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Posted: 11 years ago
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I am fed up with this track and this is my Os which I guess would be quickest way to get out of this mess.I am sorry if you dont like my approach.Key for this OS is
In custody Ishita hates Adi and was very possesive over Raman and Ruhi.

Scene starts in Ishita's clinic with Ishita getting an MMS from Raman and she watches it.It is video where Adi accepts that he did Amma's accident and cries.Mihika who was beside her also see's this.

Mihika "Tho jeeju Adi ko bacha rahey they .Hum ney socha bhee naheen hooga kee utnaa chota ladkaa accident karsaktha hain."

Ishita was sad "Mujhey bhee yakeen naheen ho rahan hain .Raman ka kyaa haaal hogi iss baath sey."

Just then Ishita's mobile rings and it is Raman's number.She takes the call

Ishita "Hello,Raman."but person on other side was Ruhi.

Ruhi "Ishima main hun,"crying.

Ishita "Kya huan tum ro kyon raheen hon.Adi bhayya ney kuch kahan,Shagun mamma ney."

Ruhi "Ishima ,Papa ko hospital ley jaa rahen hain.Papa achaanak gir gayen ."

Ishita was shocked thinking what might have happened to Raman.

Ishita "Ruhi aap roon math main abhee aa raheen hun .Papa ko kuch naheen hoga.Tumharey saath kaun hain.Unko phone deon."

Ruhi gives phone to the medical attender near bye.She comes to know that Raman got a cardiac arrest.

Ishita enquires about hospital and she rushes to the hospital.

Mihika "Akka kyan huan jeeju kon.Hospital kyon ?"

Ishita "Raman ko cardiac arrest huan .Mujhey abhee jaana hain."

Ishita has tears in her eyes and she is trying to control herself imagining what if something more serious happened to Raman remembering the last memory they had was a misunderstanding.Mihika understood Ishita's condition and offered to drive.Ishita told remaining Bhalla's about Raman.

They reach hospital and there Ruhi was seen crying and Adi was in his regular expression (cant differentiate whether laughing or crying).Shagun was sitting there.Ruhi sees Ishita and rushes to her and hugs her.

Ishita "Ruhi kuch naheen hoga Papa strong hain naa."

Ishita "Shagun,doctor ney kyaa kahan."

Shagun acts as if she din't listen to Ishita and just then doctor arrives .

He goes to Shagun to tell .

Dr "Mrs Bhalla."

Ishita rushes there "Raman kaisey hain abhee.is everything under control."

Doctor was puzzled .

Dr "Aap ?"

Ishita "Main patient kee patnee hun Dr Ishita Bhalla."

Dr ses Shagun and comes back to his duty.

Dr "Patient ko pehley kabhaa aisaa attack huan tha kyaa."

Ishita "Naheen yeh pehlee baar hain.Who hammesha apnaa khyal rakthey hain."

Dr "Mrs ,Bhalla unhey koi tension stress kuch dinon sey jyaada laga hain kyaan."

Ishita looking at Shagun "Kuch dinon sey kuch problem chal rahan hain."

Dr "Stress key wajaha sey BP bahuth bhad gayeen hain aur sudden attack.Abh condition theek hain lekin unkaa khyaal rakhnaa hoga.Kall discharge karsaktey hain.Abh hum ICU mey shift kar rahen hain.Aap formalities poorey keejiyen."

Ishita goes to finish formalities and remembers incidents happened in last few days how Raman was behaving and and requesting her to trust him .

Mihika and Ruhi wait there.Ishita thinks of incidents about Raman trying to explain few days everything will be normal.Ishita has tears in her eyes.

Ishita comes back and sees Ruhi crying and Mihika informs her that Raman was shifted to ICU just then Bhallas and Iyers come there and enquire about Raman .

Ishita tells them what doctor told.

They go to see Raman and Shagun was there doing her overaction as if she cares for Raman .

Ishita who was already sad because of Raman's condition gets annoyed with Shagun's presence there.

She started clapping and Shagun notices this.

Ishita "Kya naatak kar raheen haun aap.Apko kitnee fikar ho raheen hain Raman par.?"

Shagun "Main naatak naheen kar raheen hun.Tum yeh math bhoolna ke main Raman kee pehlee biwi hun.Mujhey bhee unkaa fikar hothee hain."

Ishita "Janthee hun aap unkee pehlee biwi hain aur unkey aarey pareshanon kee jhad ."

Shagun "Main .Tumhaari himmat kaisey huin.Main ney Raman ko unkey sabsey baden khushiyan dee hain zindagee mey main unkey donon baccho kee maa hun.Tum kyaa janogee bacho dney kee khushi."

Ishita "Saheen kaha aapney main naheen janthee hun.Yeh bhee maanungi kee apney Raman ko bacchey de.Main yeh bhee janthee hun keee apney un bachon ko chenney key bhee koshish kee."

Shagun was struck with this.

Ishita "Abh kyaa bakeee reh gayan ap donon maa beton mey.Abh Raman ko maarkar he chodengey kyaa."

Shagun "Ishita control your tongue."

Ishita "Chup.Aur kyaa kasar bakee rehgaya .Pehely amma ka accident abh Raman ka yeh haal.Aglee baar kisse kaa khoon karney ka plan hain kyaa."

All are shocked to listen about Amma's accident .

Ishita "Mujhey yakeen naheen ho rahan hain kee bachein aisey bhee hothey hain.Mujhey laga kahee na kahee tumhey apney papa key samskar tho hongey lekin main tho galath thee."

Ishita "Tum logon ney Raman ko emotionally blackmail kiya Adi key future kay baarey mey .Aur jabh Ramna madad kar rahan thaa tho fir har waqt kuch drama."

Ishita "Seriously Sahgun.Tum chahtheey kyaan hon .Raman ko tumney chodkar gayee abh achaanak yeh sabh kyaa hain."

Ishita "Aaj thak mainey tum dodno ko bardaash kiya sirf Adi kee wajaha sey kyon kee Raman ussey bahuth pyaar karthaa hain.Issliyen jho bhee kiyaa maaf kiyan mainey.Lekin abh hadh par kardiyan tum logon ney.Abh main dekthee hun kee tum loog Raman ko kaisey pareshaan karongey."

Nurse comes then and asks then to leave as it was getting crowded inICU.

Ishita "Abh thak mainey Raman ko kabhee nahee rokha tumsey milney key liyen.Abh main yeh galthee nahee karoongi."

Ishita "Aaj sey tum log kabhee Raman sey kaisey milongey main dekthee hun."

Ishita "Bachey badon key khushi key maaarg hothey hain .Lekin jab uss bach unkee jaan key sankat bana hain tho .Uss bachey sey alag rakhnaa hee theek hoga"

Ishita shows them way outside and Shagun tries to speak something but Romi comes there before leading them outside.Adi was looking angrily at Ishita.

Ishita starts crying seeing Raman .She then thinks about what she said that she will never let Adi meet Raman again.

Ishita "Raman abh aapkey khushi sey jyaada aap hummarey liyen jaroori hain."

Everyone sees Raman who was unconscious and leaves .

Ishita sends Ruhi home along with others and she says she will stay with Raman .

Ishita sits beside Raman holding his hand with tears all over her eyes .

Main kabhee naheen chodungi yeh haath holding it tightly.She slowly falls asleep holding his hand.

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sweetnoori thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Aww good os plz contu soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Finally you penned your thoughts down as in OS
Great work dear
Loved it
continue soon
And please pm me if possible
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Angel13

Finally you penned your thoughts down as in OS
Great work dear
Loved it
continue soon
And please pm me if possible

It is not texactly like that buddy.
I dont have problem penning my thoughts in an Os or ff.But I just dont want to write OS on parallel tracks .
I wrote a ff over chennai track and few more OS.But not parallel to track.
But this time I could'nt stop.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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ishu rocks and shagun shocks, emotional os
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awmzing !! loved the way how the story processed !!!!

Oh god !! Raman ko jaldi se theek karo !!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: SAKIV-RAM


It is not texactly like that buddy.
I dont have problem penning my thoughts in an Os or ff.But I just dont want to write OS on parallel tracks .
I wrote a ff over chennai track and few more OS.But not parallel to track.
But this time I could'nt stop.



Well then you often should write parallel story to track cuz ur piece of writing is amazing
Would love to read cuz story like this in the form gives us relief from the depression and stress we get from serial on tv
Hope to see you continue this one
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awww.. heartbreaking updatee!! awesummm!! loved ishu slapped by words to shagun!!!
keepp continuinggg..plsss PM me whn u update the next!! thnkuuu
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome!
Loved reading it. although I would never want to see Raman in a situation like that..god forbid usko kabhi kuch na ho! love him so much. but yes something like this if happens will get our Ishita get all protective and fiercy about Raman and she will go to any extent to protect the ones she loves..n loved the way she gave it back to Shagun.. Love the way she did it and was worried about Raman!

Please PM if you continue further...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice OS 😃
I was expecting this after seeing your posts. 😆

Ishita "Abh thak mainey Raman ko kabhee nahee rokha tumsey milney key liyen.Abh main yeh galthee nahee karoongi."

Ishita "Aaj sey tum log kabhee Raman sey kaisey milongey main dekthee hun."


This is very much necessary. 😉


Maybe not a heart attack, but something else. We didn't get to see anything about his health check-up. 😲

And as per spoilers, something like this might not happen. 😕

But, good work. 👍🏼

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