^THE JADED PRINCE^-{MANEET II} PRT-155to157 pg-50 - Page 29

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Posted: 11 years ago
par 170 - how stupid women they are...teasing geet...rula diya bechari ko...she should have given karara jawab...

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Posted: 11 years ago
part 171 - maan was fed up with bimbo daughters...
but gald he tried to cheer her up
loved their horse riding romance
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update dear
hope geet wont take those women seriously and will forget their crap
loved maans answer to those girls.ek hi line main unka band naja diya
maaneet riding horse 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Those ladies have really tried to mess up everything but one act of maaneet in the last and they all shut.
Please continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
waiting for next update please update soon
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PART 172

Geet tries to climb the horse but stool pe chad ke bhi choti hai... to Maan jhat se baithata hai... in one swift fluid motion lifting her by her tine waist and she on the horses back

Geet baithti hai shrmate hue.. dress ko adjust arte hue

Spectators are in for a shock and watching at greatest riplys' believe it or not episode

Maan ki ek kick ke saath they take off towards the unobserved fields, jahan par log nahi hain

She grabs him tightly and Maan's arms are around her .One arm holding her close and upright by curling around her stomach and the other was holding the reins of the horse

He settles the pace into a comfortable canter

Geet ki hat udd jaati hai

G-ohhh!!!

Maan man hi man sochta hai ki acha hai

Her hairs are flowing with the wind

The ladies are eagerly waiting for them to come back because ye possibility hai unke dimaag mein ki Maan Geet ko chod kar akela aa jaye

Geet is very happy riding the horse, she is enjoying the experience very much, as Maan makes her feel very safe and comfortable

Maan and Geet take a whole round of the field and Maan turns the horse to retrieve back

As the ladies hear the horse coming back. They witness Geet saying some sweet nothings in his ear Maan is laughing uninhibitedly throwing back his head. She also smiles back as he kisses the back of her head.

Waha pochonche to Maan neeche utra again like professional then grabs Geet by her waist... and muscles flexing pulls her off the horse into his arms and she lands on the ground safely. He smile down at her as if she is everything he could ever want not letting go of her sweet delicate waist

G-What's his name?

She asks

Maan takes a moment or two to answer...he feels no hurry that the comfortable moment should end between them

M-He's Black

Maan says finally removing his hands from Geet's waist so he can pet the horse

G-ohhh. Thanks Black, you are very handsome

She smiles

M- He is the only one?

Maan says ...although he knows he is good looking and earlier he used to hate his good looks now he like it when Geet compliments him

G-emmm...who else...I have not seen his friends, have I?

She says to tease him

M-So only horses are handsome to you?

G-No...I didn't say that. Did I say that?

Maan looks away and starts concentrating on the horse throwing a brattish fit

G-Awww!!! Maaan

She pulls his cheek

G-But you are not handsome naa

M- I am not?

His brows furrow in a hard brown

G-You are very veryyy handsome

She gives him a big smile

M-ohhh...:

Maan also has a happy grin with a slight blush

Itne mein Black ka trainer bhi aa jaata hai after witnessing their repartee from a distance not interrupting them even he is all blushy

He comes slowly and looks at Geet once with reverence and then respectfully at Maan..

Trainer- May I take him away sir?

Maan nods and hands him the reins

Then he gives Geet a small info lecture on how horses needed to be rubbed and brushed and blah blah after a ride

She keeps nodding as the walk back

Geet and Maan baaton mein magan ladies ke side se nikal jaate hain

They ladies don't really care about that lovey doveyy stuff . Lady2 and lady3 aer more interested in the bedroom than the foreplay outside. Lady1 is calculating and wondering... these things a waste of time and energy and lady4 is not married... she is fuming that a tasty rich morsel like Maan choose Geet instead of her, a girl who was openly ruining his image by pulling his cheek and stuff...she says that Maan is acting like besotted fool and it won't last long

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They reach home

Geet aane ke baad thaak gai, to dono ne thodi nap li

Maan thoda late utha to dekha, Geet leti huyi hai soch mein gumm. Maan utha to bhook bhook chilane wale mood mein tha as it had been a tiring day but then seeing Geet in a pensive mood he decides to ignore his stomach for while

M- What are you thinking?

He asks raising on an elbow so he can see her clearly

She looks at him

He raises his brows in 'what?' gesture

She turns to him

G-How much is the shelve life of a relationship?

M-Shelve life?

G-People fall for people, then get annoyed and irritated, then leave. And then do it again with someone else

He nods understanding what she is saying at the same time moves his other hand to hold a curl of her hair and wrap it around his finger

G-People like, run after them, then get bored, leave and then the same. Life is so weird

M- You feel like running away?

G-No...I was just thinking

M-It's because when people think they are in love, they really aren't. They rush into it. They are in love with the idea of being in love. They don't think clearly in that single moment of high. They don't know the other person well before making such declarations

G-So how to know, if it is actually love or not?

M-To give it time. Think about it slowly...calmly. I guess for me it all depends if I say I love you then what all I am willing to do for you or try to do for you. When that though is clear and decisive and you know that you can't feel otherwise about it...then...I told you that I love you. I know who you are, I know who I am. I know what I like and don't like and you come in all the sections I like

G-If life becomes boring?

M-Boring...life is never boring for me or you can say I rather prefer it that way. I had all the unwanted excitement in my youth. I like this calm, routines, vacations too...its all nice and peaceful for me, not boring. But maybe it's for you?

She shakes her head

M- You sure?

G-When is your next game?

M-In 4 months

G-4 months . I wish you win

M-Thank you Your lady luck is definitely good for me. Did you enjoy yourself today? Weren't bored during the match, were you?

G--emm...no..it was good.

M-If you were bored then you don't have to come again but I would like it if you come again

G-emm...it would be better...if you just go...without me

M-So you didn't like it after all... it quite obvious. I am sorry... why would you wanna stand in the side lines for so long while I have all the fun...

Maan says and flops back...not looking at her anymore and staring the ceiling taking his hand away from her hair


PART 173

M-So you didn't like it after all... it quite obvious. I am sorry... why would you wanna stand in the side lines for so long while I have all the fun...

Maan says and flops back...not looking at her anymore and staring the ceiling taking his hand away from her hair

G-No...it's not like that. I enjoyed. Believe me...I really did but...

She moves closer to him turning to his side

M-But?

He says not even turning his head to look at her

G- But...it's just...just that...you and me...are different...

Maan starts to frown

M- I mean...I...respect you and want people to respect you to and...even if you'll disagree but the truth is I don't fit in but it's ok. I don't have a problem with that. I am happy sitting in my comfortable home, and wishing for your victory it's the same thing

M-Fit in..? Did someone say something?

He says finally turning on his side to look at her

G-No...why would...that happen? Offcourse not

He cups her cheek with one hand

M-Then why would you feel that you don't fit in?

G-Because I don't

M-Who was rude to you? Is that why you were unhappy during the lunch?

G-Nobody was rude and who said I was unhappy

M- I saw you Geet

G- They are all nice people but we come from different backgrounds. I can't ever think of achieving and having what they have

M-So it was those ladies?

G-Maan...try and understand.

M- ok sweet, you don't want to I won't force you

G- These expensive dresses and jewelries can't polish the person...can't...it's ok...I just ...its..I know...you have achieved everything through hard work and sincerity and I value it. I don't want your respect to lessen due to my foolishness, or lack of polish

M-You think I am polished? You think I was born with that polish or that someone taught me. Nor did I go to a fancy school... so they don't definitely respect me for my polish or lack of it. Its money that speaks to them and they are jealous that I married you and if you go 4 months later they will be even more jealous. Do you know why?

G-Why?

M-Coz by then you will have not only my respect but respect of lot of people coz you are going to be a very successful writer by then

She smiles

M- You will have something they can never have for all their shiny surfaces, Geet. They are all just poor gold coated pieces of rusted iron

G-Maan you don't understand my point of view

M-I do. Therefore I am not forcing you. They may never accept you coz they can't handle anyone who is better than them, smatter, more beautiful, more perfected, more sought after than them. They are afraid of you like they are afraid of me

G-Maan

She is unable to help her smile

M-I can bank on fear, you can't. So it's ok

G-Stop! Stop praising me

She gets up from the bed

M-oh it's the truth. Besides its good thing, I don't think I can handle you under that maddening hat

G-Maddening hat? I loved the hat

Maan shrugs and gets up too

M-Sure you do...it drives me to distraction

G-Distraction? Why? What is distracting? It's a nice hat

M-Someday... I'll explain you in detail

He says grinning like he had some dirty joke in his mind

She crinkles her brow then brushes off the matter and goes out of room

*******

Maan comes over to Geet after coming back from work

M-Geet

G-hmm

M-Remember I went for a tour few days ago?

G-Hmm

M-I bought this huge property there and i wanna do a bhoomi puja as you said

Geet's eyes widen in surprise wondering Maan aur pooja path

M-Don't' be surprised. I thought it's a nice suggestion. Kar lete hain and if you believe in all that, then its fine with me. But I want you to come along with me and participate in puja

G-oh ok

M- Great! Pack up we are leaving tomorrow

*******

Their plane lands and they set their feet on the ground

G-Where are we going? Tum jagah ka naam bata kyun nahi rahe ho?

M-It's a small city so, we have to reach by road

Maan ne badi wali car rent ki hai

As they are going by road Kaunsi finds the place familiar

G-Kaunsi jagah hai ye? Maan?

M-emm...Samastipur {her native place}

Geet becomes sad and immersed in her thoughts

s-emm..I..know Geet ...its...but I really wanted to take you...I didn't mean to hurt you but...it was an important deal...and so..I...and I bought the land on your name...so...I can turn the car if you want

k- Nahi...I am not hurt. The Geet who was related to this place is long dead, that was Geet Sinha. I am Mrs Geet Maan Garewal; your wife. I am just related to you

s-Are you sure? We haven't entered the city yet

She nods

K- I am very sure. Why Should I care about those who didn't care about me? I should better care about you; a person cares about me

Maan drives her to the best hotel in the city. The only one they had in the whole town

As itna chotta sheher tha ki amir log to aate hi nahi the aur itni badi car dekh ke sab hairaan hain

They move into the hotel and all

Hotel se saara sheher dikhta hai

Geet is silently seeing the sight... she never thought she would ever come and stay in this hotel and see the sight...she never thought she would ever come back

She is trying to walk the talk...she knows it would be difficult but she wants to do it for him

Maan asks her to freshen up, and get ready for puja

She nods, then turns and asks

G-Time nahi bataya?

He looks at her

M-Take your time

She widens her eyes and gives him the loveliest smile

As Geet is in the washroom he knocks

G-haannn bolo, kya hua?????? Aa rahi hoon, in a minute

M-Haan thik hai. Kapde pehenke mat aana

G-WHAT?!!!

M-emm...I...meant...I...emm...you wear your bath robe. That's what I meant

Geet ko samajh nahi aaya ki aisa kyun kaha . As instructed wo aa jati hai bathrobe mein

He hands over a beautiful gorgeous sari to her, which is sober yet very pretty

M-Wear this

G-ohhh, it's so pretty

Geet wears the beautiful sari that looks veryyy costly and classy from its look

She also leaves her hair open as she knows Maan likes them that way

She looks absolutely divine to him

As she was brushing her hair he walks over and stands behind her

M-emm...ye bhi hai

She turns to see a pair of thick and heavy kangan in his hand with gold and diamond studding and also a pair of matching designer danglers with precious gems studding and to complete it all there is also a necklace

The jewelry is very tasteful and unflashy yet classy

Geet is stunned with surprise, happiness, shock and anticipation. For a moment she couldn't believe what she is seeing and that these are all hers

Her lip wobbles with over-flowing emotions. She looks up at Maan with adoration, gratefulness and love in her misty eyes

M-Thik hai , thik hai, jaldi karo

Geet wears all of it while Maan wears a kurta pajama

She feels he looks really nice in ethnic look; it's getting difficult for her to look away from him and concentrate on her jewels. She feels he looks hot and exquisite

G-Chalein?

M-No, stop

She looks at him quizzically

M-Sometimes you act like an idiot

G-Huh?

M-Don't you think something is missing

She looks here-there puzzled

He takes a deep breath, walks to her and takes out something from pocket. It's in his fist

Geet looks down at his fist

He opens his fist. It's a mangal sutra and a sindur ka dabba

She looks with her eyes widen and shining with anticipation.

Her heart is fluttering and her insides are melting.

Even if they had been married for considerable time but they never had a religious wedding, so she never wore a mangal sutra and sindoor.

But today it was like her dream come true. Maan was everything any girl could ever imagine or expect from a husband

She looks up at Maan and without a word turns around

As if responding to her unspoken request he clasps it

She turns again

G-Put the sindoor

M-I?

She nods

He puts the vermillion on her head as she closes her eyes to feel the moment

She looks up at him as he is done feeling as if she is married again. Married like any woman should marry.

Not a formal agreement of coexistence but a real wedding full of dreams of beautiful future and anticipation

She looks like a real newlywed

He thinks hats and all are nice but nothing beats classic Indian look

M-I'll go and wash my hand

She is still looking at him adoringly with her pretty doe eyes

G-Wait, do you like this lipstick shade?

M-emm...yeah...emm..

G-I don't

She tip toes and gives a big juicy kiss on his cheek

And she smiles as his cheeks actually flush a little

****

They leave in their huge car that had become talk of the town

Both are looking gorgeous

She is dazzling in her diamonds and his personality is unavoidable

They reach the place

Maan tell her ki 150 acre zameen kharidi hai etc etc

The pandit comes and puja starts

The pandit is looking at Geet...trying to remember inko kidhar dekha hai

M- Kya koi problem hai?

Giving pandit the 'Stay off. Mine' look

Pandit-nahi nahi wo...wo...

M-Wo to fir chalu kijiye

Pandit- Bohot jaani pehchaani shakal hai, aapki dharampatni ki

M-Wo famour writer hai

Geet chuckles

G-Haan bilkul. Aap start kariye

Puja etc ho jaati hai and pandit gives prasad , ki baant dijiega

Maan pandit ko bohot hi achchi dakshina deta hai

M-Kahan bantenge.? Aap hi bantwa dena...

G-Nahi nahi, hum baant denge. Isse punye milta hai. Aaj shaam garibon mein baant denge

Pandit-Ji wo aaj bade mandir mein puja hai, wahan khub log ayenge

G-Ji

Maan shrugs.. ..jo Geet ki marzi...more publicity... good publicity too

Shaam ko Maan says-

M-Bohot akad sa gaya hai, let's go out for a walk aur wo pasad etc ka bhi kaam hai naa

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Posted: 11 years ago
chalo aaj geet ki wish puri hogayi...maan ne uski mang bhi bhad diya...

beautiful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 11 years ago
After a very long time we got a JP update
And It was Too Good 👏
She is hurt bcs of those woman, bt Maan comforts her... Thats a nice progress 😉 😳
He makes her wear mangalsutra n sindoor
Lovelyy..!
Continue Soon..!
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Posted: 11 years ago
sweet ...emotional ...romantic update
Loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
maan is now changing n accepting his feelings.very lovely update..i like ur writing style very much .thnx for pm.

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