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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jeena1993

Jo v ho golu to golu hi rahega sab kuchh nikalgaya muuse sherni ne kese roka khudko cho cheet pati ko pyar karne se hahahaha luved this .



.. thanks for ur comment's
yes golu is golu .. remember priya only said so reference episode 166. heheheh
yup sherni is sherni too
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jeena1993

Juhi ne pura barbad karke rakha he pihu ko kya se kya bangayi he,koi v ma bap ko apne bachhe ko iss hal me dekh ke dukh to hoga bt kadak banke usko sahi raste pe lana to padega hope ram ar priya sahi step leke pihu ko sahi rah dikhasaken.


Continue soon.


I just hate juhi . in the serial . she cheated on a friend. haan strictness is needed. but koi bhi parents apne baccho ko kisi aur ko nahi dena chaiye fr any thing or even for name sake.
i will continue soon .
thank u for ur comments

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jodude

waiting ...waiting...😆...update plsss...😆


.wait for some time.. pakka update now.. :-P



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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: dhristikpd

Pls di continue soon na pls



thanks dhristi ..

will update soon
and sorry for the late.
u too know the reason na
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Posted: 11 years ago

I told you abt the problem na.. will update soon

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Posted: 11 years ago
Dear readers,

I would like to say thanks to you all for your patience for waiting too long for my updates. I also want to thank for the LIkes and comments you showered on me which gave me inspiration to write more.

do give your support to me

with Love
Luvbalh


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Posted: 11 years ago





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Juhi tried to pull Pihu up before any one notice her drunken state. When she turned to look around to check surroundings, she cannot believe the sight. She is caught red handed. Till now she objected everyone to enter into Pihu's room to talk to her saying that PIHU is upset and sleeping. Her lie is caught. She stood firm in the midst of Pihu's unclear chant about her mother.

Juhi stood dismayed at the sight, an un expected and un invited audience, although apalled at the arrived guest paying little more attention to the drunken twaddle in the hall- Pihu. Talking about her mother and father, about Juhi being a Mother she wished for. Ram stood firm and composed while his heart ached to see his rockstar utterly vulnerable he showed brevity to Juhi. Priya who is chanting silent prayer for Pihu's well being is broken inside and Pihus nonsense echoed her ears. Other guest stood aghast at the bitter truth. Sammy felt satisfied finally people gotta know what Pihu is. Her sibilings stood in disbelief was it their DI. Nuts and Neha reached Priya to support her this is too much for her washy nerves which are almost abeyant for 7 long years . suhaani attended her immediate to her support. Priya saw Ram n stood on her own walked to him. more than her he faced Pihu's truth first time. He pulled her close to him asked her if she is OK. She asked too in return he gave a charming smile.


She is worried,,, for what about Pihu no indeed abt his smile it is not a usual smile he give. He is upto something n he is actually being her support. She is surprised to see how can Ram be this strong. Does he knows it all? . she tried to ask him but he dint allow her to get the ans .


Ram: so ! Juhi.. I WILL NOT TROUBLE U MUCH , where is Pihu?


His voice has a command and bitterly stern to her ears. Priya just had one question is he strong even after seeing Pihu. Vikram gave a uncertain look to Neha narrowing his eyes Neha shurg off, As she is also just trying to fathom Ram's behavior now. Nuts stood open mouthed. She knows how much it hurts Ram to see Pihu this way. Her past has evident proofs of Ram's vulnerability when he saw nuts all drunk. Some where nuts cursed her self for the criss cross gene pool acquired from her to Pihu.


While all the other are in a different mind JUHI who came back to reality is also surprised of Ram's different behavior. Well but she scolded her brain to work in right way. Her state is on the edge of the cliff if only she handle well she can come back to normal and Ram's this kind of behavior is wrongly interpreted by her , she thought she can handle.


Juhi: woh raam! PIHU.. Actually raam...[He stopped her before she spoke further. ]

Ram: Haan , myra go call ur sister PIHU she will see her humshakal here. {He turned to Juhi and said} when Pihu is sleeping peacfully in her room who is she , since when are you familiar with al this JUHI?

Juhi: Ram. I don't know when Pihu went out. I think ... she went out when We all went back to out rooms.

Hearing this Pihu started blabbering.. to support Juhi.

Pihu : what ! Juhi maa u tell him I asked u and went to the club. Aap toh janti hu na I will drink Often so tell them all . now. Don't be afraid of anyone maa. am here. Nahi ! I will only tell them ...


Ram's is shattered to see Pihu this way. he felt a stab in his heart. This is what he showed Priya. he felt ashamed of him self that he trusted an out sider to care of his own kids. Result is spoiled Pihu, he is familiar with such worst behavior of nuts but Pihu haad kardiya. She stood against her own people supporting an outsider. He felt it was his fault to let them do their own.


Ram: Juhi I have no time to hear ur nonsense, here just answer my question. Where is PIHU.

Pihu: ye kya puch rahi ho aap. Meri JUHI maa se? Aap ko ye aurat[ pointing to Priya] patti bandh liya kya? You can even see me. Give me one so that I won't see you mrs Priya Ram kapoor.

Ram and Priya's heart is broken in to many peices. And Ram cannot take this and shouted PIHU.. n he shouted at Juhi to ans. JUHI NOW ANS DAMNIT

Juhi: woh Pihu club gayi hai, issliye I have to hide it from you. She said me while going. I thought she will come but Mujhe nahi pata ki ye aise !

Juhi tried to mask .

Pihu: sunliya na sach! Haan this is my truth. Aapko meri parva hai papa! Aap tho humesha aapki wife ke paas hi hote hai. Tho I choose this way for my peace. Juhi maa is the best because she understood me. She never stopped me for anything. Ye aurath hoti tho she will never let me do my wish.

Ram : you know this all from the begining. Now u admit why have you done this to my family and what all you did.


Inthe midst of all myra called him to say, it was naina there. Ram asked naiana why she was there . she admitted the truth mom used to tell her sleep in place of Pihu di when Pihu di goes out late. So that no one would doubt Pihu di. Now she is caught in all ways. Juhi had no way to escape.


Juhi: naina... enough. Ram I did this for Pihu she wanted me to do so .

Neha : kya tho itne saalo se tum Pihu ko begaad diya. Itna sabkuch kar rahi hai humaari peeche aur wenever though u are actually upto something else.

Nuts: ye bahar kuch aur andar kuch aur. I can't see Pihu like this and she has been a barrier between us. I never thought this is the reason Pihu likes her more than anyone.

Pihu: kuhi maa ko kuch math kaho .. she is right n maa spoiled all. She came alive n spoiled our freedom. Changed dad's mind. Made him to slap me. Aap sab meri Juhi maa se aise math karo .

Priya: Juhi why did u do this to us? We supported u when u were in trouble . we thought u r a family n I was happy u took care of my kids , n they treat u more than a mother. How could u do this.


Juhi: stop it, what did I do? I am right in my stand. Priya ,Ram for your kind information your'e daughter is already a spoiled brat when I met her. Ain't she Priya. she never gave me a chance to spoil her. I just took her side to conceal her in front of Ram. she gave me a spl place in this house. Deal was good. What is wrong in this. I was here for my benefit. I hate you Priya you always stood one step ahead of me always, now i have a chance to show my naina is best and your kids as spoilt brats. Pihu' is much easier to manipulate, apni baap pe jo gayi . She laughed. Look what your daughter is, not just her? myra and pari failed in boards. Kush is mad about movies. Agar tum nahi hoti tho mein Naina ko...


Pihu: Juhi maa deal! kis deal ki baath kar rahi ho aap. [ Pihu asked before she continue further]

Ram : Answer her Juhi,


Pihu stumbled towards Juhi and she was about t to fall. Ram n Priya hold her from falling. She looked at Priya, went near her to hold Pihu, she puked on her hand. Priya did not hesitate. Pihu looked around all saw some weird expression on their faces. She looked at Juhi to help her, but Juhi stepped back to hold Pihu. Priya took her to her room helped her to wash, Neha and Priya changed her clothes ..Nuts made her eat. Pihu slept quiet hugging happy her best mate. Priya too went to change.

Ram came to the room stood near the window staring at the sky. Huge full moon dressed with a special shinning annulus around it. and dark thick clouds which tried to mask the the grace of the shinning beauty. Its calm and mild Looks like Embellished giant start tranquillized every thing under its control. She changed to a yellow chiffon saree. She came to the room found Ram in deep thoughts. He is seems like finding clues for the present situation, she knows him it hurt'd him badly but he pretended to be strong for her. she knows the only place he will lessen his heart is with her.

He turned back to her touch on his shoulder. She stood in front of him and had a glance at the beautiful sight of the full moon night. She moved close to him clasped his arm leaning on his shoulder. He slowly put his arm around her shoulder and took her to his embrace. They remained silent as what all they want to speak remained a conversation of heart to heart. The silence speak volumes. Priya could not resist any more..


Ram, kya dekh rahi ho'

kamoshi, todi der pehle kitna kubsurath tha, ye chand, badal aur ye raath'

hmm, abhi bhi itna hi kubsurath hai, it's just the way we see it'

yeah , right.. how is Pihu'

she is fine, Natasha is there don't worry and haan kush myra pari bhi tik hai'

aur...tum'

am not fine at all..[he looked at concerned checked if she is fine]'

Priya what happened. Are you ok , suhaani kaha hai , you took youre medication .. nahi.. u should have skipped, how could you ... he started his never ending overwhelming care n concern. Nahi love. she thought she is the most fortunate wife to have a hubby like him. He is more brilliant than a precious gem. Her love oozed through her eyes, she stared at him. crossed her arms smiled seeing him worried for her. she said in heart- My dear golu .. I love you so much,

shhh.. am fine , mr kapoor. I took medicine on time remember you forced me to take medicine in car while we r coming to KM, hmm, am fine but my heart is not fine.. - she look down with a pause she said- I am not fine seeing you like this.. what ever is in your heart share with me Mr. Kapoor. I can't tolerate seeing you so.'

She made him sit leaning on the window pane. He kept quit . she asked him again. She consoled him. she pulled his face towards her chest, he rested there comfortably she caressed his hairs. He heard her heart beats thumping aloud. He pulled her by her waist. Close to him. hugged her resting his head on the secured place again. She caressed his hairs. And kissed his fore head. The remained there talking about their burdens . he expressed him self to her. he heard her too. They were a couple who know to share their pain.


After a while...

Priya.. Pihu ke paas jao'

she don't need me... infact none of our kids needs me more than their papa'

Priya... am fine

you just said that but u were not really fine...Hum donno ko ek dusre ki zaroorathhai'

OK i will change and come, you too change wil catch some sleep'


no...' she said. And offred Ram a pair of clothes and ask him to freshn up and come. She din't let him talk . she asked nuts n Neha to take care of kids. She promised daddi n KK that she will handle Ram. yes can only handle him now. She pulled him to the car. He obliged and took the passenger seat. She took the steering. She is scared but she want to do it as Ram is beside her.


Priya r u fine.. if not stop the car I will drive, and where are we going'


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Edited by luvbalh - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

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had waited for very long
now don't want to wait pls update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
heyyy nice update...😊
is juhi bhi na...😡😡😡 pakdi gayi to bhi aisa baat kar rahi hai...😡
aur is pihu...yaakkk,,,😡 ye kab badlegi...?😆
aur raya kuch bhi nahi kia kya is juhi ko aur apne room mai chala gaya dono...😆
raya bahut hurt haina pihu ke behavior ke liye...😭
beautifully penned down...😛
priya ram ko kaha lekar jaa rahi hai...?😉
continue soon...thankx for pm...😛
Edited by jodude - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: aanchaltulshan


had waited for very long
now don't want to wait pls update soon


see this time am very fast

i updated dear


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