SwaRon SS: Romantic Holiday :)part 4 updated (page6)

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pooja123456

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

beautiful update and loved the end

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sanchiswaron

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

Thanks for updating Poorvi 😃

I personally loved that ring and promising part how romantic and swaronish

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reflections.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#43

This is so amazingly written. I am loving how the story is shaping up.

Swayam and Sharon have been sketched really well here.

Excited for the next chapter.

Update Soon,

Aishu.

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sonali saraswat

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Posted: 11 years ago

#44

Beautiful !! Good piece of wrk .i loved it..something very soothing .i did imagined d same

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@Slayerkajal

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Posted: 11 years ago

#45

Just beautiful...
Loved your update...
Nice ending...

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JensenVruShan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#46

Wonderful update

A day beautifully spent for Swayam and Sharon

Loved the promise ring and after fishing moments

Waiting for more

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-spongy-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#47

Wonderful update. Really enjoyed it.

Loving the story.

Edited by -spongy- - 11 years ago

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surbhimathur

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Posted: 11 years ago

#48

Poorvi babe wow what an update. Totally amazing! SwaRon fishing together aww so cutee..then sharon in saaree *____* aur swayam toh hai hi hamara laadesar :*
The proposal...haha swayam se kitne promise dilwaaye sharon ne..gosh! Poor swayam SRP ke saamne toh yehi haal hona hai dude.
And the kissing scene :O Sun rehne de...firstly thanks to shreya _/\_ warna tu toh pgl h..kitna sahi likha tune! Idea bhi h tjhe? Pure SS mei abhi tak wohi acha lga mjhe XD
Nooo dun take me otherwise XD
As in likhne wise it was best! 😳
Oye tera romantic holiday khatam ho gaya kya? Yeh toh ghar bhi pahuch gaye 😲

Likhaa kar tu aise hi! It feels so nicee ^_____^
Amazing update!