A SwaRon Short Story: Fairy-Tale Affair ch9, pg53 {The End} - Page 15

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Posted: 11 years ago
superb updt
loved it
thnx fr pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
read all the chapters in one go
saw an update on tis ff after so long
nyways it was an awesum update
the more i m reading ur works
the more i falling for them
as a writer the best thing is the control you hav on ur characters
every story has a lot to offer in context of
emotions , passion or romance 😳
nothing is overdone which is really impressive
coming to ur update
i really loved how swayam's character is handled
he is paitent, caring n a passionate lover
n sharon will be sharon strong fierce i loved her
all in all a very well formed pleasing read 🤗




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Posted: 11 years ago
Short and Quick replies:


Sanskriti: Thanks dear. Well It's completely fine, till the time you have a reason.


Prachi: Thanks dear :)


@Rockingbharadwaj: Sorry, I don't know your name. I agree, he can't think of ruining her. All he can think is to love her. ;P


Marium:

Originally posted by: blush.

Well, i am not here to justify on why i didn't edited my previous comment, all i want to say is that i am sorry because i forgot. I know it doesn't make sense but on other hand it makes total sense, Ya? Right Shenzy? 😆


This thing, does it makes sense? I mean, girl, what are you blabbering about? Fine! you forgot! Now don't make my head spin with these kinda twisty dialogues.
But I am glad that this time you didn't leave a reserved comment. Though this one itself was enough to make me smile. And you got to comment on this one, whenever you are free. :*


@d3fan4eva: Thanks! And I am continuing this. Though will end this one soon.


Aishu: Thank you 🤗


@swaronlove001: Thanks! I really need that.


Divya: Thanks dear. Well your wait ends now. :P


Trushna: Aww! even that reserved comment of yours says so much.😳 And I hope you enjoy your vacation and come back soon. So that I get a comment from you.
I don't know about every girl, but every SwaRonian dreams for this😉
I will make sure I don't keep you all waiting for long. In Swayam's Style, forever😆


Yogu: My boys have a very good sense of timing, especially when it's about their respective girls😉 Thanks!


@Phosphenes: I am sorry, I don't know your name.
Well, I am glad you liked the way it's been portrayed. But to be honest I still doubt to continue this. It's like the response has dropped than what I had started from -_-


@KReyAS: Thanks dear.


Rosy: I know I updated it after a long time. And I am really sorry about that. But I just don't feel like when I come here to update.
I am grinning like fool after reading your comment. I love it :)
It really does motivate me a lot. EEE😃 Itni tareef? Waah! I am loving it. But isn't it too much. Honestly, I am really glad that you liked the way it's been put up. Each and every damn thing. Thanks, Thanks, Thanks a ton :*




I hope I haven't missed anyone. :)

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Posted: 11 years ago
I hope there isn't a need to put up the summary. If yes, than do let me know. I will add it back :)


Chapter Five: Nothing without You!!



Things were been rushed. All the people at the palace were in a haste.. haste to complete things.. after all the Grand Common Gathering was just a few hours away. And time was flying. The higher authorities were executing the requirements for the gathering. Everything had to be perfect.. just as perfect as the Royals. Above all Queen Rochelle was known for her perfectionist taste. She had supervised various occasions and all with the oh-so unique taste of hers. And this was going to be another addition to her perfect function lists that would be talked about for years together.
Sharon descended the stairs approaching King Martin with affectionate eyes. She slightly bowed to him, with greetings whispered in the air. "You look gorgeous, Princess." King Martin gently stroked the top of her head. Her lips curved into a smile.. a smile every father wishes for her daughter.. heartily smile.. lovingly at him. She knew her father too very well. He was tough from outside which is needed for a King to be.. but at the same time equally soft for his kids.. for her. She mattered to him.. more than the world did. And she would melt with the way he conveys his emotions in those small gestures.
"Thank you, Da.." even before she could complete the word her eyes widened and she recovered, "I mean, Thank you, your majesty." This widened his smile. No matter what her cute antics never failed to amaze him.
Finally it was about time. Various Royal guests had arrived at the borders of their kingdom. People gathered around the palace to seek an entry to the beautiful decorated palace.
Princes and Kings of different territories showed up raising the hope of Queen Rochelle. They greeted each other performing all the rituals. While all this was going on Sharon had a smile pasted on her face though her mind kept lingering at the various ways she might encounter him. There was hardly any time when she would have not thought of him. He ruled her mind. Her soul.
Her eyes searched for a pair of eyes that reflected the similar emotions as hers. Though to her disappointment she couldn't trace it. But there was something that made her uneasy. A pair of dark eyes gazing at her, as though she would fall prey to them. Those eyes had a different hold of emotion that made her shiver.. She shivered out of fear. There was an unknown fear that crossed her. She saw that Queen Rochelle made her way to Sharon long with him. Sharon couldn't help but gulp down the fearful emotion down her throat. She didn't know what made her so scared but she could feel the negative vibes radiating from the person. She regained her senses as she heard the melodious voice laced with politeness of Rochelle, "Princess, meet Louis Richards, the Prince of Australia." Louis held his hand out, asking for hers with a gentle bow. She slid her hand into his, to which his lips reached the back of her palm. Though it was a practice usually carried out for greeting a female. But Sharon found him to be weird because his lips unnecessarily lingered longer than required, on her skin.
"It is my pleasure meeting you, Princess." He held an expression that was difficult to decipher. Sharon for a moment just wanted to run away. His presence was making her feel uneasy.
"Make sure you don't disappoint him, Sharon." That was unbelievingly whispered by Rochelle. Sharon rolled her eyes at her expectant mother to make her understand that she was not comfortable going around with this man. But without any word she left the two alone, greeting others.
Louis tried to gain their attention back, "May I have the pleasure to dance with the beautiful lady, please?" He asked, Seeking the soft rhythm of the instruments played by the various musicians at the place, as an opportunity to spend some time with Sharon. He had found her appealing from the very first glimpse of hers.
Sharon's eyes widened at him with his way too straight question. Dance wasn't anything big he had asked though she found it to be too soon for the question. She preferred time and moreover, understanding the person seemed to be more important. But she thought of it to be too early to judge him. She has hardly met him. And above all maybe she is stressing unnecessarily about the matter.
Maybe, he is just a little different. She thought.
When he didn't get an answer from her, he lowered down, "Rule number 164: It is rude to turn down someone. A Royal has to be polite." Before straightening himself, he rubbed the tip of his nose along the curve of her neck, smelling her. His lips curved wider as he straightened himself, looking at her reaction. He pecked her cheeks dragging her to the centre of the floor. She was highly irate. It was highly unacceptable to have someone behave like this to her. She breathed in order to calm herself. She had to dance. She had no option being a Royal.
Maybe not!
They took their position, bringing their stance to perfection. His hold around her tightened bringing her closer as the music started. They swayed. His eyes feasted upon her while she tried to maintain her composure. With every passing minute, he tried to reduce the gap that prevailed between the two. He tried to swirl her. But that ended up clumsy. And with the clumsy swirl forced, She landed into His arms. Safely. He let out a sigh of relief while she exhaled the breath she held. It was her Swayam!

Things to get intensified and the story to proceed to its END!

Okay! That's all for the day. Make sure there are no comments reserved, Please!

And since, the response I get has dropped drastically from what I used to receive during the start of this one. So if, that's the case, I am forced to ask for something I never favored for.

For the next update, 20 reviews (not comments/ spammed) that is merely 2.5 pages, And you can spam as much as you want. I will update after 5 pages are completed.

Edited by -shenz- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow dear ds was amazing...I thought dt she was dancing with that louis...bt releived to know that she was with swayam at the end...update soon n thanks 4 d pm..
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my name is Manisha
Edited by Rockingbhardwaj - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing part...loved the update...swaron were awesome...Thanx for pm...continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
it was an amazingg update
the chapter was a lil short i wanted to read sum more
apart from tat i m happy ki i got an update from you
the chapter was refreshening
sharon's inner thoughts were very well penned
i loved the end whr she ends up wit swayam
all in all a very enjoyable read
do update soon 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
fabb part👏
woww swayam camee😳
continue soonish😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
awsom updt
loved it
cont soon
thnx fr pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
I just read all your updates...and all of them are amazing!
I must say I just fell in love with the way you convey emotions
I love the concept and more importantly the way you have pictured Swayam and Sharon!
Their encounter and the budding romance was beautifully written!
I'm loving the way this one's going...was that Really Swayam at the end?
really curious to know more
Plz keep updating sooner

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