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Posted: 11 years ago


Chapter 12

Chotu brings in the bracelet! Jun has shot Amod dead.. Arjun snatches the bracelet frm Chotu and hastily takes out the jewellery. He looks at the blood stains on it!

Sam-(softly) Rawte!

Jun doesn't listen and just stares at the bracelet..For seconds he can't actually believe that he had lost her..His Baby! The kickass girl,the beauty with brains and the master prankster! He caressed the bracelet..

Her words still rang in his ears.."Bhaiya aapne mujhe yeh aankhein band karke diya na? Ab yeh aankhein bandh hone tak mere saath rahega!"

Tears brimmed in his eyes.."Bhaiya?"

Her sweet voice still rang in his ears.."Love You Bhaiya!"

Her happiness rang in his ears as she received her gift from him on Rakshabandhan!

He can't take it any more now her words rang in his ears like a gong..

"NEHAAA!!!"

Arjun let out a gut wrenching and Heart Shattering Scream!!

"Arjun!"

Sam immidiately ran towards his friend..Arjun slumped down on the floor,tears escaping his eyes,his hands resting on the floor! Sameer tried to calm his friend down but all vain!

O yun na lamha lamha meri yaad mein
Hoke tanha tanha, mere baad mein
Naina ashq na ho
Maana kal se honge hum door
Naina ashq na ho, naina ashq na ho..

Sam - Rawte! Shaant ho jao! Neha theek hogi usse kuch nhi hoga!

Jun - Nahi Sam! Main use bacha nhi paya! Usne khud kaha ki usne Neha ko..

his words trailed off..he couldn't speak more..then after a few seconds he began again..

Main bachpan se usko har rakhi pe vachan deta aaya hunn ki main uski raksha karunga par Main Yeh vachan pura nhi kar paya! Nahi kar paya!

Crying hysterically..Sameer engulfed him in a warm hug!

Jun - sab meri galti he..mujhe use akele ghar jaane ki permission nahi deni chahiye thi.. agar me uske saath hota to aisa kuch nahi hota..me bahot bura hu sam! bahot bura..me kabhi bhi accha nahi ban paaya..na ek accha pati..na accha dost..aur..aur..na accha bhai..

sam - utho arjun! ghar chalo..utho..

jun - ghar..kya muh lekar jau me ghar??me ghar jaakar baccho ko kya jawab dunga..bhabhi se kya kahunga..bolo sam..bolo..

just then sam's phone rang..

~

~Hospital~

at 10 p.m.

Dj - doctor..pls jaldi aaiye..

Doctor comes n looks at the patient..

Doc - pehle police ko inform kijiye..ye ek police case he..police ke aane se pehle me kuch nahi kar sakta..

Dj - pehle aap ilaaj to shuru kijiye doctor sahab..dekhiye na..kitna khoon beh raha he..

Doc - sorry..police ke aane se pehle me kuch nahi kar sakta

Molly - [angrily]aap shayad kuch nahi kar sakte..par me bahot kuch kar sakta hu..agar aapne abhi ilaaj shuru nahi kiya..toh aap kabhi kisika ilaaj nahi kar payenge..aapka licence cancel karwa dunga me..ab jaldi se ilaaj shuru kijiye..police ko inform kar denge hum..jaiye aap..

Doc - aap aise mujhe dhamki nahi de sakte..

Molly - ye dhamki nahi he..me aisa sachme kar sakta hu..ek phone karunga aur..apka ye hospital bandh ho jayega..ab jaldi se ilaaj shuru kijiye..

Doc - [scared]ji..thik he..[to nurse]jaldi se inhe ander le jao aur operation ki taiyaari karo..aap log baaki ki formalities poori kijiye..me abhi ilaaj shuru karta hu..[n goes]

Raj - me formalities poori karke aata hu..

Jaane nahin... denge tujhe
Jaane tujhe... denge nahin

Chahe tujhko rab bulaa le
Hum na rab se darne waale
Raahon mein dat ke khade hain hum
Yaaron se nazrein chura le
Chahe jitna dum lagaa le
Jaane na tujhko aise denge hum

Jaane nahin denge tujhe

Jaane tujhe denge nahin

After two n half hours..

Doc comes out of operation theatre..

Doc - patient ki haalat bahot critical he..abhi kuch bhi kaha nahi jaa sakta..patient ka bahot jyaada khoon beh chuka he..to abhi use 5 bottle blood chadhana padega..jaldi se iska intazaam kijiye..n..make it fast..

Raj - yes doc..[doc goes back to operation theatre]

Sukhi n Dj go to get blood from blood bank..

molly n ashfaq arrive with local police..

insp. - victim ki details..

raj shows an ID card to the inspector..

insp. - ye to ETF ki member he..mujhe pehle ETF ke chief se baat karni padegi..

the inspector calls Sam n Sam pulls up Jun n drags him towards the SUV..n he too gets into suv n drives like a maniac towards the hospital..karan,chotu,shree,riya n aisha follow them in other suv..

~

the ETF team arrives at the hospital..they see Neha's friends there

raj is sitting on the chair..in completely broken state..molly is giving details to police, ashfaq is moving to n fro outside the operation theatre..anjali n simran r praying..

Jaane nahin denge tujhe
Jaane tujhe denge nahin
Do kadam ka yeh safar hai
Umra chhoti si dagar hai
Ek kadam mein ladkhadaya kyoon
Sunn le yaaron ki yeh baatein
Beetengi sab ghum ki raatein
Yaaron se roothi hai kyoon

Jaane nahin... denge tujhe

Jaane tujhe... denge nahin..

Doc comes out of operation theatre..

Ashfaq [immediately] - kya hua doc..wo thik to he na?

Sam,jun n others to reach the doc..

Doc - dekhiye..patient abhi bhi bahot critical he..usse abhi blood chadhana hoga..aapne blood ka intazaam kiya?agar use jaldi blood nahi diya gaya to uski jaan ko khatra ho sakta he..

Jun - mera aur neha ka blood group same he..

Doc - jaldi chaliye..

N the doc takes jun inside a room.. Doc instructed the nurse n went..nurse pierced a syringe into jun's artery..but it didn't pain him..he was just looking at neha from the little window..neha was in the next room..surrounded by different machines..n in deep sleep..

Nurse - koi itni masoom ladki ke saath aisa karne ki soch bhi kaise sakta he..

Jun - kya?

Nurse - jo bhi iss ladki ko maarna chahta tha..bahot hi berehem hoga..koi kasar nahi chodi thi use zinda rakhne ki..pehle drugs diye..phir goli maari..accha hua ki uske dost use samay rehte hospital le aaye..nahi to uska bachna mumkin nahi tha..aur aap jaise donors bhi bahot mushkil se milte he..

Jun was listening silently to the nurse..he was very angry at amod..n he killed him too..but he was too pained to see neha's condition..after donating two bottles blood the doc told arjun that he could not donate more blood..arjun again became angry at doc..but doc is adamant n goes away to check neha..after checkup he comes out

Sam - neha thik to he na doctor??Bataiye..

Doc - she's critcal..but steady..she's not responding.. We've done every possible treatment..we can't do anything now..only a miracle can save her..just pray..

Sam - kya hum use mil sakte he..

Doc - wo abhi tak behosh he..aap dekhna chahe to ek-ek karke jaiye..aur yahan par jyaada log mat rukiye..sirf do log ruk sakte he..

Doc n jun went to the iccu where neha was kept..n to doc's surprize..when jun entered the ward..he saw a change in the readings of the monitors..indicating her response..

Doc - this is amazing..aapke aane se isne react kiya..agar aapko problem na ho to aap yahi rukiye..

Arjun nodded in positive n sat on the chair beside neha..she was responding..but very slowly..jun was caressing her hair..

Outside the ward..doc had asked everyone to go..sam told his team n neha's friends to go..team agreed..but neha's friends didn't..they all wanted to stay back..with great difficulties they agreed to go..but raj didn't..

~

Next morning..

Mitro[dj's mom]came along with neha's other friends..sam n team etf also came to the hospital..robert[dr.vikram]too came to the hospital n he came to know about neha..

Inside iccu..

He went into the iccu for her checkup..she was now reponding to the treatment..n showed much progress..the doc that treated her the previous night came for her checkup too..he was surprized to see vikram there..

Doc - dr.kocchar..aap yahan??

Vik - dr. Rastogi..kya mein ye jaan sakta hu ki itni high dose aur high power ke medications kyu diye jaa rahe he?

Doc - well u see..this is my patient..aap apne patients ko treat kijiye..i'll handle this case..

Vik - [getting angry]jo pucha he uska jawab dijiye..itni high dose ke medications..why??

Doc - kyuki ye zaruri tha..

Vik - aapne iski medical history check ki thi??

Doc - this was an emergency case..mere pass adhi raat ko kisi patient ki medical history janne ka waqt nahi tha..

Vik - oh really..kitne doses de chuke he aap?

Doc - two..aur abhi third dena he..teen ghante ho gaye he..

Vik - no..u r not giving that dose..

Doc - u can't stop me..

Vik - i can..

Doc takes the injection n is going to fill it but he is stopped by vikram[robert]

Vik - meine kaha ye dose mat do..n just get lost! Get out of this hospital..i don't need doctors like u in my hospital..go!

Doc - u'll pay for this dr.vikram kocchar..remember this..

Vik - go..get lost!

The doc moves out of ward angrily..n doesn't stop to answer the questions of those waiting outside the ward..jun was continuously looking from the window what was going on inside..he sensed something wrong..but waited for dr.vikram to come out..

~

Inside iccu..

Robert[vikram]calls the nurse n gives a prescription of medication n tells her to bring it asap..the nurse goes n brings the medicatios immediately..robert gives neha some injections..

After half an hour neha gains consciousness..it was first time she got conscious after the attack..robert saw her gaining consciousness..she opened her eyes slowly..n first saw jun from the window..than looked at robert..who was asking her something

Robert - mona darling! Kaisi ho?

Neha - zinda hu![n smiled]tum delhi se kab aaye?

Robert - abhi kuch do ghante pehle..aur sawaal puchogi usse pehle me bahar sabko batakar aata hu..

He goes out without even listening to her reply

Outside the ward..

Robt - use hosh aa gaya he..ab aap log mil sakte he..

All go inside the ward..neha becomes happy to see mitro..

Neha - are mitro..kaisi he tu?

Mitro - ye lo..kamaal he..jo sawaal menu puchna chayida wo tu puch rahi he..[jo sawaal mujhe puchna chahiye wo tu puch rahi he]

Neha - achha..me thik hu..

Mitro - waheguru di meher he..jo tu thik he..[to god]shukriya rabba..tera lakh-lakh shukriya..

Dj - mitro..rab se pehle raj ko shukriya kaho..usi ne jaan bachayi he..

Neha - are mitro..yahi khade khade rab ka shukriya karogi? Me to acchi-khasi jaa rahi thi..rabji ko unke saamne khade hokar shukriya karne..tere in nalayako ne saare kiye karaye par paani pher diya..[glaring angrily towards raj]

Dj - itni jaldi to tera picha chodne se rahe..aise kaise jaane de?

Neha - ho gaya??Ab niklo bahaar..mujhe aaram karna he! Right doc?

Robt - ur choice!

Neha - it has to be!

Neha's friends went out..raj was yet waiting there

Neha - tumhe special invitation du?oh..haan..agar tumhe lagta he ki ye sab karke tumhe maafi mil jayegi..then u r wrong..itni aasani se maafi nahi milegi..u need to do sumthing more..

Raj looked at her..then moving out..stopped before the door n asked

Raj - shakker kitni chahiye?

Neha - 3:2..bhul gaye ya confirm kar rahe the?

Raj - confirm kar raha tha..kuch aur chahiye?

Neha - thoda zeher..aur baaki ka apni marzi se kuch bhi..

Raj goes out without answering..neha looks at sam n jun n other team members..

Neha - [before sam would ask her]abhi kuch mat puchna..i'm in no mood of answering the questions..i'm well alive in front of u..so chillax..aur mera bracelet dekar jaiye bhaiya..aapke haath me he..n i'm missing it!

Jun gave her bracelet n she smiled happily..forgetting all her pain..

Neha - ab jaiye aur hume aaram karne dijiye..

All come out of the ward..relieved from tension to see her back into her senses..

~ ~ ~

~

Teaser:what will be the thing that Raj will bring for Neha..will she forgive him?..how did she survive? How did her friends save her..n much more in the coming update

neha - kisi tufaan mein itna dam nahi humein hila saken..aadhiyon se kaho aukaat mein rahe!

~

That's it

Now give lamba wala comments for lamba update..me waiting for them

sorry for the bloopers..if any..if u find one..pls do tell

Silent readers..mat sudharna..

~~~

Edited by Godly_Affection - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely An Beautiful Update !!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awwwsssmmm update
Loved it
Beautifully written...
Cont sooon
Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update...
Thank god that Neha is alive...🥳🥳🥳
Teaser are actually mine questions...😳😳😳
Continue soon...Thanks for PM...
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Posted: 11 years ago
hot!
Raj is trying to reach her heart,but poor fellow, he is trying to reach her heart!😉

thanks dr and con soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
awsm n lovely update
love it
waiting 4 next part
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update neha
Finally Neha is alive 😊
Chalo accha hai tumne sabko dara diya tha 😆
That raj poor thing kahah fas gaya 😆
Loved neha antics
Thanks for the Pm
Continue soon 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update di
thank god neha zinda hai
meri toh jaan nikal gyi thi
that arjun saw blood on bracelet
was so emotional
so good update
ab aap itne lambe update karonge
toh hume bhi toh return
gift dena padhe ga
in form of lamba wala comments
res aage aur bhi hai
di aap ko pta hi hai
mein kitna pakkati hu
khane ko nhi insaan ko
aur mein nhi chahati ki mein aapko fry kr du
btw awesome update
superly written
keep pm me further updates
thax for pm
cont soon
Edited by SweetShreu - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awsumm Update Chutki..😃 Mazaa aaya! Roller Coaster Ride It was! 😃 Loved Juno's Outburst! 😉😉 It was beautifully Written! 😉 Love The song though! 😊 Jun bechara toot chuka tha but thank god Sam got a phonecall! Hospital me I knew it was Neha! She was brought in critical..Molly ne kya hadkaya tha Doctor ko! 👏 Mazaa aa gya! Raj bhi tha isme..So you were right! Raj bhi help kar rha tha Neha ki Bechare ko maine faltu me gaaliyan de di..😆😆 Neha is critical! But Jun ki presence se she responded...Kya baat! Mera Juno hai hi rockstar! 😳😳 So Jun ne Ne Neha ko blood diya! Aur phir hui Robert Aka Vikram ki entry! 👍🏼 Kya mast hadkaya Doctor ko? Aise kaise kisi ko kuch bhi de do! 😲 Yayy! Neha is safe! Dhinka Chika! All r happy! Locved the Bonding of Vikram And Neha! 😉 Loved Mitro too! 😆 Yeh Neha bhi na..😆 Loved Neha-Jun! Pagal hai yeh ladki! But luv the bonding which she shares with Everyone! Khupp Chann! ❤️❤️ Thanxx fr pm! Continuee Soonz!
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Posted: 11 years ago
All parts are amazing
Thanks for pm
Sorry for late reply
Continue soon

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