DESTINY PLAY 2 updated Last Part on 17-7-2014 /Page 102 - Page 20

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Posted: 11 years ago
Datz awesome dear

loved it

thanx fr d pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Funny to see maan like that

Geet is so annoyed and maan backfired her plans ... on her only 😆

nice part

thnx for pm sweets

cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Why Geet is hell bend on getting rid of Maan, when she doesn't know him.
Nice chapter
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 2
awesome dear...
hahaha Maan is too much...
Parth and Geet are so naughty...
but none of their plans worked on Maan...
in fact it backfired...
cont soon dear...

PS - can u post the link when u update in this thread?
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Posted: 11 years ago



PART - 3


ITS a play time for all three. Parth enjoying alot in pool. Being a kid he cant kept his hatred for a long and its actual a fun for him throwing Maan into a pool which is filled with mud that moment washed out from their bodies. Parth splashing water on both so is Maan. Gradually Geet too give up her anger and joined both. All 3 playing in a pool with full energy. Maan hold him from back and spun him with himself splashing water all around.

'Parth...' Familiar sound broke their trance and they hit with the reality.

'chachu lets go out of here.' Parth cautioned him.

'ka ka hua?' Maan asked why he was so worried.


'chachu dad is coming. Are mera matlab hai chalo yaha se. Partner lets go.' he alerts Geet too.

Maan jumped out and dragged Parth too. He gave hand to Geet for help but she denied and helped herself. Maan chuckled and leave way for her. But due to water the floor become slippery and she lost her balance once again. This time too Maan hold her and save her from falling. Both's eyes met. She found herself lost againg in his dark eyes. He have such a magnaetic effect that she even as much hatred she able to take her eyes off. Sply when he glancing straight in her hazles. He spell bound her.

'itne b bure nahi hai,jitna tum humse nafrat karti ho.' Maan said huskily in her ears. His voice caress her and a shudder ran through her whole body.

Parth is gazing both with a grinn. Meanwhile Dev came there and broke their trance moment. 'what's going on guys?'


Hearing his voice Maan left her and she stabled herself. Parth rush to his dad and hugged his legs. He was completely wet and drenched Dev's cloth too. Dev took him in his arms and went closer to both. He glance all 3 and the condition of pool full of mud water. 'ye kya hua yaha pe?' Dev trying to understand what exactly had happened with these three along the pool.

'dad main or partner mud me girr gaye fir chachu ne humko pool me daal diya fir maine chachu ko pool me push kar diya.' Before any of them gave any excuse Parth opened his mouth and told the whole story to his father.

'isliye aap bheege hue ho. Or dad ko b gila kar diya.' he kissed him lovingly.

'Dev bhai humka maaf kar do.' Maan apolozise.


'its ok Maan. Waise b kam se kam Parth ki tumse dosti to ho gai isi bhane. But i guess we all need to change. Geet parth ko le jao or dono change karo fast.' Dev commands and handover Parth to Geet. Dev and Maan too went inside to dry themselves. His servants went on a job of cleaning the pool water.

Geet dried first Parth and then went to her room for a change. After ward all came down. When all 3 waiting for Dev on breakfast table, a young girl age of Geet dressed up in black suit came inside with some files. She went near to Parth and kissed him.

'hi Parth. How are you champ?',She asked softly.

'i am good Meera aunt. How are you.' Parth too replied cutly with a smile.

Maan scanning both. Then she went to Geet and gave a friendly hug to her. 'hi baby.'

hearing baby Maan intrupt between both before Geet replied to her. 'sunna baby. Isliye keh rae the ki chhutpan k kapde naahi pehno. Sab tumka bachhi samjhte hai.' Maan taunts her again which is quite annoying for her.

Meera to scanned him throughly and her eyes popped out. She wont able to understand that a man like him can allowed to sit in KM. She glance Geet with questioning eyes and Geet took her to another side.


'who is he Geet and what he is doing here?' she asked having lot of confusion.

'dont ask me sweety. Dev sir ne rakha hua hai is namoone ko yaha.' Geet is so annoyed which can predict by Meera from her frustrating behaviour.


Meanwhile Dev too joined all. Meera saw him and moved towards him. 'hi Meera so early? Anything serious.?' he asked the reason of her coming.

'Dev actually i have some urgent work today. So i though gave you these papers first. Ispe tumhare sign chahiye. Then i send them further before leaving for my work.' She explained him.

Dev read the papers and signed them while Meera only gazing him lovingly. Dev handover the papers and she was about to leave but he stops her for breakfast. Meera denied,so he offered her to drop her in mid way to his office. Boh walked out of the mansion.

In their route she enquired about Maan and Dev told her that he is coming to ciew the city. He also told her about the rift going between Maan and Geet. 'Meera i just dont understand why she is behaving like a kid.' Dev is seriously irritaed with their tom and jerry fights.

'dev sach kahu koi b irritate ho jayega the way he is talking.' Meera supports Geet.

'common Meera dont be so rude.'

'ok relax i have an idea. First of all i think he need some change. Kyu na kapdo se shuru kare?' She suggest.

'kapdo se?' Dev wont get her.

'ha ek kaam karo Geet ko bolo ki wo Maan ko shopping pe le jaye or use yaha k hissab se kuchh classy clothes dilwaye.




'Usse kya hoga?' dev asked curiously.


'are wo yaha ghumne aaya hai na to ek teer se do nishane. Uska ghumna firna bhi ho jayega plus Geet k sath bahar akela jayega to shayad dono ka rift kuchh kam ho jaye.' Meera suggested.


'na baba na rift kam hone ki bajaye or badd gaya to?', Dev wasnt like the idea much.


'Dev abi konsa nahi ladd rae try karne me kya jata hai?' She forced him to implemet her idea.

Dev thought for a whilethen made a call to Geet and told her to took Maan for a shopping. Geet trying to deny but he commands her strongly. Geet agreed reluctantly and he cuts the call. Geet went to him and told her about Dev's instructions. Maan quickly get ready. Parth hear about their plan and insisit them going with both. Geet objects but Maan took him and take his responsibility

'Dev sir ko pata chala ki Parth ghar se bahar gaya hai to tumhari khair nahi.' she cautioned him.

'ha to tume to khus hona chahiye na.' Maan teased her. 'chalo babua.' he took him and went outside,followed by Geet.

They drove to shopping Mall to buy some clothes for him. Parth was so happy coming in open air after so many days.



He is running everywhere,wanna cherish his freedom. Geet is running after him. But this not goes for a long. Suddenly one masked man clutch Parth in his grip and he wriggling for help, he point gun on his head and threat everyone to make leave for them or else he hit the kid. All other people get scared and make a way for him. He is running till one rode hit his hand and he drop his gun. Before he can understand Maan jumped from somewhere and pucnh him hard,snatching Parth from his arms. He knock down him but soom many more masked ruffins come from some where and enclosed Maan.

'ka be itna hi dum hai?' Maan challanged all.

Parth get scared. 'chachu panga mat lo.' he cautioned him.


'are babua inse darne ki kono zarurat nahi hai. Jo apna shakal chhupa k baithe hai wo kahe k bhadur. Bas ab tum dhekte jao kaise ee lantop chachu inki band bajata hai.' Maan assured him that there is no need to worry at all.

Meanwhile one of them attack on him but Maan is soo fast. He moved quickly and that ruffin lost his balance. Maan turned quickly and kicked off his butt. He falls far away. Parth is hanging on his back and he was completely aware of that.

Two more come to attach him. But Maan hold both's fist and puched them behind. They hit the stand and all acessories falls on them. Now Maan turn to remaining ruffins. He step back and they all attacked,but Maan again jumped among all. They balnced themself and turn to Maan. Maan ran and they followed him. Soon he bring out some marbles from his pocket and threw on floor. All ruffins who are following them falls on marbles and met with floor one after another. Parth enjoying alot,the way Maan beating them. As much they tries to stand again they falls much faster. Maan ran to another store. And threw tin cans on their heads. They falls badly but giving up. One more attack on him and Maan beat him hardly. Just in few punches he knocked him down. Almost all goons beaten up by Maan. Parth gave hi5 to give . He was so impressed by his way of fighting. But their won come to an end,when one goon make Geet his prey and point knief on her deligcate neck. He asked him to give up. Maan leave fighting on the spot and goon start moving with Geet towards him. He asked to send Parth to him. Maan scanned all around and moved towards him slowly. He cautioned Maan not trying to be smart and leave the kid on floor. Maan followed his instruction. The moment Parth reached to him he threw Geet away and dragging Parth up. But the same moments Maaan bend on his knees and slipped towards him. Kicked his both legs and make him fall. Maan fists his wrist but he struggling very hard. Parth went to Geet and she embraced him. Goon push Maan away and trying to reached to both. He was snatching Parth from Geet and was ready to hit her with knief but Maan held the sharp edge in between. His palm cut it out and blood start oozing. Parth again ge worried for him so is Geet. Least Maan bother it and finally suceded in snatching knief from him. Meanwhile police came there alert by the Mall's staff and arrest most of them. Some ran away but still sucessdded in getting some. Parth leave Geet and rush to Maan.

'chachu apko lagi hai.' he is so worried for him.

Maan pulled his henky out and just trying to wrap around. Geet comes forward towards him to help in wrapping. Maan caress Parth and took him in his arms. 'hum theek hai.' he assured him and stop panicking.

All 3 reached to KM. Geet already summoned doc for him. He gave first aid to Maan and left from there. When Dev came to know about this incident he cancelled his all meetings and reached home.

Dev enterd with a panic sign. His face was faded completely. 'Parth...' he just called him out.

Hearing his father's voice Parth rush to Dev. He kissed him and embraced tightly as he was trying to hide him from all. 'you ok baby?' he asked in a whimpering voice.

Parth nodded and he hugged him more. 'dad chachu ko lagi.' Parth was still in fear. He told his father about Maan's enjury.

Dev went to thanks him. 'thanks alot Maan agar aaj tum nahi hote to...' he showing gratitude towards him.

'are Dev bhai ye sab mat keejiye. Babua k liye to jaan b hazir hai.' Maan cool down the situation.

'doc ne kya kaha?' he asked about Maan's injury.

'are kachu nahi. Zakham gehra nahi hai. Doi teen dinn me theek ho jayega.' Maan assured him.

Dev scold Geet. 'Geet maine tumse kaha tha na Parth ko KM se bahar nahi le jana hai? Firr kyu?' he is shouting on her.

'wo nahi leke gai hum leke gaye. Parth zidd kar ra tha.' Maan intrupt and explained.

'why Maan? Parth ki zaan ko bahar khatra hai.' Dev still in fear.

'to ka wo darr k jeena chhod de. Pehle aap uska iskool chhuda diye hai. Ab ka sari umar is kaid khane me band rakhenge? Or hum kahe the na humre hote kuchh nahi hoga babua ko.' Maan assuming his tension but suggest him to fight the odd rather then hiding.


Geet silently bearing everything and Dev instantly called the sargent. 'what the hell is going on? Where is your spl intelligence officer coming to secure Parth?' dev burst on him.

'sir he is on the way reporting at your home any time. Just calm down please.' officer to trying to pascify his anger.

Same moment a young man enterd inside. 'officer George reporting sir.' he was spl officer recommended by higher command to protect Parth. From now he is going to take charge of his moments. The moments he enters he start his work placing small hidden camers evrywhere.


Geet went in Maan's room when he is changing his shirt. He have some scars on his back also. But they were very minor. He is pulling up his another shirt when she stops him doing so. 'ek min Maan.' she brought ointment to sooth his pain. 'ye ointment,i mean ye dawa lagani hai.' she told him and Maan denied.

'par hume nahi laani hai.' he said rudly.

'Maan dawai lagva lo verna zakhm gehra ho jayega.' she conviencing him with her points. She raised his hand towards him to apply ointment but he spun and fist her delicate wrist.


'keh diye na nahi. Or waise b tume ka farak padta hai tume to hum pasand nahi hai na.' in pretext of taunting he trying to scann her mind. He is glancing straight in her slight wet eyes. His hysterical eyes pouring so much intensity that she cant resist.

Her lips start droodle. 'please Maan. I am sorry. Please forgive me for my behaviour and allow me to apply ointment.' she pleads for him to forgive and sply she wanna get rid from her guilt and his so much wild gaze.

Maan smirked and leave her wrist softly. He turned around and pulled down his shirt again. Allowed her to apply ointment on his wounds. Her soft fingers roaming on his back deliberatley and Maan just loosing bit by bit but he controled himself some how...




Edited by richa_kapoor - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
wating😉
Edited by brandgurti - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Woaaa Action packed Awesome update yar :)
loved it a lot :)
Edited by sona-rai - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Maan fightng skills super
is he a aecret agent to save parth
Pic of parth s super
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nyc update. ..seems like maan is secret agent...
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Posted: 11 years ago
haiyye kya baat hai
maan did it again
wait he had marbles in his pocket
how come
but this is maan right
awww he got hurt saving parth
but he is right maan
how long will the little boy be cooped inside
after all he is a child
its his days to be free
and not be bound to one place
dev i think you will have to let him out
are they keeping an eye on parth
that they get him every time he gets out
i still think there is more to maan than meets the eye
wow he saved parth and geet again
awww seems meera idea worked
well kinda
meera likes dev huh
sorry for so many questions
awww geet said sorry to maan
isnt that cute
maan mein kuch baat toh hai
and am sure we will know and soon
Edited by chavvi16 - 11 years ago

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