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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: GoWithTheRhythm






OMG i think i just died what an amazing update :0 you really
Know how to explain the moments the way they feel
Esp. What is going through Aastha
Keep Updating and pls continue soon :) you are gifted
With the talent of writing
Really really amazing
I am speechless :000



Thank u so much dear!😳It means so much to me!🤗Do kip givn ur views!😛
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: hashima

dear sinah...to be honest...this update wasn't as good as usual...i felt something is lacking...but no problem i've read your note...don;t worry...you will make it better next time ...will be waiting



🤗Glad sm1 felt da same..Yes..Dis wasnt one of my best..I dnt kno Y i jsut cudnt connect properly dis once!😕hence dt lacking..But I'll try to give my best next!😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: pranu_d

amazing update dear

i am sooo happy for ashlok
but, what is the danger!?? im so afraid..



Awww!Dnt loose heart..!🤗Dt emoticon looks really scared!😆Cute emos as always!😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
[Thank u evryone!🤗Love u all!😃Nd I hope da following update dusnt bore you too much!]

Chapter-46,page-99:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/108716337

CHAPTER-47.

A confused yet happy feeling Shlok opened his eyes to an empty bed and room..

Frowning he looked around for her..She was not about..

A small smile crept at the corner of his lips..Maybe he had made his wife too scared last night with his turbulent passion..

Still he could not help but wonder where could she be,as he lazily yawned and got off the bed.

Shlok had dressed up for his office but still he did not see even a tiny glimpse of her..He was really getting impatient now..

He was just getting ready to go down for breakfast,when his phone signaled a message reception.

It was Astha's..

Astha kept her phone down and sighed..

It had taken her a lot of courage to wake up this morning and leave his side..

But she had to..

She had yearned to hug and cuddle upto him,as he slept like an innocent babe without a worry in the world,but she had stopped herself from giving in.

She knew she was just a complete mess emotionally and needed to get a grip on herself and sort things out within herself before she faced him again..

She had gotten down from the bed,slightly sore and wincing from last night's torrid lovemaking..

A blush had formed on her cheek at the memories of the endless way he had loved her..

Those husky words of affection still haunted her..So it had taken her lots of will power to come to her parents the very next day..

She had wanted to kiss him awake,and let him know-..

WHAT?!LET HIM KNOW WHAT?!!

She frowned again..

What was it that she felt for him?!

That is the answer she had to find..And she had till evening to think things through..

Astha looked down at her mobile.He had not replied yet..

She bit her bottom lip worriedly.Was he angry at her?

She had only asked him to meet him at-..

Her phone beeped a message alert,and Astha quickly opened it..

A smile plastered on her face,at his response..Just one line,and he had her heart racing..

Can't wait to see you in the evening and have you trapped within my arms..

Astha read da message at least ten times,and sighed as she lay back on her bed..

This man would surely kill her some day soon..

Astha was feeding her father,when her father suddenly touched her hand..

She jumped with a start,as she was lost in thoughts of Shlok..

"You are thinking about Shlok aren't you beta..?"Her heart stopped at her father's question.

She blushed and tried to evade the question as she held u the spoon of soup towards her father again.

"He is the best thing that happened to you beta..Your face glows whenever you thin about him..I am glad you find your love in him..He is the best husband any girl could have.."Her father's words stunned Astha to stillness..

She had found her love in him..

She loved him?!

Is that what it was?!

All these weird feelings?These reasonless happiness?Boundless joy..Blushing at the slightest mention of him,her heart racing at his coming near..This pain when he was away,and missing him every second..?

Is this really love?!

Astha quickly fed her father and went to the privacy of her room again..

She closed her eyes and remembered all the moments with him..

I love you Astha..

She remembered Shlok's husky voice..

And suddenly she felt a thrill pass through her body..She was in love..!LOVE!!!

She laughed out loud,and twirled in the room..She wanted to scream out in happiness..

She wanted to declare her love for him to the whole world..

But she would wait for three more hours..

And then she would tell him face to face..!

Astha decided to look her best,and started preparing for the meeting..

Shlok checked the watch for the upteempth time..Half an hour more..

He was frustrated more than ever..

The only doubt in his eagerness was why Astha had asked him to meet her there of all place..?!

Why in the place where Sneha had the accident..?!

Near the Grand Banquet hall?

Maybe it was just a coincidence..He decided..

After all Astha did know about Sneha..But he would tell her..Soon..

As soon as he had kissed her to his desire,and made her moan and gasp some more in his arms again..

He cursed,as his body started to harden in reaction to his thoughts..

"Down boy!There is time yet!"He whispered softly,as he tried to concentrate on his work..

But of course all he could think of was her soft lips,silky hair,creamy glistening curvy body,her soft scent..

Shlok groaned out frustratedly and leaned back on his chair..He already wanted her!How would he survive till night?!!

Astha looked at her reflection in the mirror and smiled..

She looked okay,he thought..

And Shlok did like her in red colour,she remembered,as she fixed the aanchal of her sheer red georgette saree..

Finally she closed her eyes and sat oon the bed to steady her nerves a bit..

She had intentionally called Shlok in the place of the accident,as she wanted to talk to him about the reason behind her hatred..

She wanted to lay everything bare open to him,and also tell him that she had forgiven him now,before she declared her love for him..

A soft blush again came on her cheeks once again..

Shlok hurried to the meeting place frowning up at the dark heavy sky..

He was held back by the stupid call,from one of his foreign clients,otherwise he would have started earlier..

He honked impatiently at a car ahead,as he took the left turn..

He was almost there now..

Shlok screeched his car to a halt,and got out of his car..

Astha was not yet to be seen..

Was she late..?

She had said six,and it was twenty past six..

He walked towards a crowd of people gathered at a corner..

They were all mumbling about someone being taken away..

Shlok did not know why,his heart squeezed painfully at that..

Shlok took his phone and dialed Astha's number..

It started ringing nearby..He frowned and turned to see a stranger holding the ringing phone..

It was Astha's phone,he realized with a shock..

He snatched the phone from his hand,and grabbed the startled man's collar angrily,as he asked him where had he gotten the phone from..

"It belongs to the woman who was forcefully carried away in a car ten minutes ago..!"

Shlok felt as if a thunder had just fallen on him..!What had the man just said..!

His fear had turned reality!Astha had been kidnapped!!!

Chapter-48,page-107:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/110694697



Edited by TehsinaJFJ - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Really very nice update dear.so finally aastha come to know she love shlok great.dear I love the previous chapter too it is so hot.The way U written is very sensual.Thank U for this update and now astha is kidnapped oh god so wat was going to happen now eagarly waiting update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

nice update
what will happen now !
thanks for pm
pls update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
U wl nevr let d love birds at peace fr a few extra secnds isnt it😆 it is high time whoz d culprit! c.s
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Posted: 11 years ago
really love this shlok you described in the morning and I enjoyed reading your update
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update
what will happen now
waiting for the next
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awww sina this is too much! Let them live in peace!
But thank god u didn't make something bad happen to Shlok
It was Aastha. I must thank u for this coz I can't see Aastha crying anymore! !
And I want shlok to yearn for Aastha
U r juz awesome! U always make my heart thud!
Love ya

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