Dark Love! by Piyu(Priyal) (Rishbala Fanfiction) Chapter 11 [30/08]

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ferii

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Posted: 11 years ago

#221

awesome update priyu👏

but what happened between bituji and rk😕

waiting to see rk's reaction when he come to proper sense

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Dona

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Posted: 11 years ago

#222

part 5 n 6
awesome updates...

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Saha Vikram Khanna

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Posted: 11 years ago

#223

Great update Piyu.

was it Bittuji who gave blood? I am still confused how come he knows this Madhubala is his Maggie? I have a feeling Madhubala is not Maggie and since he is drunk he can't think straight.

I hope you are feeling better now. update soon.

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Mrs.Somerhalder

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Hi guyz! Here comes 1st part of Chapter - 7!! Chapter 7 (B) will be from Madhu's point of view and chapter 7 (B) will be from RK's point of view!! updating 7 (A) right now 7 (B) will be updated a bit later today.. Both 7(A) and 7(B) are dedicted to shriyakadge for this awesome banner she has made for Dark Love!

Dark Love !

Chapter 7(A) ~ Rise of hopes!

Madhubala gets up.. She twitches her eyebrows and tries opening her eyes.. After a lot of difficulty she finally opens her eyes.. She moves her fingers and tries raising her hands but wait, she was unable to lift her right hand.. Some weight had pinned it down preventing her from moving it.. She slowly turned her head towards right and found some man sleeping holding on to it..

Wait! Where am I? Who is he? Like how is he even related to me?

I close my eyes to calm down my nerves and trying to get on to the latest thing I remember and suddenly everything came flashing in front of my eyes.. Yeah right I was kidnapped and then I
had slipped and hurt myself and now all I know is that I am here and who is he..

Is he that damned kidnapper. I bent a little to have a side view of his face and yeah it was him and the next second I jerked him off with all the force I had totally shocked and confused and he fell flat on his bum. He was startled and then he looked around and even he looked confused like me..

We were in the same boat at the moment. I mean seriously what's happening??

Suddenly I saw his confused look turn into an angry one..
"HOW DARE YOU TO PUSH ME?" he roared
"WHY DID YOU REST YOUR HEAD ON MY HAND AT THE FIRST PLACE?" Wasn't it his fault
"WHAT?" he said totally confused again..

Before I could utter another word the doctor came in smiling..
"Good Morning Ms. Maggie Kundra! So how are you feeling now? Better?"

I was totally confused..

Who is Maggie? Maggie Kundra?

I turned to look at the devil for answers who looked equally confused..

"Maggie Kundra?" He asked

"Right! Mr. Kundra that's the name you mentioned was hers in the form?

Just a second his surname is Kundra? And he gave me the name Maggie Kundra? Kundra? Is he planning to marry me or something.

I gave him a murderous glare but he was oblivious to it..

"WHAT!?" he asked shocked

"What happened Mr. Kundra ? Are you alright?" the doctor asked

"Who told you she is Maggie?" He roared..

The doctor was getting irritated by now.

"You! Who else will tell me her name Mr. Rishabh Kundra? The whole night you were chanting Maggie Maggie like a madman holding her hand and crying and you even gave me threats that if I don't save her life you are not going to spare me and today you are asking me who said she is Maggie?"

Mr. Rishabh Kundra? I tried remembering any connection with this name but alas as far as I know I don't know any Rishabh Kundra.. Had he got the wrong person? But he knew my name!

I again looked at him and he looked all shocked and confused..
"I brought her here?" the devil asked

"Yeah! you were the one who brought her here and you also wanted to donate blood to her but you were drunk so you called up some Mr. Bittu Sharma to donate blood to her.."

"WHAT? DID YOU JUST MENTION BITTU SHARMA? OF ALL THE PEOPLE IN THE WORLD YOU SAID I CALLED UP ON HIM FOR HELP?" Mr. Kundra said

"Yeah! Now stop shouting and calm yourself.. It looks like the injury she has got on her head has affected your brain" The doctor said thoroughly disgusted.

The doctor came up to me examined the injury and did a short check up and then said, "You will be fine soon Mrs.Kundra.."

"I AM NOT MRS. KUNDRA!!" I shouted and even the devil shouted at the same moment "SHE IS NOT MRS. KUNDRA"

The doctor was startled and now loosing all the patience he had,"Shut up! Just shut up! If I spend an another moment here I will then have to join the mental asylum with you guys!!" Saying this he rushed out..

After a moment of silence the devil spoke up, "Ohh shit! Now I remember everything! Damn ! I was in a drunken stupor so I said all that rubbish.. How could I even think you are Maggie? You can never be Maggie because you are the reason of all the problems I have ever faced!"

"HOW AM I SUPPOSED TO BE THE REASON TO YOUR PROBLEMS WHEN YOU ARE THE REASON TO ALL MY PROBLEMS, YOU PSYCHO"

"DID YOU JUST CALL ME PSYCHO, YOU BITCH?"

Just then "Hey!Hey! Cool down you both! What's happening here?" Someone said...

I immediately turned to the familiar sound and looked at him and he looked at me and everything else was forgotten.. I was happy and even he was happy and shocked..
I got up and was about to remove the tubes which were inserted in my hand when he came forward running and we hugged each other.. A tight hug.. My happiness knew no bounds..

"Madhu where had you disappeared suddenly? I had searched for you almost everywhere but.. Why did you leave my birthday party and go Maddy? Are you angry with me?" he said..

"No Aarav is that even possible? Its a very long story. You know what.."

I was cut off by the devil "Umm! Madhu are you forgetting that I am here.. You had promised me you won't tell anything about it to anyone.. Remember if you tell him anything the result will not be good.."

I looked at Aarav helplessly with tears in my eyes.. Yeah I was crying.. I hugged Aarav again.. After a hell lot of time I had felt safe even if that moment was for a minute or two..

---------------------------------------------------End Of Chapter 7 (A)-----------------------------------------------------

Hi guyz! How is the it? Please do like and comment! Any guesses who this Aarav is?

Edited by drashtifan1 - 11 years ago

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Shriya kadge

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Posted: 11 years ago

#225

res/unres

awesome update ...

who is this aarav ???

ps . thanks for d dedication di 😃

Edited by shriyakadge - 11 years ago

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shruthi murali

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Posted: 11 years ago

#226

Who is this aarav ? And is finally madhu is maggie or not ?

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mydrashti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#227

thankuuu piyu 😃 for the pm of this wonderful story on Rishbala its realyyy good just start reading first part so will comment after reading alll thanx again to let me know about this amazing story on my rishbala grateful to u hun ...:))