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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update
So in past maan was desp to be close to geet but now it all changed
Wonder what happened
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
beautiful update dear
loved maanee meeting in past
maan was angry on geet for not being at home when he was coming but how will she know when he didnt tell her about his arrival😆

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Posted: 11 years ago
quite interesting and the poem or shayari or was very painful
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Posted: 11 years ago

Part 5

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geet : papa , maan nhi dekh rhe

woh kaha hai

mohinder : beta wo raat se yhi tha

bs abhi thodi phle hi gya hai

.

tum aaram kro

*******

15 days passed out, geet waiting every day of seeing him... but her never see his around own... his parents come and chat with her, then goes... She always asks about him... But always she gets different answer...

She wants talk with him, share own pain with him, he is not seen anywhere...now her patience giving up... her seek sense saying to her, something happen bad... Her parents hiding something... but what..?

Geet : maa mera phone dena

Rano : deti hu

.

Par tujhe kis se baat krni hai

Geet : maan se

Rano : maan se kyun

.

Wo abhi busy honga na

Call krne ki kya jaroorat hai

Geet : maa aap mujhse kuch chipa rhi hai

Rano : nhi asa kuch nhi hai

Geet : thik hai

Mera phone

Rano : par

Geet : maa please

Rano give phone to her then left...

************

Rano : aap rokiye geet ko

Ydi usne maan se baat ki

Aur maan sb kh denga

mohinder : kab tak hum geet se jhooth khte rahenge

aaj nhi toh kal usse sch pata lagna hi hai

toh aaj kyun nhi

rano : uski halat dekhiye

mohinder : usse sch chipake

hum usse aur jyada takleef de rhe hai

.

Jitni late usse pata lagenga

Uski takleef badengi

Acha hai

Jitni jaldi ho sake

Wo ye sb bhool jaaye

**************

Geet call on maan number but he not picking her call...

Geet : wo phone kyun nhi utha rhe

Maa shi kh rhi thi

Wo busy honge

Aur mein unhe yuhi disturb kr rhi hu

.

Bala maa papa mujhse jhooth kyun kahenge

.

Other side

Geet mujhe kyun call kr rhi hai

.

Khi usse meri jaroorat toh nhi.

.

He pick the phone and thinking press green button or not...

Nhi maan

Tu is rishte ko piche chod chukka hai

.

Fir koi jaroorat nhi

Piche mudke dekhne ki

.

Phone diconnected

.

Again his cell ringing...

Maan ek baar baat hi toh krni hai

Last baar woh bhi

Hum aage kaha ek dusre se baat krne wale hai

Is bahane usse sorry bhi kh dunga

.

Sorry?

Hmm

Galat toh kiya hai tune

Par wo mere liye thik tha

Again ring stopped...

**************

Finally he call her...

Geet : maan ka call

She picks his call in one ring...

Geet : maan

Maan : geet

Phle mujhe khehne do

Geet (think) : pata hai maan

Aap kya khehna chahte hai

Sorry hi na

Mein tumhara call utha nhi paya

Maan : geet tum ho yaha

Geet : hmm

Khiye

Maan : sorry geet

Geet : sorry toh aapka khehna bnta hai

Maan : pata hai geet

Jo maine kiya

Wo shi nhi tha.. par galat bhi nhi tha

She little confused... what maan saying...

Mein ye shaadi krke apni life spoil nhi kr sakta tha

.

.

Geet I always dreamt perfect life partner

.

.

Perfect in all manner

.

Geet tum smjh rhi ho na...

Mein kya khehna chahta hu...

.

Mein jaanta hu

Isme tumhari galati nhi hai

Par geet is wajh se mein tumhara sath nhi de sakta tha

Geet am sorry again

Mujhe umeed hai

ho sake toh mujhe maaf kr dena

.

Get well soon

Take care

**********

She not believes what he said few minutes ago...

Mein ye shaadi krke apni life spoil nhi kr sakta tha

Geet I always dreamt perfect life partner

Tears flowing from her eyes...

She touched own face, neck, hands one by one...

Maan aap asa nhi kr sakte

.

Mujhe umeed hai

ho sake toh mujhe maaf kr dena

.

.

Maannn

She screamed taking his name... her parents come and try to console her...

Rano : tu toh meri pyaari bachi hai na

Dekh ase rote nhi

Geet : maa

Wo mere sath

Asa kaise kr sakte hai

Maa mein kya badsurat ho gyi hu

Her mother denied...

Papa aap batao na

Mein kya perfect nhi hu

Mohinder : na bacha

You are my perfect daughter.

Geet : ydi wo mujhse shaadi karenge

Toh unki life spoils ho jaayengi

.

Mein kya itni buri hu

Rano : na beta

Tu toh bhut pyaari hai

Bhool ja usne jo bhi kaha

Geet : maa

Rano : dekh tu asi royengi

Toh mein bhi ro dungi

Mohinder : geet hum ye risk nhi le sakte

Yaha flood aa gyi toh

She not smiles...

*************

10 day more pass out... but after this incident geet not ask any thing about maan ... her parents little shocked to see her normal... her tears dried... Now she not cries ... She tries to smile but never reach to her eyes...

Mohinder : hume geet ko sectariest ko dekhana chaiye

Rano : humari beti bilkul thik hai

Mohinder : rano wo thik nhi hai

Usne apne dukh ko andher hi dba liya hai

Wo bahar aana bhut jaroori hai

Rano : wo khud ko smbhalne ki koshish kr rhi hai

Aap kyun uske zakhm ko fir se hra krna chahte ho

Mohinder : rano try to understand

Rano : bs kriye aap

**********

In 10 days, geet never said anything about maan from lips but in her heart storm going on...she consoled own self each day & she don't want to see tears in own parents eyes due to own... but she take one decision... after well she go to meet maan ...

*************

One more month passed...

Doctor : now she is totally fine

Par kuch medicines hai jo abhi aapko continue krni hai

Mohinder : ji

***************

Rano : beta ghar aake kaisa lag raha ab tumhe

Geet : acha maa

Maa

Papa

Mujhe aap dono se kuch baat krni hai

Mohinder : bol beta

Geet : mere accident ki wajh se mein apne CS ke exam nhi de paayi

Ab mein wo dena chahti hu

Apni padhai firse shuru krna chahti hu

Mohinder : kyun nhi beta

Ye toh bhut achi baat hai

Geet : aur mein delhi jaana chahti hu

Rano : delhi kyun

Geet : maa

Mere pass bs 4 months hai

Aur mujhe sb kuch firse

Bilkul starting se pdna honga

Waha mujhe couching bhi le lungi

Rano : bs yhi baat hai na geet

Geet : ha maa

Aur kya hongi

(think ) am sorry maa.. papa

Aapse sch chupa rhi hu

Par ek baar mein maan se milna chahti hu

Unse puchna chahti hu

Kya kbhi ye rishta unke liye ahm bhi tha

Jo itni asaani se tod diya

.

Aur mein jaanti hu

Aap dono mujhe asa nhi krne donge

Mujhe dard mein nhi dekh sakte na

.

Par maa ... papa

Ab ye dard na jaane kb khatm honga

Precap : geet kya mil paayengi maan se ... ?


see this updates too :-

MG- Khawaish...pyaar ki - Teaser in Banner Form on page 20 (30 may)

MG FF- Mohabbat...ki adhuri Kahani - part 3 on page 52 (31 may)

Edited by priya_21 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

bdi khush hai
kya baat hai
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Posted: 11 years ago
geet shocked maan told don't want life partner her she decide meet maan painful update
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: envi

geet shocked maan told don't want life partner her she decide meet maan painful update


😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
i cant believe maan denied marrying geet because of accident
what if this would have happened after marriage then too he would have done the same
hope geet will show him how perfect she is nd he hss done a big mistake by leaving her that too when she needed him the most
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Posted: 11 years ago
Boht painful update tha 😭
Plz next wala jaldi Dena ... Waiting
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Posted: 11 years ago
very cruel


would love to see geet teaching maan a very good lesson

and making him realise wat true love is

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