TaaRey FF ~||Decision||~

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kriti094

@kriti094

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#261

Firstly sry for d late comment di
but i was super busy with exams
anyways ch 2 also seems amazing
i loved d way rey's mothrr treated taani
i love dway rey silently understands taani's feelings
Waiting for d nxt part

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Alefiya Magar

@alef_mgr

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#262

Loved it Didu 👏

Rey's Mom is so ahmazing 😳

I could imagine Rey's look

Gosh Rey's mom is so fast 😆

Kya kehte hain voh "Chat Mangi pat Biyah' 😆

I am feeling sorry for Taani 😭

Koi naa sab jaldi theek hoga 😉

Update soon Dida 😳

Sorry for the late comment

I was out of station

Much love: Ale ❤️

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taarey05

@taarey05

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#263

nice concept
waiting to read more

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Fatima Faiq

@-Fam_TaaReY-

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#264

||~Excerpt From Chapter 3~||

I felt something in the first sight. My heart was throbbing on a completely different rhythm. In that moment, I decided to make her my ladylove. But when my best buddy Rohan proposed her and she accepted, I felt something shattered inside me. I felt broken. But, for my love's happiness, I backed off. My eyes became moist as I reminisced those moments.

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"I can't see you with someone else. I can't tolerate if someone else touches you except me."

I turned round and glanced myself in the mirror. My eyes were swollen, my nose has turned red because of continuous crying, I had dark circles around my eyes, my whitish complexion has turned yellow because of weakness. I found stains of dried tears over my cheeks. Seeing my own condition, my eyes became teary.

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