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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update
loved the song
than god neha is ok...
Par vo raj se gussa kyun hai..air kisi ne usse marne ki koshish ki???
So many Questions..
So plz jaldi jaldi update karo
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Posted: 11 years ago
yeh chotu sa update deke lambawala comment ki demand karr rahi ho? not fare!!
I knew it..she can't die so soon..but attack toh hua hain...full story kab bataoge?

Raj & her friends saved her..thank god!!
the duty doc was giving high doses..intentionally ?

Arjun was hell scared...but that wonder girl...attitude main ek vi dent nahi laaga!! Great!!

Do continue...& thanks for PM.
P.S. Sorry..tere chapter ki hisaab se isse lamba nahi khich sakti!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely update & emotional too. .
Phala to bracelet per bood dekhkar dil hi tute gaya🥺
Thank god Naha is Alive 😛
Beautiful written
song was so emotional I did hear that on u tube😭

Sorry for being late 😭😭😭

Thanks for PM
Edited by Black_Angel - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thank God,Neha is fine...
Like her gutsy attitude...
Didnt lik the doc jo pehle Neha ko high dose mein davai deraha thha... Kuch toh jhol hai...
Arjun is relived and happy...
Precap seems interesting...
Continue sooonish...
Thanks for the pm...
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Posted: 11 years ago
it was awesome..
omg neha is in hospital..
how did she get saved..?
love the friends bonding..
plz continue soon
thanks 4 pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update neha..

neha was drugged and shot?😲
arjun blames himself..sad..

the friends brought her to hospital...but where did they find her?

Arjun gave blood...good...

finally neha is fine..what about raj?? whats his mistake? is he in love with ehr?
i am confused..continue soon...thanks for the pm..
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Posted: 11 years ago

Read n replied everyone..

@ radhikerani - thankx dear

@ _Nikita_ - thankx dear

@ SNehajain - thankx dear

@ greensakthi -what is Raj trying..u'll know soon..thankx dear

@ pink1 - thankx dear

@ shreyashi19mld - thankx dear

@ GOLD.A -thankx di .. sabko darane ka maza hi kuch aur hota he

@ SweetShreu -dear tum mujhe pakaogi to mujhe accha lagega..coz me bhi sabko pakati hu..mujhe fry karogi to nxt update kaise milega..thankx a lot dear

@ ShanayaShaleen - thankx for ur lamba comment di..maine kaha tha na..raj ko gaaliya mat do..haan yeh ladki ke thode screws dheele he..kya kare..manufacturing defect he

@ zubiya92 - thankx dear

@ rinku95 -thankx dear

@ halima_zaka - thankx dear

@ misakiscarlet - Neha raj se kyu gussa he..is update me pata chal jayega..Neha ko amod ne maarne ki koshish ki thi..thankx dear

@ Shamsad1607 -ye update chota tha??will try n give long update this tym!..yes he was doing it intentionally..he was jealous of vikram n wanted to show that he could cure patients better than vikram..thankx di..

@ Black_Angel - don't worry for being late dear..glad u likked the song..yupp..its too emotional..thankx dear

@ ...anika... - I too didn't lyk that doc..precap se jyada interesting update hone waali he..thankx di

@ ariyabestfan - kaise bachi..yeh to iss update me pata chal jayega..thankx dear

@ rimi_invisible - where did they find her..will know in this update..n raj is not in love with her..he calls her sister..they share a bro-sis bonding..thankx di

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Posted: 11 years ago


Chapter 13

Inside the ward..Neha n vikram..Mona n Robert

Robt - so! How r u feeling?

Mona - extremely happy!

Robt - pain??

Mona - nahi hota.. Mujhe discharge kab kar rahe ho?

Robt - kyu?? Mera saath accha nahi lagta?

Mona - nahi..aisi baat nahi he..par mujhe yaha aur nahi rehna..

Robt - to ghar jaane ki jaldi he mona darling ko?

Mona -nahi..mujhe ghar nahi jaana..

Robt - tumhe do ghante aur yaha rehna padega..then u may go..

Mona - ok..that's good!

Raj came after 10 minutes..with a mug..n went inside the ward

Raj - yeh lo behna..ur favourite drink..

Neha - [takes the mug n smells it]umm..this is what I call the Raj special coffee![gives a big smile..n drinks it] tum itni acchi coffee kaise banate ho Raj? Its wonderful !

Raj - so..

Neha - so??

Raj - ab to maafi milegi na?

Neha - wo to kab ki mil chuki he..par ek baat humesha yaad rakhna..uss baat ka zikr kabhi nahi hona chahiye..kabhi bhi nahi..

Raj - thik he..waise mera iraada tumhe hurt karne ka bilkool bhi nahi tha..

Neha - me tumhari wajah se hurt nahi huyi thi..n u know well why was I hurt..

Raj - hmm..shayad pata he..

Neha - par tumhe kya zarurat thi mujhe bachane ki?

Raj - zarurat??Tumhe bachana meri zarurat nahi..mera farz tha..rakhi ke har dhaage ke waade ka karz tha..kaise nahi bachata?

Neha - dialogue accha tha par phir bhi nahi bachana chahiye tha mujhe..

Raj - oh..

Neha -[annoyed] tum dono[raj n robert] ne mujhe bachane ka theka lekar rakha he kya?All thankx for saving my life to u both! Itna accha mouka mil raha tha..marne ka..why the hell did u step in? The letter R has always been a tyranny in my life..pehle Robert..phir Raj..why didn't u let me die?Why??

Both r silent..but visibly angry..

Neha - tell me why God damn it!! Mein agar marr jaati to kitna accha hota..it would have been so good..ah..not good but best..par nahi..na chain se jeene dete ho aur na chain se marne dete ho..itna achha mouka mila tha..tumhari wajah se wo bhi haath se chala gaya..its all because of u RAJ!!

Raj - oh really?

Neha - YES!!

Raj lost his temper..n went out furiously!

Robt - yeh sab kya keh rahi thi Mona?Tumne to dara hi diya tha..waise jo bhi aaj kaha he..phir kabhi mat kehna..this is my last warning..or else..

Mona - u won't talk to me..right??

Robt - ya..right..ab me tumhare discharge papers ready karwata hu..wait for 2 hours

Mona - no ..not 2..1 hr 45 minutes..

Robt - ok..so what u wanna do in these 1 hr 45 minits?

Mona - i'll watch hockey match..the world cup is going on..

Robt - ok..

He goes out n talks with samJun

Robt - aap Neha ko do ghante baad ghar le jaa sakte he..she's out of danger now..just needs rest..for 2 days complete rest..medicines time pe dijiyega..

Sam - ok..thankx..

Robt - don't thank me!

n he leaves..Sam, Jun n other etfians go inside to meet Neha..she's busy watching the hockey match..

Neha - [sees them all] aap sabhi ab mere saath match dekhne aaye ho kya?

Sam - nahi..ab tum bataogi ki ye sab kaise hua?

Neha - well..haan..kal sham ko hum ghar jaane ke liye nikle the..abhi aadhe raste hi pahuche the ki mujhe kisi ka call aaya tha..he said..i don't remember what he said..when I reached that place..it was deserted..it was the place where we all meet..usually..so I thought it might be a prank.then I called them all but it was not taken..then I saw a golawala..it was so boring so I thought of eating the Gola..n then suddely I started feeling dizzy..someone came n shot me.. I could not see the face..due to the drugs I think.. I could not resist it n fell unconscious..then I don't know anything more than this! Kuch aur puchna he ya phir me meri match resume karu?

Sam - itna kaafi he..aur ab tum ghar jaakar pura rest karogi..for 2 days!

Neha - what?? 2 din?? Me bilkool thik hu..do ghante aaram karne ko kaha tha..wo ab pure bhi hone waale he..waise bhi 2 days house arrest..mujhse nahi hoga..me to kal se hi ETF aungi..n that's final..

Jun - tumhari do din ki chutti sanction ho chuki he..n u r staying home!

Neha - I'm not..

Neha's cell rings..looks..it was from Rahul..she silences the ring n then to Arjun

Neha - aapne dada ko bata dia?

Jun - of course!

Neha - why the..be it..par ab mujhe daant nahi sunni..so just tell him I'm sleeping

Jun - u want me to lie?

Neha - yes!

Jun - [takes the call] baad me call karna..[n cuts before listening to the other side]

Neha - hmm..that's like a good bro! But actually u r not good!

All look at her surprizedly..

Neha - abhi khatam nahi kiya..u r not good coz u r the Best! [n gave her big smile]

Jun gave her a smile too..then again Neha's phone rang..this time it was her dad..Neha looked at the cell..annoyed..then picks at the next ring

Neha - hello! Papa!

Dad - hello princess!! Kaisi ho?

Neha - super fine! Kisi tufaan mein itna dam nahi humein hila saken..aandhiyon se kaho aukaat mein rahe!

Dad - hmm..that's nice..to kya kar rahi ho?

Neha - me to apne papa se baat kar rahi hu..aur aap?

Dad - what a coincidence..me bhi apni beti se hi baat kar raha hu..

Neha - dad!!

Dad - princess!!

Neha - ok..so why did u call?

Dad - kyu? Call karna manaa he?

Neha - nahi..but its not in the deal!

Dad - deal? Kounsi deal?

Neha - how can u forget the deal dad?

Dad - oh..that deal..but according to it..

Neha - ok..forget it!

Dad - r u serious?

Neha - no..i'm Neha! Dad! I told u to forget the deal..n not my name!

Dad - accha..teri maa aa rahi he..baat kar..

Neha - sorry dad..i need to go..bye! [n cuts the call]

Riya - tumne apne papa se jhooth kyu bola?

Neha - well actually..i didn't want an interrogation session..n a lecture too..so!

Aisha - what's the deal about?

Neha - actually..its just a joke..there's nothing such really!! Bhaiya..aapka kya plan tha?? Aapko pata he..agar iss sab[the attempt of killing] ke baare me papa ko pata chal jaata to mere discharge se pehle departure ke papers aa jaate..

Jun - don't worry..tumhari deal he na ki tum apni marzi se hi jaogi..so then..

Neha - why do u underestimate the power of our dads??

Jun - I don't but..I know ur power..

Neha - power..aah..that reminds me of the joke..with great power comes huge electricity bill!!

Sam - baaki ke jokes ghar par sunana..ab do din ghar pe rehkar yahi timepass karna..

Neha - [with sad face] do din..

Robt came back to see the medicines

Neha - [to robt] tumne ye kya kaha he?? Why r u doing this?

Robt - kya?

Neha - me do din ghar pe nahi rahungi..

Robt - oh..wo..well I can't do anything now..tumne kaha mujhe hospital me nahi rehna..isliye tumhe ghar bhej raha hu..ab tumhe waha bhi nahi rehna to kahan jaogi? to hell?

neha - to hell?? not a bad idea..but only if u accompany me..

robt - not interested! now u'll be staying home n resting for two days..n don't u try to deny me..waise bhi high command ab to yahi he..so I'm at a stronger side

Neha - why the hell am I alive?

Robt - b'coz Raj saved u..

Neha - really??!![looks with questioning eyes..robt is going to say something but Nhea continues before he could say] tumse to behes karna hi bekaar he..

Robt - oh..so u admit that u lost?

Neha - nopes..the war hasn't ended yet..

Robt - my goodness! U n ur never ending wars..shashtang pranam deviji!

Neha -[dramtically] kalyan ho wats..

Robt - hey bhagwan!!

Neha - ab kyu bhagwan ko pareshan kar rahe ho?

Robt - enough..[nurse came with the discharge papers] tumhare discharge papers aa gaye..ab jao..aur wapas mat aana..

Neha - itni jaldi pareshan ho gaye? Tumhari hi galati he..

Robt - pls go..mujhe aur bhi patients ko treat karna he..bye..

Neha - see u soon!

Sam n other team members go to ETF office n Jun goes with Neha to drop her home..

In suv..[Neha n Jun]

Neha - bhaiya..mujhe ghar nahi jaana..

Jun - kyu?

Neha - aise hi..mujhe Aryan bhau ke paas jaana he..aap mujhe wahan le jayenge?

Jun - pakka wahan jaana chahti ho?

Neha - haan bhaiya..pls..le jaiye na..pls..

Jun - thik he..

Jun drives towards other end of the city..after a drive of half an hour they reach the flats..

They go to the fourth floor..the flat had the nameplate..it read "Naintara Aryan Rawte"

[Aryan's first wife who was killed by Anna n Aryan died while killing him in a blast]

.. Jun opens the flat with master key..they both go inside..the place was covered with dust all over..Neha took a cloth n wiped a frame that was on the wall..a small happy family..mother,father n a cute daughter..Neha n Jun looked at the pic..all the memories coming to their mind..Jun moved towards the window..while Neha stood in front of pic..lit the diya

~fb~

~some 8 years back~

Neha gets into house..only to find it deranged..everything was lying haphazardly..

Neha - vahini ! Vahinisaheb!! Bhau??Kuthe gele sagle?[kahan gaye sab?]

No reply..she searched the house..only to find it empty..

Neha - [to herself] he sagla kaay aahe? Kuni kela asel? [ye sab kya he? Kisne kiya hoga]

She called their no..but only to find them all ringing in the hall

She was on the verge of crying when she found something moving..she got afraid n asked

Neha - k..k..koun aahe? Koun aahe tithe? [koun he? Koun he wahan?]

She moved towards the curtain slowly..pushed it aside..but found no one there..Neha went n sat on sofa..almost going to cry..she had called their names about ten times..but no reply

Other side..

Aryan - Jun..bagh..ti radli na..tar mi tula sodnar naahi..khup maarel [Jun..dekh..wo royi na to me tujhe chodunga nahi..bahot maarunga]

Jun - bhau..ssh..thoda vel..itka changla plan aahe..bas..[thodi der..itna accha plan he]

Neha again called out - bhau!! Vahini!! But no answer..n Neha started crying..

Aryan saw her crying n ran outside from the hideout..n stopped her from crying

Aryan - ssh..sonuma..chup hun jaa..bagh..mi thik aahe[chup ho jao..dekho me thik hu]

Neha looked at Aryan n hugged him tight..n saying between sobs

Neha - t.tumhi..thik aahat..va..vahini kuthe..aahe? [aap thik he..vahini kahan he]

Aryan - ti bajaarat geli aahe[wo bazaar me gayi he]

Just then Jun n Rahul sprinted out of their hiding..

Jun - yay!! Baghitla..me bet jinklo..[dekha..me bet jeet gaya]

Aryan - arjunaa..he thik nahi ye..chal sorry mhan..[ye thik nahi he..chalo..sorry bolo]

Jun - bhau! mi nahi mhannar [me nahi bolunga]

Aryan - asa vhay??Baghtoch mi kasa sorry nahi mhanat..[aisa kya?Dekhta hu me..kaise sorry nahi bolte]

N he ran behind him..throwing pillows..the house became complete mess..n then Naintara came n saw them all running behind each other n throwing pillows..

Naintara[vahini] - devaa! he kaay aahe? Majhya gharala kay kela?[ye kya he?Mere ghar ko kya kiya?]

All looked down..Naintara got that this must be Jun's idea..

Vahini - bhausaheb[arjun] he kaay aahe? [ye kya he?]

Jun - vahini..te..te..[wo..wo..]

Vah - mala 15 minit madhe ghar pahile sarkha swachha pahije..nahitar jevan nahi bhetnar [mujhe 15 minit me ghar pehle jaisa saaf chahiye..nahi to khana nahi milega]

All nod loke obedient kids..n Naintara moves towards kitchen

Aryan - arjuna..Rahul..saaf kara he sagla..sonuma..chal..aapan videogame khelu..[ye sab saaf karo..sonuma..chalo..hum videogame khelte he]

Neha - ho..chala.. [haan..chaliye]

Vahini - kaay saheb? Kuthe challaat? He sagla swachha ekte bhausaheb ani raosaheb[Rahul] karnar kaay? Tumhi doghani pan madad karaycha aahe..[kya saheb? Kahan chale? Ye sab safayi arjun aur Rahul akele karenge kya?Aap dono ko bhi madad karni he]

Jun n Rahul hi-fied each other.. n Aryan glared at them..in 15 minits everything was cleaned n settled properly..Naintara laid down the food..Jun again thought of a prank..he went to the kitchen n brought a big lunchbox..n hid it..Naintara was making fresh puran poli n serving them hot..Jun was just giving everyone only half n putting the rest into the luchbox..ordering Naintara to make more n quickly..Naintara was surprized as these four didn't eat more than two..n they were asking for the fifth time but she didn't say anything..after the sixth time..she was completely exhausted..making puran poli is not an easy task!

Jun - bas vahinisaheb! Pot bharla [pet bhar gaya]

Vahini - kharach?Aanki naahi khanar?[sach? Aur nahi khayenge?]

Neha - vahini..bhaiya cha pot naahi..dabba bharla [bhaiya ka pet nahi..dabba bhar gaya]

n all laughed heartily..niharika understood that it was Jun's prank n she twisted his ears..

Jun - aah!! Vahini!! Majha kaan! [mera kaan!]

Vahini - ani majhe haath! [aur mere haath]

Jun - sorry!

Vahini - thik aahe..pan guitar war kaahi eikavlya shivay jau denaar naahi! [par guitar pe kuch sunaye bina jaane nahi dungi]

Jun - thik aahe! Pan tumhi ane bhau ni dance karaycha![thik he..par aap aur bhai ko dance karna padega]

Naintara blushed deeply n Aryan looked at her!

Neha n Rahul - bhau..pls..vahini..pls..dance!!

Jun brought his guitar n started playing the tune..Neha n Rahul pushed Aryan n Niharika to dance..n Neha accompanied Jun in the song..they had a very happy time together!!

~

She then remembers the horrific scene..when she saw Niharika n naina [Aryan n niharika's daughter] killed in the house..n also when she heard in news about Aryan's death in blast..

~fb~

Neha was trying her best not to shed tears..n she knew that if she would stand there for more..she would not be able to control her tears..she took a deep breathe n then asked

Neha - bhaiya..ghar chale?

Jun's trance was also broken by her voice..

Jun - chalo..

The drive to Rawte mansion was a silent one..Jun dropped her home..told Shyna to take care of her n went back to ETF office..

~Rawte Mansion~

Neha - bhabhi..me apne kamre me aaram kar rahi hu..pls don't disturb me..

Shy - thik he..kuch chahiye to bata dena..

Neha nodded slightly n went to her room

Shy - [to herself] dusro ko disturb karne se mana kar rahi ho..par khud itni jyaada disturbed ho..tum aisa kyu karti ho Neha??

Neha went to her room..locked it from inside..opened the cupboard n took out a small frame n a pillow..then slept on the bed..holding frame having pic of Aryan n pillow.. crying her heart out..she was missing Aryan a lot..

~

ETF interrogation room

Sam n aisha r interrogating Dj n other friends..Jun also joins them

Sam - tumhe Neha kahan aur kaise mili?

DJ - sir..hum logo ka ek fixed spot he..hum sab humesha wahaan par milte he..kal raat ko bhi wahi milne ka plan tha..hum sab movie dekhne ke baad wahan pahuche..kuch paune dus [9:45] baje..wahaan gaye to dekha ki Neha behosh thi..she was shot..bahot khoon bhi beh raha tha..

Molly - humne bina time waste kiye use sidha hospital le gaye..

Aisha - tum logo ne call karke hume inform kyu nahi kiya?

Molly - uss waqt ye sab dimaag me hi nahi aaya..ek to wo doctor..jaldi treatment shuru karne ke liye taiyaar hi nahi ho raha tha..upar se itni raat ho gayi thi ki koi aur hospital m nahi le jaa sakte the..Neha ki halat bahot critical thi..so call karke inform nahi kar paaye..we r sorry for that..

Sam - ok..thank u..u may go now..

Molly - thankx..

They all leave..

~

ETF conference room

Sam - abhi koi case nahi he..but u all have a lot of paper work..jaldi se use khatam karo

All started their paperworks..they could hardly talk..as Sam n Jun were sitting there..

~ ~ ~

That's it😉

hope everything about attack on Neha is clear..any doubts..feel free to ask me😃

Now give lamba wala reviews n comments..me waiting for them..😃

Silent readers😡😡..mat sudharna..

~~~

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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow
Awesome update
Love it
Cont soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update...
Why Neha don't want to live???😕😕😕...It was only joke or something else...
Raj is very angry on Neha...
Neha in house for 2 days...😲😲😲 😆😆😆
Liked Dad-Neha convo...😃😃😃
Neha's joke were 😆😆😆
FB was very funny & emotional...
Neha is very disturbed...😆😆😆
All doing paperworks...😆😆😆
Continue soon...Thanks for PM...

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