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Posted: 11 years ago
#91
oh no geet is getting married to her jijus brother because of her sister and now she wants maan to be away from her as she started feelings for maan hope maan saves geet and her sister from all this mess
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Posted: 11 years ago
#92
part 12
awesome dear...
lovely...
haye Maan is so protective of his Geet...
others are so shocked to see side of Maan...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#93
part 3
awesome...
lovely...
Geet is so sweet and kind...
and Maan loves her so much...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#94
part 14
nice part...
poor Geet...
feel sorry for her...
her family is so disgusting...
her sister couldnt she stop that?
or she happy that Geet and her devar will get married?
she has no support now...
what will Maan do now?
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#95
Ye kya twist hai
Geet getting married to her sisters devar
Hope maan will stop it
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Posted: 11 years ago
#96
nice update, hope maan find out every thing and save geet.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#97

Part - 15

Maan was shattered after she left him abrubtly...

He first got mad and blamed her for hiding the truth...

But then he thought that it was just his misunderstanding and maybe she never loved him...

He is fine if she is happy with this wedding...

She had deceived him with that fake smile, but Maan knew that she was not looking good...

She is hiding something...

He went to her hostel next day but she had left...

Maan contacted Pinky and Pinky said that her marriage was already fixed even before she came to Delhi and that even Pinky didn't know about it earlier...

Pinky also didn't know much about her family and told him that Geet will return to Delhi for the exams...she didn't say anything more...

If Geet is coming back after her marriage for her exams then she should have no trouble with her marriage...

Maybe it's only Maan's imagination and his love for her has confused him...

He didn't want to create any trouble for her...

He has no idea of going to her wedding also...

After Geet left, KM seems like a deserted place...

It has lost it's soul...that was Geet...

She brought it back to life with her vigour and her stubborn convicton...

As if that was her life's sole goal...

But in her efforts to revive KM she had unknowingly revived Maan's long lost desire to live...

He had lost interest in life after Dadi left him...

He had no one to care for...

No one to appreciate him or even share his grief...

Most of the days he had never spoken a word other than the official meetings...

He spoke rarely with his staff that too only Adi had the privilege...

Dadi was always worried that he would be left with his lifeless buildings all alone oneday ...

Here he is sitting in KM all alone except for the few servants who are busy in their work...

But this place seems to be talking with him...

He can see Geet everywhere...

Her chit chats, her smile, her loud arguments, her daunting threats, childish fights, her payals chun chun, and above all her love for this palce, and her bonding with every part of this house...

Maan remembers her fond eyes always speaking with those little statues, swing, even the roses...

How could he live alone in this place?

This place reminds Geet in every angle ...

It's better for him to move out of this place...

But what would he do without this place?

What about the promise he made Geet that he would take care of it...

What if she comes back and asks him why he left it unattended?

No...he had to keep up his promise...

Whenever she returns she should find it as she had left it...

He is determined to take care of it for his Geet...

This is her childhood heaven...

Her wonder land...where she dreamt to be an architect...

Her fairy tales begin in this place and her dreams always surrounded this place...

This is his Mishty's Magic land...

She will return to her magic land oneday and he will wait for her till then...

Maybe she would want her children to see her childhood abode...

She will like to tell them stories of her uncle and aunty...

Maybe the man whom she met at KM...this MSK...

Then he decides to gift this place to her...as a wedding gift...

He urges his lawyer to prepare the documents and is ready to go to Hoshairpur...

Just then he receives a call from Geet...

Geet sounds very tensed...

Hearing her voice Maan is worried about her...

Geet: halo, halo

Maan goes silent hearing that voice after a long time...

Is it real?

He couldn't believe that it's Geet...

Geet is scared that Maan is not at home...

Geet: kaun hai? Maan sir hai kya?

Maan: Geeet

Geet is so relieved hearing Maan's voice...

Maan: Geeet, kya baat hai? tum teek toh haina?

Geet wonders how could he manage to know her feeling even when she is not in front of him, just by hearing her voice he knows that she is in trouble...

Babaji... ye toh mujhe itne achche se kaise jaanthe hai?

Yahi toh pyaar hai Geet...

Geet: aap kahan ho?

Maan is surprised...ye kaise sawaal hai?

Mein toh isse pooch raha hoon ki kya hua hai aur ye toh ulta mujhe sawaal karthi hai...

Maan: Geeet, tum bathao, kya hua? Tum itna pareshaan kyun ho?

Geet: pehle bolo, aap kahan ho?

Ye toh bina jawaab diye kuch aur baat nahi karegi...

Maan: ghar pe

Geet: ghar pe?

Maan: kyun? Mein apna ghar pe hi hoon

Geet: aap mere shadhi pe nahi aaenwale ho?

Maan: tum ne toh mujhe teek se invite bhi nahi kiya haina?

Geet: aap bahut bhure ho, aapko aana chahiye na?

Maan: mein nahi aatha toh kya tummare shadhi rukh jaathi hai kya? Nahi na?

Geet: aap aathe toh hi ye shadhi ruhk sakthi

Maan: kya?

Maan is shocked...

Geet: aap jaldhi aao, aur mujhe lekhe jao

Maan bahut pareshaan hojaatha...ye ladhki kya keh rahi hai?

Maan ko kuch samaj mein nahi aatha...

Maan: Geet, tum kya keh rahi ho?

Geet: aap jaldhi aao, abhi nikhalthe toh kal subha aajaoogena?

Geet pleads him to come immediately and she is so scared...

Maan: mein aatha hoon Geet, tum gabrao mat

Geet: aap aayenge na?

Maan feels very sad...

Maan: haan, zaroor aatha hoon, mein toh abhi abhi wahi aanewala tha, infact Adi abhi abhi train tickets lekhe aaya tha

Geet: sachi?

Maan: haan, tumme tummare shadhi ke tofa toh dena haina?

Geet: mujhe nahi chahiye koi tofa, mujhe koi shadhi nahi karni

Maan: tum toh sach mein pagal ho Geet, mujhe toh pehle hi patha tha ki kuch toh gadbad hai

Geet: aap aavein batein karthe rahoge toh patha nahi mein kya karkhe beitoongi

Maan turns mad hearing her speak like that...

Maan: kabardar Geeet, tumne aaisa kuch karne ki socha bhi kaise? Meinne kaha na mein aaraha hoon, tumme kuch karne ki zaroorat nahi, samji tum?

Geet: teek hai

Maan: Geet, job hi ho, tum pehle ye samaj jao ki ab tum akhele nahi ho, tummare aunty aur uncle nahi hai toh kya hua? Mein hoon na? issiiye tumme darne ki koi zaroorat nahi Geet, aur mein hamesha tummare saath hoon, samji tum?

Geet: hmmm

Maan: teek hai, Geet, kal milthe hai

Maan forgets the train and takes his car...

He wants to get to his Geet as soon as possible...

And he knows very well that this stupid girl would dare to do anything...

Ye ladhki toh kuch bhi kar sakthi...babaji...ussko thoda toh akal do ki woh koi galat kadam nahi utaye...Maan had no other choice but to pray to Geet's babaji...

Maan drives as fast as he could...

As it's almost midnight, there is no one on the road except a few trucks...

Maan also knows that he should not do anything silly for Geet needs him now...

As Maan gets confused about the route after he had taken a kacha road to Geet's place he gets another call from Geet...

It's 3 am and Maan is afraid that it may be an emergency...

Maan: Geet, mein bas pohunch chukka hoon, tum mera intrezaar karo

Geet: aap abhi tak nahi aaye?

Maan: Geet, meinne kaha na, bas do gante mein aajaaonga, ye tummare gaav ke rasthe toh bahut confusing hai

Geet: aap gadhi mein aarahe ho?

Maan: haan

Geet: par aap ne kaha aap train mein aanewale ho

Maan: par train mein aatha toh dher hojayega na?

Geet: aapko train mein hi aana chahiye tha

Maan: kya?

Geet: aap gadhi chodke train pakadlo, abhi

Maan: tum kya bakwaas batein kar rahi ho Geet?

Geet: babaji, mein inko kaise samjaoon?

Maan: Geet, tum kahan ho?

Geet: mein toh train mein hoon, agle station mein utharke aapka intrezaar karoongi

Maan: kya?

Geet: haan, mein ghar se bhaag ke aagayi

Edited by ghsp2fan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#98
nice update
what is tho\is twist
waiting for next
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Posted: 11 years ago
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very nice... crazy girl ghar se bhag gayi...eagerly waiting for d nxt...
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Posted: 11 years ago
jaldi maan nehi toh pata nehi kahan jayegi...

superb update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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