Desirous zeal: An annoyed Swayam! Pg 8 - Page 7

wow ..dis OS is fun reading ...tanya n rishi are so cute and adorable ... i just loved the way rey asked rishi to use same tricks of swayam and follw him to impress tanya ...naughty rishi same lyk flirting rey (like father like son duo) ...

Such a cute OS. Loved it

Such a sweet n cute One shot..The father daughter bond was well penned plus amazingly described..Sharon words are really adorable and somewhere she was so true..Daughter and father bond is very special just like son and mother..Seriously Beautifull work dear..I loved it

Keep writing


Prateek

hee hee---too sweet

Awesome!!!

Awwwieee...such an adorable write up partner...fathers are undoubtedly daughters' 1st hero...the first man they start admiring ...in fact when they fall in love..the try to compare the qualities of their beloved with their fathers...dad's little princess remains his princess all her life...loved the little Romeo in action...Rishi following Swayam's footsteps to impress Tanya was the best move ever😆😆..Junior Sharon will see her little lover boy and fall for him...loved loved loved the way Rishi handled possessive dad Swayam...poor Swayam he was boiling in anger when the little monster was copying him to impress her...Rishi Vs Swayam was adorable

The last portion portraying Swayam's insecurity to loose his princess to someone else was cuteee... loved the father-daughter duo 😳

Beautifully written partner

wow I completed finally all u r ss os ff u r just amazing writer n u r stories I love them specially annoyed sway am n day out with baatcutter n siren keep it up n write more on swaron love to read u r stories