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Posted: 11 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: fraser

nice one...
don't tell me that yug entry is for revenge...
update soon


thanks dear 😃

yug's status will be clear in next update-the reason for him being in this story 😉

will update soon 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Previous update on Page 7

Some Clearance

Part (a)


"Whoever I love they die. I am a curse on the life of my dear ones. First my parents, then my best friend. I keep myself busy in work to avoid Dadaji, my only family. I never show him how much I love him because the day I will show him my love for him, this curse will trigger on him." Mrityunjay was thinking while smoking, sitting on his balcony watching the sky filled with stars.

"I need to call Mrityunjay as he might have come to know that the factory is fine and he might also have planned his return trip," thought Dadaji while trying to make a call to Mrityunjay.

"Hello, Mrityunjay how are you?" asked Dadaji.

"I am fine and here the factory is also doing well. So I am returning tomorrow," replied Mrityunjay.

"Beta, what's the hurry of returning to Mumbai? You have taken a leave of three days. So please return after three days. And it's an order, stay there until your holiday finishes." Dadaji was strict on Mrityunjay.

"Ok," Mrityunjay replied rolling his eyes with a deep sigh.


"What is remaining here for me? Only memories. I need to go out. Otherwise, these memories will make me go mad," thought Mrityunjay, once again staring at the sky.


Day 2

"Ma'am...Ma'am...It's me, Adi."

"What happened Adi? Why you seem to be worried? Is there any problem?" asked Tara while opening the door of her hotel room.


"Yes ma'am there is a problem. It's Yug. Yug, Bunty and I went for a walk this morning and while we were returning, we saw Mr. Shekhawat. He took Yug with him."

"What?? Yug is with Mr. Shekhawat...Why did you leave him alone?? You should have accompanied him."

"Ma'am, we told Yug that we are coming with him, but he refused and went alone with Mr. Shekhawat."

"O God! Please keep Yug safe." Saying this, Tara immediately moved towards the reception.


"This room is full of memories from my childhood days. They are making me even more depressed. I should go out. Maybe this morning breeze will help me overcome these memories."

Thinking this, Mrityunjay left his room for a walk.

While returning to the house, he saw Adi, Yug, and Bunty, and called Yug.

It had been two hours and still, Yug had not returned to the hotel. Tara was now ready to file Yug's missing report in a nearby police station.


Yug arrived with Mrityunjay.

Tara on seeing Yug started to shout at him.

"Where were you??"

" Do you have any sense??"

"We all are so worried here for you and there is no sign of you."

"Without my permission how could you leave with a stranger?"

"And you Mr. Shekhawat," she continued, her fear of Mrityunjay vanishing for the moment. "What do you think you are? I don't fear you. Keep your distance from my students."

Hearing all this, Mrityunjay came to Tara and wanted to shout at her but controlled himself and said, "If your scolding is over then listen to me. I know Yug from his childhood and he is like a little brother to me."

He started to walk towards his room but stopped and turned towards Tara, "And one more thing, first listen then speak."

Saying this, he marched towards his room.

Tara realized that she had shouted at Yug without hearing him out. She knew Yug was a responsible student and would never do anything that can cause trouble to others.

She went to Yug and asked softly, "What happened Yug?"

"Ma'am, he is Mrityunjay Singh Shekhawat, grandson of Mr. Dhanraj Singh Shekhawat. My sister Radha was his best friend. And after Radha's death he has become rude. Otherwise he was a lively person who could never hurt anyone."

"I saw him today after seven months and wanted to talk, and so went with him. I should have asked you before going with him. Sorry Ma'am..."


After hearing the sad story about Mrityunjay, she felt sorry for him and regretted her words for Mrityunjay.

"Ok, now you all get ready for the tour."


They all were already late for their tour, so all of them went to their room and got ready for today's tour.


At the reception, they came to know that the guide and vehicle that they had booked for today left with other tourists on the trip as they were late.

All of them became sad hearing this. And were standing there thinking what next? At that very moment, Mrityunjay was going out.

Upon seeing him, Yug exclaimed, "Mrityunjay Bhai." Mrityunjay stopped.

"Ma'am we can ask Mrityunjay Bhai for help. He can arrange this trip."

"Can I ask him, Ma'am??"


Tara saw all the students' faces, they were all looking hopeful.

"Please ma'am...please let him talk to Mr. Shekhawat and arrange for the trip. Please..."

She allowed Yug to talk to Mrityunjay for help.


"Bhai! We were supposed to visit some places today. We had made all the arrangements but as I was late so the guide and the vehicle both went with other tourists. So I am asking for a favour from you. Can you please arrange a vehicle for us??"


"Ok." Mrityunjay called up many people but all vehicles were already booked. He informed Yug about the same. Yug got upset hearing this.


Seeing Yug upset he suggested, "If you and your group don't mind, you can take my car. It has space for 8 persons. Joseph will drive you wherever you want."

Hearing this, all students turned their gaze once again towards Tara for her approval. Seeing the saddened faces of her students and no other way left, she agreed to it.

"Joseph, take them where they want." Saying this, Mrityunjay started to leave for his room.


"Bhai you are not coming?? Please come. It will be great fun." Yug interrupted Mrityunjay's walk.

"Yes Sir, please come as you will be alone here in this hotel, so it's better if you come with us." All the students wanted to show their gratitude towards him for his help.


"What?? Hotel???"

"This is not a hotel. Who told you this is a hotel? I gave you permission to stay here because of humanity, as you did not have a place to stay." Anger was starting to appear on Mrityunjay's face.

"This hotel's manager told us that this hotel was once Shekhawat mansion and you still believe that. We also know that you are mentally unstable." All the students and Tara were staring at brainless Nandini for her bad timing.


"Jab bhi bolegi, sab gadbad karegi," muttered Adi.

"What??? I am mentally unstable??? Rudra Pratap!!! Rudra Pratap!!!"

"Yes, sir..." Rudra Pratap said timidly. He came to know that his lie was caught.

"What have you told them about me?? And what is the truth?? Tell me only the truth." Mrityunjay held Rudra Pratap by his collar.

"Sir...Sir I am sorry sir. As no one from your family was visiting here, so I turned this mansion into a hotel to earn more money. These are college students from Mumbai accompanied by their professor. They have booked rooms in this mansion. So they are here. Please sir, don't do anything to me."

"And ma'am he is Mr. Mrityunjay Singh Shekhawat, owner of this house and a successful businessman." replied Rudra Pratap to Mrityunjay and Tara respectively.


Mrityunjay loosened his grip on Rudra Pratap and said, "Ok I am leaving you this time but next time any such act will not be tolerated and from right now close your hotel business."


"Then where will we go??" Tara asked after hearing Mrityunjay's warning to close the hotel.

"You all can stay here until the end of your trip," Mrityunjay replied, the expression on his face returning to normal.


Tara took a breath of relief as her fear for her students' safety was nullified.

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Edited by Archi21 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#63


Part(b)


"Now we should get a move on your trip around Nainital. Are you not getting late??" asked Mrityunjay to the students.

The students and Tara moved towards the car.
Tara and the girls accommodated themselves in the middle seat, the boys sat at the rear and Mrityunjay sat in the front with Joseph.


"So where are we going??" asked Mrityunjay.

"Lovers Point!" replied Meethi in excitement.

During the whole journey to Lovers Point no one in the car spoke a word. All were sitting mute.

While getting down from the car at Lovers Point, Vasu asked her friends, "Let's introduce ourselves to Mr. Shekhawat. What do you say guys? After all, he is a nice person, and is helping us so much. Without introduction how will we thank him?"
"Ok. Let's go." replied all.
Yug introduced them to Mrityunjay.
"Bhai meet my friends. Adi, Bunty, Meethi, Nandini and Vasu."
"Hello." replied Mrityunjay.
"Can we too call you bhai as Yug does?" asked Vasu slowly to Mrityunjay.
"Well ...you can," winked Mrityunjay.


Tara was watching all this from the other side of the car, "He is too kind."
"And I talked to him so rudely. I should apologize to him for my bad behaviour. He will definitely forgive me," thought Tara, moving towards Mrityunjay.

The students left for sightseeing and Mrityunjay was still standing near the car.

"Mr. Shekhawat," called Tara while coming towards Mrityunjay. "I want to apologize to you for my rude behaviour towards you."

"It's ok Miss..??"

"Oh..My name is Tara Sinha." Tara interrupted Mrityunjay informing him of her name.

"It's Ok Miss. Sinha. It's not your fault. It's human nature to react from what one is told. You were told wrong things about me, so you reacted like that. But you are too kind. After knowing also that I am mentally unstable according to Rudra Pratap you allowed me to stay in the mansion. If someone else would have been in your place they would have thrown me out by now. So, no need to apologize to me. And by the way, call me Mrityunjay." replied Mrityunjay.


After hearing Mrityunjay's statement, Tara felt a great relief from her guilt.
"Are you are not coming?" asked Tara moving towards Lovers Point.

"No. Why see such a stupid place? There is no place in this world called Lovers Point." replied Mrityunjay, resting his back on the car's door.


"Please come. Students and especially Yug will be happy to see you there." requested Tara.
"Sometimes we should do things that our loved ones like."

On hearing Tara's request, Mrityunjay moved along with Tara.

They reached Lovers point.
All the students were enjoying sightseeing, clicking pictures to capture the beauty of Nainital. The sky talking mountains were covered with trees and fog.


"Isn't this place beautiful?" asked Tara to Mrityunjay.
She was mesmerized by the beauty of that place.


"What is beautiful here? That tall mountain? Then I would suggest Suicide Point there, is beautiful, from where people can jump and die, and get rid of all the pains in their life."
Mrityunjay turned his face towards Suicide Point.


"He is so much hurt by the death of his friend."
"Should I go and console him? Or leave him alone in this state?"
"May God help him. But at least I can try to console him." Thinking this, Tara walked towards Mrityunjay.

"Mrityunjay ...Life is to be lived, for those who love us. Every person in this world has some reason to die but they live their lives for the ones who love them." Mrityunjay was looking at Tara while she was explaining to him about life.
"Bhai!! Come here. We want you to be with us." called Vasu.
Mrityunjay and the students were clicking pictures. But Mrityunjay was not smiling in any picture. Then Vasu made him smile by her trick.



Tara was standing some distance away watching the students enjoying when Yug came and dragged her for a photo.


"Ma'am, we want you too in our enjoyment."
Yug handed over the camera to a stranger and requested for a group photo.
Yug, Adi and Bunty sat while Vasu, Mrityunjay, Tara, Meethi and Nandini were standing for the group photo.


After Lovers Point, the group moved to Everest Point. From there in the morning before 8 a.m. the Everest Peak can be seen.

"Oh...we are late."
"Now we can't see Everest. And all this is because of Yug." Nandini was angry at Yug for being late.
"Don't worry Nandu we will come tomorrow and see this," said Yug.


"OK. So now where are we going?" asked Vasu.
"I think Bhai should suggest that." said Meethi.


"Emm...Ok, then I suggest you to visit fresh water spring which is at some distance from here," replied Mrityunjay.

All the students were waiting for Tara's reply.
"Ok, then lets visit that place."
Hearing Tara's approval all the students were happy.


The students enjoyed visiting the fresh water spring.


The sound of flowing water was heard from a distance. The water was clear and cold. The flow of water was so fast that while falling from a high point it seemed as white as milk.

Mrityunjay and Tara both were standing quietly, listening to the sound of falling water. That sound was working as healer for them. Both were feeling better.

It was dusk when they returned to Shekhawat Mansion.


All were tired. They came for dinner only to fill their empty stomach for energy.


"You all should sleep now. As you all are tired and tomorrow to see Everest we need to leave early from here. So you better go and take rest." Mrityunjay suggested.


"Good Night Bhai!" replied the students.
"Good Night Mr. Shekhawat. I mean Mrityunjay." said Tara.
"Good Night Miss. Sinha." Saying this Mrityunjay went to his room.


When Tara entered her room, she got a call from her mother's doctor who informed her about the falling health of her mother.
"Tara your mother's health is falling very fast. I think she is going to live for two to three months only."

Hearing this from the doctor, Tara's world turned upside-down. Yesterday she was expecting a miracle to restore her mother's health and today the Doctor is saying she only has two to three months.
Tara was crying. Her only loved one was going to die. And she is unable to save her. Tara cried her heart out.
After one hour, she wiped her tears and moved to the terrace for some fresh air.


After reaching his room, Mrityunjay was once again surrounded by memories of his past. He went on the terrace to keep a distance from the memories.

He sat in the last corner of the terrace. Tara's words about life were still in his mind.
"You don't know Tara through what phase of life I am going."
Mrityunjay was sitting in the corner when he heard someone coming on the terrace.

Tara too sat on the terrace but she sat in the first corner were the dim moonlight was falling. She was blubbering.
Nainital's cold breeze was consoling Tara. They were giving her crying heart a cool breeze to pacify her.

Mrityunjay noticed her. He wanted to go and ask her the reason for her crying but then thought to let her cry today. She might feel better.

After an hour Tara went to her room.


Mrityunjay was staring at the moon when he heard a song being played on a distant radio.

~Chanda o chanda
Kisne churai teri meri nindiya
Jaage saari raina
Tere mere naina ~

This was the update till today my dear Mumbai. I am hoping that my cool breeze might have pacified your lovelies.
Tomorrow is their last day here. Let's see how much I can heal them.
Yours
Nainital


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Editor: ⭐️Shaina_b⭐️
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Edited by Archi21 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#64
Really really niceee written update archi dear 👏
Really liked your write up archu 😃
Sorry for the late posting of comment I had a test today so was busy in it for preparation 😒

But liked your written update a lot u are very creative n excellent writer 😉 👍🏼
Edited by BloomBelievix - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#65
dil mein mere hain jo kuch kharashein...
Tumhari dard bhi toh mujh se kuch kam toh nehi...
Aj pata chala ... Kismat ki maare aur bhi hain iss duniya mein...
Cchup cchup ke khun ke ansu ronewale akele hum toh nehi ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#66
someone update After long time but wait is worth it...
loved it...
I thought yug would be a negative character ... but he comes out otherwise... Tara fear for tug but when he is back she get relieved...
rp here to on making money business from mj but alas poor chap where ever mj could be his business in hiatus...

finally mj n Tara do some outing together though it was more than a accompanying each other...
waiting for next how two poor soul comes together...

sorry for being late but it just that when I read I comment ... res is an itch seems to me..so
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Posted: 11 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: BloomBelievix

Really really niceee written update archi dear 👏
Really liked your write up archu 😃
Sorry for the late posting of comment I had a test today so was busy in it for preparation 😒

But liked your written update a lot u are very creative n excellent writer 😉 👍🏼



Thanks dear for loving it 😃

n don't be sorry for being late😉

read it in ur leisure time😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: BlueJasmine

dil mein mere hain jo kuch kharashein...
Tumhari dard bhi toh mujh se kuch kam toh nehi...
Aj pata chala ... Kismat ki maare aur bhi hain iss duniya mein...
Cchup cchup ke khun ke ansu ronewale akele hum toh nehi ...


waah...😃
⭐️⭐️⭐️
👏 👏👏
😃😃😃

mere purre update ko char line mein samet diya😃

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Posted: 11 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: -lake-

emotional update...


Thanks dear😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#70

Originally posted by: TasriS

Superb updates...

Well written...


Thanks dear for loving it😃

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