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kunchu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#231

oops sorry

wrong post😕

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Areesha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#232

Awesome
blossome
dhanso and
dhamakedar update
plz plz continue soon

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yas23

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Posted: 12 years ago

#233

Awesome update
Naina and Zaid conversation with Roshni was great...every step taken by Roshni was amazing
Hospital scene was superb...Shaleen remembering Shaina
so Karan is to mail the letter is to Shaina...whats in the envelope
the final mission..wonder what it is
waiting for the next
thanka for the pm
continue soon

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Farheen Shaikh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#234

Wat r u upto kk🤔

How can Roshni be so sure that there won't b any more crime ???

Again Shukriya Shukriya Shukriya!!! Kyu?Arre finally tumne naam to bata diya of whoz the photo girl

Laga to tha that she's none but Shaina but I don't trust u.,u know that right😆😎

P.S:I know I know mixed feelings after reading the update😆😆

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sashashyam

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Posted: 12 years ago

#235

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Haleemah

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Posted: 12 years ago

#236

Awesome update

First thing very sorry that I'm reading this late n commenting late but had a lot going on so couldn't read it

Shaleen sudden tranformation to Arjun was so scary

Poor Roshni is scarred

Wonder what will happen

Update soon

Can't wait

Thanks 4 pm

😊

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kunchu

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Snehajain

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Posted: 12 years ago

#238

unres...me first...🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳

Awesome update...

Don't Why but last part of update gave me ghoose bumps...

Roshni is hel scared...& so m I...🤢🤢🤢

Glad that Aisha was there to support her...😃😃😃

Hope Sha don't suffer bcoz of Arjun...😭😭😭

Sam's convo with Masa was bit emotional...😭😭😭

Masa did notice something strange about Sha...

Walk of Sha-Roshni was nice...😃😃😃

Sha is quite relaxed after meeting with Sha...😃😃😃

Zaid came there & asked about last night...

Last was 🤢🤢🤢

Continue soon...Thanks for PM...

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-Carrie-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#239

Ahaan!😃 Within minutes of requesting an update👏

BRB

Edit:

Oh!Sweet Lord! This Zaid has stuck on Shaleen like that Vetaal stuck himself on King Vikram And he has trapped Roshni into leading him to Shaleen & ultimately Arjun.😲

Shocked at Masa's reaction to Sam's hard to believe tale. But then she is a mother who keeps a keen eye on her kids at all times. She would have noticed Shaleen's strange mannerisms and the reactions to extreme stress. She is one sharp bird and nothing escapes her eyes.

The soft moments between Shaleen & Roshni were so warm. The way SHaleen was reaching out to Rosh and the way she was caught between wanting fight demons on his behalf and pushing him away afraid of doing something that would harm him was very superbly portrayed.👍🏼

Beautifully woven. I fealt very uneasy and restless by the end of it. Thats a mark of a good writer. Take the readers on a roller coaster ride👏

Waiting for the next one!

Edited by -Carrie- - 12 years ago