KriYansh Drabble Series: Tough Summer's Epilogue-pg58 #End!

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Annwesha

@sakura20

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Posted: 11 years ago

#151

luvd d update...
finaly he realisd itz not lust...
luvd d part rey missng kriya & kriya not wanting to face him... 😛
also luvd d terrace descriptn...

Edited by sakura20 - 11 years ago

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Rajeshwari_KR

@Rajeshwari_KR

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Posted: 11 years ago

#152

Shenz I loved this part and ur truly are a Devil😡

But this update was awesome😊

Rey's frustrations were beautifully penned and the metaphor was apt!

Finally Nimish went missing and thanks to lights too😉...Looks like stars are on rey's side😆

Like how Rey's holding back to just make sure she crosses boundaries...I know he's dying to just get one glimpse of hers

I hope she doesn't realise his presence till she finds herself in his arms

Let him apologize but I don't want her to forgive so easily...aur thoda tadpao

Next update jaldi dedo

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kriapatel

@kriapatel

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Posted: 11 years ago

#153

Nice update

Hope kr ke bich sab thik ho gaye

Love how eey was eagar to talk too kria

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Maneet

@moon_cupcake

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Posted: 11 years ago

#154

I am so sorry for the late reviews...I loved the last three chapters...all them are beautifully penned...waiting for Kriya and Rey's roof top encounter... :)

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David

@arshafan94

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Posted: 11 years ago

#155

Way to go.
The way you expressed Rey's feeling was so freaking awesome.
Finally the most awaited confrontation.
Can't wait.
Update soon

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#156

Thanks to everyone who has reviewed and liked..

means a lot to me...

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

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Posted: 11 years ago

#157

Update coming up in minutes.. On next page :P

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Shahnaz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#158

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why do u think i wud tell ya ? ;)

@SheLooks18ToMe

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Posted: 11 years ago

#159

Reserved

Unreserved

Everything was portrayed just so well. I've already told you how much I love the way you describe actions and emotions in words. simple regular words.

I've always loved that..

I liked the part where he asks her to listen to him, but she's being stubborn. It signifies the girl.

As per now, I don't think I can stretch this review further, as my mood is terrible. I've just had one of the most terrible days of my life.

so sorry.

And please write when you feel fine. no one's running away. take care :)

Love and Regards

Bookworm :)

Edited by Painted_Sky - 11 years ago