Swaron SS: Pt6 pg5: Of separations n reconciliations ^_^

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Disclaimer: This is not my work, not even the tiniest of it. I'm posting this on the behalf of my friend Muskan who is not on IF :) It is her first work and she (n me) would be really curious to see your feedbacks in the form of comments :)
Swaron Short Story: Of seperations and reconciliations :)
2 years they have'nt met. Thinking wht can seprate them rite?but ya his maturity seprated them . He lost her,thinking things will get better and on the other hand she thinking he will come and take her go . Everyday when this didnt happend it was breaking her in to pieces small small pieces which no one could repair except him - yes it was SWAYAM who could repair sharons spare dying parts .

All these while SWAYAM always thought of respecting sharon's moms decision by killing wht sharon and swayam desired for because her mom jst promised him to keep her more happy than swayam could
All this while swayam and sharon were in contact of rey asking each others condition a day .
Everytime she asked rey said he is incomplete nd everytime he asked abt her he said she is incomplete . Swayam put sharons happiness for stake just to get sharons hand officially little did he know that now she was completely broken a chubby bubbly girl became a quite girl jst like a living dead body .wht separeted these 2 inseprable angels.

Sharon now started hating her mother more and more . Swayam now realised that he now cannot live anymore without her . He needs to be punished so he goes to rey
R: Hey swayam
S:sharon kesi hai
R: tere bina theek kaise reh sakti hai she needs u ,she is lonely ,she is broken.
S:wht she is broken ,but jis sharon ko meine choda woh toh strong thi na?
R: aur tujhe uss sharon ko chode 2 saal hogaye hai
S: wohi toh galti kardi na!itna stupid idiot kaise hosakta hu main apni jaan ko khud se alag kardiya . Bus par ab aur nahi m comming my love i m comming,your lorry is now cumming to you ,to give u all the happiness jitna main tumhe 2 saal mein nahi de paya
R: but address to lete jaa?
S:i know shes in singapore par pata nahi kaha and this is my punishment use mein bina kisi ke madad ke dhoondonga
R: but u dont know the place
S: sharon ko bhi nahi pata thi woh jagah gayi na woh ab mein use dhoondu ga
R:kab jaa raha hai tu ?
S:aaj .infact 2 ghante mein meri flight hai .sharon ko kuch mat batana ok.
R:hmmm(after swayam leaves ) he universe ji unhe mila dena

PART II
Swayam reaches his destination - singapore where his life stayed . Every minute he hoped that accidently he meets sharon but it did not happen so till then . Swayams cousin rahul picked him up from the airport . Rahul lived alone as he came to do further studies there .
RA:bhai aap yahan kuch kaam se aaye hai ya sirf ghoomne
S: kaam se
RA: kya kaam?
S:adhoora kaam .
RA: but kya bhai ?
S: samay aane par tujhe baata dunga
They reached their home .
Swayam was taking rest then suddenly he heard sumone shouting nd his brother replying
And suddenly a 3rd persons voice came nd the same tym swayam felt that it was sharon .3rd persons voice was familier to sharon was she her . By the tym he got down she was not there . He asked rahul who were they he said my neighbour , she is mad but her sister is very sweet nd without listening to swayam he said he need to take rest he wanted to know who her sister was . The next day he went to all possible places where sharon could be but he didn't find her . When swayam was home rahul just arrived then after attending his college
S: rahul go freshen up i will make u some cold coffee
RA: okiess bro
Suddenly his neighbours sister came and asked rahul for help
R:hey di
Sis:hi rahul ! Actually woh mujhe tumhari help chaiye thi
RA:yes di bolo.
When swayam suddenly intrupted
S:koi aya hai kya Rahul
RA:ha woh humari neighbour ayi hai
S:oh toh mein unkeliye bhi cold coffee bana de ta hu
Sis:no no need rahul
RA: di bro na world ki best cold coffee banate hai try it
Sis:hmmm...k
RA :acha aap kya bol rahi thi
Sis :ha woh
And then Swayam just came in with tray and 2 cold coffees and suddenly he saw a sight and the tray felt
Neighbours name was leela .
And leelas sis was non other than swayams SHARON his lost love
And as he saw her tear drops felt and sharon tried to control nd couldn't so she ran away.
That's the end of part 2 in this post, she's sent it till part5
Demands: for a start 15likes and 7 comments fir the next two parts ;)
Do support and encourage her :)
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Nice feeling we get when we see demands fulfilled :) so this time demand bar will be higher ;) n For PMs please do send a buddy request 😊

Parts 3&4 here we go! :)
PART III
SWAYAM was in tears crying aloud , crying her name out .it was obvious for swayam to cry as he saw his angel after 2 yrs .he was happy he finally found her but was confused tht why did she not say his name ,why did she not hug him,why did she not scold him for making her wait for 2 long years why why ? And this made him puzzled
And then rahul comes.
RA:bro aap theek hai
S: wiping his tears " ha mein ne tumhe bola thana ki main tumhe kabhi batunga ki mein yaha kya kaam se aya hu?
RA:ha bolata
S:so here it is mein tumhari neighbour leela ki bhen sharon ko dhoonde ne aya tha
She was is nd will always be my love my soul mate
Hum college ke dino se saath hai
Haan mujhe usse manae me 5 saal lage but yes she was with me by tht tym .
RA:toh aapko kis ne separate kiya
S:sharon ki mom .unhe lagta tha ki mein sharon ke liye correct nahi but sharon said m perfect but as mujhe sharon ki mom ko prove karna tha ki m much more capable issle main usse chod diya
RA: saach!i mean u had to fight for her nd aapne use chod diya why bhai
S:wahi mistake sudhar ne aya hu aur dekhna sudharunga bhi
RA:u know di bahut upset upset rehti thi kisi ki photo dekh kar khub roti thi najane kaun tha woh hum soche te the pata chal app the woh nd now mein aur leela apki help karenge coz we wanna see di happy nd we know u can do it
S: but leela help karegi
Ra:sharon ki smile ke liye kuch bhi kar sakti hai woh.leela ki mom dad ke jaane ke baad sharon has taken care of her lyk her child
S:hmmm.mein sharon ko toh manalunga but rahul i cant stay here on your expensses .so i will find work coz i dont know sharon ko maanae mein kitna tym lagega .
RA:bhai but no need .mein help
S: nahi plss understand
NEXT DAY
Swayam finds an indian restaurent nd goes nd finds a sardar he said to him
S:sir i dont have money neither i know how to cook bt can i work here as a cleaner coz m need of money
Sa:tum indian ho
S:ha mein hu
Sa:chal tujhe kaam diye jst becuz tu na mere desh se hai ok na
S: sir mein aaj se hi start karunga
Sa:ok
SWAYAM CALLS RAHUL
S:i have got a job of waiter
Ra:wht bhai but aapko
S:i know u r embarresed but m srry i need to work .nt for anyone but for my self esteem
Ra:proud of u bro
S:ok chal bye ttyl
Swayam thought of giving sharon a little space nd time to think nd understand thing so he did not se her
Sharon was seeing swayam cumming late in nite.she never knew the reason .nd the old sharon ,when swayam even got a sctratch she would go up down every where nd now she did not even ask but she finally opend her mouth nd asked .
Sh:leela yeh swayam kaha jata aur itna late kyu aata hai ?
L:aap badi concern ho rahi ho kya hua ?"teasing her "
Sh:"little blush "but asks plss tell
L:ohh actually he has join a job thts why .this is wht i know
Sh:but rahul is dere rite .then why ?
L:becuz he is a selfrespected person wants to live on his own expensenes.nd thts why he wants to earn rather than forcing,stealing or else and do sumthing special for the person he has come here whith tht money
S:she blushed nd went again in balcony thinking abt how swayam still directly or indirectly always makes her feel special
This was the sign , Yes The Diva Sharon Raipraksh has again started to melt and mould back into Swayams Sharon it was working but slow
PART IV
One fine morning sharon was going for a walk nd swayam for his work .they have now actually faced each other after a long tym .sharon seeing his eyes recongnised tht he wants her to come nd , nd when her senses cum back she just goes .
Sharon tht evening came to a coffee shop odered a cold coffee.
Yes tht was a cafe where swayam was working he noticed her nd decided he will make coffee for her.another waiter comes nd serves the coffee . Sharon when drank a sip she immedietly replied nd recongnised to be swayams hand made special coffee which he only made for sharon.now sharon got into thinking tht she was no more special tht he makes this coffee for everyone ,upset nd sad sharon drinks this .
Sharon asks fort he bill but the waiter said your bill has already been paid .
She said : who paid it get him here she ordered in the old diva voice.
Swayam came with a running scared face nd gave her a puppy luk
Sh:tum yaha kya...kya kar rahe ho ??
S: ohh this is my jobs place i m a waiter here.
Sh:and a cook to rite ??
S:no!!
Sh:so why did u make this coffee
S:how u got to know
Sh:i can taste millions of coffee nd still tell which one u have made.now answer my ques
S: special sharon ke liye spcial coffee
She blushed nd luked away nd suddenly saw the bill nd asked
Sh:ohkk..but why u paid my bill
S:people dedicate their first money to wife mom but no one is here accept u so my first salary for u
SwaRon look look hawa hawa
Suddenly few poor children come nd ask swayam for food
He makes them sit nd oders things
Nd sharon sits there while admiring him
Swayam paid children ka bill frm his salary
Nd suddenly children wanted to dance as the bigpipers were going around swayam after along started dancing
Sharon blushing nd thinkin he has nt yet change he's jst same as before loving caring nd my majnu
Swayam said to small girls to call sharon for dance
Sharon kept refusing but finally danced nd laughed her heart out after a long
Rahul nd leela had same way as they came back nd leela saw sharon happy nd she says rahul
L:pata hai di finally is smiling nd laughing after 2 yrs
Ra:ya i know
L nd Ra :together they r jst perfect they see nd go off
Precap: Teri Galliyan sequence ;)
Demands: 20 likes n 12 comments ^_^ fulfill it for the part 5 ;)
Edited by sunvad278 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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res for part 5 &6 ;)
unres
PART V
NOTE : in this os galliyaan (unnplugged) from ek villian is nt famous according to the story it was written by swayam for sharon and only they knew the song
Sharon has now been finally melted as he made her smile laugh nd dance back again
Very happy she was
Now she was jst waiting for swayam to cum nd take her
She in so many years was used to sing same song when she was happy nd sad tooo.
Leela usually saw sharon sing the song in sadness nd waiting for some one to complete
NOTE put song on
Sharon sits on the piano nd starts with a smile nd dreaming her old dreams with swayam
O.. Yahin doobe din mere
Yahin hote hain savere
Yahin marna aur jeena
Yahin Mandir aur Madeena
Teri galliyan galliyan teri galliyan
Mujhko bhaave galliyan teri galliyan
Teri galliyan galliyan teri galliyan
Yun hi tadpaave galliyan teri galliyan

Aa.. aa.. aa..
A tear felt frm her eyes tear of happiness
Rahul heard her sing nd got tensed tht why is she sad now nd said swayam tht this song was not a famous nd she is waiting for some one to complete it .the special one
But i have no idea why is she sad
Swayam thinks maybe becoz oh his actin towards sharon today he exclaimed .

Leela comes running nd says she is very happy today .nd this tym she is singing in happiness hope he comes nd completes her song nd life today indirectly pointing on swayam

Tu meri neendo me sota hai
Tu mere ashqo mein rota hai
Sargoshi si hai khayalon mein
Tu na ho phir bhi tu hota hai
Hai sila tu mere dard ka

Mere dil ki duaayein hain..
Teri galiyan... galliyan teri, galliyan..
Mujhko bhaavein galiyan, teri galiyan
Teri galiyan galiyaan teri galliyan..
Yuhin tadpaavein, galliyan teri, galliyan..

She waits for a minute or 2 but her expectations broke but suddenly swayam came singing nd completeing her song nd life nd he walks on the road while singing.

Kaisa hai, rishta tera mera,
Bechehara phir bhi kitna gehra
Yeh lamhe, lamhe yeh resham se
Kho jaaye, kho na jaaye hum se
Kafilaa.. waqt ka.. rok le..
Ab dil se judaa na hoo..

She seeing swayam .nd swayam admiring her nd a tear drop feel nd he catched it nd wiped nd
Both together sing in happiness
Teri galliyan galliyan teri galliyan
Mujhko bhaave galliyan teri galliyan
Teri galliyan galiyan teri galiyan
Yunhi tadpaave galliyan teri galliyan

Sharon just broke down unable to control her emotions .feeling helpless nd jst wants swayam . He also started crying nd he cuped her face . Nd stoped her tears . She just took aback . She slaped swayam hard a revenge nd a lesson tht he will never leave nd go .now nd never
S:sharon?? A confused swayam said
Sharon hitted him more removed all her frustration on him nd swayam understood she knelt down started crying nd said
Sh: how did u dare to leave me .itni himmat tumhari ki tum mujhe sharon rai praksh ko chodke chale gaye . Pata tha na tumhe mar jaati aur agar tum nahi aate to mujhe dawaai aur asthama , na dance karna aur tum se door rehna mar dalta aur tum mere murderer ho .
S:putting finger on her slips shhh
Mein agaya hu . Kaise marne deta tumhe .mein nahi marjata
Sh:mar jate to kya ?? Tum toh bahut khush thene mujhko ko chodke jaana ke liye ,toh kaise marte .u were loving all this na .
S:no sharon mein bhi tumrae liye marta tha issliye yaha aya hu only for u
S:i love u sharon m sorry
Sh:i hate u
S:i love u
Sh:i hate u
S:i love u completely plsss maaf kardo
Sh:: i ...i love u tooo
Nd they hugged and swayam kissed her on cheek .nd said i will never leave u love and took her in his arm nd took in the gardern where he arranged a sweet diinner a white dinner it was .all food cooked by swayam with help of leela all decoration done by him so tht she could feel special nd then they eat nd started dancing to the music of love nd eyes .
It looked like sharon has got her life back as if her whole world was in front of her eyes she couldnt speak except but cry cry her heart out as she knew that this tym he was there to clean all her tears .nd stop her from crying nd she just hugged him nd cried nd he let her cry this time coz she needed to cry to remove all her stress .
It was late by no
S:sharon abhi tumhe ghar jaakar rest aur sona chahiye hum kal milenge
Sh:nahi swayam mujhe tumhare pass he rehna plss.
S:sharon but its to late nd i want u to sleep
Sh:but i wont be able to sleep
S:fine toh mein tumhe suladu
Sh:she blushed and said yes
Swayam took her to the room and she kept her head on his lap nd she slept and he left her to sleep nd he also went home and slept.

PROMO : A disaster again came just like after the flooding an earthqauake came with little softness
Demands: fulfill the other one, while she sends me the next part ;P
Edited by sunvad278 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow very nice pls PM me. and pls update next part soon
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Nice story plz pm me next part...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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aswom updateee ... waisa ye me 4 part tak pad chuka hu...

muskan ur a gud writter...

do write more nd update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Well I wanted to comment here :P so yea
that's a fab work for a first time musky :) n yeah concept (y) I loved and hope you continue writing :)
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nice start👍🏼
do pm me wen u update😳
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wht they are seprated for about 2 yrs...sad...
bt now swayam will find her soon as he met leela...
nd Muskan dear it's great piece of writing ...
thanks 4 d pm...
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Well written n esp i remember she used lorry ...yeahhh swayam.lorry...:-):-):-) good recall ...d story is really nice wld love to read further...pm.me.d next part...

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