MG ff Uljhe Rishtey----kahanni ek unkhili kali ki part 16,17 on128,139 - Page 26

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Posted: 11 years ago

part 1 ( mirror this ff is from your idea m just love you dear )

maan Singh khurana no one business man of India or say world but so empty just waiting for his life biggest happiness which is his baby who will fulfill his life with so much love but alas he is always unlucky in relation love and happiness only dadi is true sense with him or his other relation he lost his ma papa in child age and tied very early with Leading model Sameera who is just busy with her career , her party and show off business

first she deny to become mother for her career that she lost her so called figure and when she want to become mother nature played game with her that she lost right or chance to become mother ...

dadi first time in her life took wrong decision to marry me with sameera in age of 21 and now after 3 year of our marriage it will be conformed but she get fool by this sam and now he have to carry this relation for dadi so she don't feel guilty with though that she choose wrong person as humsafer for me

maan just went to baby room which was desined by him and his dadi oh it is full of things of baby from toy to cloth but now like it is just dream which snatch from me because of that doc mistake that dooc one mistake don't know destroy which innocent life which carrying my baby , don't know she have knowledge or not maan just took one photo of baby an in room , baby room just caressing image of baby and mummer with tears why god why you give me such punishment first you saw me dream and snatch my dream like this why he just cried out mera baby kaha hai god kaha hai

Mujhe yunhi karke khwabon se juda

Jaane kahan chup ke baitha hai khuda

Jaanu na main kab hua khud se gumshuda

Kaise jiyun ruh bhi mujhse hai juda

Kyun meri rahein mujhse puche ghar kahan hai

Kyun mujhse aake dastak puche dar kahan hai

Rahein aisi jinki manjil hi nahin

Dhundho mujhe ab main rehta hun wahin

Dil hai kahin aur dhadkan hai kahin

Sansein hai magar kyun zinda main nahin

other part of same city savitri girls hostel one girl age 18 just sit on bed with pregnancy test kit which indicate positive , she just totally blank with result she just thinking when nobody touch me in any sense than what it this... it is fifth kit which giving positive sine ... she is so blank to react anything how this possible when she never touch by any guys like this than how this will be happen

In age 18 who is have problem that how she give her exam fee , hostel fee her food , but she is full of life never complaint to her babaji for this life an orphan life she always ready to help other , but always protect her dignity that why she never make any boys friends because she want to make her career with high education , attraction , relationship , boyfriends ,love she blocked her hart for all this to give her 100% to her education and now facing such tuffan which may be destroy Geet life yes Geet an orphan who don't have anybody in life now just standing in verge of lost life why ...

Rait bani haathon se yun beh gayi

Takdir meri beekhri har jagah

Kaise likhun phir se nayi dastan

Gham ki siyahi dikhti hai kahan

Aahein jo chuni hain meri thi raza

Rehta hoon kyun phir khud se hi khafa

Aisi bhi hui thi mujhse kya khata

Tune jo mujhe di jinay ki saza

Now so many qus in front of her that how she will give explanation to hostel, her collage and how he will confirm her pregnancy how and upon that how she will prove that she is innocent how ...

she just mummer why god main to independent hona chati thi

phir ab kon vishwas karega I am geet handa 18 year virgin girl caring baby baby who will trust me , hostel wale to muje yaha rahene bhi nahi denge ku aisa kiya apane mere sath ku

Banday tere maathe pe hain jo khinchay

Bas chand lakiron jitna hai jahaan

Aansu mere mujhko mita te hain rahe

Rab ko hukm na mit ta hai yahan

Raahein aisi jinki manzil hi nahin

Dhundho mujhe ab main rehta huin wahin

Dil hai kahin aur dhadkan hai kahin

Saansien hai magar kyun zinda main nahin

Kyun main jaagun aur woh sapne bol raha hai

Kyun mera rab yun aankhien khole so raha hai

Kyun main jaagun

Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Part 2

geet sleeping on her bed from last three day she don't cone out from her room just thinking and crying to her faith at last she make decision if it is her babaji decision that this baby become part of my life than ok , she is fighter and she will face this also yes she have to face this situation there is no one who will guide her or tell her way to come out from this problem she have to try herself yes and she will be and this is not her fault and she have to try to save her innocent and upon that she have to act practically because there is no one come and soul this problem

she have to search first job yes job till now she will go with her scholarship money but she know she have to lost that in few days so first thing is job she just wake up and took news paper and start to search job in paper , she circle 2/3 add which are ok with her it is secretary job , she take bath eat something and went for interview ...first two interview is ok where she go thru only eye teasing sometime she feel frustrated with her beauty which took unwanted attention if she is old geet till now she just brake their face but now she just make herself clam

she is going on road when she saw some mob near car , she just went near car and look there one lady who have asthma attack , all just watching her not doing anything , she feel like punch everyone , she speak in high tone what the hell what happening hear why you all stand hear like it is show that you all seeing it don't have guts to help her than just went away from hear

she just entered in car and ask what happen mam where is your inhaler she just indicated to her purse geet just grab that and pull out inhaler and put it front of that old lady mouth she just took that and after 5 minute she clam geet just start ac of car and give her water in that half and hour went in this , that old lady fell better and say in low voice thanks beta , geet just nodded in yes

geet - mam you want to go doc

old lady - no beta feel better now

geet - why you alone like this and where is your driver how your family member send you like this all alone asthma ka attact to kaha bhi aa sakta hai na

old lady - oh oh stop stop beta so many qus , family main to ek khadoos but bahot payyr karne wala pota hai jise nahi pat ake main bahar aay hu wo kya hai na driver or servent ko dara kar aayi hu but this ashama ne gadbad kar diya , driver to mere liye ice crem lane gaya hai wo mera grandson khane nahi deta that old lady make puppy face

geet look her with ow she want to pull this lady cheek whe she make face

geet - but mam apko kuch ho jata to

old lady - chalo ye jane do deko god ko muje tumse milana tha so that happen now you tell me what is name of this beautiful angel

geet just smile shyly and say Geet handa mam

old lady hai don't called me old I am young now

geet just laugh on he talk and say ok ok so what I will called you GF girl friend

old lady - ya that's cool dude

geet just shake her head and just than her eyes went on clock and she say oh god I have to go I hve to go

old lady geet clam down what happen

geet oh GF I have interview in khurana construction in 15 minute how I will reach there , I want this job

old lady get surprised with Khurana construction

she just say hey dude just clam down with my car we will reach on time look driver also come and don't tell him about attack please m GF make again baby face , geet just nodded in yes

driver just want to ask about geet but dadi just cut him and say ramu all qus letter first please took car to khuran construction

ramu want to ask siii

dadi just cut him and say ha don't know who is khurana just took car imm she have to reach there

driver get confused but just start the car in 10 minute they come in front of KC dadi just say geet beta BL and I will waiting for you hear come early geet want to say no but dadi just stop her and say go

geet just went inside company she feel little tense she just ask in reception where a little fat girl with munching chocolate say her to wait near md office

Where more 2/3 girls are sitting ,geet feel so tense she just start tio walk hear and there in front of md cabin with bending just than she hit something heard


she look up and just lost in two chocolate big eyes , that person just hold geet by wrist so she cant fail down

That person also lost in her innocent beauty and when he touch her tummy he feel like he touch his lost things ...geet feel something new in her tummy like something rolling in her tummy




Precap



Geet faint in maan arm

now all you think what maan done

Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
please go with this link and comment waiting

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4028300/qus-of-maaneet-baby


hi
gunjar
i want banner with pregnant geet
please


Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
maan toh fida hogaya hoga...chalo maan aur geet amne samne toh agaye...magar kabab mein haddi woh sam hai na...

superb updates...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely updates n fr d pm also...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 11 years ago

for the start of New ff Mahi..
Hope to read this many updates...

Awesome update mahi...
great story line..
how can a women be so insensitive..
one side a women such insensitive and on athoer side a 18 years girl suffering to save her baby while she doesnt even get it how it happened..
how does a doctor do such a blunder..
but babaji bhi sab soch kar karvatha hai..
hope maan doesnt deserve that women and geet doesnt deserve this loneliness
now waiting to know how destinity is going meet them both
and what lot they have to face in this journey of life..


for such a beautiful start mahi.. but also very emotional..
for u..

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Posted: 11 years ago
Part 2
Awesome update..
hayye maan aur geet met each other..
so it was daddi whom geet saved
now i hope everything goes well
wow daddi escaped for icecream..
hayye daddi sooo cute..
geet mere taraf se bhi daddi ki cheeks pull karo na plzz..
so geet came for interview in kc..
maan and geet felt something thats what we call unconsious mind..
precap me geet bahosh hogaya maan ki haath mai..
now waiting to know whats going to happen..
continue soon...

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Posted: 11 years ago

everyone..

crazydream thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago

Beautiful updates

Awesome

Maan in immense pain of losing his child n upar se wrong life partner.
Geet is also shocked to know that she is pregnant.
Dono ki halat ek hi Hai.

Geet looking for a job. Good that she met Dadi. Ab Dadi hi sab kuch karegi. Geet ko chinta karne ki jarurat nahi Hai.
Helping her to recover.

Maan n Geet Dono aamne saamne. Wow.
Very good written.

Eagerly waiting for next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update👏👏👏 Different concept⭐️⭐️⭐️its so interesting...Loved it so much😳waiting for the next updateThanks for the PM dear😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow awesome concept
Both parts was great
I loved it

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