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Ok well, this is a fanfiction about ymlh. Same character except Devika is still in mumbai and ashmit is still crazy after pooja and poornima know. same story except few changes.

Ashmit comes into poornima room.

Ashmit: tumko kya laakte hai, ke tum pooja se baat karo gi aur woh maan lengi ke meh aise kar saakte ho.

Poormina: Woh mere bahaan hai, use ko mere baat pe vishwaas ho ga.

Ashmit: Laughing, do you think she will trust you over me, her devta husband, paagal ho poornima.

Poornima: She'll support me.

Poorinima was leaving when ashmit took her by her arm with force and pulled her and said harshly with fear

Ashmit: If you say one word to pooja, tehn u will pay for it, i mean it. UNDERSTAND?

Poornima shocked at ashmit force.

Ronit: Stop, right there. You have no repsect for my wife, i believed ashmit all this time thinking u would not lie and thinking you risjed your life to save my child but u are disugtiong ashmit, and i am sorry poornima.

Poornima: itzzz ok but i told you, we have get this ashmit out fo our house.

Ashmit laughing: Don't you dare, becuz we are talking about ur son life, mm?

Ronit: Mere baata ko haathe maat lagane.

Ashmit: tumre baate.

Ronit: Yep, hezzz my son only my son.

Poornima: let him go, we will not stay here with him.

Ashmit left when he heard pooja was calling hiim.

Poornima and ronit packed their things and were about to leave.

Pooja: didi , please don't do this please.

Dadi: tik kare hai, please don't go.

Poornima had enough opened the door and gasped, totally shocked...

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Posted: 20 years ago
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wo that works. its ronitz house nd he can kick ashmit out anytime. ur the king ronit. dont leave ur own house 4 that fake person
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Posted: 20 years ago
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so Ronit noes its Ashmit? Y can't he tell this to Pooja? 😕
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Posted: 20 years ago
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gr8 story but all fanfics shud be in the fanfic section....im sure i of the mods/viewbies for this section will move it there
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Posted: 20 years ago
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Originally posted by: tafarruz

so Ronit noes its Ashmit? Y can't he tell this to Pooja? 😕



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Posted: 20 years ago
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Poornima is shocked to see who it is.

Ronit: WHo is it poornma.
Poornima not being able to speak. IT was millind, her first love. All the thoughts of her and millind rushed through her head, not being able to control herself, she ran to him and hugged him with all her love.
Poornima: you're alive? i thought you , and accident and how?
Millind: I am sorry, i'tt tell you everything.
Ronit felt jealousy, even though poornima wsn't his first love , he started to respect ehr as a wife, and love her alot..
Poornima couldn't be more happier but then she reliezed it, she was already married and her husband was standing right there.. Poornima turned around and saw the love on ronits face. Ronit, who had helped her, supported her, after what happened.
millind: I want to tell u everything what happened, i love you poornima alot..
Poornima: but but .(she turned around looking at ronit and millind back and forth. who will I choose..)

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