ariya FF- Tera raasta choruu nah - update prt 6 pg 32 - Page 18

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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
abhay riya's fiance
intersting
continu soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
First of all sorry di for commenting late giving short updates on your story.
Vo kya hain na these days I am busy.
Office se raat ko 9:3- tak aati hoon to bahut thak jaati hoon isliye time hi nahi milta na update dene ka or nahi comment karne ka isliye short comment deti hoon but after june maybe I will free.
Now come to update.
And as usual it was awesome and mind blowing.
Just loved it.
Omg riya condition is serious.
And all are angry on arjun.
And that bimbo saakshi arghh she was laughing on riya.
And arjun i dont mujhe uska kya karna hain.
Between who is abhi?
Omg he is riya fiance.
Arjun to jalkukda ho gaya.
All are shocked hearing this.
Do continue soon.
And thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
amazin update soon
read everythin together
👏👏
is abhay really riya's fiancee
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Posted: 11 years ago
love it
plz continue soon
thanks 4 pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update...
feeling bad for Riya, she has to go through so much...
lets see what arjun do now...
continue soon!!!!!!
thanks for the pm...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nw RIYA should ignore ARJUN and give him the pain which she got from ARJUN.
She should just act like a fianc of abhay and make arjun feel the jealous...
Interestingly sakshi should be thrown out from ETF because of her nt concentrating on work ...
Concept was good...awesome...continue ur PM...
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey guys thank u all for giving such a beautiful response and thanks for your lovely comments . I really appreciate it . 😃
Part 6
abhay stayed with riya that night .he was so sad to see his riya in this condition and all this happened because of one man .wait till riya is better ,i will make him regret so hard of rejecting my riya .
thank god shree ne ussko call kar ke sab kuch bataya aur woh shree ko riya ke parents kuch nah kahne ko roka .
he needed to see himself and talk to riya before doing anything .
he was lost in his thoughts when he sensed riya move murmuring something ...
abhay:riya ...baby doll ... '', he hugged her
riya slowly opened her eyes and saw her abhay .she was happy to see him after so long but she was sad too as abhay had to see her dejected and in this condition and she very well knew once she got better what was coming in ..
abhay:baby doll .wait don't move let me call the doctor ,'' saying this he ran out and called the doctor who came and checked riya and said she was ok now but weak and she had to take care of her health first ..
abhay nodded looking angrily at riya who was wuietly and gulping seeing angry abhay
once the doc was gone abhay turned towards riya
riya:abhay kaise ho , tum kab aye ...
abhay:hmmm ab yaad ayi nah meri ,
riya:sorry wohh ... yeh sab ...
abhay:ek baar bhi nahi kaha mujhse .aur yeh sab karne ki kiya zarurath , kiwu apne app ko dukh deti ho yaar
riya gasped and her eyes went wide with surprise ..
(pov) shit how does he know , ab toh pakka gayi kaam se
abahy: aese dekhne se kuch nahi hoga .who toh sukhar hai ke shree mujhko koll kiya naa ke tere parents ko aur he told me everything
riya slowly: kiya ... sh...shree ne tum ko bataya
abhay nodded:haa aur kiwu khud ko takleef deti ho , khair yeh sab chor tum thik hojao phir hum iss bare mei baath karenge ,samjhi
riya nodded but said '' wohh etf ... mere team aur shree kaha hai
abhay:meine sab ko ghar bhej diya ab wohh kal ayenge tum abhi araam kar lo mei yahi hu kuch chaheye toh bol dena thik hai baby doll .
riya nodded smiled and said : thanks abhay , u r the best and I love u
abhay smiled:i know and I love u too baby doll '', saying he kissed her head and sat down on the side chair
idhar all went home shocked and surprise with the new revelation of riya her engagement and abhay .
arjun toh gusse mei aur shocked too ke riya said she loved him so how could she get engaged to someones else
then he thought ab yeh sab sochne ka koi faiyeda nah ikwiu ke tumhe use door karna chahate thee toh lo abb kiya sulk karna ... he sadly sat on sofa...
shree told Ayesha and chotu the real relation of abhay and riya when Ayesha and chotu asked him
Ayesha:yar shree who kiya tha , tunne toh kaha tha riya loves arjun sir par
chotu:ha yar mei bhi hairaan hu
shree:dont worry yar who aesa kuch nahi hai yeh sab meine abhay ko kaehne ko kaha tha
chosha:what??
shre smiled:haa aur abh dekh hum aur abhay mil ke arjun sir ki kaise bajaate hai .bahut dukh diya ussne riya ko aur who sakshi ...
Ayesha:haaa
chotu:toh yeh abhay hai kaun?
shree smiled: abhay riya ka bara bhai hai ,cousin
Ayesha and chotu smiled
precap: riya discharged
abhay applys in etf and joins etf
mission arjun ki band baaja onz lol
Edited by fairyshah - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely update
Loved it
Very nicely written
Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: saritak

super
great update
love it
cont soon

thnks sarita di 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Humzy

Lovely update

Loved it
Very nicely written
Continue soon

thnks humzy 😊
m glad u liked it 😊

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