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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: millee18

dream bigger baby 🤣


no update now
millee18 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
wil u do this with ur twinnie !!!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: millee18

wil u do this with ur twinnie !!!


yes since ur mean to me 😭
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Kays94



yes since ur mean to me 😭

okay me no meanie pakka promise !
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Posted: 11 years ago
Chapter 70

v - "Well that was delicious"
j - "Just like old times" she said smiling to her husband.
v - "What's next now? We did shopping for you, and now I treated you to a beautiful lunch, what do I get now?" 😛
j - "You get your adorable sister whose coming home from the hospital" 😆
v - "Number one she's not adorable. Number two I want a treat from YOU. Do I need to be more specific?"
j - "Viren pay the check and lets go. I have a flight to catch tomorrow"

Viren looked at his watch slyly then at his wife

v - "You have 16 hours before you leave alright"
j - "Mhmm" she said getting up from her seat.

Both of them walked hand in hand to the front paying and then leaving. They got in the car and headed away.

j - "Viren you just took the wrong freeway? Are you dumb?"
v - "Oh yeah... shoot. Oh well" 😆
j - "Oh well? Whats going on in your mind? Do you need another MRI scan?"
v - "Mrs. Jeevika Vadhera my head is fine thanks for your concern. I know another way out so relax"
j - "Relax? Okay I'll try!" 😆
v - "Can you at least put on some decent music?"
j - "Okay okay... let me see what songs I have on my phone"
v - "Probably all romantic, super sad, emotional slow songs" 😆

Jeevika looked at Viren in such a way he was getting scared of his wife.

j - "I don't know if you recall what Veera had said once" 😆
v - "You, Veera, and your guys's stories on me and my emberassing moments... does it ever end?"
j - "No, but let me remind you...when we broke up..."
v - "Yeah yeah when we broke up I was super sad and would just listen to depressing things and this and that"
j - "So glad you could recall the story" 🤣
v - "You know I know a few stories myself?"
j - "Really? Like what? Yur stories are lame?"
v - "Its not lame Jeevika... I have hardcore proof along with my stories" 🤣

Jeevika started getting afraid of what Viren was talking about.

v - "I got pictures of someone in Singapore"
j - "Singapore... wait what?"
v - "Oh you know your graduation trip with your friends"
j - "Viren you didn't -_- "
v - "Oh yesss babes. You think I'm that innocent and tolerant of yours and Veera's blackmails? Now you wait and watch"
j - "How in the world did you get a hold of those pictures?"
v - "When you made that huge mess in your room on our India trip and you were showing me everything I saw a pen drive in some bag, so I secretly took it out and boy was I shocked"
j - "VIREN VADHERA!!!" 😡
v - "Stop getting angry and look out there" he said pointing towards her window.

Jeevika looked out and saw they were driving along Pacific Coast Highway. This was her favorite drive here in California. It reminded her of Carter Road back home, except a cleaner version of it.

j - "This is so refreshing" she said opening her window and staring out.
v - "Boy can I get my wife to calm down" 😆

Viren got a stare from Jeevika, but luckily it didn't last that long. 🤣

j - "I need to find my little sanctuary up north now"
v - "Nothing beats this though"
j - "That's true. I wish I hadn't moved. I miss you, my home, my everything" she said staring at him.
v - "I miss you too, but this is just the beginning. We have so much to look forward to"
j - "You're right" 😊 "So I guess taking the wrong freeway was not by accident?"
v - "Nope it wasn't. You ready for a surprise?"
j - "SURPRISE? My oh my... I'm loving romantic you" she said blushing.
v - "I'm loving it too"
j - "Where we off to now?"
v - "Pelican Hills Resort"
j - "Are you serious? Why?" 😆
v - "Because its our six month anniversary today ❤️"
j - "You remembered?"
v - "You clearly didn't remember 😆"
j - "I did, but I was going to surprise you later today... jeez Viren"
v - "Well I got you first... just shows that I love you more"
j - "Excuse me?"
v - "You know its true. I love you more than you love me"
j - "Absolutely not"
v - "Absolutely yes. Okay now grab your purse, we're here" he said pulling up to the front of the resort.
j - "Viren we have no clothes I hope you realized?"
v - "What about the hundreds of dollars you spent on my card today?"
j - "Oh yeah" 😆 "Wait what about you"
v - "Can you stop worrying, and get out of the car" he pleaded her

Jeevika got out of the car and walked next to Viren holding his hand.

j - "I love spontaneous plans like this"
v - "Me too" he said holding her hand tighter.
j - "I want a honeymoon suite" 😆

Viren looked at Jeevika in such a way she started blushing so hard.

j - "Okay maybe not"
v - "I'll go get the keys, you go check out the place"
j - "I've checked it out many times Viren, its my favorite... you know that"
v - "Just go check it out" he urged her

Jeevika walked around towards the back where the pool was. She loved this place to bits, and was so glad Viren got an idea to come here.

v - "Everything okay?"
j - "Yup, lets go upstairs"
v - "Someone's in a hurry to go upstairs, wouldn't you say?" 😆 🤣
j - "Yeah, me and my husband alone... I mean do you even realize the thoughts going on in my head right now?" she said sarcastically.

Both of them walked inside the elevator and as soon as it shut Viren moved in front of Jeevika.

v - "Why don't you explain to me then whats going on in your head?"
j - "Viren move" she said trying to get her space.
v - "Why" he said coming closer to his wife.

Jeevika looked down shyly but Viren wanted to see directly in her beautiful grey eyes.

v - "I love you"
j - "I love you too" she said looking up at him.

The elevator opened and came a loud obnoxious girl.

veera- "Oh god. Get a room you two!"
j - "VEERA?" she said pushing her husband to the side and going hug Veera.
v - "Wow how nice of you" he said to his wife as he stepped out the elevator.
j - "How are you feeling? And wait why are you guys here"
vr - "Mini family trip 😆 Since I can't really travel much according to my doctors orders... bhai thought why not relax here"
j - " Ughh I just wish I didn't have to leave tomorrow morning"
vr - "Yeah, blame it on bhai. Because of him you had to move 😡"
v - "Where's mom and Virat and Manvi?"
vr - "Mom's in her room and Virat bhaiya is well... he's finding a ring"
j - "Wait a minute"
v - "Is Virat planning on proposing tonight?"
vr - "Yup"
v - Really? Wow I can't believe that"
j - "Oh my god Veera we have a wedding to plan now!"
vr - "I know right!!! I can't wait... We're gonna have a blast"
v - "Girls just plan... us guys have to actually pay for everything... right Armaan?"
a - "Yeah" 😆

Veera just stared at her fianc while Jeevika stared at Viren.

j - "Guys are such a pain... Veera lets go down" she said calling the elevator again
vr - "Yeah let's"
v - "But Jeevika what about the spending time with me in our honeymoon suite... what were you saying in the elevator you wanted to do?" Viren said trying to embarrass her.
vr - 🤣

While Veera and Armaan were laughing, Viren kept staring at his wife. As soon as the elevator came Jeevika tried getting in, but Viren held her wrist pulling her out and carrying her in his arms.

j - "Viren put me down!!!"
v - "Bye Veera, Bye Armaan!" he said indirectly telling them he wanted some alone time with his wife 😆
vr - "Bye... have fun 😆 "

Viren walked towards the room with his wife in his arms...

v - "Don't run away from me" ❤️

He opened their suite and took his wife inside and shut the door behind!


Hope you all enjoyed the 70th chapter!!! This is a huge milestone so thank you to each and every one of my readers ❤️... I feel this has been one of my most popular stories hence that's why we are here on chapter SEVENTYYY! 😃 I don't want to kill the charm of the story and drag it on making it boring and intolerable to read. This story has been mixed with different tracks, happy and sad, and beautiful relationships. If you guys have a certain track in mind please suggest one otherwise I would want to end this story soon. So whoever still tolerates and likes WFL 😆 give me some ideasss!!! I would greatly appreciate it. Take Care and Enjoy ❤️ Do Like and Comment!!!!!! ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

Edited by Kays94 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
so finally we got an update . nd tht too so cute ! Aww ! thts was the only word i had while reading this update . U know na u r just Phenominal like the Best to write stories on Virika . I loved so many cute things u added in this. Honeymoon ...they better have some honeymoon moments ! nd jeevika naughty mind... i loved her fr tht ! Family trip ! okay u all family orinted person . so i can understand ! LOL! But it was seriously awsome... nd as far as ideas r concerned i will tell u whn i will get some !


Finally u completed a big milestone
u completed 70 amazing updates to this story ! isnt tht amazing !
it definately is ... so congrulations md celebration !
HAPPIEST BIRTHDAY EVER TWINNIE ! LOVE U ❤️
Edited by millee18 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
this was so super cute update!😊❤️
virika celebrating their 6th month anniversary
wowiee😊
and the surprise😳
i love how viren teased jeevika😆
jeevika's naughty mind😆😉
and the last one too awesome😉
the elevator part was too good😳
i love to see virika in this romantic mood and veera teasing them!!😆

plz dnt end it soon😒
i love this story so much😊🤗
i dont have any idea though😕
sorry for that but plz dont end it soon😊
keep continuing i would love to read 😊❤️
and this was chapter -70 wow that was too long but every update was new and exciting to me!😊
may u update till 100th chapter😊
actually i want that!!😉
update soon plzz😊

Edited by sweet_aayushi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Res
*Unres*
Finally after ages we got an update
Loved the update..
Awesome👏
Superb virika scene
Viren wanted a gift from her
Aww viren stole her pictures😆
So sweet of virika..
Celebrating their 6 month anniversary❤️
Aww viren wanted to spend tym with jeevika😳
Hope that jeevs also have a surprise for viren
And please don't end it😕
It is the most wonderful story on virika😃
And the track is also going well
it's not at all boring nd nor the charm of the story is killed
Plz keep continuing WFL..🤗

continue soon..
Edited by MyKryan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow that's truly mind blowing
I could not help but smile through out the update
It's amaAazing
I can't even they are so cuuteee
Please do not end it this is my favorite story
U r talented just think of something and am sure we will love it
Probably a twist would be fun
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Posted: 11 years ago
FINALLYYY we have an UPDATE...❤️ and that's also one of the CUTEST, FUNNIEST, and LOVELIEST❤️ .. ENJOYED reading it BABY 🥳THANK YOU👏 ... As Far as SUGGESTIONS for the- STORY are CONCERNED... Your WRITING is WAY ABOVE my IQ Level😉 ... So I'll EXCUSE myself from ANYTHING 😉❤️👍🏼
Edited by Wara082007 - 11 years ago

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