Arshi SS: I LIKE THE WAY IT HURTS-Interlude 6/8/14 pg 74

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nuts4u

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Posted: 11 years ago

#171

hey thanks for PM...it was good update...I like this Khushi a strong women...Good now Aranv will dig deep and find out the real truth...looking for more

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Happytwinkle

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Posted: 11 years ago

#172

fabulous update

loved it

thanks for the pm

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hellomotto369

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Posted: 11 years ago

#173

just found this story! great concept! i am loving this strong verbal independent khushi! i wish this is what they showed in the show as well!! please update soon!

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rulama

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Posted: 11 years ago

#174

That was interesting!

Lovely to see Khushi with a backbone and stand firmly for herself...

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mahrusweety

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Posted: 11 years ago

#175

part 1

wow

awesome and mind blowing

finally this is what i really need to happen in show

didn't like the way ow khushi behave soo forgiving and happy after arnav's accusation

u wrote it very well

and well deserve ASR

now feel the taste of ur own medicine😆

loved reading it

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mahrusweety

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Posted: 11 years ago

#176

part 2

super fantastic

wow this is aan amazing khushi👏

She left arnav dumb with her actions😲

and she meant what she said to her😊

khushi's dialogues to Shayam and arnav were awesome⭐️

really arnav need to use his brain now😕😆

as it's high tym

khushi mentioned some common facts to arnav

that why she need to go behind that leech shayam😡

impressive work

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mahrusweety

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Posted: 11 years ago

#177

part 3 A

😲 😲

arnav was really shocked with khushi unpredictable behaviour

but feel really bad for khushi

as she has to change her selfless nature

but serving the raizada good

awesome and well written

loved it

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mahrusweety

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Posted: 11 years ago

#178

part 3 B

😆 😆

loved how khushi deal with shayam

and he run and run to safe his life after khushi's shrilling scream

and bound to think WHAT THE HELL JUST HAPPENED 😆 😃 👏

khushi's flashback were really hurtfull

u worte it very emotionally and beautifully

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mahrusweety

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Posted: 11 years ago

#179

part 4

super awesome

marvellous update

good that arnav watched the terrace scene

now he understand how wrong he was

arnav and khushi dialogues were super fab and khushi was mind blowing on counter attacking arnav

loved it

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Moumita

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Posted: 11 years ago

#180

Sorry for being late a little for update. My asli duniya needed a little more attention in last few days.

Uh! before you start reading I just wanted to say something to all of you...

I know guys I am not really a communicative author and I don't really reply to your comments in regular basic or better say almost never, but that doesn't mean I don't read them. I read them and really adore the way you guys encourage me to write more. I truly appreciate each comment be it a detailed one or just a word, yes I wouldn't deny that those detailed comments make me happier (selfish am I😳😛). yep Chaverah you make me happier😉

Mahrusweety you too... But yes short or long I can never thank enough Rulama for you regular comments and words of encouragement.😊

And all of you guys who comment and like and who doesn't also a big Thank you to all for reading my works so far as without your acknowledgement they are as good as a piece of paper.

So all of you a big 🤗 from me.

Now you can go and read, enough of my bak bak...😆

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