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Introduction

Kripa Sharma's diary

Angad Khanna who is he?- an artist, actor, musician, see that what makes him a world renowned celebrity, he has it all, the looks, the figure, the charm and most of all the female fans, the down side to him, his PERSONALITY!! – Okay so he seems to be arrogant, stuck up, bit short tempered, a flirt but I still adore him, and he's my idol, my favorite and shall always be. Okay so I'll stop drooling over him now. Oh Did I mention his only two years older than me!!!

Kripa Sharma's flop Resume

Name: kripa Sharma

About me: well hmmm, I'm kind of short, brown hair, brown eyes, pretty not to sound conceited, I 'm 19, I live with my best friend anjali, I'm a happy fun go person, live life to the fullest, hmm what else oh and I absolutely ADORE angad Khanna, his such a talented actor/musician/artist/ - I'm sure I'll meet him one day…well if you want to get to know me better than hire!!! I don't bite…lol get it – OH NOT TO FORGET DESPERATELY NEEDS A JOB!!!

Experiences: Hmmm, how about we skip this section!!

Overview of story

What happens when kripa gets to go on a date with her idol? - does he show up, does it work out?

What happens to kripa when anjali gets the job as angad khanna's personal secretary?

What happens when Kripa's jealousy lands her in a job as Angad's maid?

What happens when Angad thinks kripa is a stalker?

What will there be, romance, hatred or worst, jealousy?

Read YoU n Me = OuR LuV-HaTe StOrY - to find out!!!

okay so this is my fourth, just finished desire and anoymous(which didn't go to well coz i'm so bad at writting mystery stories 😆 )this maybe will be my last ff i'll write not sure , it's kind of similar to my desire ff , well tell me if you want me to continue.. posting first part soon😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 1

A tall handsome man is seen standing down the aisle, he's wearing a black suit with a white dress shirt; his brown hair has been gelled into spikes with a few pieces lay on his forehead making his light brown eyes standout. He looks down the aisle to the door, waiting for his bride, when she enters. The audience gasps at the figure seen, looking ever so beautiful in a white strapless dress with diamantes all over. Her hair is up in a gorgeous bun with curls dangling down supported by a diamond tiara attached to a white veil with diamantes. Her lips are glossed with pink dazzling lip gloss, her hazel eyes brightened with thick black eyeliner both over her eye lid and under, topped with long black eyelashes. She walks down the aisle being awed by her husband to be. She reaches her destination, her love. The priest begins, P- Mr. angad Khanna repeat after me
P- I Angad Khanna …….., A- I angad Khanna commit to you today, promise to love you, protect you , be your other half, to share your happiness and sorrow, till death do us apart, P- do you angad Khanna take kripa Sharma to be your lawful wife, A- yes I do, P- Miss Kripa Sharma repeat after me, P- I kripa Sharma……, K- I kripa Sharma commit to you this day forward promise to love and cherish you, to share each other's happiness and pain, to be your soul mate till death do us apart , P- do you kripa Sharma take angad Khanna to be your lawful husband. K- Yes I do, P- till this day forward I now pronounce you husband and wife, you make kiss the bride. Angad and kripa lean closer to kiss when

An- KRIPPPAA WAKE UP YOUR, LATE, where kripa on the other hand begins to kiss her hand, An- kripa what the heck are you doing in your sleep get up, do you want to be fired for the 3rd time at this job, seriously get you butt up and go to work before I drag you. Kripa still didn't move she still was in her dreamland, An- fine I guess you won't get up this way, she walks over to her closet and takes a magazine out, An- I GUESS I'LL RIP THIS PHOTO OF ANGAD, kripa jerks up, K- you wouldn't dare, An- wanna a bet, K- aah anjali your such a blackmailer, An- well it's not really my fault the only way to wake up my best friend is to threaten to rip her idol's photo, K- gosh anjali you know how much I hate that job, An- kripa what's so bad being a waitress, I mean in least you have a job. K- yeah yeah whatever, just wait till I become rich, An- oh really and how is that, K- marrying angad of course, then I'll be throwing money at my stupid bosses face, fatso, An- rolled her eyes, sure kripa sure, now move it. Anjali leaves the room and kripa goes and showers, coming out in her uniform half an hour later, she says bye to anjali and leaves for work. Half an hour, kripa looks at her watch, five minutes left till she's late for the uuh lets just say she's late again. It strikes 9 am, wow she actually made it on time, she runs to the back, wears her cap, and starts her job. B- Wow kripa on time for the first time, what's the good news, K- oh nothing sir I just wanted to impress you, B- oh really, get back to work. K- as you say boss, he turns around when kripa say stupid fatso, B- what did you say, K- no sir I was just noticing wow you look really handsome today, Kripa's boss blushes and walks off leaving a kripa who just rolls her eyes and continues to work. Kripa is busy serving, K- hi may I help you, P- yes I would like a coke please first then I'll decided what to get later, K- sure one coke coming up. kripa goes behind the counter to poor a glass of ice cold coke out, when she hears it, Angad's song being played , kripa jumps up and down and goes into dream land ………she jumps around skipping happily, dancing here and then not notice the weird stares by customers most importantly an angry stare by her boss, but no all kripa could see was her and angad dancing in a field full of yellow sunflowers, where kripa is running in a red sari with Angad following her in a black suit with a matching red dress shirt. while kripa is enjoying her dream, her boss walk up to her trying to make her stop, when SPLASH, kripa looks with shock eyes, the only thought coming to head, "oooohhh oooooo" , crap she had to spill the drink right on top of her boss, B- KRIPPAAA, K- sir I'm soo sorry but look on the positive side it does give you hair a better affect , B- kripa get out now your fired and don't even think to come back, K- plzz sir, B- get out now!!!, kripa just threw her hat on the floor and stumped on it, K- whatever you just lost your self a good waitress and to think I was going to invite you to my wedding, guess not, B- are you leaving or do I need to kick you out, K- no I can see my self out humph and she leaves to her apartment dreading how to tell anjali.

On the other side you are taken into a room filled with posters, photos of one guy, you then see the same guy sleeping shirtless on a bed covered with black silk sheets, his face is buried into the pillow, he tosses and turns not showing his face, TRINGGG!!, he jerks up, it's none other than angad, A- great where's my cell, he looks around the messy room scattered with clothes, finally he finds it, A- hello, hi mishti, what your quitting, why, how am I going to find a new secretary, A- hello? , fine whatever. And he throws his phone. A- damn

okay here was the first part, tell me wether i should continue, and i'll only be able to continue after the 12 of july because of summer hols but i'll try to continue in between with short parts, please reply!!!😃😊

Edited by Chocolate_luver - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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ohh, sounds fab! 😳

Please continue! 😃

*Edit: wow!👏 Part one was just great.😃

Edited by indianhomey1992 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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another fan fic!! wow!! can't wait to read more!!! 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Story sounds really good. You should continue
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Posted: 18 years ago
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one more too good 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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YAY... i am excited, this sounds TOTALLY fab nd the first prt was
AWESUM & hilarious!!! Kripa imaging her & Angad's wedding!!! lmao, then
the fatso comment, lol... dancing in a field of yellow flowers!!! 🤣 Kripa
in a red sari running with Angad after her... 🤣 🤣 cud she get more
filmy??? 🤣 anywazzz... sad tht u wont continue often!!! coz i CANNOT
wait to read the next prt!!! anywazzz... PLEASE try nd continue
soon!!! have fun in ur summer hols...

p.s. Angad sleeping shirtless on a bed covered with black silk sheets...
had a visual... TOTALLY f-ing hot!!! lol... 😍 ☺️
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Posted: 18 years ago
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love the ff

continue soon

kanwer
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Posted: 18 years ago
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stalker??? maid???
wht hv u done to kripa???😆
this is going to b fun
continue sooon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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not bad hey...well I kind alike the concept of her being his maid...I haven't read the part yet...I'm busy now I have to go but will coem back tomorrow....and lol it's kinda weird of me to like her being his maid and all....but after all they'll be the two leads yah....so it's not bad after all to be his maid in her case.... 😊 do continue soon

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