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Posted: 11 years ago
Part 70 & 71 very very painful the braking of maneet n the anger the hurt i am unable to reply after reading it coz of tear i couldnt handle this pain for them pls make evrything okay...😭
Another part coming i dont what will be maans reaction? Maan loves her so much he has seen her as geet fir bhi samaj nahin pa raha hai she loves him to the extend that she can kill herself to keep him happy n protect him from her cursed low life why maan you love her na then why?
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: kawaii_geet


i will updt only after 60 pages😆


after 60 pages😲
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thank you everyone for all the lovely comnts.
i was very very happy to read each and every one of them. thank u all.
and i had already mentioned, this is a grey shaded story... so things are bound to happen in a drastic heartbreaking way.

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Guys please wish out dearest muskan di (muskanp) a very happy bday

@Luvforever: ohh dear... i just couldn't stop myself from replying. thank u so much for having that much trust in me. very few ppl will actually understand the real concept here and you are one of them. u just made me smile and made me want to updt more. thank us oo much

PART 72



"sir please... she...she is going to die. You have to hear me out...please...", she cried.

Maan really panicked seeing sasha in such a state and then about geet..it did make him alert. On a gesture, the room went empty in a second as he walked towards sasha, now tell me.. what is wrong? Where is geet?"

"she...is in the hospital right now sir...she's going to kill the baby..please stop her.."


Geet stopped right in front of the hospital and rushed towards the doctor's chamber, crying her eyes out.

Dr seema was already expecting her as sasha had informed. She smiled but then seeing geet's condition, she really panicked. She looked her worst right now.

"geet...Oh my god, what has happened to you?"

She rushed to help geet who was almost fainting right in front of her. Geet blinked her eyes a couple of times as she felt being supported.

"my baby... my baby doctor...do something...", was all she could manage to utter, feeling nauseous yet not passing out.


Maan was shocked to hear what sasha had narrated him...geet was pregnant? It was their baby??? He didn't know if he should be happy for the baby or be angry at the very fact that she was trying to kill that innocent life.

"sir you have to stop her.. she is losing herself.. she needs you. How much ever she denies, she needs you. Please save her and the baby,, i think we have to take her to the doctor for her TBI..."

He was numb... all he could do was just nod silently and rush out. He drove madly towards the hospital about which sasha had mentioned. Ohh god..she was 6 weeks pregnant and that night, three days ago just didn't let him forget what wrong he had done to her in that state. She was weak..she was pregnant she was unwell...and he just didn't care. Just to satisfy his ego, he went ahead and did all that..and worse, he left her in the morning...just like that!!!

"why do you always make me lose my senses jaan...", he cried, hitting the steering, "please don't go away so far from me that i can't reach you..."

There was traffic and in peak hours it was worse but he could care none. He had to go and stop her from doing whatever she was trying to do. Her confession echoed in his ears all along..she had opened her heart to him that night.. and he had to make her okay now. Yes he was angry at her and still is... but he could just never abandon her, especially when she is so vulnerable right now. He had to make her okay..he knew his jaan too well by now. She denies but the pain she goes through just to speak that much lie was so painful.


He wiped his tears and stopped right in front of the hospital and ran out, praying she didn't do anything stupid. He was about to enter, when he saw her! He just couldn't believe it was her...so devoid of life and so frail. She walked out slowly, like a lost person. He rushed to her and hugged her tightly, catching her off guard.

"am so sorry geet..am sorry..am really very sorry..."

She didn't even react. She was not even surprised and not even happy or sad. She just stood limp, letting him pour out his agony. He broke the hug and cupped her face, "why didn't you tell me about the baby jaan.. you know i can't live without you..."

He was worried when she didn't even react tom anything. She didn't reply but she didn't even speak a word. He shook her, "geet say something... how is the baby? Ohh god jaan..we are going to have a baby..."

He smiled through his tears, "just say something jaan..."


She just looked at him blankly and spat out right on his face, "i killed it.."

Thats it?? That was all she had to say? His smile vanished as he looked at her in disbelief, "wh..what?"

He still couldn't believe what he was hearing. He shook her violently, "ye kya keh rahi ho tum? What did you do with the baby geet?"

She looked straight into his eyes, shocking him further with so much darkness, "you heard it. Theres no baby...now let me go.."

She tried to leave but the next moment she felt herself being pulled and her cheek stung with that slap of his hand.

"do you realize what you are saying geet...how could you?", he screamed at her, gaining the attention of others around, "why...just why??"

She just looked blankly, "i want you to stop pursuing me. I have got nothing to give you now, not even the baby, just let me go.."


He watched her cheek turn a shade deeper in red. Ohh god..he raised his hand on her. He closed his eyes trying to suppress that anger, dejection, pain..what not!

He felt her walk away but this time..he was more determined. He held her hand and pulled her back, earning a glare from her.

"leave m hand maan...", she warned.

"you are going with me now..", he gave his verdict.

"and you think you can force me?", she spat out.

"you will go with me... you have done enough. And i wont let you go until i get to know everything about what bothers you.."

"just f*ck off and leave me alone..", she jerked his hand off and walked out. But he would listen to none. He lost his jaan.. not once but twice now and he lost his baby and hell he won' t let anything take her away now. He held her hand and dragged her towards his car. She commanded him to stop, ordered, screamed and swore on him but he heard none.
he shoved her into the seat and locked her side. He took the steering and drove off. She didn't speak a word to him all the way. She just looked outside the window, not wanting to break down in front of him.


She was surprised to see herself standing right in front of their farmhouse, looking even more beautiful than before. she felt the corner of her eyes burn... she had missed this. Before she could even react, he dragged her inside and made her sit on the couch forcibly and towered dangerously on her.

"you are going to stay with me now! Forever! And if you try to run away from me, i swear geet, i will destroy everything on my way..."

She felt her heart flutter with his words. But she was too much into pain. Her head ached with a sudden pain as she walked towards the bedroom. She stumbled, holding her head and he grabbed her by her waist, "hey..are you alright?"

She could barely understand what he was saying..her head was spinning right now. She moaned in pain, "my..my head hurts..."

Oh god..he quickly carried her to their room and made her lie gently, "wait...i will get the medicines.."


He rushed to the hall and fished the drawers for the tablets. She was indeed very unwell as sasha had told him. Guilt ate him up for that night. He rushed to her with the medicine and cocooned her in his arms. She just gulped down the medicines and closed her eyes, trying to sleep and forget about their baby.

She woke up after like a couple of hours with those soft caress of his fingers on her cheeks. It hurt a bit but that didn't matter anymore. She looked around and realized he had got her to their farm house. She woke up with a start, ready to go away when he held her hand, "where do you think you are going?"


His voice was stern, rough, unlike his touch. She couldn't care anymore. She jerked his hand off and tried to go out. He quickly followed and grabbed her by her waist and pulled her back. She fought back, trying to pry his hands off her, "let me go...", she snapped.

"you think i was joking all this while hmm?", he pulled her back from taking a step further. She wriggled to free herself but he was in no mood to let go. The baby was the last straw. He has to make her understand now.

"you are not going any where jaan..mind you!"

"and who are you to stop me?", she screamed back, hitting him with her tiny fists, "just let go of me. You hate me enough...so let go..."

This time she pushed him away harder. He was enraged. His geet was very stubborn it seemed and he had to be equally stubborn as well or may be more than that. He said nothing. All he did was cup her face and smack his lips right on hers. She was shocked at his audacity. She was trying so hard to make him leave her but he wasn't giving up. She struggled and fought with him to get go. But he pinned her against the wall and pressed his lips harder. She hit him, scratched him but he didn't budge. Angry, she pressed her lips tighter to stop him... no no, she corrected herself, to stop herself from weakening.


He breathed fire not getting her response. He parted a bit and pinned her hands above her head, "kiss me back jaan..."

It was stern...an order yet it held so much love in them. She could see it through her naked eyes. Tears welled up as she blinked a couple of times to get rid of the tears. How could he still love her so much? For god's sake she killed their baby... she just killed something so precious...she couldn't think further. Her throat choked with so much emotions held back.




He parted yet again only to see her trembling with so much emotions. Her eyes had tears. He cupped her cheeks and leaned completely on her, supporting her between him and the wall, his lips mere inches away from hers, "jaan... i won't let you go away from me..ever...", he spoke lovingly.

She couldn't take that guilt anymore. Losing the baby was something that had shaken her to the core and him being so loving even now was more than what she could take. She felt his lips caress hers softly. She couldn't take it. She crushed her own lips with his, breaking that barrier. She cried silently, cursed herself and swore on herself until his kiss made him forget what she was thinking. She didn't stop herself from kissing every bit of him, out of guilt, as if trying to undo the damage as he carried her to the bed.


Nisha was worried that geet wasn't back home. She called sasha and she said she was heading home. What shocked nisha more was sasha coming alone.

"sasha.. where is geet? She isn't well and that girl is just..."

"she is with maan sir chachi..."

Nisha smiled, "with maan? Is he back in india? At least that girl should have told me about it.."

Sasha sighed, "yes...he is and i don't think geet is in a state to even understand anything..."

"what do you mean?"


He gently placed her on the bed, kissing her softly. He trailed his warm tongue down her jawline, her neck... and back to her lips. She hugged him tightly, wishing him to just hide her somewhere so far and so secure that no one could find her..not even the pain she was going through. Like he understood! he kissed her forehead and hugged her tightly, letting her cry silently into the embrace. True he was angry and mad at her for doing something this bad to them but he just couldn't see her losing her senses. More than that, it was him who had wronged her too. He had been so rude to her. But seeing her in a condition just made him realize how much hurt she'd have been seeing his note.


Nisha couldn't believe what sasha told. Her princess was going through so much and she didn't even have a clue. And now,...she just lost the baby? For a moment she was angry at geet for killing that innocent life without any fault of his.. how could she stoop so low? But she knew geet was lonely..she had known her since her birth. She had always been a lonely child. All she ever cared was about her daddy.. and now even she wasn't with her. she felt ashamed..she just couldn't take care of geet it seemed...or may be she never understood that child. She cried holding sasha about the fate of her princess.

"chachi please... don't cry like this. Geet needs maan sir.. we have to cooperate. He is the only one who can make her understand and make her agree to do things. Please.. hold yourself strong for her. she will be fine..."


Sasha felt her own voice a bit trembling. Not that she doubted maan's love but she was more worried about geet's withdrawal. She was the one who had stayed with geet throughout the year post her accident. The doctors had warned her that any stress could do something serious to her. she doubted if her depression and withdrawal was anything because of her accident and had told maan about it. He wanted all her reports to consult with a doctor.


He made her eat something and slept beside her, cocooning her in his arms. She was feeling drowsy with his fingers weaving magic in her hair. She was feeling drowsy after centuries. She had taken pills or drank herself to sleep... but this time, she felt tenderly drowsy. She turned and hugged him tightly. He wrapped his hands around her. there was no exchange of words..no sound made. He caressed her, kissed her and held her tight until she slept off in his embrace. Once she was asleep, he tucked her properly in the spread and walked out talking to sasha about the reports.

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Edited by kawaii_geet - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
By luck I'm first! Awesome update. That's a huge tragedy. Feel horrid for both.
Edited by Ambibamby - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
before i comment on the update... What more twist you have in store.. Please enlighten me...
This update was actually awesome...
The face off that was much required...
i absolutely loved maan here.. he is hurt.. betrayed twice by her and in pain.. and he is hell angry due to the stunt she pulled in with daniel.. but no amount of hurt, ego or anger could take over his love.. nothing mattered to him apart from her in that situation... Is he for real??
and coming to geet.. She did the abortion... 😲 Gosh this woman has not left any stone upturned to ruin her own life... for once.. just once.. cant she listen to people... though she is in such a vulnerable condition and her mind state is also not right, she still doesnt to get rid of the stubborn bitchy self... i agree that she had handled things all alone and feels low of herself due to her past behavior.. but its high time she learns from the mistakes...
though maan himself feels so bad about the slap, but i guess it wa s required to stop her insane behavior.. she is just losing it and would just blow things off if she continues to behave this way..
And the stubborn MSK is what is required at this point.. am glad he is stubborn and not yielding to any of her stunts... its time that he takes the control.. till date, he was always vulnerable with her.. but that has cost him his love.. and moreover she is sinking now.. so am glad he is taking control over things and checking over her medical history..

I cant wait for the next... and woh bhi the twist is eating my head abhi se..
Edited by Shruthe - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Its was so painful

I still dont get... is the baby really no more. Did she lose it owing to the depression or she aborted it..

This update has clearly shown tat Geet is not in her senses.She has lost everything and each passing second is only taking her into darkness where there is no light. She seemed to be all alone but this does not make her right. She was wrong and will remain wrong coz she never thought about Maan.

and Now Maan... wat will he do.. even after knowing tat she killed the baby (if its true) he is not ready to leave her. His love is so pure tat he does not think beyond her anymore. and now the worst Sasha telling him back about her problems. Wat will be the consequences back again coz her state is far more worst then her last time. coz tat time she lost her memory but this time she is losing herself in tat darkness...its like a die situation for her now and Maan he is trying his best but will he be able to save her.

And twist... you said the story has only 10-12 updates more and now again a twist... how come.. hope nothing more then wat they have gone through..
Edited by sdlife19 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
My My!!! what an update and though it was painful it still held some relief because now Maan is determined more than ever. He has seen what Geet is actually going through and now he really wants to know everything and he has said if Geet was stubborn then he has to be more stubborn.
All her life she longed to be loved and sometimes you fear the one thing which you desire the most. The fear of loosing it keeps you away from it. And the same happened with Geet I guess. She distanced herself from Maan because she feared that if she give herself completely he too will leave her like her mother. She feared his love for which she craved the most... And now, the self hatred with guilt is making her do things which she couldnt do in right state of mind... Though she wronged him ALWAYS but his love is stronger to sustain all her harshness and when she realises this fact (well, she already knows, she just needs to overcome her guilt and fear) she would give back that love to him, just like she did when she met him after accident. After accident, the love she showered upon him was so true without any inhibitions of past, and I am sure she would make him the happiest man on this earth.

Its only Geet who can make him happy and its only Maan who can bring her back and make her happy like she was in London... Just waiting for the next twist and I am really not very scared now because Maan, as I said, is determined more than ever before. So, whatever comes their way, they will face it together and that, for now, is enough for me...

And yes, I just loved when he said that he too wronged her. Its very difficult to see your minor faults also when someone has wronged you so much. And yet, he understood how much his note and his indifference had hurt her. Even though she did worse than that yet he realised his mistakes also. This is something that defines his pure love... And this is what would bring her back. She will have to be ok for him and he would make it sure...
Edited by Priyasi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

hi Ash
geet lost the baby ..shocking but i still can't came on terms that baby is no more ..
may be geet saying all this due to depression ..
something highly wrong with her ..

how come a doctor abort the child seeing geet's condition ..
did she had miscarriage due to her poor health condition

maan back to geet ...well his love made him do such thing ..
now he wants to do all good for geet ..
hope so he able to do it ..
feeling bad seeing geet in such condition ..
nisha too came to know abt geet's condition ..

maan holding broken geet now..hope all goes well ..

thanks for the update
waiting for next


twist ..😕
now i can't even want to guess that ..
but still hope geet doesn't lose the child

Edited by tabby999 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago


one more twist
geet going insane forever !!!!!
geet commiting suicide ...



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