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Sonali.

@Sonali.

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#671

Originally posted by: kkkloveu
Wonderful story Sonali di..
A short, crisp, funny and a very innovative story, really loved the whole..👏
I really found a new aura in this story, the way you showed team there was really good, a nice surprise indeed..
Little funny moments were very good, i really liked Daya and Abhijeet of this story..perfect super cops and Duo of the CID that we saw in the golden era..⭐️
The way they made her confess was really very good, the execution of whole was excellent..👏

The explanation of the whole case in the form of a game termed as "court room" was very well shown, a very creative and brilliant piece of work Di..

Thanks a lot for this story Sonali Di..

Awww Riya... Thank You so much for this detailed analysis sweetie... Thanks ton for reading and reviewing...

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Sonali.

@Sonali.

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#672

Originally posted by: kkkloveu
I really forget to mention in the last review Sonali Di, really sorry for the late review..😳
The poem was really nice too..👏
Based on the "now" hot topic, Chunaav...
Very nice work Di..

Thank you for this and the story both..😃

Thank You so much dear for observing the poem so minutely...

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Debasree

@debasree04

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#673

Wonderful story Sonali 👏
I just love the court room part...duo are awesome...i was assuming that other persons present there probably from CID cop & i was right...very much meaningful disguises...well done !!! ⭐️

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Sonali.

@Sonali.

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#674

Originally posted by: debasree04
Wonderful story Sonali 👏
I just love the court room part...duo are awesome...i was assuming that other persons present there probably from CID cop & i was right...very much meaningful disguises...well done !!! ⭐️

Thanks so much for the review... I hope you enjoyed reading...

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Debasree

@debasree04

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#675

Originally posted by: Sonali.

Thanks so much for the review... I hope you enjoyed reading...

Yeah of course enjoyed a lot 😃

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misha.as

@misha.as

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#676

Very Nice Sonali Di...⭐️ 👏 👏
The way u Solve this murder case is so interesting...👏 ⭐️👏Totally loved the story...👏Super Duper Fantastic Story...👏 ⭐️
Waiting for ur next story...👍🏼 😊

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Sonali.

@Sonali.

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#677

Originally posted by: misha.as
Very Nice Sonali Di...⭐️ 👏 👏
The way u Solve this murder case is so interesting...👏 ⭐️👏Totally loved the story...👏Super Duper Fantastic Story...👏 ⭐️
Waiting for ur next story...👍🏼 😊

Thank You so much for reading and the valuable fb Mishu... 😃

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Sonali.

@Sonali.

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#678

Hi Friends!! Heres a new poem from me... However it has not come up like I thought... Do read and give your valuable Feedback

Abhijeet Daya ke Deewane

Dosti ki kahaniyan suni hai hum ne kai,

Kuch yaad hai kuch bhula di gayi!

Magar inki Dosti ke bhulayee bhoolte nahi fasane

Bhai hum toh Pramanit hai Abhijeet Daya ke Deewane...

Anokhi hai yeh dosti saalon poorani,

Aao sunati hoon Aaj Abhijeet Daya ki kahani.

CID me ek naya sub inspector tha aaya,

Lubhavni si shaksiyat aur naam tha Daya

Shant Swabhaav aur Tez Dimaag mano thi inki ki pehchaan

Acche Acche Mujrim inke aage khol dete the jabaan

Fir CID me aaye Karmath se Sr. Inspector Abhijeet

Jo Swabhaav se the hoshiyaar Par tha dhundla inka ateet..

Har Mujrim ko uske anjaam tak pahunchane ki Abhijeet ko thi Dhun

Aur Nishana aisa Abhedh mano jaise yehi hai kalyug ke Arjun.

Waise toh Abhijeet ko aksaar ateet ke saayon ne pareshaan kiya

Magar Har Dard, Har Pareshani me Daya ne unka saath nibhaya

Bade bade case in dono ne apni hoshiyari aur bahaduri se hai suljhayee

Abhijeet Daya ki jodi ne milkar CID me aneko kamal kar dikhayee

Abhijeet jub kehte hai 'haan Daya' toh hum ho jaate hai ghayal

Inki sanketik bhasha ke, Aankhon ke isharon ke hum hai kayal

Jub hote hai dono saath toh lagta hai koi jadoo hai chaya

Inki bas maujoodgi se hi, aam sa drishya bhi khaas ban gaya

Aude se badkar hoti hai dosti yeh inhone hume hai sikhaya

Dosti me Vishwaas ki ehmiyat ka paath hai padhaya

Har kadam par dosti ke naaye mayne se robaroo karaya

Apne dost ki bhavnao ka samman karne ka raasta dikhaya

Aisi dosti ke koi kaise bhool jaayee fasane?

Hum they, hai aur humesha rahenge Abhijeet Daya ke Deewane

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@Twilight123

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#679

Wah! kya baat hai Sonali...😊
Aapne itni achhi poem likh dali..
Mai poem padhne me itna magan ho gai...
Ke pata hi nahi chala ye kab khatam ho gai...😛
very nice...😊👍🏼

Edited by Abhi-Anamika - 11 years ago