His Secret || A Kriyaansh One Shot.

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His Secret


As the orange ball of fire set in the horizon, it seemed as if the sun and the water finally met after yearning for years. The sun seemed to be wanting to drown in the depths of water while the water welcomed it with open arms.

She sat on the wooden plank admiring the view. A radiant smile playing on her lips as the sun rays kissed her skin, making it seem golden, she was fiddling with the tassels of her dupatta, her eyes glowing in the light.

He kept admiring the view in front of him, the girl he loved. She was beaming with an unknown happiness, her skin seemed golden, her eyes whispering and confessing unimaginable emotions, the way she fiddled her dupatta was mesmerizing.

"Rey?" She asked and turned to him. He immediately turned his gaze and acted to look at her right then.

"Hmmm." He replied.

"Do you sit with her for hours here?" She asked him.

He sighed and grinned a little. "Of course I do."

"Rey... Please tell me? Who is she?" She asked him.

"Kriya." He trailed.

"Please Rey. Just tell me her name, please?" She pleaded again, oblivious he just confessed to her.

"Kriya." He said again. "When the time comes, I'll tell everybody, except you." He said with a small pause and stuck his tongue out at her.

"Rey!" She raised her hand and hit his shoulder. He immediately stood up and started running while she also did the same.

"Rey please?" She said while running and panting.

"Never!" He replied turning and running backwards, while laughing his heart out and looking at her poker face.

He kept running in the backward direction, he slipped and fell on the ground. Kriya burst out laughing looking at his confused face. He was straight on feet one moment and the other moment he was on the ground scratching his head.

He looked at her, lost in her beauty, her hair bounced as she laughed so open heartedly. Her eyes depicted fun, happiness, joy and everything he wants to last with her forever. She smiled when she stopped laughing and stuck her hand out to him.

Just as he was about to take it, she moved it back. "Sorry, punishment." She said and started running while laughing away. He recovered from the shock and immediately started running after her.
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Bakwas tha na?

This is the side effect of watching JDJ. I saw a show's promo on colors and I just couldn't help but imagine it on kriyaansh, I don't know why.

Please comment and tell me how this was.

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sharif_lafungi thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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the promo was beautiful right ??...specially ranveer...so damn adorable..."slap slap"...back here...
it was cute sweet nd smile bringing one...loved it..
Edited by akankshaArsha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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i too felt dat u wrote on the theme of that new serial.. :) :)

really sweet one <3
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Res...

unres...

bakwass nhi super cute tha..

jb bhi us ad ko dekhti thi always kriyaansh ko imagine krti thi..

you ne to dil ki ichha puri krdi.. :*

loved it...
Edited by -Monika- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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meri ashiqui tumse hi..
it was cute...
loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome start
He love kriya but can't tell his feeling awesome
Update next part soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey Mannu...

Dat was really a cute one...

KriYaansh laughing...n playing on the beach...was supr cute...

Sooo...it means that he dint tell her the name of the girl he loves...

Rey fell while running...n then Kriyas punishment...

Dat was cute one...

Love Aditi...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome os...
Kriyaansh are so adorable. .
Very cute and nice os..
Loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It was damn nice.
Don't know whether it was on a serial or not but i loved it.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Bakwaas nahi it was awsm<3
Loved it

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