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Posted: 11 years ago

Part -19

At KM...

It's nearly dawn when they reached home...

Geet is very tired and she had slept for a while in the car itself...

Maan blows the horn and the security comes running...

As they get out of the car Nakul looks surprised seeing Geet with Maan...

Maan: Nakul, m'am ki samaan andar lekhe aao

Nakul looks stunned and so are the others...

Maan: kya dekthe ho? ab ye tummare malkin hai, samjhe ?

Nakul runs to take her things...

Maan gets in and turns back to see a hesitant Geet at the door...

Maan: kya hua? Kyun rukh gayi?

Geet: woh...mein andar kaise aaon?

Maan: ye kya sawaal hai Geet? tum pehle bar toh nahi aarahi ho

Geet: par ab toh sab badal gaya haina?

Maan: kuch nahi badla Geet, abhi bhi ye tummara hi ghar hai, actually ye tummair maika hai, haan ab toh keh sakthe hai ki ye meri grahapravesh hai, ye toh mera sasuraal hai, haina babaji?

Maan teases Geet...

Geet: achcha, toh ye mera ghar haina?

Geet enters without any formalities...

She is happy to be home...

She had missed this place so badly...

Nakul stands inbetwwen them looking for the orders...

Hare, Geet ke samaan ko kahan rakehga?

Maan sir se poochega ya nayi malkin se?

He is confused...

He looks at Geet...it's easy to face her na?

Geet: Nakul bhaiya

Nakul is pleased that nothing has changed Geet...she is still that innocent girl...

Nakul: ji m'am

Geet: aap mere samaan mere kamre mein rakhdijye, haina Maan sir, mera ghar hai toh mujhe mera kamre mein hi rehna haina?

Maan is little shocked...

Maan smiles...abhi abhi shadhi hui haina? Let's give her some time...

Ye apne aap mere paas aayegi ek din, haina babaji?

Maan: Nakul, m'am ka samaan upar wale kamre mein rakhlo, left wala

Nakul ko kaise patha hoga ki Geet ka room kaunsa hai? Maan gives the instructions...kyunke rightwala room Maan ka haina...

Geet is happy...and also a little disappointed...

Maan didn't stop her...

Geet: gud night

She leaves...

Maan is also tired...he also retires...

Next morning...

Geet wakes up and finds her things missing...

She thinks that Maan has taken them...

She runs to Maan's room...

Maan has just come out of his showers...

Geet doesn't bothers to knock...

It's her house now...she can go anywhere...

But she stops seeing Maan in his towel...

She tries to get out immediately...

Maan holds her back and pulls her...

Maan: gud morning Geet

Geet goes red red...

Geet: woh...mein

Maan: tumne mujhe itna miss kiya tha?

Geet: nahi

Maan: mujhe patha hai Geet, tum zaroor aaoge mere paas

Maan pulls her closer...

Geet closes her eyes...

Maan gets closer and closer...

He is about to kiss her...

Pinky shouts: Geeet

Geet pushes Maan and runs down...

Maan: Geeet, rukh jao

But Geet is not yet ready for this...she feels very shy...

Maan: meinne toh iss Pinky ko bhulakke bahut badi galthi kardhi

Maan had called Pinky for he thought Geet would feel better seeing her friend...

It's a sudden marriage and Geet would need some one to share her thoughts...

And also her exams are nearing...she had to return to hostel...

Maan doesn't want her to get distracted or get worried about this unusual wedding...

She should not worry about her relationship now, she needs to concentrate in her studies now...she has to fulfil her aunty's dreams...she should not be dependent on Maan too...

She is here to succeed on her own and she will do it...

Maan wouldn't like to take the credits from her...

It's been her hardwork and struggle that got her here...

Maan has just now entered her life and he is not goind to block her way...

He had made arrangements for her to get back to the hostel. To stay with her friends...

If she stays here she will only think about the wedding again and again and get confused about her future...what should she do now? What's her responsibilities as a wife? What's Maan's expectations from her?

Maan wants her to stay away from all this till she completes her degree...

And when she shares her confusions with her friends they will help her to handle this...

For she doesn't have her family to back her, and no one in her sasuraal to help her too, so it's upto her friends now...

Geet: Pinky

Geet goes and hugs her...Geet is in tears...

She doesn't know how to tell Pinky about her wedding...

She feels a little awkward but she is also very happy...

Pinky is surprised to see her mangalsutar...

Pinky: geeet, tumne shadhi karli?

Geet: haan

Pinky: par Geet, tumne aaisa kyun kiya? Tumne kaha ki tum wapas aarahi ho?

Geet: mein aagyi na?

Pinky: lekhin shadhi karkke?

Pinky thinks she married that idiot...

Geet had told that she is running form her marriage and asked her to help her...

Maan had called Pinky and asked her to come and meet Geet at KM...

Pinky thought Geet had escaped from that marriage...

Geet: woh...mujhe bhi nahi patha ki ye sab kaise hua?

Pinky: par Geet, ab tum kya karogi?

Geet panics...what has she done wrong?

Geet: Pinky? Tum sahi kehthi ho, mujhe ye shadhi nahi karni thi?

Pinky: haan Geet, uss ullu ke pathe se tumne shadhi kyun ki?

Maan just comes and hears the praises...

Geet: babaji, meinne kya kardhi?

Maan bahut pareshaan ho jaatha...

Jaise ki Geet waise hi Pinky, donno toh bilkul pagal hai...

Maan: Geeet

Geet: Maaan sir

Maan: tum mujhe sir kehna kab chodogi?

Geet: kyun?

Maan: Geeet, hummari shadhi ho gayi hai

Pinky is shocked...

Geet: aapko aaisa nahi kehna hai, sab ke samne

Geet feels embarrassed...

Maan: kya? Toh mein kaise kahoon? Tummari shadhi ho gayi hai Geet

Geet: aaise bhi nahi

Geet herself is confused...

Pinky: Geet, tum kehna kya chahthi ho?

Even Pinky is confused...

Geet: woh, shadhi, Maan sir

Geet fumbles...

Maan: Pinky, tum apne dosht ko lekhe jao

Geet: kya? Par kahan? Kyun?

Maan: tumme abhi bahut kuch smajna hoga Geet, aur tummare exams bhi hai, tum hostel jaake aaram se padlo, aur sochlo ki tumme kya karna hai, teek hai

Geet: par aapko bhura nahi lagega?

Maan: haan lagega

Maan sounds disappointed...

Geet: toh mujhe jaana hoga?

Geet is also not liking it...

But it's better to buy some time...for she doesn't even realizes what has just happened with her...she has to think over it and decide on her own to accept this new life...

And after completing her exams she will be much more relived and it would boost her confidence too...then she can think about her future...

But Maan has already booked her a seat in KC...

KC's new chief architect...Mrs.GSK...

Geet leaves for the hostel as she finds that more easy to escape from Maan...

It's very disturbing when Maan is around and she needs a break right now...

She needs to complete her mission...she has to become an architect...

That's her first goal...then maybe she will think about her marriage and her job...

She needs to talk to Maan about it...

What if he doesn't want her to go out and work...

Yes, Maan won't let her lend her services to his rivals, haina?

And Maan wouldn't want to stay away from her...

Geet is confident that Maan wouldn't stop her from working for he had himself send her to the hoatel...but she may have to pay him for that...and god knows how she is going to pay him back for all his help...

Geet ko fikar karne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai, Maan ko patha hai ki kaise wasool karni hai...haina?

Part20

Edited by ghsp2fan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely update
Maan gave geet space so that she can give her exams nicely & think about their relation too😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely update
very understanding maan
confuse geet

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Posted: 11 years ago
Of course maan ko pata h kyse vasool kar na h!😉
Liking this story more than the previous one. .
Sorry!😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 19
nice part...
hahaha they are funny...
hmm Geet should take time to sort her feelings...
Pinky is too much...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Part - 20

Geet is busy with her preperations...

And she can't avoid Maan's thoughts completey...

Gud night guyzz
Whenever she is alone Maan's thoughts occupy her completely...

She tries to be with her friends mostly...

But they also tease her and remind her of Maan...

She misses him a lot and as usual makes a visit to KM at the weekends...

Maan too has been missing Geet badly...

He keeps himself busy with some new projects and only wants to begin them after Geet joins KC... he has kept the job offer a surprise for Geet...

She would love it...

Meanwhile Geet just keeps her talks about her career and Maan's new projects only...

She is scared to face him alone...

Maan never missies those chances to be with Geet...

Even if it's his black coffee, he demands that Geet serves him...

Though Geet also likes the way Maan wishes her to take up the reaponsibilities as a wife she is yet to reveal her feelings...she is too young and nave...

Maan couldn't hide his feelings for her...

He knows that Geet is aware of it and is still not ready to accept him completely...

Or she doesn't know how to make a move...

Maan doesn't want to force her into anything but wants her to accept him as a husband every way when she thinks that she could handle it...

And for the while Geet stays in her room...

Maan doesn't have any problem with that, the only problem is that she still has the posters of her heroes in her room...

That makes Maan a little jealous...'now that she has found her real hero, she should forget about the reel heroes and start dreaming about her real hero, MSK...

Maan wants to sing...

Teri dhyaan kidar hai, tera hero idhar hai...

Mein tera hero...

One Sunday morning Munshiji comes to meet Maan from their village...

He is surprised to see Geet living with Maan...

Maan casually introduces her as his wife...

Munshji is happy that Maan atlast found someone, ek saathi...

Munshiji: Dadima bahut kush honge

Maan remembers Dadi...

Geet had not asked him much about his family...

She has been talking only about herself...

What a big mistake?

She should have known more about him...

But how would she know that she would become his wife, his life and his family all of a sudden...it's like some dream come true for her...sapnon ka Rajkumar Geet ko lene aaya woh bhi safed godhe mein nahi safed gadhi mein...

Aur Geet ki kahaani koi fairytale se kam nahi hai...

Ab toh Geet kissi ghar ki bahu ban gayi hai...

Agar Dadi aaj hothe toh Geet ko apne parivaar ke barein mein bathathe...haina?

Maan se poochne ki sawaal hi nahi uttha, Maan doesn't want to tell her his sad story and he never likes people to show pity...

Maan has never regreted about his taqdeer and had accepted life as it is...

He never demanded anything for himself...

Geet is the most beautiful accident that happened to him...

Aur Maan ye nahi mantha ki usne Geet se shadhi karke koi badi ehsaan kardhiya hai usne...ulta Geet ne usski zindagi mein roshni laya hai...he is a little selfish in marrying her...he wanted her for himself...he wanted her to be by his side always...he wanted to cherish her as the most beautiful dream of his life...yes, she had entered his life like a dream and that one dream that he won't want to miss anytime...

He is still waiting for her to approve their relationship, accept him in her life...then only he can introduce her to his world...which is mostly lifeless with his business and a few people whom he doesn't even know personally back in the village...

They all know him from his childhood and they remember him coming to the functions and festivals with his parents, later he had attented one or two weddings with dadi...

After dadi he had never visited their native place again...

Only mushiji visits him with their harvest details and how his relatives wish him to join them in their celebrations...

Maan doesn't respond to munshiji's complaints about his distancing from his few relatives...

Munshiji: Maan beta, aap ek bar toh ghaav aake sabse millo, agle mahene hummair ghaav mein ma vaishno devi ka pooja hai,aap bhi bahu ko lekhe aayiye beta

Geet ye sunkke sharmathi...

She gets munshiji's blessings...

Maan doesn't say anything about that...

Maan: Geet, munshji ko andar lekhe jao, mushiji aap kahna kahkke jayiye, mujhe office jaana hai, Geet, mein jaatha hoon

Geet: aao aayiye, Nakul bhaiya

Geet serves dinner for munshji and slowly starts asking about Maan's family...

Mushji tells her that Maan used to be a very naughty kid in childhood and only after he lost his entire family, his parents and siblings, younger brother Vicky and little sister Annie in a car accident did he become sober and very lonely...

Dadi was the only company for Maan and she also moved to Delhi after that tragedy to take care of Maan...she tried hard to bring back the smile on his face but Maan was afraid of getting into any kind of relationships...he turned his attention on his business and has become a machine now...but he is happy that Geet came into his life and she could change things around and make him happy...

Geet vows to bring Maan for the festival...

Munshiji returns with a big smile and a lots of hope to see Maan happy again...

He somehow feels that this girl would bring happiness in Maan's life...

Maan looks a lot more happier now...he is not cold like he used to be...

But he still needs to be more cordial, with Geet too...

After he leaves Geet goes to Maan's room to find more about his family...

She is surprised to see that there is not even a singe photo of his family except for dadi's which Maan keeps in his table and Geet had already seen that...

She prays to dadi to give her strength and bless her to succeed in her mission...

Maan comes back that night and goes to see Geet in her room...

Geet is getting ready to sleep and is saying her prayers...

Babaji, aap mere saath haina? Ab aap mere madat karenge na?

Maan just comes and sits beside her...

Geet knows that he is here...

She feels nervous...'ab ye yahan kyun aaye hai?

Geet: babaji?

She opens her eyes half and looks at Maan...

Maan is admiring her...

Geet: DD mere kamrein mein? Babaji, ye toh kuch kadbad lagtha hai

Maan: Geet, babaji se tummari batein katam ho gayi toh mujhse bhi thoda batein karo

Geet: kyun?

Maan: hare, mein kitne bar keh saktha hoon ki hummair shadhi ho gayi, aur ab tum meri pathni ho, mein tummara pathi, samjhi tum

Maan holds her shouldres and turns her towards him...

Geet: aap kya chahthe ho?

Geet looks scared...

Maan: woh toh mein tumme kaise batha saktha?

Geet: kyun?

Maan: tum toh mujhe dejhthe hi darjaathi ho

Geet: aaisa kuch nahi hai

Maan: sachi?

Geet: haan, mein ab bahut badi ho gayi hoon

Maan: ahccha?

Maan gets closer and closer...

Geet moves backwards...

She hits the pillow and she is trapped...

Maan keeps staring her...

Geet looks into his eyes...

They want something...and Geet knows that she has no escape...

Maneet eyelock...

Maan looses his control and kisses her...Maneet liplock...

Geet is little scared and little adventurous...

She wants to know more...she just needs more than this...

But Maan had not come for this, he then steps back...

Geet is all shy shy and is not able to face him...

Maan: Geet

Geet is still frozen...

Maan lifts her chin and looks into her eyes...

Maan: mujhe kuch kehna hai

Geet: hmmm

Maan comes closer to her and whispers in her ears...

Edited by ghsp2fan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow nice part...maaneet ka kiss😉
Munshiji happy for maan
Will geet be able to convince maan to go for the festival
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nice update
geet ask munshiji about maan's family which he told happily
maan is giving geet her space to know what she feel about him n their relation
maan kiss geet
she feel shy
what maan wants to talk to geet

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super duper hit wala update.. good job dear!!👏
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yeh kya hai maan n geet alag alag...

lovely update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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