. This forum will be the official third forum where I will post my writings. I believe that no one is bad by their choice. Just wanted to pen down Adi's sorrows as he is a kid too who want care and attention. Happy reading.. :-)

Adi-Ishita-Ruhi OS

It was a normal afternoon in delhi. Tge whether was much cooler than any other day. Aditya Raman kumar bhalla just woke up and checked his watch. It was 11:30 am. He did not went to school today bcoz he was not well. He was hungry, weak and wanted his mother to take care of him. He came down the stairs and asked the servent where his mother is? The servent replied, "Madam shopping je liye gayi hai. Aapko kuchh chahiye?
He nodded in a no. He felt really bad. His mother left him alone when he needed her the most. He sat on the sofa and closed his eyes. He was angry but more than that he was hurt. Tears made their way from his eyes. He wanted someone near him, to console him, to wipe his tears.
He stayed there for a while, decided something and went out of the house.
At bhalla's house,
Ruhi was sitting on a dining table constantly chanting about how her day went while Ishita was feeding her. Just then the doorbell rang.
R-: Ishima!! mai dekhungi
I-: thik hai. Aap dekhlo.
Ruhi ran towards the door and opened it only to find her Adi bhaiyya at the door. She excitedly grabbed his arm and dragged him inside.
R-: Ishima dekho Adi bhaiyya aye hai.
Ishita got up from her chair shocked, surprised, worried. But Adi smiled
A-: Hello!! Ishita aunty.
I-: (smiling back) hello Adi beta.
A-: mujhe bhook lagi hai. Kya aap pls mujhe kuchh dengi?
Ishita smiled and nodded.
R-: Haw!! Adi bhaiyya Shagun mamma ne aapko khana nahi diya?
His face fell down, Ishita noticed it.
I-: Ruhi beta, bhaiyya ko baithane to do. Inhe bhook lagi hai.
R-: Ha!!! (she again dragged Adi towards the dining table)
Adi sat on the chair adjacent to Ishita and Ruhi on tgmhe dining table in between the two.
R-: Ishima!! Aap bhaiyya ko bhi khilao naa..
Ishita looked at Adi who just smiled she started feeding him also. He was chewing the food slowly.
I-: Kya baat hai Adi? khana achha nahi bana? aapko kuchh aur chahiye kya?
A-: Nahi! khana bahut achha bana hai. Thank u.
I-: aapse ek baat puchhu?
A-: ha
I-: Aaj aap yaha achanak se? :-/
A-: wo... actually mujhe Ruhi ki yaad aa rahi thi. (he lied) Mai yaha aa sakta hun naa?
I-: Of course beta... ye bhi to aapka ghar hai. Aap jab chahe yaha aa sakte ho.
Later, he told Ishita that he is not well. Ishita gave him a medicine and advised him to rest which he politely declined coz he wanted to play with Ruhi. Ishita sat on the couch watching the two kids playing. She took great care of Adi.

At 3:00 PM
A-: I'll go now.
I-: Mai chhod du tumhe?
A-: Nahi! maine driver ko bula liya hai. Bye
R-: Bye Adi bhaiyya :-(
while going he turned around,
A-: Bye...(pause) Ishima. Mai yaha aapse milne aaya tha.
Ishita smiled widely as the kid called her mother. She went to hug him and Ruhi also joined them.
Raman who was watching the scene with smile on his lips and tears in his eyes felt complete today. His family was complete today.


This is it. I hope u all r okay. Typing via my phone so plz ignore my mistakes. Take care :-) <3

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow, such a nice way of bringing Adi closer to the Bhalla family! I loved it! Hats off to you for creating a really nice OS!😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank u. :-)
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Originally posted by: AditiDoc

Wow, such a nice way of bringing Adi closer to the Bhalla family! I loved it! Hats off to you for creating a really nice OS!😃


Thank u.. I am glad u liked it :-)
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