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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter 5

Next day

At kundra office

Madhu: good morning mr sultan

Sultan: good morning miss madhubala and plz don't call me mr sultan, just sultan

Madhu: ok but you also call me madhu.

Rk: and what do i call you miss madhubala malik

Madhu: its madhubala for you mr rishabh

Rk: ok then you also call me rk.

Madhu: i think it would be better if i call you rishabh

Sultan: enough of this name game. Madhu dad told you will need a cabin as you are going to work from our office.

Madhu: yes sultan, actually i have to check the internal system of the company so i have to work from here for sometime. Normally this work is done by my articles, but in case of your company i thought to do it on my own.

Sultan: no problem madhu. Come i will show you your cabin.

Rk, sultan and madhu walk to the madhu's cabin.

Sultan: so madhu this is your cabin. And left to your cabin is my cabin and to your right is rishu's cabin. Rishu himself has chose this cabin foor you. he said that you will love to work here.

Madhu knew that Rk has done this so that she will be affected because on the right side of the cabin is a glass instead of wall, which means rk and madhu both can see each other from their cabin.

Rk: madhubala i know that you will love this cabin.

Madhu look at rk's eyes. They both look into each other eyes. For a moment rk thought that he saw pain in madhu eyes. But madhu break the eyelock and said "yes rishabh i love this cabin"

Sultan: madhu it would be great if you have a cup of coffee with me in the lunch time.

Madhu: ok sultan

Sultan: great then meet you in the lunch time. Bye

Madhu: bye

Rk:it would be great na madhubala now we can see each other from our cabin.

Madhu: rishabh, i am only here to work not to watch people. I have to work now so you can leave

Rk starts coming close to madhu. And madhu starts moving backwards but soon she was stuck between the wall and rk. he come close to her. She close her eyes.

Rk:(in her ear) bye madhubala and don't miss me saying this he leave.

Madhu(thinking): madhu his touch did not affect you. she take a long breathe and starts her work.

Madhu was busy in her work and she try not to look on her right. Rishabh was also busy in his work. Soon it was lunch time and sultan comes in madhu cabin.

Sultan: hii madhu, so ready for the cup of coffee

Madhu ( still looking in the file): sultan just give me 10 mins. My work is still incomplete.

Sultan come towards madhu table and while closing the file he said "come on madhu, u don't need to stress yourself. You can work after having a cup of coffee.

Madhu: but sultan...

Sultan: no if no buts holding her hand he take her to door and then suddenly rishabh come.

Rk: so where are you going bro with madhubalaaa

Sultan: we are going to have a cup of coffee. Do you want to come? (pleading from his eyes to say no)

Rk: no you go. Well madhubalaaa i must say u have impress my bro, normally he don't ask ppl for coffee.

Sultan: rishu stop it. Come madhu

Madhu and sultan move towards door and then rk said "she like more milk in her coffee bro". Both madhu and sultan turn shockingly. more than sultan, madhu was shocked. "he still remember it" thought madhu.

Rk(as if he has read her mind): yes madhubala i still remember it.

Madhu: sorry rk but you are wrong i like black coffee.

Rk(with a smirk): lets see if you can drink black coffee

Madhu: lets go sultan. We are getting late.

AT THE COFFEE SHOP

Waiter: what would you like sir?

Sultan: i will have a cold coffee.

Waiter: ok sir and you mam?

Before amdhu can say anything sultan reply " black coffee"

Madhu: what?

Sultan: you said na that you like black coffee

Suddenly madhu remember her words and curse herself for saying thoe words. But now she can't say no. So she agrees.

Waiter: here is your cold coffee sir and mam your black coffee.

Sultan(sipping his coffee): why are you not drinking madhu? You like black coffee then take a sip.

Madhu looks at her coffee and with great difficulty she hold the mug as if it was a mountain and take a sip. The moment she drink coffee she feel like its better to die than to drink this. She made a yuck face and then she hears sultan laughing.

Madhu: why are you laughing?

Sultan: madhu do you really think that i can't see that you don't like black coffee.

Madhu: what?

Sultan: you know what yesterday when i saw u rishu in the meeting. I understand that you both have a habit of proving each other wrong. And then today you said that you like black coffee i understood that you don't like it but just to prove rishu wrong you said that. Infact a girl like you can never like black coffee.

Madhu: what do you mean by a girl like me?

Sultan: a girl who is so sweet can't like bitter things. Don't worry i have already order another coffee with more milk.

Madhu: if there was little milk in the coffee then also it would be ok coz that one will be better than this.

And both starts laughing. While having coffee they talk about each other liking and disliking.

Sultan: i can't believe you can talk so much.

Madhu: infact after a long time i have talked so much. Thank you so much for this coffee.

Sultan: pleasure is mine mam

At night

Madhu room

Madhu: i can't believe rk can have a brother like sultan. He is such a nice person. After a long time i laughed so much.

Rk room

Sultan: bro you are soon going to loose this bet. I mean its the second day of our bet and i have already impress madhu.

Rk(thinking): i have to do something i can't loose this bet coz rk is not a loser.



helo everyone i am back with the update. thank so much for waiting. i just want to finish this sultan part soon so that i can write rishbala moments thats why i show madhu so easily impress by sultan


plz like and comment

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Posted: 11 years ago
#82
Nice part !
And as you said, I also want to read Rishbala... So, I can guess RK is gonna win the bet so that Sultan can take his farewell soon from my side... Lolzzz
Post soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#83
Superb n waiting for more rishbala moments
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Posted: 11 years ago
#84
Nice updatešŸ‘But im cant understand RK.Wats he doing man! Forcibly making his elder brohther who is already married flirt with other woman n make her fall for him jus for his bet
But at the same time cant see him winning d bet.He loves dips but is always behind madhu whom he has already insulted n broken her heart infront of everyone in college.
wanna see RK getting jealous of sultan madhu friendship n really want sultan to win this bet . what i mean is dat both madhu n sultan shud behave [ pretend to be ] like love sick puppies in front of RK so dat RK wud lose d bet .šŸ˜›
continue soon dear.šŸ‘šŸ¼šŸ¤— r ur exama over now?😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#85
nice update
so what if r.k. won the bet
itsšŸ˜†

what if not...
and he loves dips and always behind madhu
what he want😔
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Posted: 11 years ago
#86
nice story
but dont play with madhu feelings
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Posted: 11 years ago
#87
Hope Rishab stops sulthan from hurting Madhu..waiting for Rishbala moments:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#88
Please do not let Madhu fall for Sultan! But even if Madhu only considers Sultan as a friend, she will still be hurt to learn about the bet.

I am not impressed with Sultan. He is a married man and he is playing such a disgusting game. Does he not think what would happen if his wife finds out?? I hope you consider adding that angle into the story. It should not just be RK that has to learn a lesson!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nyc update ...Waiting 4 RK's Future plan...luv the coffe sequence
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: GOODLUCKANGEL

Nice updatešŸ‘But im cant understand RK.Wats he doing man! Forcibly making his elder brohther who is already married flirt with other woman n make her fall for him jus for his bet

But at the same time cant see him winning d bet.He loves dips but is always behind madhu whom he has already insulted n broken her heart infront of everyone in college.
wanna see RK getting jealous of sultan madhu friendship n really want sultan to win this bet . what i mean is dat both madhu n sultan shud behave [ pretend to be ] like love sick puppies in front of RK so dat RK wud lose d bet .šŸ˜›
continue soon dear.šŸ‘šŸ¼šŸ¤— r ur exama over now?😃


RK wants to proof sultan that his charm his over and as rk say that he can never lose thats why he always do something which will affect madhu and then she will not fall fo rsultan and automatically he will win the bet. he just cares about those ppl whom he think important in his life and right now he does not considered madhu important so he doesn't care about her feelings.

yes my exams are over now

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