Fan Fiction-Sindoor!! - Page 152

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Posted: 19 years ago
awsome job guli!!
hope u had fun yesterday with ur family!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
great job gulli!!!!!!!!!!!!!
but i hope you didn't really kill dhruv 😭 🤢
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Posted: 19 years ago
great job guli...keep up the great work and continue soon...but plz dont kill dhruv!!
Edited by hrithick_luvr - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
Wow, awesome part 👏 👏 👏 plz cont soon and don't kill Dhruv..
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Posted: 19 years ago
hey plz dont kill dhruv plzzzzzzzzzzzzz

but it is ofcourse a really cool twist
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Posted: 19 years ago
nahiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii...dhruv to mat marooooooooooooooo 😭
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Posted: 19 years ago
Part 135

He stops breathing

everyone is shocked

They consider him dead

Ved is arguing and saying no hes not dead

They take him to the hospital

The docs are checkin him

He has no pulse

Ved is praying..

In her mind she is saying hes alive

Doc check him really good

They make him breathe again

But barely

He has to go operation and take out the bullet

Everyone is informed

The surgery is one

The docs are really careful

Ved is praying and praying

All the family members are worried

The bullet is removed safely

Dhruv is out of danger

But now they have to see if he will live or not

Doc tells them that if he doesnt wake up in 3 hours then they cant do anything

however if he does.. than it will be the biggest miracle they have ever had

For the next three hours are critcal

Ved looks at the time

It is 5:44

At 844 he has to wake up

The clock is ticking down

Everyone will wait

Ved tells everyone to go home

No one listens

She tells them to come back in 2 hours

They dont agree

she convinces them

Then they go home

Ved is thinking about all the good times she has had w/ Dhruv

and is thinking about her child.. who is not even born yet!

TIme goes by

It is 6:17

Time is going really slow for her

She is praying and nothing will happen to him

Viren informs the police and tells them to find Suraj

Aarti has found out what Suraj has done and is mad

She prays for Dhruv

It is 7:00

The family comes back

All are waiting

Then its 8:00

Ved has her eyes closed

She wants it on the 44 right on the nose!

830!

She is looking 14 mins left

840

She is looking 4 mins

She is standing outside and is looking at him

She is crying

843

Nothing!

She is shocked!!

844.. and 55 secs to go!

She is like come on!

45

She is not giving up

30

20

10

then it slowly starts counting down

9

8

7

Nothing!!

Ved is saying come on Dhruv

wake up

5

4



And wait til tomorrow to see whether he lives or "dies"


The End!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
that was awesome guli plz continue soon...and keep up the great work....please dhruv ko marna mat do😭
Edited by hrithick_luvr - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
tum aise beech mein nahin chod sakte..oh well..continue soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
just wanted to see wat people will say!! i will cont 2nite!!!

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