What will be reaction.(os added) - Page 2

GOOD Imagination. I want to see Bala's Mom's reaction. It'll be a tight slap on her face.CV's can use this idea.

Scene starts in Chennai in Mihika's mothers house wher everyone is celebrating Shashti(a ritual conducted when couple turns sixty.Dont know exactly) of My Iyers relative.

Both Ishita and Mihika were present along with Ruhi.Whole Iyer family including Subbu's family is present there.

Ishita repeatedly calling Raman while he was not taking the call.Ishita was tensed as Raman was not taking call but handles herself saying he would be busy in a meeting.Ruhi is playing with other kids and Shravan.

Ishita tells Mihika to call Mihir once and confirm what is Raman doing.Mihika calls but Mihir is also not receiving the call.

Mihika "Usko tho main ghar jaaney key baad dekh loongi phone nahee uharaha hain."

Ishita "Shayad busy hooga."

Mihika "Busy hotha tho phone kyoo kaat tha katsaktha hain tho uthakar bol saktha hai naa busy hain."

Ishita "Shayad kuck urjent hon.Kamse kam tumney Mihir sey baath key shubhaha ,Raman tho phone naheen utha rahan hain.Subaha baath kee who bhee sirf Ruhi sey jab main baath kar rahee tho phone katdiyaan.Khadoos Ravan Kumar.Smajh rahan hain kee main mar rahee hun ussey baath karney."

Mihika "Lag tho raha hain.Shubaha sey tumhara phone hath mey sey jyaada kaan par hain."

Same time Bala's family come there.Subbu and his wife along with their new born son.

Subbu's wife greets Ishita and Ishita greets her in reply.

Ruhi comes there and complains about Shravan and Ishita solves the dispute and they leave.

Subbu's wife "Who ladkee aapkey bethi hain .Mainey sunaa key aap kabhee Maa ban naheen saktey."

Ishita "Who meri bheti hee hain.Bhagawan ney diyaan huan.Meraa husband kaa bethi hain."

Sw "Aap Subbu sey Shadi karney waali thee na aur Subbu ney apsey shaadi karney inkaar kar diyan."

Ishita was silent but Mihika replies "Koi ek kaam tho theek kiya subbu ney.Aaj akka bahut khish hain jeeju key saath .Jeeju bahut khyal rakhtaa hain poorey pariwar kaa."

Bala's mom was speaking to some old couple .

She was praising her sons.

Bala's mom "Aaj Bala college mey HOD hain aur Subbu uskey company ka General Manager hain.Unkey boss ka bahuth bharosaa man hain.Issliya unko bhee lakar ayaan"

Subbu introduces his boss to the old couple.

Subbu's mom "Subbu hamesha busy rehta hain .Kal uskey office mey bahud badaa meeting hain phir bhee aapkey liyen ayaan hain."

She was praising Subbu and her bahoon.

Bm "Kismat mey hona chahiyen hummarey subbu sey shadi karney ."looking at Ishita

While Ishita sees Subbu .Subbu downs his head seeing Ishita.

Then couple notices Ishita and Mihika they call them near.

Old couple "Ishita suna hain tum donon ka shadi bhee huyi hain koi punjabiyon sey.Who naheen aye kya."

Ishita "Usko kuch urgent kaam tha aa nahey payen."

Oc "Tumhara pathi kya kartha hain?"

Ishita "Ek MNC mey achey position mey hain."

Same time Bala's mom starts "Mainey bahoot baar milaa ussey .kuch jyaada hen laaparwah hain."

Bm "Uskoo tho koyee tamez hee nahen kee badon sey kaisey baath karnaa.Mera beta kon dekho kitnaa achey position mey rehakar bhee kitnaa sanskaari hain."

Bm "Who tho chiken kaatha hain daroon bhee pitha hain.?Madhavi ji ney tho apney bethi kee shadi aisey ghar mey kardee.Dekhiyen naa poora pariwar yahan ayaa hain un donon key bhina."

Iyers get embraced listening Raman being taunted.They know very well how ethical Raman is.But they don't want to start quarrel befor couple.

Ishita gets angry but controls seeing elders there.Mihika was almost ready to fire but Ishita stops her.But she cant stop Ruhi.

Ruhi "Aapkey himmat kaisey huyi mare papa key baarey mey aisey baath karney kee.Mere papa achey hain unko kaisey baath karna atha hain.Aap ko naheen aatha ."

Ishita tries to stop Ruhi.

Bm takes advantage "Dekhiye naa uss ladkey kho bhee.Badon sey kaisey baath karraheen hain."

Ishita holds Ruhi and stops her from arguing .Then Ruhi notices something and removes Ishita's hand from her and says "PAPA" surprised and happy.

When everyone turns around they see Raman coming along with Mihir.Ruhi goes running and hugs Raman .Raman takes her in her arms while she kisses him.While both Ishita and Mihika were shell shocked.Bala's mum face was thinder struck seeing Raman there she remembers her previous encounter's with Raman .

Ruhi "Papa ,aap yahan?"

Raman "Main Delhi mey rahoonga tho yeh sweet see smile naheen dekhpaaonga naa issliya aagaya Ruhi sey milney."

Subbu's boss sees Raman and goes near him "Sir Aap Raman Kumar Bhalla hey hain naa. CEO of ______.Aaapko tho CEO of Year award bhee milaa tha.Kal hummara ek meeting bhee hain."

Raman "Han main Raman Bhalla hee hun.Humey meeting kal hain tho hum kal baath karengey.Aaj main aapney relatves key function attend karney ayaa hunt ho please excuse me."

Old couple "Kaun hain who Ishita ?Tum janthey hoo ussey?"

Raman comes there while Ishita was still in shock.Mihir confirms it is his plan to surprise everyone by gving surprise visit.

Mr Iyer to OC "Bhayya Ishita kaa pathi hain Raman."

Oc "Ishita tumney kahan kee who nahen ayya?"

Raman comes there at same time he takes blessings from couple "Busy tho thaa.Meeting yahan fix karkey aa gayan. Kee Aap sabsey bhee milpaoonga once a life event hain naa."

Oc are pleased with Raman's answer.

Bala comes there and greets Raman and they speak in their regular friendly manner.

Bala introduces Subbu to Raman .Raman gives him a firm handshake.

Subbu "Nice to meet you."

Raman "Main bhee aapsy milney key liyen bahoot din sey intazar tha.Thanks jho boolna tha mujhey."

Subbu's boss "Subbu tum Raman Bhalla ko janthey hon.Yeh tumharey rishedaar hain.Kal humey unkey saath meeting hain.Jiss meeting key liyen hum mahino sey mehenat kee.Uss deal ko paney key liyeen.Uss deal key baarey mey baath karney ayaan hain.'

Subbu was shocked knowing Raman Bhalla for meeting whome they have worked so hard is none other than Ishita's husband Raman.

Old couple were listening conversation.Ishita came and stood beside Raman silently.

Raman "Sir mainey aapsey kahan kee main yehaan fuction attend karney ayaan hon .Iss ghar key dammat honey key naatey.Yahan business key baath math keejiyen."

Ishita was happy listening this.She has no control over her smile.

Oc ask Bm "ladkaa tho bahut shareef lagrahaan hain.kitney sanskaari hain."

Bm face was burnt like a popcorn but she din't answer remembering her previous encounters.

Ishita asking "Aap ney mujhey bataya naheen kee aap aarahen hain.Phone naheen utha rahey they."

Raman "Mihir kaa idea thaa .Usney kahaan key surprise deydey sabkoo."

Ishita was heavily surprised by seeing Raman . She is looking at Bala's mom indicating should I tell what you told about Raman to them.She run's away from there faking a reason.

Oc make Raman sit and starts speaking to him.

Ishita goes away from there but her eyes were fixed on Raman.She was watching him silently and blushing.Raman was trying to get a look on Ishita while speaking to couple.

This is awesomee!! Continue soon

why Cv's always focusing on shagun track there are lots of other track like u discussed i hope cv change story becoz after every two weeks shagun brainless woman apna brain show karne ki kohshiah karte hai day by day i am getting fed up its time to change a better change

Originally posted by: Fenice

That's a really great OS.👏

I wish something like this happens in the show...it will shut Bala's Mom's mouth for good.

And I have a query,is this your first OS or have you written any other as well? If yes, then please send me the link.😊

that would be great to see - hope the cvs read your post