PrAja SS - Tum Mile [COMPLETE] (Pt 13-Epilogue - Pg 30 - 3.9.14]

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Posted: 11 years ago
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TUM MILE
PrAja SS


Hey guys, this is Anjori here, a die hard fan of Pratap - Ajabdeh and Faisal - Roshni. A very simple idea came into my mind, just thought to pen it down. Hope you all will like it. Don't know how many parts it will have, 2, 3 or maybe even more than 6- 7. Hope you all will enjoy it :)

Prologue will be up soon :)
If anyone wants PM for this work then like the second post of this page. I'll add your name to the PM list ^_^

Much Love,
Anjori
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Posted: 11 years ago
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PROLOGUE

The battle was almost lost. The only thought in Pratap's mind was that he was not able to protect his motherland. He was feeling helpless, guilty, ashamed and what not. Only a few hundred soldiers were left in his army. He didn't know what to do. The opponent army still outnumbered his. Many of his loved ones were lying on the battlefield, soaked in blood with cuts and marks on their bodies. His Daaji Raj was saying something to him but that registered in his mind was his defeat. His inner voice was calling out to him to fight till his last breath but something stopped him. He was just not feeling confident in doing this. He was not getting courage to move forward and destroy what came in his way. he closed his eyes and took a deep breath. He tried to compose himself. After opening his eyes, he turned to his daaji raj.
"daaji raj, ye yudh ab humare haatho se nikal chuka h. iss samay humare liye ye hi uchit hoga ki hum peeche hat jayein aur kal phirse yudh karne ki taiyaari kare" he said
"KUNWAR PRATAP" Udai Singh roared "ye kya keh rahe h aap. kya aap jaante bhi h ki iska arth kya hoga? hum rajput kabhi rannbhoomi chod ke nahi jaate aur aaj bhi nahi jayenge"
"daaji raj, agar hum apni matrabhoomi ki raksha karna chahte h toh hume ye hi karna padega. iss samay ye hi karna sabse uchit h"
Udai Singh thought about it for sometime.
"daaji raj, humare paas adhik samay nahi h. jo bhi nirnaya ho woh aapko jaldi lena padega. ye akbar chup nahi baithne wala h"
"theek h kunwar pratap, hum kal phirse yuddh karenge. shayad ye hi sabse uchit vikalp hoga"
With that Pratap instructed his army to move backwards so as to prepare to fight another day.

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"hey kanha ji! kunwar pratap ki raksha karna. har kadam par unki sahayata karna aur unhe sahi marg dikhana. hum aapse vinti karte h ki unhe kuch na hone de. woh surakshit vijay hokar aaye" Ajabdey prayed again infront of her Lord Krishna .




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So, here it is!
The prologue for this SS. :)
Hope you all liked it.
Positive criticism is welcome.
I hope i was able to convey what was going on in Pratap's mind.


Much Love,
Anjori
Edited by Anjori_ArSha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey dear, write the SS fast as I love those especially at the moment when Ajabde isn't shown for a single second these days so asap! Do it dear.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey ! Awesome concept :)
Would love to read your work
Update Soon 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: aashna_siddy

Hey dear, write the SS fast as I love those especially at the moment when Ajabde isn't shown for a single second these days so asap! Do it dear.




I have updated :) and i too feel the same :(
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: shanz_sejal

Hey ! Awesome concept :)

Would love to read your work
Update Soon 😃



Thank You :)
Sure ^_^
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Posted: 11 years ago
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very nice...loved it...😛😛
pls update soon 😛😛😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: geetpagli

very nice...loved it...😛😛

pls update soon 😛😛😳



Thankxx 😳
will surely try 😛

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