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Posted: 11 years ago
how much tymm plsss post soon.. Eagerly waiting.. Kuch trailer hi update kr dou na pls Deepu Mom..
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Posted: 11 years ago
awww i loved the trailer.
desperately waiting for 1st chapter.

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Fighting Fate






PROLOGUE

Relationships are like glass. Sometimes it's better to leave them broken than try to hurt yourself putting it back together ~The Shattered Soul

Everyone wishes to dream. Few dream about their career, some about their children and like many other, He dreamt about the life with one special person he wished to share. And when he was awakened, from building castles in the air by a thundering jolt, instead of smooth shake on arm, he looked around baffled, disconcerted, and the world around him turned cryptic and opaque with steam of unshed tears.

LIFE then echoed in the his ears, surreptitiously that it is nothing exciting but a simple four English letter word, filled with an unwanted legacy of futile and forlorn distress.

His Soul shattered, splintered, and instantly built an obscure mirror around it, becoming violently nonchalant to the world that turned askew before his eyes. Leaving behind everything that was once offered to him as a free meal, he established his own self once again, something he could call his own...the pinnacle of pride that would stay with him until last breath without ditching like the other half of his life.

Eventually in the process of giving an indignant riposte, the Shattered Soul grew more aggressive, assertive and extremely astute to guess the motive behind every gesture around it.

And he became unreachable, unapproachable to his own people, in terms of emotions.


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The Moon loved the Sun so much that she died every dawn to let him breathe - The Broken Soul

Unlike many of its gender, who in this era wishes to be pampered to no limits, She never wished flowers, candle light dinners, nor any expensive accessories. All She wished and expected was to surrender herself to one single immaculate fond touch of her life. And when the innocent wish was snatched away under the wraps, She fragmented into broken tears flooding the gates of years of her dignity and well-fed pride.

Consumed by the shadows of hatred, swallowed whole by the frightening darkness, an illuminating realization whooshed away her crafty brain. Every moment betraying her soulmate by pretending perfect life, and doing complete injustice with fervor to the divine relation for the return of his tender touches, soulful kisses, solace shoulders, the feeling of helplessness unable to move on murdered her own self without a weapon.

Calling it quits, offering freedom to him, She tried to find tiny peaceful space for herself in the monstrous world but no large space was matched to the solaced arms She was used to. She disintegrated, fractured, and cracked without shedding a single tear until one moment she was tired of hating her own self.

Instantly, She picked up the broken pieces of her whole, used every resource, every contact and every penny she had and built the first block of her success. The people she once saved became her army, the pride she remembered in his eyes became the ultimate driving force to achieve her new heights.

Alas, Life has never been fair nor too simple for her, knocking her into another round of desolation. But once bitten, twice shy as far as grief was concerned, Khushi emerged stronger than ever with only one motive of her life, to become an idol, a paragon of virtue to the entire womankind.

And She did. She became indispensable and influential to the world around her, in terms of emotions.

But she terribly lost to her heart, which has mind of its own, constantly thinking about the Man it ever loved, in everything she did, every word she spoke.


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Yet there was one thing common between these 2 souls...

Love!

It was meant after all, and never dared to leave the premises. While one angered, the other yenned in the distanced love. Despite their busy day times, their nights always ended with flashes of the perpetrators who stole their hearts.

Envisioning in each other's arms, One always curled its feet and hugged its fists to its heart, while the other never failed to splay its broad palm on its heart, before the final droop of their lashes...

But then life is never predictable. A moment arrived, to grant the only wish of their weeping hearts, Destiny made every effort to bring them before each other...

And when they did, the past became history...


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Edited by deepthiya - 11 years ago
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OH MY GOD...deeps wt a mind blowing prologue ...its out of this world...so intense...each and every word showing emotions dripping ...both struggled and reached goals ...but end of the day both struggling inner war... the strongest thread which was and which is and which will be always there between them ...LOVE

ur language ..the way words flowed between emotions ..some time his and some times her... .so poetic...deeps my friend u have given a wow comeback with a bang on prologue...

my my just check out ur writing style girl ...simple awesome...such a captivating come back by giving one of the strongest prologue ...simply hats off


ur writing has touched new hights of professionalism...i am simply in love with prologue itself...agay kiya hoga :)...living each and every word of it right now...i am feeling strong pull...the meaning which i grasped from it...the intensity which i felt at heart...and the story it is telling in its own way...simply wow and wow...ufff maza agaya ...love u 👏


ps:The Moon loved the Sun so much that she died every dawn to let him breathe - The Broken Soul...hyeee wah wah wah...infact let me add three four more wah's ...as it says the all...wah wah wah wah ...uff now at peace ...lol..touched ...very very deep...
Edited by lalarukh - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
ohhh woww thts the gr8 news...eksss so excited already...give some idea abt the concept soon
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loved the trailer! seems this will be all on love n cute fights..
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Posted: 11 years ago
EEE I'm so excited for this phase of the story. Promise me that you're gonna give us loads and loads of romance between Arshi. Well TVK 1 ended just perfectly. It was the most amazing story I've ever come across. After the last chapter, I was literally in tears which is totally new for me. Hope you give us back to back updates and oh how can I forget: UPDATE SOOON! 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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LOVE is a medicine for any kind of wound, but there is no medicine found in the world for a wound given by LOVE.


Deepthi, what a mindblowing prologue. Your writing is so smooth and that while reading it more than reading it, I feel like I am just floating on a river, totally insync with whats happening around me.

So both are suffering. They love each other so much and this distance is hurting very badly. How can they not love each other, for them loving is like breathing, how can they stop?

Their situation reminds me so much of a song which I like a lot.

Zindagi mein koyi kabhi aaye na rabba
Aaye jo koyi toh phir jaaye na rabba
Dene ho gar mujhe baad mein aansoon
Toh pehele koyi hasaaye na rabba


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=peaZfU0gFGw

Edited by canapoem - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb prolong di
i have no word to describe my feeling
but simply just loved it
plz continue soon di
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wow wow wow...diii... a new spark i am seeing on my screen...

the prologue is so intense that , i am more and more excited for the journey to begin...

dii... i was wondering wat is more that can be now come from ur side ... by u proved that u are a magic box with million of surprises coming our way...

dii... u are a splendid writer with thoughts higher than sky and heart larger than sea... an

the prologue created a image of new Arnav and Khush... with more of intensity in their characters

he became unreachable, unapproachable to his own people, in terms of emotions.

As i felt Arnav now will be more of what he was in seasom 1.. in terms of reach ... in terms of aggressiveness and More of stone hearten for the world who always failed to notice the hidden pain in his heart ... and now he left no strings tied that can weaken him... in terms of emotions and how he lost excitement to live the life for which once he dreamed with a special person...

i feel scared and more of pain to read what he has turned into.

but will he be the same as ... the heart approach him one day... guess that will turn more intense... more of emotions and more of thrill in heart that were deserted till now.
the prologue was an air that flown in my lungs and poured a current ...


She became indispensable and influential to the world around her, in terms of emotions.

Khushi, who never fall weak... in front of world is now more of weak to her heart that will collapse the day she will face the man who is every thing she can hold in herself.
i appreciate that she emerged as a strong person , as the time and circumstances made her... more and more stronger as she bravely fought back ... and became an idol...

dii . i appreciate that u made her character grow more and more stronger with time... rathr than making her mourn on her ill fate..



And when they did, the past became history...
we too wish that the wish soon be granted to the weeping hearts to turn their incomplete story to a history...

Reading Khushi always is a new lesson for life ...

Thanks dii for such and outstanding characterization of our Arnav and Khushi..

your story is a mirror to ur thoughts that are much stronger what i have ever seen..

dii for u:


Ab tho kisi ka bhe intazaar nahe rehta
rehta jo har pal bs aapka khayal he hain rehta
aapka khumaar hain chaaya is kadar mujhpar
jo na din ka na raat ka khaya hain rehta


judaai bus ye de gaye hain mujhe
naa jaan paata hoon khud ko na auro ki ab pehchan hain
dekhta tha bus tera he chehra
ab naa kise chehre na kise ke aaine ke taalash hain...
hain bus tere na hone ki khalish is dil mein
nahe tho chal rahe hain ab bhe waise he ye sansein...







Edited by arnavini - 11 years ago

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