'Last days.' SanDhir SS(Complete.)Part 7-12 Pg 25 - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
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heyyo ! thanks all for liking this SS so much ! :) !

...here it is !!

the 1st chap of "Last Days !"

Part 1

"arre sanyukta !! tumhari file kaha h ??" jiggy asked in his usual tone ..!!

I en kaustuki turned to him en chuckled at his oh-so-innocent face ..!!

It had been time since the two have broken up..en kaustuki en yoyo for quit a time..!!

So much had changed in just a year..!!

Parth en vidushi had started dating each other out of the blue..!!

En Vidushi en become a sweet helping chick from a bitch !!!...

Parth en randhir had solved their issues en were sort of good friends ..!!

My en randhir's equation had also changed !!..

We weren't enimies...!! Nor friends or frenimies..!!

Our equation still had no describtions..!! we still used to fight en challenge each other..!! but that only brought the best out of us ..!! ...not to forget...
we cared for each other too..!! he had helped me in breaking up my engagement..!! ...so much had changed ...en now !!...after what news I got few days before .. my life too had changed..!! or may be was going to...stop..??

"arre peheli waali zip m hee h.." I replied too him en we turned back to our conversation..!!

After minutes or two I heard his scream again..!! but this time it was terrified..!!

We .., I en kaustu looked beside us.. as his eyes kept widening each second en his hands trembled..!!

I looked at the file he was looking at..!! I couldn't understand what was wrong ?? did I made it so good or so bad or WHAT ??

"..tumhe leukemia h ??" my eyes widened ...more than his !!

I climbed stairs faster than possible reaching where he stood !!.. en snatched the file en saw my medical report !!

How the f**k was that possible !!.. how can it ...!! f**k I brought with my other files !! shit yar !

Till I could make my register of all the happenings en give a excuse ...I heard a thump sound en followed my gaze to it ..!! my heart already was thumping hard..en the air too had changed around me..!!

My heart said it was.. but I just kept pleading it shouldn't be..!!

But who can win against the heart !!!...

It was HIM..!!

His bag lay on the ground..

En his eyes showed a expression of a dead..!!

Tears escaped blurring my vision..!!

As kaustu shacked me..!! en I blinked the rest tears away..!!

Looking beside at her.. !! "..tum..tumhe ! " she stammered "tumhe KYA HAI??? " I could see her eyes welling up in tears through those mirrors of her glasses... en her throat going dry.. !! she stumbled as yoyo came behind her to save her ..!!

"sanyukta !" I turned my head straight en a little left ..!! where my best friend stood..!! parth...

His eyes shocked ..terrified en hurt !!.. I guess he went numb or something..!!

"..nahi !!" en vidushi hugged me..!! I felt my shoulder getting wet as she dropped some tears..!!

"tumhe kuch nhe hua h !! tumhe kuch nhe ho skta ..!!" she said in outmost shock..!! shacking her head like a maniac en cupping my face..!!

I couldn't say anything..!! "..bhabiji app...nhe nhe !!" yoyo too shook his head in disbelief like vidu ..!! he had started calling me that since our dance session..!! he thought I en mcp were a couple or something ..!!

"..ye sabb jhoot h na sanyukta ??" randhir barked in the crowd around me en caught my hand bringing me closer to him..!!

His eyes were red..!! in anger ... "pls tell me ye jhut h..!!" en his eyes displayed hurt more now..!! they turned black from brown.. !! en his eyebrows too curved.. leaving lines on his forehead..!

I looked down... I was able to reply nothing..!!

He left me en stumbled on the chair beside..!! I tried helping him but he shrugged me off..!!

After me.. parth en jiggy helped him sit properly..!! his eyes again showed a death expression..!! he kept staring at the ground..!! en I ran away from there as soon as possible..!! crying..stumbling ..hitting people.. falling a few times..!! but I didn't stop till I reached my room..!!

Locking the door I broke down there itself ..!! I cried aloud ...for hours..!! en felt asleep sobbing..!!

*For people who don't know about leukemia It's blood cancer..*

Edited by archita358 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32
Awesome update.
Waotin for next part.
Kind of sensitive story.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33
i dont have words to describe my feeling...its really a touching one
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
wow
a dramatic first part
loved it
beautifully written
can't wait to see what happens next
thanks for the PM
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow...as usual...you are an fantastic writer...im dying to read next update
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Posted: 11 years ago
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😭
it was awsum u penned it down

will be waiting for ur next update
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37
Hawww leukemia yaar maregi toh nhi na sanyu plz marna mat by the way loved d update
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38
yippee!!😃
my guess was right...😆
vaise khush hone wali baat nahi hai..😳
and why r u killing sanyukta...😕 kya bigada hai usne tumhera...
it was a lovely update👏
plz update next part soon😊
and thx for pm😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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superb start dear.. Loved it.. Thanks for pm..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Sanyukta has leukemia😲
such a life threatening disease..can never think something this serious
every1 is hell shocked..
what will happen now?
Update soon. Waiting...

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