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Posted: 11 years ago
wow...lovely update and dialogues were apt & really good!šŸ‘šŸ¼ happy Kalpi realising and working towards her dreams.😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
I'm so happy that Kalpi decided to fulfill her own dreams
Payal and Roy are awesome friends to Kalpi
Superb update
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Posted: 11 years ago
Really super duper happy for kalpi..atlast she realised her dreams..her ema..
Continue soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: drdee142

Yeah at last Kalpi following her dreams.

Your precap scared me a little, but I think you have something planned right 😊



Trying cvs style for precap... This may keep viewers intrigued...šŸ˜†

Neways u r right... Everything happens for a reason. šŸ˜‰
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: UB2500

Gr8 update... now she can finally follow her own dream, bcum a tcher...

Update soon...


Thank u... Will try to update next part soon.😊
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Originally posted by: chahat4u

wow...lovely update and dialogues were apt & really good!šŸ‘šŸ¼ happy Kalpi realising and working towards her dreams.😃


Thank u so much... I still wanted some power packed dialogues.. Newyas m happy tht u liked them.
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Originally posted by: appyK

Really super duper happy for kalpi..atlast she realised her dreams..her ema..

Continue soon..


Thank you so much guys!! Will try my best to update soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thank you so much for liking the story and encouraging me...Sorry for late update.. Was really busy... Hope u guys will like it as well. This chapter will be in two parts... 1st part is here.. Will try to update 2nd part in night... Hope u will like it. Enjoy!!

Audition day


Last two days were the most hectic days of Kalpi's life... Apart from jobs she had to prepare for her audition. It was the golden opportunity of her life which she doesn't want to miss.. Now when she ia aware of her dreams she doesn't want to leave any stone unturned.. N this competition will be her first step towards her success... Before going for auditions she wants to take her mother's blessings.. She somehow gathers courage to call at her mom's number.. but her mother doesn't receive it.. So as always she calls at her home..


Pakya : Hello


Kalpi : Dada... Kalpi here!!


Pakya : Kalpi... U r calling after so many days.. How are u??


Kalpi : I am fine!! Today is a big day of my life.. I want to take ayi's blessings.. She is not receiving call...Where is she??


Pakya : Ohh ayi.. Her cell must be off... She is with Pakhi.. actually she is taking..


Kalpi doesn't let him complete and disconnects the call.


Pakya(in his mind) : Why I took Pakhi's name.. I know she must be hurt... How to call her bak now... I don't know her number as well... I wish she would have listened what I wanted to say.. Ayi is in court with Pakhi for her divorce.. Hope she calls me back..


Kalpi is bit disturbed on hearing Pakhi's name... She still envy that girl... That girl has everything what Kalpi wanted... Her job, her love and her mother... She reaches audition hall.. The hall is full of people with various costumes.. Some are chatting while others are practicing.. She sees Payal and Roy standing in the corner waiting for her.. Kalpi goes to them..


Kalpi : Hi guys!!


Payal : What happened?? Why r u looking so dull??


Kalpi : My past still haunting me... U leave that.. When is the audition going to begin..


Payal : in 15 mins.. Ohh god.. What will happen??


Roy : U r dancing with Roy.. So chill!! We are going to perform in competition.. This audition is just a formality... And Kalpi... She is the best..So don't worry..


Kalpi : M nervous.. hope everything goes well...


Audition starts... All three danced very well.. Payal and Roy has been applauded for their performances.. They are pretty sure about their selection.. Kalpi too danced well but she is little scared. All of them are waiting for the results..


A lady announces the result list... Roy and Payal has been selected but Kalpi's name is not their in the list.. Roy and Payal rushes towards the lady.


Payal : Ma'm why Kalpi hasn't been selected.. She danced so well.

Lady : Well...No doubt about her abilities but she still needs some polishing.. The guy who has been selected danced well than her.. He is practicing from last 2 years.. So he deserved it... BTW I have a news for u and I was about to meet Kalpana.. She is been chosen as stand by.. If for some reason that guy won't be able to perform than she will have a chance.. So she needs to keep on practicing.


Payal(happily) : Thank u ma'm.. I will tell her about this..


Lady : N you guys.. Competition is in 7days.. So pratice more and Ur choreographer was searching u.. Go and meet her.


Roy : Ok mam we will... First let us tell Kalpi about ur decision


Roy and Payal goes towards Kalpi only to find her gone from there... Payal panics..


Payal : Where is Kalpi?? She was already depressed.. Hope she is fine..


Roy : Kalpi is a mature girl..Don't worry.. She will be fine.. Neways u call her..


Payal calls Kalpi but her cell is unreachable... She doesn't know what to do..


Roy : Lets meet the choreographer first.. So that we can leave.


Roy and Payal meets choreographer.. She tells them some changes in their performance.. They reluctantly listens her when Kalpi calls Payal..


Payal : Kalpi... Where r u??


Kalpi (sobs) : Payal.. m at cafe..


Payal : Why are u crying... Wait we are reaching there..


Kalpi(starts crying) : Ok.. come fast..


Roy and Payal reaches cafe.. No one was around.. They goes towards the small party hall.. Hall was fully decorated with balloons and ribbens... Congratulation Buddies was written on the wall and a chocolate cake was placed on the table.. with a smiley sign on it... Kalpi is standing in front of the cake..


Payal : Ghosh... What's all this?? And why were u crying??


Kalpi : So how was my acting?? IT has to be good... After all M Payal.. The dramabbaz's frn.. Ma'm that was a small drama to bring u here.. I have learnt it from u only..


Roy : Oh god Kalpi!! U scared us... N what was the need??


Kalpi : I wanted to celebrate ur success.. After all a frn is the one who shares the sorrow and the best frn is the one who shares the soorrow and celebrates the happiness as well...


Payal : But Kalpi.. U too are upset naa?? I noe u.. I want to tell u something..


Kalpi : Madam.. No need to give any lectures... M not sad.. N see the poster behind u... That is for me.. I have pasted it... Copying ur style..


Roy n Payal looks at it.. Roy reads


F.A.I.L. : First Attempt In Learning..


Kalpi : So it was my first attempt.. I will try again..


Payal : So sweet!! But I have a gud news for u.. U haven't failed but selected as stand by.. U can perform at his place... I wish he fells from the stairs..


Kalpi : No... Don't say that.. I do not want to fulfill my dreams by breaking others..


Payal(folding her hands) : Jahapannah tussi great ho!! Now let's cut the cake.. Yummy chocolate cake!!


Precap : Payal watches Roy and Kalpi dancing and gets angry on Roy.


P. S. Plz hit like and comment.

Regards

Vish

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Posted: 11 years ago
superb dear
looking forward...precap omg cant wait

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Posted: 11 years ago
nice one.šŸ‘hope Kalpi gets to know of Pakhi's divorce soon.

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