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- 79


At once car enters km,Geet open te door and almost jumps out of te car to rushed inside, without listening to Maan..

Geet running ,screaming: kutty kutty,she was crying..she suddenly hit her leg on te couch and her toe got hurt,blood started to flow,but she didt care it

Dadi came out hearing Geet's shout and shocked to see her state


Dadi :Geet beta wat happen

Geet : Dadi Kutty

Dadi :dr is checking her,before she completes Geet rush to Kutty's room

Maan followed her :dadi wat happen to kutty

Dadi :she had temperature Maan,vomited two times,dr is checking her..but wat happen to Geet, why she is like tis

Maan :wat dadi wen u call & said baby is not well she started to cry


Dadi :oh god wat i will do with tis girl i called her to say Baby is not well she wants to speak with her but before i complete she cut te call

Maan :now how is baby

Dadi : cum

They went to baby's room ,Geet was sitting beside Baby and holding her..

Geet :dr wat happen to her from morning she was cranky but dadi said nothing to wory,tats why i left to office,she was crying and didt have her bf too properly, she went on going worrying for her kutty


Dr smiles seeing her :nothing to wory Geet she got food poisoning

Geet got shocked: food poisoning ,...but how can i have looked after well ,she wont eat unwanted food then how

Dr: stop stop take a breath,she is kid Geet it happens , she will get vomit little bit,dont wory i will prescribe medicine.. give her liquid food...she will have little bit fever..for three to five days she will be like tis

Dr took te injection,Ayesha seeing te needle started to cry..seeing her Geet too started to cry

Geet : dr pls give medicine, no need injection pls

Dr :who is kid here and gesture dadi & Maan to hold both of them..

Dadi pulled Geet away and Maan took Ayesha in his arms,dr injected Her..Geet turns her face..Ayesha started to cry loudly..seeing her Maan's heart winched..he hugged her more and rubbed te area were te dr injected..Wen dr stood,Geet rush to them..pulled Ayesha from Maan & hugged her soothing her pain


Dr :maaji why u didt arrange school for Ayesha

Dadi :how can u know abt her

Dr: nothing to wory abt her she is improving more if u arrange teacher first in home to teach basics and then u can think abt her school..wat Maan

Maan felt happy to hear tat his baby is improving: really she will talk soon

Dr :yes Maan last time i said to Maaji all credits goes to Geet

Maan look at Dadi who nodes yes and then both watched Geet hugging baby and consoling her..

Dr :if u want i will arrange some teacher

Dadi : ok

Maan :aunty she will be ok

Dr felt overwhelmed to hear aunty from him after so long ...she is Maan's mom ki friend..she te one who delivery Maan and his sibbilings... wen Ayesha born she te one holds her ..once it was, Maan will be running behind calling her aunty aunty..but before few years he totally changed and wenever she sees him, he will be very formal calling dr..she felt sad to see her son ki odd behaviour..

Dr: Maan dont wory she will fine,she patted his cheeks..he know why she did tat, its her antics for him always make him frown but now he missed it and smile at her..


Maan : thanku aunty

Dr smiles and went out followed by Dadi

Dadi : sunatha i know wat u thinking Maan

Dr : yes maaji how cum tis much change

Dadi smiles: u want to know who is behind his change

Dr : hmmm

Dadi :Geet

Dr got shocked &surprised :wat

Dadi : Geet


Dr : oh god im so happy for him..after seeing her im sure she will bring light to km

Dadi : hmm

Dr : did she know abt Maan & mainly abt Ayesha

Dadi : no

Dr : hope she wont denying after knowing te truth

Dadi : she wont i know abt Geet

Dr : ok maaji i will take off..2mor i will cum to check her hmm.

Room

Geet hugging Ayesha,Maan try to touch but both te girls gave a glare to Maan who gulp his saliva

Maan : baby u wont cum to me

Geet : kutty dont talk with him

Maan : wat i did Geet

Geet : how dare u allow dr to put injection for kutty see how its paining for her,to Ayesha amma thane kutty romba valikutha (is it paining so much kutty)


Ayesha pouted and noded yes, showing her bumb

Geet rubbing her bumb: i will scold ur appa ok

Ayesha: Hmm

Maan : Geet pls yar already she is crying and ur pouring oil

Geet : wat

Maan : ok baba im sory ok,he holds his ears

Both girls look at each other..Geet gesture to accept his sory.

Geet : but one condition

Maan : wat

Geet : first u say yes

Maan : anything for my baby

Geet : only kutty not for me

Maan smirks : baby only had te injection so only baby i will do,yana baby

Ayesha look at Geet and then Maan: amma too


Geet hugs her: tats my kutty and showed her tongue to Maan

Maan : ok fine wat

Geet : after she got well u have take us to park,ok

Maan : no way

Geet : too bad te great msk back off from his words so sad looking at Kutty leave it kutty he can do it


Maan roll his eyes : ok fine now im taking

Geet thought and nodes to Kutty..Ayesha hugs him..

Maan kissed her hair : i love my baby

Geet look at them

Maan : Geet im sory for shouting at u

Geet rolled her eyes

Maan : Geet wat happened im asking sory

Geet : Maan if tis is te first times means, i have felt sad but i know my buddhu singh khurana always shout in gussa then later realize his mistake..wat to do meera aunty gave birth to a IDIOT ( Meera is Maan's mom)


Maan first didt get her words later realize wat she said and glare at her : Geet

Geet : i know my name is Geet dont show ur big big eyes ..

Before they start ,Dadi interfers

Dadi : ok u both stop now..i brought juice for baby

Ayesha nodes no ,Geet took it

Geet : kutty pls for me u drink little bit naa pls with baby face..if u drink,after u get well i will give u ur fav choco shake deal

Ayesha nodes and drank juice..

Geet kissed her cheeks : tats my kutty now sleep..

Suddenly Dadi saw blood stains on te floor & notices Geet's toe bleeding..

Dadi: Geet wat is tis u have hurt

Then Geet notice her hurt and felt te pain.she really didt notice te hurt and didt feel te pain..she was just worried for her kutty but now wen Dadi ask abt her wound, she felt te pain..

Geet : ahaa

Dadi : now ur feeling te p[ain, in front fo kutty u forget everyhing, Geet smiled sheepishly

Maan saw her hurt : how it happened Geet ,he took her leg & placed it on his lap..

Geet felt summersault in her stomach wen he palce her leg on his lap.: Maan pls leave naa i will,before she completes Maan glared at her making her to shut her mouth

Maan : just shut up i will get te medicines kit


Before he get up,Nakul came with first aid box

Dadi: Nakul

Nakul: maaji i saw blood stains on te floor and then i remember while rushing Geet baby hit te couch and fall down..so i know she got hurt

Dadi : Geet wat is tis ahan

Geet smiled: dadi i didt notice

Maan : u wont notice anything ,only know to start ur bak bak like chennai express


Geet pouted: go i dont need ur help,she try to take her leg

Maan glared at her and hold her leg tightly

At once Geet screamed: ahaa

Maan got worried: wat happen Geet

Geet : i think i got hurt here too ,showing her calf, leave it Maan i will do

Maan: i said chup chap betao & let me do

Maan didt know wat he is doing,he just worried for her and angry on her for her carelessness..Dadi giggled silently seeing her grandson's possessiveness but wat to do he wont accept his feelings so soon..after all he is from khurana

Dadi : Maan u apply ointment for her,i will have my lunch and send urs

Maan : ok dadi

Dadi left thinking to give them privacy

Maan first saw her toe: u didt get pain Geet

Geet with her baby face: now i feeling ,ahaa

Maan : Geet tum bhi naa

He started to clean her wound

Geet: ahaa,tears welled up in her eyes but she wipe it

Maan saw it: Geet its paining


Geet wipe her tears & gestured Ayesha..Maan dressed her wound .Then he started to push her pant up making Geet shock

Geet : Maan wat u doing

Maan : im checking were all u got wounds

Geet : Maan i will do it

Maan : Geet wats ur problem

Geet : wo wo

Maan staring at her

Geet : Maan understand i cant show myself,tilting her head down,im feeling shy

Maan started to laugh : in tis stage too how can u joke

Geet open her mouth to ground: wat im joking idiot

Maan : wat is tis idiot idiot ahan

Geet : nothing

Maan pushed her pant up till her knee and saw it was swelled..he took te gel & started to massage

Geet stopped him: i will do Maan,but stop seeing his sterness


Geet even though felt te pain ,but his touch creating havoc inside her ..she felt tickling sensation ..butterflies flying in her stomach..she got red cue on her cheeks ..she bite her lips to control her moan..

Geet (st) : babaji wat he think of himself,cant he think once wat his touch doing to me..Kallulimangan,dust dhanav.

Maan finish it: now sit in one place,dont dance here and there

Geet twisted her lip and hugged Ayesha who is sleeping..

Maan went to wash his hands..Then they lunch came..both ate silently ..then Geet slept with Kutty..Maan went to change..

Evening Geet called to chennai and informed to Meena..Meena said some home made remedies and they talk for some time..

Chennai

Prabhu came from office, freshen up and sat on to couch..Meena brought coffee and said abt Geet called and abt Ayesha ki illness

Meena: maama our Geeta have grown up as a woman& a mother too..i was once worried abt her childness ..but now i sure she will be prefect mother for kutty

Prabhu: i said once she got married, she will change.. but she changed before her marriage.. she is my chellam.. my daughter

Meena: maama she is my daughter too.. i have more right on her.

Prabu pulled her to him: without me she cant be born naa


Meena blushed; chi maama wat is tis.. u r going to be soon fil..stop tis antics , if our kids saw us, wat they will think

Rajji: we wont think anything maa, u can continue..

Meena pulled herself and blushed

Rajji : oh god maa u r blushing

Meena: chi podi vayadi..( naughty girl)

Rajji giggled and asked abt Geeta..Meena narrated

Rajji : Amma i think now itself Geeta became khurana marumagal ( bahu,dil)..we have too forget her..

Prabu face became low hearing her words..Meena notice it and said Rajji to freshen up and cum..after she left..Meena sat beside him


Meena: maama

Prabu wipe his tears: i didt think my chella kutty ( sweet doll) will grow soon and leave me.

Meena : maama pls control urself if Geeta sees u like tis she will say no for wedding or ask Maan to shift here

Prabu smiles

Meena : one day she have to leave maama ,but we are lucky to have Maan for Geeta..he will look after Geeta well..if we say tis to Maan ,he will became viduda mappillai ( ghar ki damad) & chuckled

Rajji : oh god love birds didt stop still

At tat time Karti came

Meena: vaapaa i will bring coffee for u both

karti: hmmm

They all started to have coffee ..Meena said sbt Ayesha,Karti said he will call her later...

Rajji: wat happen for srk did he got te job


Prabu: ahan Karti u said u will try a job for him

Prabu: yes paa ,actually he did only his schooling, no certificates too..so i asked my friend whose father is having a big dept store.. his father said he will give store keeper work and for his stay I arranged In one of my friends room paa..

Prabu: hmm tats good

Meena : I think he is from some big family, but poor boy have to struggle, he is not opening his mouth too.. if we ask him to stay with us, he is denying,..why god is punishing good souls

Prabu : Meena we will talk with him don't wory

Meena : hmm, saying she went to prepare dinner..

DELHI

After their dinner, Ayesha is in half sleep..Geet patting her to make her sleep but she is cranky..Maan came and sat beside Geet

Maan : did she sleep, Ayesha open her eyes to see him

Maan hold her hands : baby u didt sleep

Geet cant see her baby like tis, she lean on Maan : Maan I cant see my kutty like tis,


Maan side hug her : dont wory Geet she will be fine..

Geet caress her hair : hmm

Maan : dont cry in front of my baby , yana baby, Ayesha nodes her head

Geet didt say anything..Maan was seeing a different Geet now..he didt think Geet will be tis much worried for Ayesha, ..he silently thank Geet to send Geet for his baby..

Anni came : bhai

Geet straighten herself

Anni : how is she Geet

Geet : hmm, , she is trying to sleep

Anni : Geet im sory coz of me only she got ill

Maan got confused : wat u mean

Anni : Bhai pls don't get angry on me

Maan : first say me


Anni : yesterday we went to park, she asked for golgappe and we both had it, she was nervous thinking wat will Maan do to her.

Maan got angry and started to yell : r u mad, wat te hell u brought,

Ayesha got disturbed due to his sudden scream,and open her eyes looking at Maan..Geet got angry on Maan for waking Ayesha


Geet : Maan if u want to shout go out and shout don't disturb my baby..to Ayesha , nothing daa kutty we will beat appa to scare u, hmm

Anni : im sory Geet

Geet : Anni its ok, it will happen.. u know how many time I too had food poisoning due to road sides food , u have to see Appa will glare at me, but again I wil eat it, leave it, all fathers are like tat only..u go and sleep, 2mor u having col aa

Anni : why Geet u don't have office

Geet : no im not going to office till kutty get well, looking at Maan, if my khadoosboss fire me also no problem

Anni (st) : how can he fire owner of his company, then he have to sleep in te road

Maan rolled his eyes seeing her nautanki

Geet : Maan from 2mor im in leave, if u allow or no I don't care

Maan : did I say anything abt it no naa then

Anni : bhai im sory and hugs him

Maan smiles : its ok but don't repeat next time, kiss her hair

Anni bid gn and left

Maan kissed Ayesha head and was abt to go, Ayesha holds his hand

Maan : baby

Ayesha : paa stay with me

Maan lyed beside her : hmm ok, im here u sleep

Geet stood up : ok Maan u sleep with her I sleep In her room, ( as Geet shifted Ayesha to her room), she was abt to move, Ayesha holds her hand too and started to cry

Maaneet got panick : wat happen baby, kutty

Ayesha : I want amma too

Geet : hmm, she sat on either side holding her..Ayesha hold both they hands and slept..Maan slept hugging her..Geet sitting beside Ayesha , applying oil on her stomach as per Meena's instruction .. she is pressing Ayesha ki legs as she was twisting her leg in paining.. Maan suddenly got up to check Ayesha and saw Geet sitting beside her..

Maan saw te time , it was 1 clock , got shocked : Geet u didt sleep

Geet placed her finger on her lips : shhh, u sleep


Maan felt overwhelmed seeing her care for Ayesha.. he saw Meena maa in Geet today.. wen he stayed in Chennai, how Meena maa look after him, whole night sitting beside him, wen he was ill..he thought both maa beti dido same in looking after they family..

Maan got up to go to his room , thinking Ayesha slept, at once he took his hand from her, Ayesha wake up and started to cry..Geet glared at him like she will burn him, he gulp his saliva seeing Geet and silently slept near Ayesha patting her

Maan :wat happen baby, im just going to washroom, wat happen

Ayesha hug him , pulling Geet, Geet lyed next to her patting her..it look like a prefect family, Ayesha sleeping on Maan, Geet lying next to them patting her..both didt realize how they are lying but just worried for their baby...at last Geet closed her eyes due to tiredness wen she confirm Ayesha slept..

Morning..

Maan got up and saw Ayesha sleeping on him.. he checked her temperature , got relife tat her fever got down.. he thought to make her lye on te bed, and abt to raise his hand, but cant and saw Geet was lying on his arms.. Maan got shock to see her tis much close to him.. he felt nice to hold his two girls,. And look at Geet who was sleeping peacefully on his arms..he pulled Geet close to him and close his eyes to feel tis moment.. he love to hold her..

Maan (st) : wat is tis feel, why I like to hold her..Geet was nuzzling on his neck making him burn with her antics.. he frozen wen Geet laced her leg on his lower part, making him groan

Maan : oh no.. he chided his thought.. he slwoly pulled hsi hands from Geet hold..palced Ayesha on te bed properly..at once Geet hugged her.. Maan smile at them.. he kiss on Ayesha ki forehead and was abt to kiss on Geet's forehead but stopped ..shocked to think wat he is doing..


Maan (st) : wat im trying to do, oh no, im became mad in front of her, but Maan it was just a mistake, u kisesd Ayesha so u didt notice its Geet, so dont need to worry, he gave himself a reason and went to his room to get ready for kc

Maan got ready and left to his office before checking Ayesha , who was sleeping with Geet hugging her.. he informed Dadi , not to wake them as they slept late night..

PRECAP : GEET TAKING INTERVIEW FOR AYESHA TEACHER..WILL SHE

NEXT PART:80 , PG 37

(THANKU ASH , THANKU SO MUCH FOR EDITING PIS FOR ME..LOVE U..THANKU NELUFAR FOR ALLOWING TO TAKE UR PICS..)



Edited by Desigirls12 - 11 years ago
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Ahh sorry for being late for comment


Awesome dii !!!! Geet turned into a mother when it's come to ayesha
Unknown to herself ... she made a relation with Ayesha which is unbrokable
It's divinde that she didn't even able feel her own pain
Even ayesha had same feeling for Geet
I am egar to know maan past and Geet confession
Please post it soon
Edited by -Mitu- - 11 years ago
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amazing update di i just want to know who is ayesha maan is married😕😕

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