'Ab Ghar Chale?'~ZaYa TS **LAST PART UP** 21/06

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Geeta singh

@sweetdesire

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#41

Hey dear

Love the first part

me loved it

Awwiiee Love ZaYa

can't wait to read more

so plz continue soon

Take care

Geet

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Uditi

@-FreeSpirit-

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#42

Really liked the first part, lol Zain again played a trick on Aliya 😆 cant wait to read the next part and see what happens in the engagement

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@vintage_12

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#43

It was mind freaking blowing 😳

And it was me who demanded for intensity & I am waiting to see in the last part

Please continue soon! 😊

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javeria

@Javeria3991

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#44

Wow this is awesome.

Love the way you wrote Aliya and Zain POV missing each other terribly.

Her dream was quite funny.

I love a lot when you embed one of the famous scene of Shahrukh khan's movie. It was a lovely scene.

Love Zain and Aliya conversation a lot.

Zain and Aliya are adorable. I hope to see this in the serial which I doubt.

Fantastic 👏

Continue next part soon and plz pm me.

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Hera Flames

@Flame.Of.Rose

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: SabrinaMalik

I'm not sure whether I will live upto your expectations.
I'm a sucker for romance.😆
But I'll try! :)

No problem until and unless it isn't something way too predictable or fairytailish😆

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mystories_PM

@mystories_PM

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#46

Sabrina Here. 😆

If you want PMs then please with ZaYa on top I request you to buddy this account: mystories_PM

Otherwise it's a pain to send PMs separately. Plus I haven't filtered my buddy list.

So this was the best option.

But warning, by buddying this ID you will get a PM for all my works, remember. Not only this TS but all the works I write in the future. Which won't be many, but still.

So you may get irritated. That's why soch ke buddy request bhejna 😛

P.S.--I Love you all for giving such sweet replies. But the sad news is that I don't know when I'll be able to update the next part. Exams begin on Sunday.😭 I so want to finish this off. But I haven't even started writing the next part.😛 Let's see, I'll probably post something atleast.

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vinu

@vinu127

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#47

hey sabrina...

i just read both the preview n the chapter 1...

i must say-ur really Zainish

by which i mean ur 1 one of the very few who do utpatang cheesay with ur works!😆

this was in no way close to the clinched formats of serious confrontations and angry hurtful words being thrown at each other n rona dhona!

it was really comical-the dream n the aftermath of it...i loved it!

and the engagement part- i'm really waiting forward to see what u hav in store for us..

and don't worry darling- u hav in no way fallen short in reaching our(at least not my) expectations..u've infact surpassed it!

love this one..

sending buddy request to ur PM account..

do PM me when ur next part is up!

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Sabrina

@SabrinaMalik

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: vinu127
hey sabrina...
i just read both the preview n the chapter 1...
i must say-ur really Zainish
by which i mean ur 1 one of the very few who do utpatang cheesay with ur works!😆
this was in no way close to the clinched formats of serious confrontations and angry hurtful words being thrown at each other n rona dhona!
it was really comical-the dream n the aftermath of it...i loved it!
and the engagement part- i'm really waiting forward to see what u hav in store for us..
and don't worry darling- u hav in no way fallen short in reaching our(at least not my) expectations..u've infact surpassed it!
love this one..
sending buddy request to ur PM account..
do PM me when ur next part is up!

My God Vinu!

I can't believe it.

I have just, like just sent you a PM for this TS cause I remembered you had asked me to send all my works and then I see you have read and commented already!!! 😆

ThankYou so much.

I'll PM you, sure.