~~~Rantara FF - BodyGuard~~~#5 Never Heard Of Privacy People PG 6

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BodyGuard
( Aisi Nafrat...To Kaisa Ishq?)

Ishq-E-Junoon apne Sar Pe Sawar Hai...
Chaahe Na Chaahe Hum Tum Ho Jana Yeh Pyaar Hai...



Greetings to all my Yedis.. 🤗
Some of you may already read one of my story called 'College Days'..yes that same crap one...You may also now I had started an FF a few weeks ago..But i decided to Dis-continue it..But Later I felt bad so I decided To Write Another FF..So Here It Is...

I had this idea from a long time..but never tried to post it..

I'll post character sketch and small Introduction for now..If you like it..please let me know..I'll update it further..

Character Sketch

Antara Kaul:

Antara Is the daughter of a rich Businessman...She doesn't follow any rules...and Lives life the way she wants to and enjoys every moment of it...and gives herself no restrictions...She grew up with her Father as her mother passed away when she was born..Since then her father looked after her..Antara's father means everything to her...

Antara considers that love and marriage are two most beautiful relations..
She says that all men are the same, and you can't trust them..but still she believes in the tales that God has created some one for you...only for you..

Raghunath Naik:

Raghu's father worked for Antara's father as a BodyGuard and was very loyal...He lost his life in order to save his Boss's...Mr.Kaul...
Raghu was brought up by His uncle who runs the BodyGuards Business...
Raghu grew up to be very strong and hated Injustice so he decided to protect someone's life and become a BodyGuard...Raghu is grateful to Mr.Kaul as he had saved his life when he was younger..He got his mother to the hospital when she was in labour...He thinks that Mr kaul has the right on his life..and will follow all his orders.

Raghu hates the Idea of Marriage and Love...He finds it useless...the only thing that is important Work...Respect..and Dedication..Nothing else.

Introduction

How are these completely different souls become one?..How will they both realize their love for each other..Will their hatred towards each other slowly melt as their hearts unite?..Please Do Read "BodyGuard...Aisi Nafrat to Kaisa Ishq" To Find Out...

Index

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BodyGuard - #1 Hero's Entry PG 2

BodyGuard - #2 Heroine's Entry PG 3

BodyGuard - #3 First Meeting PG 4

BodyGuard - #4 That's Right Get Jealous PG 6

BodyGuard - #5 Never Heard Of Privacy People PG 6



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Guys please let me know how's it...I know it's little complicated.
if you like then please leave your comments and suggestions to improve the quality in writing.
please support me...

thanks...with loads of love😳🤗❤️


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bokul thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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congrats for the new story
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Posted: 11 years ago
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ekksss this idea is amazing
I love the whole concept already
don't dare call my fav story crap otherwise i'll haunt u midnight
pls cont this asap
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazing concept
Seriously this is going to be the best story so far 😉
Do update 1st chapter soon 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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BodyGuard - #1

Please...Please Help me'...A Lady Please to Her One and Only Hope Mr.Kaul...She Sat On The Floor In-Front Of Mr. Kaul And Joined Her Hands...

Lady: Sir...Sir Please Help Me'...

Mr.Kaul made Her Stand in front of him and sits on a chair...

Mr. Kaul: First Tell Me What The Problem Is...Why Do You Need my Help?...

Lady: Sir...Sir They Have Kidnapped My Daughter...They Want To Make A MMS Of Her And Send It...She Chocked On Her Words...

Mr. Kaul: What Are The Police Doing?...Have You Even told Them?

Lady: Yes Sir..But Even They Are In This Act...That Is Why I Have Come To You...You Are My Only Hope...She Said Pleading...

Mr.Kaul: Do You Know Where She Is..Address Or Anything?..

Lady: Yes Sir..And She Notes Down The Addresss

Mr. Kaul: OK...You Leave For Now...I Will Do My Part 100%...Please Go And Take Rest...Nothing Will Happen To Your Daughter...This Is My Promise...

The Lady Leaves Sobbing Quietly Hoping For The Best...-Mr. Kaul Turns Towards his Assistant...He Picks Up His Phone Book And Shows Him A Number...

Mr.Kaul: Call Manohar Using This Number And Tell Him To Send 10 Men to The Address The Lady Had Given...

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Assistant: No...Sir Has Asked For 10 Men..So We Want 10 Men...

Manohar: Listen To Me...I Have A One-Man-Army...Instead Of 10 Guards I Can Send One BodyGuard...

Assistant: We Asked For 10...What Good Will One Do To Us?

Manohar: Let Me Tell You Something About Him...He Gives Complete Guarantee Of Your Job With Warranty Whether Your There Or Not...When it Comes To Loyalty...he's one Step Ahead Of Royalty...And He's The Only Person in the World Who Can Make His Opposition Pee In his Pants By Simply Staring At Him...He's The Best Man For This Job...Raghunath Naik!!!

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There He Stood...Waiting For The Train To Finally Go Back Home...To Meet his Uncle Manohar... 'Raghunath Naik'...No One Wanted To Mess With Him...Because He Looked tough Also Because He Had a Black Suit On With A Gun In His Pocket...He Had A Bluetooth On his Right Ear And his Eyes Were Covered With Sunglasses... He Stepped In The Train And Found His Seat...He Lifted Up His Back And Placed It On The Shelf...

Raghu Jerked Forward As His Phone Rang...He Answered The Call From His Bluetooth Headset...

Raghu: Hello...BodyGuard Raghunath Naik Speaking...

Manohar: Raghu...Where Are You?

Raghu: Chacha...I'm Taking A Massage..He Said As People Pushed And Shoved Him.

Manohar: Do As I Say...Stop Taking A Massage And Get To Premium Dock Immediately...You Have To Save A Girl...Someone Is Going To Make And MMS Of Her And Leak It..

Raghu: Premium Dock?..But That's Towards The West...I Am Heading North Chacha...Opposite Direction.

Manohar: Raghu...Don't Waste Time..GO!!!...

Raghu: Can't You Send Someone Else Chacha?

Manohar: I Would...If This Wasn't Mr.Kaul's Job...

Raghu Transformed His Hands Into Fists...his Eye's Threw Fire Balls...

BodyGuard'

The Next Thing You Know...Raghu Was Flying Through Mid-Air...He Grabbed One Pipe Outside The Train And Jamp On The Train Heading West...there He Stood On Top Of The Train...As soon As He Saw his Destination He Leaped Of The Train And On To A Bridge..There He Saw The Premium Dock...

Raghu Broke The Door Open And Entered...There Were Many Men There With Guns...Knife etc...He Went Behind The First One...Took His Gun Out And BOOM'...The Gun Shot Echoed The Room..Hearing The Gun Shot The Rest Of The Men Got Alerted...They Ran To See One Of Their Men Dead...They Saw Raghu Run Across The Room...Then Began The Shootout...Gunshots Echoed The Room..One By One Raghu Tackled Every One Of Them...

Raghu Ran into A room...And Saw A Man Trying to Get His Hands on A Girl...He Ran And Pulled Him Away..."This Is Gonna Hurt You as Much As It's Gonna Hurt Me"...Raghu Promised...He Grabbed The Man Form Around His Waist, Twisted in Mid-Air, And Arched The Two Of Them Towards The Wall...Easily Angling The Man Against The Wall...

The Man Collided With The Raised Floor And His Head Ploughed Through The Woodwork With A Painful Cracking And Crunching Sound As The Wood Shattered Under The Enormous Pressure Form the Attack.

Raghu: That Had To Hurt...

He Led The Girl And Himself Out The Dock Safely...He Looked Down At One Of His Hands and Noticed One Of His Nails Was Bleeding. "Dammit! I Broke A Nail!" He Explained In Frustration...Making The Girl Smile...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow Ifz! New story!

The first part was super interesting! I'm really eager to see how this plays out! Thanks for the pm! (:
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Posted: 11 years ago
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i am sure i will enjoy this story
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awww I love it so much
Bodyguard Raghunath Naik speaking is lil awkward why dont you name hin Bodyguard Raghu Naik that sounds good 😃
Continuee soon 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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ifzu..ifzu..what I say..I just love it..what a plot..wow..I reed chapter an then I cmmt on it..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow really nice..raghu to raghu hi hai..an vo ameer baap ki bigdi aulad ko kaise line pe laega..

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