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Posted: 11 years ago
Yey party time new one thanks much:))))))))
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Posted: 11 years ago
Super Interesting concept.
As here Maan is not an angry, sadoo n dusht danav is enough to make me love him already cause m really tired reading an arrogant, full of himself types Maan now! So this is gonna be super fun to read! And Geet's character is hatke too, for a change she is short tempered here n foodie with diet conscious? Now thats a deadly combo and i m so looking forward to her dialogues as u mentioned in her character sketch she is witty, intelligent n what not! Her interactions with Maan are going to be super awesome n m already excited! Loved the last update n how Maan's charm was making all ladies go all dreamy! And the danger which is lurking around Maan n how Geet will keep him save is something m looking forward too! Waiting for the update!



-Sanjana!
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Posted: 11 years ago
or kitni waiting karing😆😆😆 for updating
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Posted: 11 years ago



HAPPY BDAY aishu (drashtirocks1)
Many Many Happy returns of the day.🤗
guys pls wish her a very happy bday

CHAPTER 2 - FEMME TO THE RESCUE



He sat in the hospital while the doctor bandaged his arms. Rajeev came rushing to him and enquired about the security lapse with his men. He was furious realizing they had no idea that one of them could do like this. He roared in anger and marched straight to maan, " say 24/7 is too much again and i will shoot you myself. your time's up. I am appointing someone asap and you have no say in this!"

He shrugged feeling lost... he was perhaps indeed in danger. And this was no joke. His old man was really mad and he just let him do whatever he wanted.

The moment he was out from the hospital, that was only till the morning, Rajeev caught hold of him and rode him back to his mansion, on the pretext of some important discussion! He knew the old man was mad at him and he just didn't say much. He put on his glasses and whistled some music.

The old family butler welcomed them and went to get their coffee. Rajeev sat on the couch, "so.. the post of your secretary..is it still open?"

Maan rolled his eyes and played with the tv remote not actually turning it on, "hmm..yeah i guess.."

"good then.. keep it open. I think i got the right person for that.."

"since when did you become my PA old man?"

And the next moment he felt Rajeev smack his head, "shut up you fool... i was talking about the security.."

"hmm but i think Miss Iyer was willing to take up the job..."

"No..keep it vacant and yes make room for the person in this mansion as well... "

"whatever...", he walked back to his room. Rajeev was being too much..arrghh chuck it!

"where are you going young man?"

"you don't sleep but i do old man.. now stop vulturing my life and get your ass outta here.."

He closed the door of his room and went to sleep. He was tired and slept off immediately.


Rajeev went back to his office and called the person who was supposed to take up the job and quickly made arrangements.

"...he is a little eccentric, does whatever he wants and sometimes can be irritating. I hope you will be able to keep up... he is a good person by heart though. Oh and i forgot to mention, he is flirty. Be careful."

She arched her brows with the description she got, "eh..excuse me sir, but what is his name again?"

"Maan Singh Khurana... you must be knowing him...signed ammunition deal.."

"yeah..got it sir. Don't worry I will make sure he isn't in danger.."

"i trust you Miss Handa...Tomorrow at 10 then.."

"Yes Sir!"


Geet disconnected the phone and threw it on the table and sighed, "time for work chris.."

Christine grabbed a coke can from the fridge and fell on the couch, "so..your holidays cut short?"

She made a baby face and literally fell on chris with a baby face, "why...why me? And Rajeev sir says he is flirty, eccentric and hears no one..."

"whats his name?", chris enquired enjoying her coke.

"some Maan Khurana.. ammunition deal...crap.."

Chris choked her coke, "Maan Singh Khurana? Are you sure its him?"

Geet rolled on chris' lap, upset about her holidays getting cancelled, "why are you so shocked?"

"OH MY F*CKING GOD..Maan Khurana.. you are gonna work of That hottie?"


Geet got up and eyes her bestie angrily, "stop drooling and tell me whats so good about that guy!"

"geet...do you realise he is the "ladies' man" out there..every girl is desperate to just be near him and you are gonna break everyone's hearts..."

Geet smacked her shoulder, "stop over reacting.. he is not a god alright... he..damn that man got my holidays cancelled.. i hate him.."

"check your words darling... you are so gonna love him once you meet.."


Geet threw a pillow at chris.. she was never into guys..or was she? Anyways, she was really pissed off with her cancelled holiday and all because of that prick. But work is work. She has got like 2 months for this. She went to her room, stuffed her luggage and opened her drawer and her lips curled into a smile. Her 9mm Berretta 92fs lay in there, shinning in all her glory. It was time to work. She picked it up, reloaded the magazine with the bullets and mantled it into her revolver, "alright..time to work. And first thing, i will shoot that scumbag for ruining my holiday..."

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Maan sat in his cabin, waiting for Rajeev and his security. Damn..once this oldie goes off, he had planned to just breech his own security and have some fun. Its been long he had been out with friends and this security and the deal had just taken away his life it felt. He felt irritated.

"hey Mr..stop dreaming and i finally found you one person best for your security..."

"cut the crap and get him in.."

Rajeev took a seat in front of him, "at least you could greet me maan.."

"yeah whatever uncle... just finish your work and go away. I have got an important meeting in an hour.."

Rajeev grinned, "and my job his over buddy. You are all hers..."

"yeah...yeah just fini...WHAATTT????", he literally jumped off his seat, "what did you just say ...her??"

Rajeev smiled and pointed at the door, shocking him to hell.


She came in with the tic toc of her black heeled boots. Not women..he muttered under his breath. He dared look up at her..she wore tight fit jeans with an off white shirt, tucked neatly, her hair was tied in a pony and she had put on her sunglasses. She walked in with style, almost knocking the breath out of him. She had that perfect figure that could make any man swoon. She stood right in front of him and extended her hand, taking off her glasses, "Agent Geet Handa Sir!"

She stood straight, her head held high and those beautiful eyes..ohh my, he was sure he'd lose himself in her. She was so damn beautiful. He went speechless for a moment... she was gorgeous!!


Rajeev coughed to get his attention, "ahem! Maan..this is Geet handa and I am telling you boy, she is the best! From today onwards, she will fill in for your secretary, will stay with you in the mansion and yes be with you 24/7."

He stopped seeing maan walk towards geet with a smile on his lips. He took her hand and placed a gentlemanly kiss on the back of her palm, shocking her.

Damn this woman! She was so soft and his uncle was appointing her as his bodyguard? Had he lost his mind?


"Its a pleasure to meet you Mademoiselle...you are indeed as beautiful as your name!"

Geet arched her brows on him...like seriously?? Is this guy nuts? He straightened himself and she saw his broad tall figure. He was really well built. His eyes held mischief and his gestures were soft and immaculate.

"if you could just excuse us for a minute...", he gently led her towards the couch and made her sit, "we have something to talk about.."

Geet was really not liking this guy.. freak he seemed to her..extra sweet! Damn!


Maan quickly went to his desk and glared at him uncle, "You want "her" to be my bodyguard.. you old scumbag..."

He tried to hush his voice but his frustration was visible!! Rajeev retorted back, "whats wrong with her? She is the best maan.."

"damn you old man! She is a woman..i can't let her be my guard... what were you thinking?"

Rajeev rolled his eyes, "whats wrong with her being a woman.. she is capable enough. So zip it boy..."

"no you zip it... women..they shouldn't be given such risky jobs uncle. It could harm their lives.. how can you.. i can't accept this.."

"maan..i know you respect women a lot but this is the best for you.."

"no! Its against my principles. I can't let her..a 'beautiful' her to risk her life for me.. "

"maan stop it. You aren't supposed to interfere in security matters.. you have no choice. I must leave. Goodbye. Help Miss Handa to accommodate."

"Do you think she will be able to handle such a risk?", he groaned frustrated.


Oops..he had been too loud perhaps! Geet fumed hearing this. What the hell does he think of himself! Moron! She stood up fuming, "I heard that Mr Khurana.. and i highly disagree with you sir! I never thought you could be such a chauvinist..."

Ohh dear! She was taking him all wrong. And hell yeah, she was straightforward. He tried to explain, "NO miss..its not what you think.."

She stood in a defensive stance, "than what do you mean Khurana?"

Rajeev took his cue and left, "i see you guys are gelling up quite well.. i must take a leave now. Geet.. inform me about anything suspicious. You are the in charge of his security now.."

Geet stood in attention and saluted, "Yes Sir..."

"at ease.. and yes please continue your argument..have a great day both of you."


Once they were alone, geet glared at him, waiting for an answer but this guy was helplessly drooling over. She had sharp features..goodness she was sexy!

"so..where were we Mr Khurana? Ohh yes..you being a chauvinist...", she mocked!

Ohh god, women had always been polite to him and this girl... no wonder he likes her now. He rubbed his temples, "you are mistaken beautiful...what i meant is its risky and i wouldn't want you to get into any trouble..."

Just then adi knocked and got in, not at all surprised to see his boss with a pretty lady, "ahh excuse me sir.. but you have meeting in five minutes.."

Maan held his words midway and sighed, "alright.. see beautiful.."

"its Geet...", she corrected him sternly.

"yeah ok.. listen. I have a meeting which could go on for hours now. Adi is here..he will brief you about my work and show your cabin..you can check the office as you wish beautiful and we will talk once am back..till then, enjoy.."


He pressed her cute nose with the tip of his index finger and walked off, making her fume! Was this man crazy? Hell yeah he was!!! She checked her purse.. all her fake' certificates were intact...thanks to maan's uncle who managed to get them prepared just in time.

She quietly followed Adi, looking at everything carefully. Must admit, this irritating man had a good taste. His staff were welcoming except one pretty lady who didn't even look at her. As if she could care more! She walked through the corridor andthe cafeteria and then back to her cabin. Once alone, she took out her phone and sent the location of the place to Chris and then called her.

"chris.. scan this place and keep an eye. If possible, we can fit cameras around the building coz am sure there are cameras fitted inside."

"alright! Oh and yes geet.. before you hang up, how does he look... in real? Is he nice to you...just like they say?"


Geet couldn't believe Christine was really her friend. Frustrated with that man, she just snapped, "know what Chris-they guy, he is nothing sort of what you imagine. He is actually nothing but a stupid irritating scumbag!"

"woah.. someone is so damn angry... is it his doing?", she asked dreamily.

"shut up chris..and do what i have asked you to. We are here to work and not drool..i will call back once i get to his house.."

"aye aye captain.. enjoy your day babes..umaah.. bye"


Geet tucked her phone in her pocket and scanned the location well. There were security cameras all around and she wondered if anyone was going to take the risk of harming him inside the building. She relaxed on the couch...a bad start it seemed, of the day.

He came back like after two hours and found her sitting in her cabin, reading something. She had a style but damn that attitude! And he loved it! He knocked the door and got in. She didn't even care to look at him or stand up. She continued reading the magazine she held.


"hey beautiful...", he just took the liberty to come around and sit by her side, "how did your tour go?"

She rolled her eyes and yanwed, "umm..it was good.."

"cool.. come on..lets have lunch then..", he offered.

She glared at him taking his liberties, "no thank you.."

He just didn't let her finish. He pulled her up by her hands and dragged her out, "come on beautiful.. its lunch time already. You need to eat in order to guard me..", he said that last word in a mocking sense. She sighed...she really didn't know anybody here, so she better befriends him.


She watched the whole cafeteria stare at them because that damned Khurana eats in the same place as his employees...no discretion. She sat on the same table as him and felt really conscious of the stare she was earning. She watched him eating away happily and here she was feeling a little not nice.

He stopped eating, "hey.. whats the matter beautiful? You're not eating!"

She played with her fork, "why is everyone staring at us?"

He liked that us' there, though pretended to be oblivious, "its not us darling.. they are staring at you..", and dug back into his food. Seriously.. what kind of man he was and what kind of people he hired!! She looked all round and the women glared back at her with utmost jealousy which she didn't even understand! She sighed and tried to eat before hunger kills her.

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Edited by kawaii_geet - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
The spark between Maaneet is sooo evident from the first meeting itself.. looks like quite a fast paced story to me.. a necessity while writing such genres .. the flirty maan with his easy go behavior reminds me of the maan in ITT.. and here geet's character seems to be a role reversal kinda thing.. the usual angry, strict demeanor resembles the usually seen character of maan.. but well this role reversal is spicing up the things.. the lady bodyguard and the ladies man is sure to make for an interesting story..
Edited by drashtirocks1 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
omg..im loving this flirty maan n angry geet..
she is irritated with his easy go behaviour
he seems too nice..
will be interesting 2 c them f8 over ever small things
n later fall in love
hmm maan has already started 2 drool over her..
how will she react when he really propose her
haha..my mind is already flying thinking of upcoming parts..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Maan got smitten by her first look n no charm is working on the sherni...whole office staring her girls were jealous 😆...Geet irritated with maan n prcap wow love chris why he interested in maan is he gay 😉
had an ooopsy moment 😳by mistaking chris as guy thanks to you by clearing the mistake 😆...
Edited by mansiahmed - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
amazing update
geet appointed as her bodyguard of maan
this maan already flirting and geet getting irritated😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
very nice! I love the storyline and characters in this story - Geet in intelligence and flirtiest Maan.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Maan... God!!! He's so damn cute...

And Geet, aisa lagta hai jaise characters change ho gaye hai... Geet mein Maan ka gussa aur Maan mein Geet ki mithas... Loving it

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