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Posted: 11 years ago
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hello YHMians,divan's,ishra ke diwanes😳😳😳...i am new to this forum n i attempted to write an OS on our luvly cupl Ishra😳😳
i hope u all like it😳


19th september 2016

The clock struck 12:00 in the midnight and an excited ishita took her mobile n called her sweetest hubby.Raman recieved the call n b4 he cud say hello Ishita sang in her sweet voice
"Happy birthday 2 u,happy b'day 2 u happy b'day dearst ravan kumar oops i mean my cutest raman kumar,happy b'day 2 u".
A small smile curved raman's lips n he replied thanku my dear dentist.
ishita said aap bhi na raman n asked "raman aap kya kar rahe the???"
raman:ishu i was playing ludo wid a bhutni
ishita:what???
raman:aur kya itni raat ko sote hai aur kya karte hai...kabhi kabhi toh dang ka question pucha karo
ishita:oh acha maine socha ki aap mera phone ka wait kar rahe honge
raman:oohhh woww ishu do u even have time to think abt me???
ishita:raman kya bol rahe ho???
raman:then what...subah se kitni baar tumhe phone kiya maine lekin tune uthaya hi nahi,mujse baat bhi nahi kiya...pata hai kaisa lag raha tha mujhe???
ishita:acha bolo kaisa lag raha tha
raman:sunkar kya karogi...tum toh apni amma appa ke ghar chutti manane gayi ho na,mera chinta kaha rahega tumhe????tumhe kya pata ki mai tumhe kitna miss kar raha hoon
ishita:ye kya baat hui raman aap aisa baat kar rahe ho jaise ki mai aapse 50000 km duri par hoon...aur raman aap jaante ho na vandu akka ko 3 din chutti mila tha toh woh amma appa ke ghar rehne aayi,aur mihika bhi aayi hai toh maine socha ki mai bhi apne parents n sisters ke saath thora time spend karloon
raman:toh mera kya???
ishita:raman zindagi bhar aap hi ke saat rehna hai,aapo jhelna hai toh kya mai 2-3 din apne maa baap ke saat sukhoon se nahi rehsakti
raman:haan haan mai rakshas hoon na jo tu mujhe jhelti ho theek hai raho waha hi waise bhi aaj mera b'da hai agar mera naseeb mai ye likha hai ki mai aaj apne biwi ke saat na rehsakoon toh mai apna naseeb badal thori sakta hoon...bahut der hogayi hai ishita tum sojao...good night

ishita:acha theek hai par mera mann kar raha hai ki ice-cream khaloon...ice-cream khaake sojaungi
raman:yahan mai apni biwi ko miss kar raha hoon aur tumhe ice-cream ki padi hai
ishita:oh...god
raman:kya hua???
ishita:fridge mai ice-crea nahi hai raman
raman:ufff ishita mai yahan tumhe ye batane ki koshish kar raha hoon ki...
ishita:arey wahi toh raman mai ek kaam karti hoon,bahaar jaake khaake aati hoon
raman:r u serious???time dekha hai tumne???
ishita:haan i am serious n i am going...bye n she did cut d call

raman:bewakoof aurat...paglaagayi hai aur mujhe bhi pagal banake chodegi...itni raat gaye isse ice-cream khaana hai
he phoned her to inform that he will come along with her but she was didn't receive his call
he then blurted under his breath:arey phone kyun nahi uta rahi hai,kahi ice-cream khaane akele chali toh nahi gayi...,hey bhagwaan mera raksha karo,iss pagal se mujhe bachao...n wore his slippers to give company 2 his beloved wife.

as soon as he came out of his room rose petals showered on him,lights were switched on n he was so happy to c the whole iyer n bhalla family standing in front of him n wishing him on his b'day.he then tuk blessings fro elders,mihir n romi hugged n wished him,mihika n vandita wished him...he was so happy but his eyes were still searching for some1 special.

Mihika noticed it n came near him n asked "jiju aap kisiko dhund rahe ho???"
raman:haan mihika...mera matlab naa mihika
mihika laughed n said:theek hai jiju mai samajgayi

at tat time ishita along wid her sweet lil daughter who was holding a yummy chocolate cake arrived there.ruhi placed cake on table n asked raman to lift her,raman lifted her n she kissed his cheeks n said "happy birthday papa" he kissed her forehead n said "thanku beta"...he then let her down n was starring at his ishu...she wished him "happy b'day raman"...but he didn't reply her but was jus starring at her.

vandita:ishu i think ur husband want u to hug him n wish him
both of dem blushed heavily n every1 laughed.
ishita said:akka kuch bhi...
toshiji asked raman to cut the cake when ruhi interupted n said:papa cake ishimaa ne banaya hai
again vandita didnt leave the chance of teasing ishu she whispered in ishu's ears:kya baat hai ishu,cake woh bhi ye raavan kumar keliye
ishita:akka aap unhe ravan kumar mat bulao
vandita:oh i am sorry mai bhul gayi thi ki sirf tum usse gadha bewakoof ravan bulasakti ho,i am sorry haan
ishita:akka stop it

after cake cutting n all d masti toshiji said "i have arranged for a small family lunch today so every1 please be here at 1:00 " n she asked vandita "vandita bala aajayega na" to which she replied yes.
mrs.iyer said to toshiji tat if she needs any help then she can call her to which toshi smiled n said ok.
after few mins iyer's left to their house n bhalla's left to their respective rooms leaving raman n ishu alone in the living room.

raman came near ishita n asked "where is my gift??"
ishita:gift kaunsa gift
raman:mera b'day gift
ishita:raman ye sab toh maine hi kiya hai na
raman:mrs.bhalla isse gift nahi kehte
ishita:raman ye saara arrangements maine khud kiya aapko pata hai
raman:arey ishu meri jaanu iss mai hi pata chalta hai ki tum kitni bewakoof ho,isliye toh mai kehta hoon ki tum bewakoof aurat ho...koi isse gift kehta hai kya??

ishita:all right aapko gift chahiye na theek hai aapko b'day khatam hone mai ab bhi 23 ghante baaki hai mai laake dedungi aapko aapka gift.waise bewakoof mai nahi aap ho,maine kitna pyaar se aapko 2 baar wish kiya,itna kuch arrangements kiya par aapne ek thanku tak nahi bola,rehnedo ravan kumar se aur kya expect kar sakte hai n she turned to leave
raman held her hand n said:dentist madam ohhh aapko is baat ka bura laga ki maine aapko thanks nahi bola,chalo abhi boldeta hoon.
he held her by waist.
she asked:ye ka kar rahe ho raman...apna nautanki band karo aur mujhe chodo
raman replied:isse nautanki nahi romance kehte hai darling n started trailing his fingers on her cheeks
ishita:raman koi aajayega
raman:aane do
ishita:raman kya sochenge woh
raman:jo sochna hai woh sochne do
ishita:raman agar koi dekhlega toh
raman:dekhlenge toh apna aankh band karke chale jaayenge
he kissed her eyes,he tucked her hair behind her ears
ishita:raman
he kissed her cheeks n ishita lost her her control n went numb on her knees.he claimed her lips,they kissed passionately,neither she was ready to leave him nor he was ready to leave her,both were lost in der own world of passion...they came to reality when vandita knocked the door with closing her eyes with her hand n said:ishu jaldi ghar chalo mujhe neend aaraha hai aur MainDoor lock karna hai mujhe
both felt embarassed n vandita left.both raman n ishita were blushing heavily n without uttering a word she turned to leave but again he held her hand.this time she came near him n gave a small peck on his lips n said jaane do please sirf aaj ke liye hi haina...he smiled n left her.

then raman with a big smile on his face went to bed n slept off.as soon as ishita entered her parent's house mihika n vandita didn't leave a chance to pull ishu's legs.

Mihika asked:ishu akka itna der kyun laga aapko aane mai
vandita:mihika raman usse ice-cream khilaane legaye tha isliye der hogayi usko
mihika:oh achaaa mujhe pata nahi tha ki ice-cream khaane ki wajah se gaal laal hojaayenge
ishita:stop u two bass n she rushed to her room.
mihika n vandita bursted out laughing n they hi-5ed each other.



19th september 2016
night 10:00 city central hospital


Mr n mrs.iyer,mr n mrs.bhalla vandita-bala,mihir-mihika arrived at hospital where they saw raman the great buisnessman,a man whom they had thot that he is a so strong who never allows his emotions to dominate him was about to collapse on land.Mihir ran towards him n held him,his mum toshiji felt a heart break at the moment she saw his son in that condition.

Mihir said:bhai aap chinta mat karo sab theek hojaayega,babhi ko kuch nahi hoga,woh theek hojayegi
toshiji:raman tu pareshaan na ho puttar sab theek hoga,ishita ko kuch nahi hoga,bhagwaan pe bharosa rak woh sab theek kardenge puttar.
raman:maa meri ishita theek hojaayegi na,usse kuch hoga toh nahi na,mai uske bina nahi rehsakta maa,woh meri zindagi hai,bolo na woh theek hojaayegi na
toshiji was crying still she replied:haan beta humari ishita theek hojayegi
raman:aisa mere saat hi kyun hota hai maa...maa ishiita woh ladki hai jo mujhe sacha pyaar ka matlab samjayi,woh ladi hai jo muj jaise insaan ko pyaar karna sikhaya,woh ladki hai jo mera berang zindagi mai rang bhardiya,woh ladki hai jo meri zindagi hai,meri saans meri jaan hai woh aur mai aaj aisa haalat mai hoon ki mai apni zindagi ko kho raha hoon aur mai kuch kar nahi paa raha hoon

everyone were crying mrs.iyer tried to console him,she said: my daughter is a fighter,usse kuch nahi hoga raman tum chinta matt karo

at tat time doctor came wid some papers n asked raman to sign them.
raman signed those papers n said:"doctor ishita is luv of my life,woh mera zindagi ka ahem hissa hai,infact woh khud meri zindagi hai,aap meri biwi ko bachayiye aur kuch nahi chahiye hai mujhe,please doctor".doctor assured him tat he will try his level best n left.

raman went n sat on the chair n remembered all the events tat took place...he recalled how the day that had been started with hearing the b'day song in the luvly voice of his wife had jus turned into a turmoil.



To be continued...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Great start to the story.👏
I can feel the suspense building up.
Eagerly waiting for your next update.😊
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woww plz yaar continue update fast
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interesting..please continue...👍🏼
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Great start buddy!

Do continue soon!
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I 'm curious to know what happened to Ishita. I liked it. Please update soon.
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nice 1.. plz upd8 soon :)
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wow Brilliant start...Continue soon :)
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😭 whats wrong with ishita?? gr8 story..please continue soonnn👏
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gr8 os. Loved the birthday surprise. And a cute moment after that. Please continue

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