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Posted: 11 years ago
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...This is for ME NOT GETTING A PM!
... this is for ME ALMOST MISSING THIS UPDATE!
Lastly ... this is for the fate Manyata had to undergo - .
The update was simply brilliant AnnišŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘ !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Dabyanti was a witch , I truly believe that ... because even the most power-hungry person, wouldn't take the life of their own Baby! Poor Manyata had to undergo so much 😭 ... I really felt her pain. Superb writing Anni - I currently have tears in my eyes.
Though Uday was the way he was - I don't hate him ... it was not his fault. He just blindly trusted whatever was shown to him šŸ˜”.
I hope that this life-time breaks the ongoing curse. I wish that in this birth, Manyata gets all the happiness she was deprived of.
Truly loved the update Dear ...
Do continue soon.
Edited by ...navina... - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

good going..nice update..😊


thank you so much
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ...navina...

...This is for ME NOT GETTING A PM!
Awn I am soo sorry jiji I also don't know how did I miss your pm sorry

... this is for ME ALMOST MISSING THIS UPDATE!
Sincerely Sorry again
Lastly ... this is for the fate Manyata had to undergo - .
😭😭😭 this is from my side
The update was simply brilliant AnnišŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘ !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

thank you so much
Dabyanti was a witch , I truly believe that ... because even the most power-hungry person, wouldn't take the life of their own Baby! Poor Manyata had to undergo so much 😭 ... I really felt her pain. Superb writing Anni - I currently have tears in my eyes.

This is an inspired story, and yes even she is a witch to kill baby, i had tears when we heard about the story, it was really heart breaking.
Though Uday was the way he was - I don't hate him ... it was not his fault. He just blindly trusted whatever was shown to him šŸ˜”.
yes he is not at complete fault
I hope that this life-time breaks the ongoing curse. I wish that in this birth, Manyata gets all the happiness she was deprived of.
lets see what happens
Truly loved the update Dear ...
Do continue soon.
thank you so much
on the given date only

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Edited by annabh - 11 years ago
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After that every person that dies their soul began to linger, no matter what they not find could solace as everyone pointed and criticized my character whereas I was innocent. They locked my picture build a wall over it but it did not help the curse had began, it took only one month for Uday to come across the whole truth and he too committed suicide, but he is also to be blamed for not trusting me and then there was wars that destroyed both the kingdom. My family member spends their last years in imprisonment under harshness of the Slave Ruler.

I never killed anyone, it was just that for the past five birth I had to kill myself, leaving Uday to suffer all alone each birth he tried to protect me from the truth but even without knowing the truth I died, sometimes by a standing up for revolution, sometimes by a kargil war, sometimes by accident but this is the last birth and I wanted you to know the truth I want"

Her closed eyes had brimming hot tears as she spoke to the Spirit of her past with her voice broken with sobs

MANYATA: I do not want him to prove anything, I do want him anymore in my life. Now I know that is the reason I was an orphan in this birth and probably in my all other births, I do not want to even see him Please I do not want to do this

QUEEN: but this is the destined you have to do this test, I do not know whether it will be on his favor or yours, but whatever may be the decision you have to take as this final judgment I will not interfere, to be very true at a point even I am tried ... tired of watching them separated all this five births, he is at fault but ... maybe it was all a mistake maybe a misunderstanding as till now it hurts me to see him yelling in pain every time he loses me, but this is to save my heart from being hurt, I never wanted to be hurt because he does not trust upon me even today I will tempt him to be discouraged but hope his love is true.

MANYATA: but what will be the test?

QUEEN: you both will be tied with the knot of our marriage, like we were when we took the pheras and then you both have to go till the old temple up hill and on whole way he will lead you, he will be tempted by many thing, even if you scream out to him he will not hear it, but you will be untouched, he cannot turn if he turns back to look it will be clear that he has no trust in you and hence you both will be separated and never meet again.

Suddenly everything seemed to vanish into the thin air, as Manyata looked stunned at the painting, She stood frozen looking at the picture, the tale left her speechless her mind went blank as her body went numb and the book dropped on the floor, she could not hold any longer as she saw darkness all over and finally passed out, but she was caught by him, as he felt her body going all cold and he took her in his arms and rushed out crying his heart out as he could not lose her this time. When she stood there was no one just her eyes was brimming with tears as she hunted a little more, she found a trunk and on opening it she found the knot that was being spoken about. She looked at it confusingly.

The spell broke slowly, as people got back to the normal state without even knowing what had happened to them. As Uday opened his eyes and felt his muscle, he immediately ran as fast as he could, he searched everywhere, he knew that she was known to everything now. He wanted to confront to her, he wanted to be with her and finally he met her as she stood frozen near the courtier pillar as he went and hugged her with all might. While she did not give him any response, he kneeled down on his feet and took hold of her hands. His eyes brimming with hot tears but she was blankly looking away in some other direction. He said with a painful voice

UDAY:I am so sorry Manyata I am so sorry, but please try to understand when I felt that you killed our blood I could not take it everything seemed to be so fake, and after knowing that you betrayed me for taking revenge for avendra death I was really out of my mind. Dabyanti and your father kept me filling all bad thing about you I was so out of myself, I was so over wheeled with power...but trust me without you even a day seemed to be so hard. I promise I never touched Dabyanti, actually there was a trend of attack, so to protect my kingdom we adopted a baby, Manyata I always loved you and watching you going away from me killed me, I really cannot live without you... Manyata are you listening to me.

MANYATA: we have to complete the task I hope you know what it is.

UDAY: I do but before that I need to say you so many things

MANYATA: I am really in a confused state so please leave me alone before I say something harsh

He understood that she was going through an emotional turmoil as he walked off. Manyata stood as images of their first meet came to her mind, the day when she met him in the hospital, the shock she got in the class meeting him again, how his words affected her, the way he escaped from her after she had blasted on him, his possessive attitude towards her, his caring nature in the bus, the love that they had ...was it so fake...was it fault of other or he himself.

It was close to dawn as he waited outside the gates, the sun was on the verge of setting, but he felt with this setting sun maybe a new day would start, he was adamant into proving himself right, he was so desperately needed into a happy ending for them. He wanted to correct all the mistakes of the past, he waited as he watched her walking down the stair, as usual she looked heavenly in her simple kurti and leggings attire, he wondered and was ashamed that he had hurt her, as she came she looked into his eyes. He noticed that her eyes was swollen, he hated himself for being the reason of her tears as before he could speak anything she said

MANYATA: earlier why did you cause the accident to me, then to rits and then to Zain?

UDAY:I can never hurt you Princess it was just a warning from the destiny and yes it used to rain every year on your birthday as nature cried on our separation. I did hurt Ritika and Zain as they caused to interrupt me and I sincerely apologies for Ritika only.

MANYATA: so destiny and nature are different

UDAY: yes princess love is a form of nature as it is unpredictable but destiny it always wants it own way so it always prevents love. Princess I need to apologize for another thing too, I am sorry that day Ritika wanted to say in the phone that she broke up with Samuel but I spiked it up with the little power that I have and ended in saying her the words, I did not want you to run back as I felt this was only the time when I could convey my love to you.

MANYATA: and the book

UDAY: I feared that you might remember something



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Edited by annabh - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome update anni šŸ‘, Now the whole truth is out frm both manyata's n uday's side...
I m glad manyata has given him a chance in this birth...
Hope to see dem together, when uday passes this test 😃
I m d first , Even b4 d update itself šŸ˜†šŸ˜‰
Edited by saakhi01 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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beautiful updates...I just loved it...😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazing!!!!!!!!šŸ‘ The best part was - the Baby was adopted and Uday never got intimate with Dabyanti. I'm glad that Uday committed suicide when he got to know the truth, he punished himself for not believing in Manyata!
So - the test is on ... very eager to see a positive (and happy) outcome šŸ˜‰.
Oh God , 8 days more for the next update😲 ... I hope this week flies by FAST!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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i love ur signature gif pic of millionaire's first love...i love that movie so much that i cried in the end :'(
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: saakhi01

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Awesome update anni šŸ‘, Now the whole truth is out frm both manyata's n uday's side...
I m glad manyata has given him a chance in this birth...
Hope to see dem together, when uday passes this test 😃
I m d first , Even b4 d update itself šŸ˜†šŸ˜‰



Congo dear
thank you so much
yes they have confronted with their past
After all he deserves a chance
after 5 life of regret
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hehe super fast express

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