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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ...Natasha...

Beautiful update
I love Roy conversation with Kalpi
I wish Kalpi took his advice and do what make her happy


Thank u so much... From childhood Kalpi is living for her mother's dream so she will take some time to decide...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: UB2500

Update soon...

can't w8 for nxt update


šŸ‘šŸ¼ Next part is in process!! Will update soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: yuvaragna

When did u update next part


Tonight most probably.😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hello Guys.. Updating 7th part... M bit unsatisfied with the dialogues in this part as I wanted them to be bit more powerful... But I guess I am not that good at writing.. Sorry for any disappointment.. and mistakes. Enjoy!!

Night @hostel


Kalpi is waiting for Payal to come.. She has not gone to cafe today.. Roy's words are echoing in her ears.. She has tried a lot to think about her dreams but realized that she has no dreams on her own.. The constant pressurization for fulfilling her mother's dream, has surpassed all her feelings and dreams.


Kalpi(in her mind) : What the hell m I thinking?? Y Roy's words are affecting me.. I am born to fulfill my mother's dream and that is what I m trying.. My fate has been decided much before my birth.. My life is devoted to her than y I am trying to even think about my own dreams?? I do not have right to think about myself.. Once I tried to live for my own.. tried to love and see what happened..


Payal enters at the moment.. She has a handmade poster with her which she is pasting on the wall...


Kalpi :Uff... U again brought a poster... Let me guess.. It will have some nice quote on it.. Right?


Payal : Yep.. U know me so well!! This is the best quote I have heard till date.. Read it


Kalpi reads the poster, "Try to get what you love else you will have to love what you get".


Kalpi : Roy gave u this poster?? Why is he forcing me?


Payal : Hold on!! From where this Roy came?? I m coming from my classes n my ma'm said those lines today..Neways leave that.. Spill the beans now.. What Roy did??


Kalpi : Roy was just telling me to follow my own dreams rather than my moms..


Kalpi narrates the whole convo to Payal..She even tells Payal about her ayi's obsession about the dream and how she has sent her to the hostel for studies..


Payal : I think Roy is right.. read the quote once again..


Kalpi : U too?? I wasn't expecting this from u.. U know how much I love my ayi..


Payal : So who is telling u to stop loving her?? We are just telling u to start loving yourself.. Ur ayi wants to see u successful... So try to attain heights by following ur own dreams..


Kalpi : I have tried to dream once... N I ended up hurting everyone.. Now I can't even dare to do so..


Payal : Did u ever fell while walking??


Kalpi : What question is that?? Off course I did..


Payal : So u stopped walking?? No naa... than why r u stopping urself now?? Look Kalpi.. this life is really too short to think about others.. U can't make others happy by compromising ur own happiness... It's a common saying... "Khud ka ghar jala k dusre ke yaha roshni ni ki jati"(U can't lighten other's house by burning urs). Trust me... U just dream.. Learn to fly.. This time we won't let u fall.


Kalpi : Do u know what.. I do not have any dream.. I do not know I want to do..

Payal : That's not truth... U close ur eyes and try to remember the moments that gave u happiness.. U will realize ur dream..


Kalpi closes her eyes on Payal's insitence.. She starts rememberin all the moments from her childhood.. she sees herself sitting with her father and chatting... Her mom gifting her doll... Pakya and Raghav teasing her in childhood.. Raghav helping her in her studies.. Kalpi teaching Pakhi maths.. Kalpi helping her neighbours in their ...She than sees herself teaching in coaching center..chatting with them.


Payal : So what u saw??


Kalpi : Nothing.. Leave it!! I am happy with whatever I am doing.


Payal : Okkie... I won't force u.. Let's sleep now. Good night.


Kalpi : Don't get angry... Try to understand.. it's not easy for me.


Payal : M not angry.. Just disappointed. M repeating myself.. U r not born to please anybody. Not even me. Just think of urself.


Kalpi : Okkie.. give me sometime..


Payal : Fine!! We will talk tomorrow.. Come... give me a hug.. U need it most!!



Next day morning


Kalpi hasn't slept all night.. She is visibly affected by previous night's conversation...She has realized her passion for teaching.. but is scared to obtain it as career.. With this confused thoughts she reaches her class, she is not willing to do anything today and starts teaching bit reluctantly.. Few students starts conversing with her regarding 1st term unit test.. she indulges herself in their talks and in no time starts smiling..


She rushes to dancing classes with a broad smile on her face.. Roy and Payal are amused to see her like that.. They were expecting her to be bit gloomy today.. Payal touches Kalpi's forehead..


Payal : No.. she doesn't has fever.. still we should consult doctor.. Kalpi is smiling without any reason.. Let me go and check sun's direction...It must be in west today!!


Kalpi : Shut up!! M fine.. N I have a big reason for this smile..


Payal(impatiently) : What?? Tell us soon..


Kalpi : I want to be a teacher..


Payal and Roy are shocked on her statement... She can't believe their ears..


Roy : Can u please repeat??


Kalpi : Yes.. I want to be a teacher... That's my dream!! N I want to fulfill it.


Roy : Wonderful!! So what's ur plan??

Kalpi : I have decided that I will start my own coaching classes for various competitive exams.. As I am already working in an insti so I can't teach school level students.. And u guys are not going to help me in this..


Payal : But why?? Aren't we ur frnz??


Kalpi : Yes u r... but this is my war and I want to fight it alone..


Roy : Fine.. we won't help u economically.. but we can support u as frnz na?? N u can't say no to this.


Kalpi : Ok!! But before that I have another news for u.. As I need funds for my classes.. So I want to participate in dance competition as well... As u both are dancing together.. I will give a solo performance.. So hows that??


Payal : Whoa!! Such a good news... But we have audition in two days... how will u prepare??


Kalpi : I will try my best.. rest is on God... M sure he will help me.


Roy : That's call for a party.. Let's order pizza..



Precap : Some lady announcing audition results and Kalpi's name is not in that.

P.S. : Please hit like and comment.. All ur feedbacks are really imp.

Regards

Vish

Edited by fairylover - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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unres

lovely update afterall she can be a very nice teacheršŸ‘

yippeee me 1st me 1stšŸ˜†
Edited by Mihika - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow vish its beautiful,amazing šŸ‘šŸ¼šŸ‘šŸ¼šŸ‘šŸ¼šŸ‘šŸ¼šŸ‘šŸ¼šŸ‘šŸ¼šŸ‘šŸ¼
and these 3 ppl bonding wonderful
looking forward excitedly
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Mihika

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unres

lovely update afterall she can be a very nice teacheršŸ‘

yippeee me 1st me 1stšŸ˜†


Thank u... She Kamla's daughter so preaching and teaching is in her blood..

Btw way congos.. M happy that someone is eager to comment first on my story..šŸ¤—
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: manikarnikaa

wow vish its beautiful,amazing šŸ‘šŸ¼

and these 3 ppl bonding wonderful
looking forward excitedly


Thanx Manika..

Can Kalpi have some frnz in show?? She needs someone selfless in her life.. Dumbla and Bratkhi are spoiling her life.
Edited by fairylover - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Yeah at last Kalpi following her dreams.
Your precap scared me a little, but I think you have something planned right 😊


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Posted: 11 years ago
Gr8 update... now she can finally follow her own dream, bcum a tcher...
Update soon...

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