Series: Twines of the heart [OS 6 - Page 14]

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Ram-an-tic.Moi

@Ram-an-tic.Moi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

You sure have a way with words buddy! Loving the story.

From why Mr.Iyer is the way he is to IshRa's undeniable pull towards each other was all beautifully written! And when Raman gets angry on noticing the scar on Ishita's forehead...Loved that moment!

Waiting for the next update :)

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Prianka S.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

As I read through the lines..I ended up visualizing Iyer's house and how beautifully you described them! I am in love with your writing...you are God-gifted...cannot wait to read more from you! Thank you for sharing this with all of us.

Sapphire aka Priya

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felciya

@felciya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#43

Amazing. You described the house well. I could visualize the whole scene. Beautiful. I liked Raman n Ishita's interaction . Thank you for the pm. Waiting for your next update.

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Veil

@Veil

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Posted: 11 years ago

#44

Keerthana: Natanala Bramayaku na manasa

Dear friends,

If you are reading this, first of all a huge thank you for such a warm welcome you guys gave me in this forum.

Secondly, if there is one story I have huge confidence on, it is this and hence I wish to work on it and publish it someday. Hence, I have to remove it from here. I hope you will understand.

Love,

Veil/ Shika

Edited by Veil - 8 years ago

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javeria

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Posted: 11 years ago

#45

Awesome update

So Ishita father kept his promise and in return she is marrying Raman.

She had a crush on Raman a decade ago, interesting.

Love the conversation between two sisters. They are meeting after a long time but they never forget reading each other without a word spoken.

Looking forward to read the life of Mrs. Ishita bhalla.

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Dakshayini

@dhaakshu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#46

I didn't think I would like this series,

But you amaze me every time. The stories are so simple yet heart warming. 😊

Reading this calms me so much.

The third part was my favorite. The description, I loved it. 👏

You are a wonderful writer!

I eagerly wait for your updates. ⭐️

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Taahir

@taahir004

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Posted: 11 years ago

#47

Wow I cannot express properly ...but this OS is just EPIC

looking forward to read more on Ishita

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rutu83

@rutu83

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Posted: 11 years ago

#48

i so wish i understood the language of these kirthanas
lovely part again
i loved the banning of the red and plaits 😆

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nicety

@nicety

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Posted: 11 years ago

#49

Another wonderful one. You've got me hooked...😊

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Shona

@SilverGold

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Posted: 11 years ago

#50

haww...somehow, the post I had reserved is missing, so anyways, I'll write for both OS 3 and 4...

Here it goes...

Ishita's house has mango trees in her background...*swoons and falls to the floor* Ishita, do whatever you want, but don't leave that house!!!

I love the fact that you've kept grey characters rather than simple black and white ones...like Mr. Iyer, he seemed to be quite authoritative and like the bad guy, but then you showed that he was a man who was broken because he had been made an outcast by his own family...

Then we have Mrs. Know It All...Mrs. Savitri Devi Bhalla!! Yes, the family's matriarch/patriarch needs to be one who can know and find out things about a person by just looking at them. For ex., my dadi. She used to know when I had stolen a laddu and eaten it, (even if I had eaten it and had wiped my hands!).

I love the way Ishita and Meena have the sisters-yet-best friends relationship that is necessary in between siblings who have a very small age gap. And aww, the girl wearing the pattu pavada is sooo cute!!!

P.S - Amazing updates! All four of them!

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