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Posted: 11 years ago
Just read part 9, very nice. And as long as the child is not Raghav's it's okay.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: fairylover


Thanks Priya.. divorce part of the story is yet to reveal!! Was it Raghav who initiated divorce or Pakhi?? This question is still unanswered!! 😉

sorry Priya but i do not believe in this past baggage theory.. I too had a bitter past but it doesn't affect me n my partner. I love him a lot and will always be. U can never forget ur first love as it's the sweetest feeling. But it can always stay as a good memory!!


Sorry dear I said past baggages only in reference to Kalpi n not a generalisation! Not every love is similar right? With regards to Kalpi Raghav was the first one to show her how important she was to him...he was the first to call her his ek mutthi aasmaan! Esp a person like Kalpi who always felt neglected by her mom, it will b difficult for her to forget her past with a smile!!

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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update and u left us on a cliff hanging and dangling! Now how will I know kiske saath kiya hai poo ne, kaala apna moo!!??
He He!!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Thank u Sampa!!
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Originally posted by: ishikajainm

superb! 😃 plz update next chapter fast!!😃😃


Thank u dear.. Will try to update next part today!!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: diti96

I just love ur updates
The story is super diper good
Y cant cvs think of stories like this..
U r so hopeful and they are hopeless


Thank you sweetheart!!

I hope cvs give us a sensible story rather than RaKhi. Once again thanx for appreciation.😊
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Thank you Shyama!!
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Originally posted by: ek_nai_paheli

Just read part 9, very nice. And as long as the child is not Raghav's it's okay.


Thank u.. N have faith on me!!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: priya_remix


Sorry dear I said past baggages only in reference to Kalpi n not a generalisation! Not every love is similar right? With regards to Kalpi Raghav was the first one to show her how important she was to him...he was the first to call her his ek mutthi aasmaan! Esp a person like Kalpi who always felt neglected by her mom, it will b difficult for her to forget her past with a smile!!


Arey no need to say sorry.. i ws just giving my example. 😊

I agree that Raghav is the only one who brought a small ray of happiness in her life.. Raghav is very special for her and will be always be special.. I know u guys love RagNa a lot.. I too love them but not able to forgive Raghav.. N even the crappy story Line of cvs is not letting me forgive him.

Originally posted by: priya_remix

Awesome update and u left us on a cliff hanging and dangling! Now how will I know kiske saath kiya hai poo ne, kaala apna moo!!??

He He!!


Thank you!!

Muh Kaala?? Na na na.. Her love is pure as well!! N imagine her kaala muh... Only teeth reflect honge 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hello guys.. Hope u all had an awesome weekend.. M not feeling sleepy tonight.. My interview result will come tomorrow.. Hoping to get this job else will be back to Delhi.. soory to bore u all by my personal talks but right now I am not active on FB or twitter and do not have any frn around so i feel like sharing it with my virtual family.. Thank u so much guys for bearing me!!

Neways m updating 20th part of the story.. It's getting longer day by day so i will try to cut some details and will try to finish this story asap.

Morning @Kalpi's flat

Kalpi gets up early today... It's her birthday and she wants to go to temple. She looks around to see the mess Roy and Payal created yesterday.. The room is full of balloons, ribbon and other party items.. Kalpi doesn't like this clutter usually but today she smiles on seeing them... The night was really special for her.. Payal and Roy has celebrated her birthday in night only.. They really had fun..The cake Payal baked for them was beautiful but instead of sugar it had salt.. So they had to make sandwich cake and cut it!! She sees Payal sleeping next to her.. Roy is sleeping in the hall. She gets up to prepare tea for everyone when she gets Roshni's call..

Roshni : Happy birthday darling!!

Kalpi : Thank u aunty..

Roshni : neways I have called u to tell u that u have to go orphanage today. We have a meeting their at 6 pm.

Kalpi : sure aunty, I will reach on time. Btw u r going Gurgaon today.. Have a nice trip.

Roshni : So u remember?? Yes I have an urgent meeting there. Btw thank u.. c ya later.

Kalpi hangs the call and gives bed tea to Payal.. She tells Kalpi to let her sleep for few more minutes.. Kalpi goes to wake Roy.. He looks at her and smiles..

Kalpi : Good morning... why r smiling so much?

Roy : Morning is really very good.. I have seen ur smiling face today.. I wish to see ur face evry morning..

Kalpi : What ??

Roy : Nothing.. just want to be with u guys always..

Kalpi(laughingly) : Ok than I will tell aunty to pack ur luggage and send it here.

Roy(smilingly) : Sure..

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After serving her frnz tea and snacks Kalpi goes to temple to pray for her success and happiness in everyone's life... Her day was as usual.. She has gone to bank for loan application.. It has been passed with Roy's help. She met few property dealers for other location for her coaching but doesn't find any satisfactory place. Roy too had gone to his dad's office and Payal is busy in her work..

At 6 pm Kalpi reaches Ngo.. She doesn't find anyone inside and goes to the kids room.. It was also empty. She gets shocked and worried.. She runs toward the community hall which is behind the orphanage.. She opens the door and it was all dark there.. She steps inside when a spot light flashes on her.. She looks around her.. The place was full of balloons.. She takes one in hand and reads Kalpana written on it.. She goes inside.. spotlight following her.. A little boy comes to her and escorts her to a chair.. She sees a remote and card kept on it.. she takes the card and read

"

Sit down Princess

and

press on button of remote

"

Kalpi follows the instruction.. On big screen Kalpi's video starts playing.. with a beautiful background song.. The video has collection of important moments of Kalpi's life in Delhi.. Her dance performances.. Her special moments with her friends and Roshni.. Kalpi gets overwhelmed on seeing it.. after the video finishes.. Lights come back and Kalpi sees roshin, Roy and Payal standing on stage with kids and orphanage staff.. Roshni has a cake in her hand..

Kalpi goes to them and thanks them for everything.. She looks at the cake.. The cake isn't looking like the one professionals bake.. In fact the icing wasn't proper and it was little burnt.. She get confused on looking at it..

Kalpi : U baked it??

Roshni : Not exactly.. Actually I just helped this kids in it. They have done all this arrangements.. We just helped them.. They have worked whole day for this preparations..

Kalpi(to kids) : thank u so much sweet hearts.. It's my best birthday..

Kids too wishes her and tells her to cut the cake.. She cuts the cake and feeds everyone individually from her hands.. Kalpi looks around to find Roshni when she sees her on call.. She thinks to go their and feed her as well.. She listens Roshni talking on call..

Roshni : I know I shouldn't have postponed the meeting but I was really busy today. It's a special day for me. Plz try to understand. We will meet tomorrow..

Kalpi listens this.. She remembers her own mother leaving her alone on her birthday for pakhi.. A tear of happiness rolls down from her eyes.. She runs and back hugs Roshni.. roshni gets surprised on this.. she hangs the call and turns around..

Kalpi : Thank u so much aunty..

Roshni : U silly girl... crying on ur birthday..

Kalpi : It's coz of happiness... Thank u for giving me what I was missing in my life..

Roshni : I think someone has forgotten about our deal.. Mother-daughter deal.. Thanking a mother??

Kalpi : Ohh ya.. So where is my gift??

Roshni : What do u want??

Kalpi : A promise that u will keep loving me like this..

Roshni : U wasted ur gift... No matter whether I promise u or not.. I will always love u and I promise u that I will be always there for you.

While Kalpi and Roshni are chatting with each other Mr. Oberoi makes the entry.. Kalpi gets happy on seeing him.. She greets him happily.

Mr. Oberoi : Happy B'day Kalpaana

Kalpi : Thank you sir.. u have come here for me??

Mr. Oberoi : Yes.. I can't talk like ur aunty but I really like you and that's why I have come here for your party.

Kalpi : M really happy for it. Thnk u 4 taking out sometime from ur busy schedule.. It really made me feel special..

Mr. Oberoi : So don't u want gift??

Kalpi : Ur presence is more important than any gift for me..

Mr. Oberoi : Impressive.. Now I know why ur aunty loves u so much.. Neways this is a gift for u. In fct it is a return gift for me..

Mr. Oberoi handover her an envelope.. Kalpi takes it and reads it.. She gets shocked and doesn't know how to react.. Roshni looks her expression and takes the letter from her hand.. She gets happy on reading it and tells everyone that Vijeet has appointed Kalpi as their project head and it is her appointment letter.. She tells Kalpi to say something..

Kalpi : I am really obliged sir that u considered me for this position but how could I??

Mr. Oberoi : Why couldn't you?? I always wanted u to join my business. U wanted to prove urself and complete ur commitments.. So now u have completed ur commitment towards ur previous job and have proved ur business sense by succeeding in ur coaching classes.. I want a person like u for my current project.. It's purely business and no personal relationship.. So will u join it??

Kalpi : But NGO work and coaching classes.. How will I manage..

Roshni : U can work as part time employee in Ngo.. Only on weekends and appoint someone for ur coaching classes.. Just like any other businessman... A businessman doesn't work in every department of his company or in every branch.. The just keeps overview and hire right professionals for them. U too do the same.

Mr. Oberoi : yes.. Roshni is right.. A successful businessman is the one who manages time properly. N u have that quality.

Kalpi : Thank u for trusting me so much... I accept ur offer and assure u that I won't let u down.. Thank u sir..

Mr. Oberoi : Uncle.. Are u still angry for that day??

Kalpi : No sir.. I mean uncle.

Roy : But Dad.. can Kalpi join it after a week??

Kalpi : After a week??

Roy : yes.. after a week coz we have to go to bangalore for dance show.. I have already committed on our behalf..

Mr. Oberoi : Yes sure.. She can join after 1 week..

Kalpi : Great.. That will be fun.. u me and Payal!!

Payal : Sorry Kalpi I won't be able to join u.. I have some imp work here..

Kalpi : What Payal.. Now what important work do u have??

Payal : Actually I have submitted my article to a leading newspaper and they liked it very much.. now they want me to write another article for their magazine.. So I have to work!!

Kalpi : What?? N u dint tell me.. Payal.. Congrats!!

Payal : I wanted to surprise u!!

The party ends on a happy note.. Kalpi, Roy Payal everyone is taking quick steps towards their goal.. Roy who wants to be a choreographer is concentrating on his goal.. Payal who wants to become a writer has got an opportunity to write an article in a popular magazine and Kalpi whose dream was to maker her parents proud has taken one more step towards her success. She now owns a successful coaching classes.. Does social work and Will work as Project head in MNC..

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Precap : Doctor tells Kalpi that her injury is severe and she has to take care else she won't be able to dance again.


P.S. : Plz hit like and comment.. Sorry for all grammatical/spelling mistakes or typos.

Regards

Vish

Edited by fairylover - 11 years ago

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