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Ashlok SS-Bandhan

Last part





Hi friends...i want to thank u all for your great response and love for this story but due to lack of time ending this ss today...and as its the last update i expect a little big big comment from u my lovely readers...
And don't be sad i will be back soon with second season of this ss...which will be about ashlok's marriage and married life and much more nirma😆...i mean continuation of their love journey...
Now enough blah blah from my side now enjoy the update...





Shlok and astha both were happy with each other but swati was very jealous seeing them together though she didn't create any scene in the party but something was definitely cooking up in her mind...
Swati:shlok tum sirf merey ho...aur main tumhein astha se wapis cheen kar rahoon gi...

Suddenly lights of the hall dimmed out and soft romantic music started playing...

Astha and shlok were standing in one corner ...watching the dancing couples with a smile on their faces...

Soon rahul appeared and forced them to dance...they refused but he didn't listen to their no and pushed them on the dance floor...

Shlok extended his hand and ask for her hand...

Astha:shlok mujhey dance karna nahi aata...

Shlok:itna muskhil bhi nahi hai...bus waisey karti jayiye jaisey main karoon ga...and he again asked for her hand saying...tu kya ab aap...and she slowly placed her hand in his...

Shlok placed her other hand on his shoulder and his other hand went around her waist pulling her to himself...

They slowly started moving on the music beats...

Haan Kisi shayar ki ghazal
Jo deh rooh ko sukoon ke pal
Koi mujhko yun mila hai,jaise banjarey ko ghar
Be mausam ki sehar,ya sard main dopahar
Koi mujhko yun mila hai,jaise banjarey ko ghar



His intense eyes were fixed on hers while he was continously caressing her waist with his thumb...making it difficult for her to breathe...

With the change of music he pulled her once more to him ...this time reducing all the distance between them...his hot breath fanned her lips...

Her whole existence was shivering on the magical effect he was creating on her body and senses...making it almost impossible for her to resist his desire filled eyes...

She freed herself from the circle of his arms and ran outside the hall...

Due to dim lights no one noticed her walking out of the hall...

Shlok followed her tooo...but she rushed into the garden and stopped hugging a pillar...

Her breathing was heavy and she was blushing to the extremes...everytime shlok came near her she felt nervous but today she was experiencing some totally new feelings that she never experienced before...

She was still drowned in those sensations when suddenly shlok saw her...he quietly came behind her and noticed her blushing...

Shlok whispered...mujhse sharma rahi hain...

She came back to reality when he grabbed her shoulders...

Aap...she turned and looked into his eyes ...

Shlok:astha...abhi tu mainey kuch kiya bhi nahi hai...aur aap itna sharma rahein hain...shaadi ke baad aap ka kya hoga astha...he said in a husky voice with a naughty smile on his face...

Astha:bohat badmash hain aap...she blushed more and said...choriye mujhey ander janey dijiye...she was about to go inside but shlok was quick enough to pin her to the near by wall...

She was feeling nervous now but shlok was as usual smiling...

Shlok:jab se aap ne mujhey ''i love you'' bola hai...main bata bhi nahi sakta ke main kitna kush hoon...he said cupping her face...aik bar phir se kahiye na...please...he requested like a kid...

Astha who was nervous first was now feeling emotional on his touching request...

She looked into his eyes...and whispered..i love you shlok...her hand caressed his face...
His eyes were clearly reflecting intensity of his love...he leaned down and planted a kiss on her forehead...

The moment all her nervousness was gone and she was lost in his love filled eyes...


Jazbaat naye se milein hain,janey ye asar kya hua hai
Ek aas mili phir mujhko,jo qabool kisi ne kiya hai
Haan Kisi shayar ki ghazal
Jo deh rooh ko sukoon ke pal
Koi mujhko yun mila hai,jaise banjarey ko ghar
Be mausam ki sehar,ya sard main dopahar
Koi mujhko yun mila hai,jaise banjarey ko ghar



Shlok slowly moved his lips to her cheeks and kissed her there...and then his lips traced every inch of her face...it was difficult for her to resist him...but when his lips were about to touch hers ..she placed her hand on his lips...and shook her head in no...please shlok ...she requested...

Shlok slightly smiled ...theek hai...main wait karoon ga uss din ka jab aap poori tarah se meri ho jayen gi astha...phir aap bhi mujhey rook nahi payen gi...and she hugged him in shyness...

They were lost in each others arms unaware that swati was watching them through the window...her patience hit all limits...
Swati:astha...bohat ho gaya ab tumhara tamasha...main tumhein nahi choron gi...dekho ab main tumharey saath kya karti hoon astha...

Shlok and astha walked into the hall again...when rahul spotted them together at the entrance...
Rahul:hey kahan they tum dono...
Shlok:yahi tu they...
Rahul:acha waisey jo tu ne bola tha woh mangwa liya hai mainey...he extended his hand and showed him the small gift box...

Shlok:thanks yaar...and then he looked towards astha...yeh lijiye yeh aap ke liye meri taraf se...
Astha:aik aur gift...she frowned in surprise...
Shlok:nodded in yes...and then said..main ne rahul se bola tha laney ke liye...
Rahul wished her happy birthday and leave from there but swati heard their converstion...

Shlok:apna gift khol kar dekhiye tu sahi...
Astha opened the box and found a new mobile inside...
Astha:mobile...
Shlok:haan...mobile...kyun ke aap ko iss ki bohat ziada zaroorat hai...
Astha:lekin...shlok...
Shlok:lekin wekin kuch nahi...he placed a finger on her lips and said..chup chap rakhiye issey..aur jab chahey apney baba aur ghar walon se baat kijiye...

Astha slightly kissed his finger and held his hand ...thank you shlok...meri zindagi main aaney ke liye aur mujhey itni sari khusyian deney ke liye...

Shlok...yeh tu sirf shuruwat hai...
Astha smiled lovingly...
Shlok:ab ander chalein...she nodded in yes...

After sometime rahul asked shlok to come with him as he wanted him to meet his other friends who were late in the party...
Astha was sitting alone when swati came there...wished her bday and asked her to come with her...

Astha refused but then she forcefully dragged her and moved outside saying its her bday and she wants to give her something special that she will never forget...

Shlok who was at a distance from them saw swati taking astha with her forcefully...he followed them quickly but swati was quite clever...she locked the entrance door from outside...and dragged astha to the car parking...

Shlok was worried now as he knew how mad swati get at times...he immediately rushed towards the back door of the hall...

Astha was protesting and trying to free herself from her grip...
Astha:swati choriye mujhey...aap mujhey iss waqt theek nahi lag rahi...iss liye main aap se koi baat nahi karna chahti...

Swati opened her car door and picked out a gun...and placed on her head...
Swati:band karo apni bakwas...theek tu tum nahi ho issi liye ab tak shlok se chipki hui ho...lekin tum fikr mat karo ...aaj main apney shlok ko wapis pa kar rahoon gi...

Astha jerked her away...
Astha:kya lagta hai aap ko ke mujhey maar kar aap shlok ko paa len gi tu yeh bhool hai aapki...kyun ke shlok sirf merey hain...sirf merey...

Swati:nahi woh merey elawa kisi se pyaar nahi kar sakta...

Astha:jo sochna hai aapko soch lijiye...kyun ke pyaar tu shlok sirf mujhse hi kartey hain...aur aap ko main kya kahoon iss ke siwa ke aap ko ilaj ki zaroorat hai..aap bimar hain swati...kyun ke aap shlok se pyaar nahi karti bulkey aap ne unhein apni zid bana liya hai ...qasam khali hai ke unhein kush nahi rehney den gi...

Swati:haan haan..hoon main bimar...nahi rehney doon gi main ussey kush...uss ki himat kaisey hui mujhey ...swati ko reject karney ki...lekin bus ab aur nahi...woh yeh sab merey saath tumhari wajah se kar raha haina...iss liye aaj main woh wajah hi mita doongi...she madly pressed the trigger repeatedly but suddenly shlok came infront of astha and all bullets pierced his body...

Shlokkk...astha shouted at the top of her voice when he fell unconscious infront of her eyes...he was lying in a pool of blood...

Astha was not believing her eyes...she placed his head in her lap...and started crying and shouting ...shlok...please apni aankhein kholiye...please shlok...she patted his face...begged him to open his eyes...

Astha was crying holding him in her arms ...her saree was all stained with blood ...while swati gone totally out of control...she was horrified that she killed shlok...

Swati was trembling and shouting ...nahi main shlok ko nahi marna chahti thi...she was repeating this sentence again and again...

On hearing sound of firing rahul and all other people came there running...and soon they took shlok to the hospital...swati was taken tooo...

Rahul informed shlok's mama mami and it came as a big shock to everyone in the family...they reached hospital ...shlok was in operation theatre while astha was sitting
on the floor outside operation theatre door sticking to it ...crying bitterly and praying for shlok...

On seeing avdhoot she totally shattered and cried her pain out hugging him...

Astha:baba shlok...mujhey chor ke tu nahi jayen gey na...boliye na baba...she was sobbing badly...

Avdhoot:...himat rakh beta...he tried to soothe her pain but he himself was very much worried for shlok...when astha saw anjali ...she rushed to hug her ...aayi ...aap tu boliye na shlok mujhey chor ke nahi jayen gey na...her whole face was wrecked by sobs...she was looking so pale and lifeless...

Anjali:kuch nahi hoga terey shlok ko...she tightly hugged her and hide her in her arms...

After several hours operation ended and doctor came out...

Doctor informed them that operation was successful but they cann't say anything about shlok's recovery time...
Everyone was relieved that shlok is out of danger now...

When he gained his consciousness his family and avdhoot visited him...he was happy seeing all his family together but his eyes were searching only for astha who along with varad was busy with the police handling swati's case...

She dismissed the case on swati made by rahul saying that...

Astha:I know ke swati ne bohat galat kiya hai inspector sahib lekin woh tu khud apney hosh main nahi hai...aisey insaan ko main kya saza hoon jissey uper waley ne hi saza de di ho...iss liye main uss par koi case nahi karna chahti..aap ja saktey hain...police left from there...

Varad admired her for her decision ...and that she is the right and perfect choice for shlok...and then he said ...astha tumhein shlok se nahi milna kya...jao ussey hosh aagaya...

Shlok's eyes were already glued to the door when astha entered inside...
suddenly a faint smile appeared on his face seeing her...

Shlok:asthaaa...he said in a broken voice...

Her eyes were filled with tears...she slowly sat next to him on his bed and gently held his hand and kissed his hand ...while tears were falling from her eyes...Thank God ke aap bilkul theek hain shlok...warna mujhey laga tha ke main aap ko ...she stopped...and cried bitterly holding his hand to her lips...

Shlok:promise kiya tha na aap se ke chor ke nahi jaon ga tu kaisey tor deta...he hardly spoke wiping her tears as he was tooo weak...but still he said in a shaky voice...aur abhi tu mujhey aap se shaadi karni ha...aap ke saath bohat sara romance karna hai...hamarey bachon ko iss duniya main lana hai...he said with a smile on his pale face...

Astha blushed and lightly hit on his chest..aisi halat main bhi aap ko badmashi hi soch rahi hai shlok
Shlok:
aaahhh... he cried out in pain...as unintentionally astha's hand touched his wound...

Astha suddenly got tensed and apologized and rubbed his bare chest with her hand softly to soothe her pain which was covered with bandages at places...

Astha:abhi bhi dard ho raha hai kya...she asked with a worried face...

Shlok suddenly got emotional...astha...small drops of water floated in his eyes...
Astha:hun...
Shlok:I love you...


Jaise koi kinara,deta ho sahara
Mujhe wo mila,kisi mod par
Koi raat ka taara,karta ho ujala
Waisey hi roshan kare,woh shehar

Dard merey woh bhulaa hi gaya kuch aisa asar huya
Jeena mujhey phir se woh sikha raha

Jaise baarish kar de tar,ya marham dard par
Koi mujhko yun mila hai,jaise banjarey ko ghar
Koi mujhko yun mila hai,jaise banjarey ko ghar



She smiled and kissed his forehead...i love you tooo shlok...she spoke in between the kiss and the next moment they took each other in a soft hug...a hug assuring that they will be always there for each other...

Muskata yeh chehra,deta hai jo pehra
Janey chupata kya dil ka samander
Auron ko tu har dam,saya deta hai
Woh dhoop main hai khada,khud magar
Chot lagi hai ussey phir kyun mehsoos mujhey ho raha
Dil tu bata de kya hai iraada tera

Main parinda besabar,tha ura jo darbadar
Koi mujhko yun mila hai,jaise banjarey ko ghar
Koi mujhko yun mila hai,jaise banjarey ko ghar



2 months passed ...shlok was on wheel chair ...recovering slowly...at times he felt frustrated but astha was always there for him as his strength and support...

Dard merey woh bhulaa hi gaya kuch aisa asar huya
Jeena mujhey phir se woh sikha raha

Jaise baarish kar de tar,ya marham dard par
Koi mujhko yun mila hai,jaise banjarey ko ghar
Koi mujhko yun mila hai,jaise banjarey ko ghar


After 4 months shlok was perfectly normal...soon he got a job...and with passing time he started his small event management company...due to his devotion and his hardwork it soon touched the heights of popularity ...it was all impossible for him without his family's and moreover without astha's help and wise decisions...

She even convinced their families and even shlok to delay their marriage for his carrier...

Though sooo many things changed in their lives but some things were still the same...shlok's naughty behavior...his acts to tease astha and her shyness on his closeness ...time brought them more close to each other...

He was successful in his life as a businessman ...he always considered astha as his good luck which turned all his dreams into reality...his love...his life...and his business partner now...

When he settled well in his carrier...he informed his family that now he wants to marry astha...

Yahan chain se bus rukh jaon,kyun dil yeh mujhey kehta hai
Koi mujhko yun mila hai,jaise banjarey ko ghar
Koi mujhko yun mila hai,jaise banjarey ko ghar


Finally the happy day came when their families fixed their wedding date...

Anjali teased him saying that he couldn't see astha now till their marriage...
Shlok:yeh tu impossible hai..astha sab ko samjhayiye na...
Astha blushed and ran to her room...
Shlok very innocently requested to avdhoot...uncle please aik akhri baar tu astha se milney ki permission de dijiye...phir tu aap hamein alag karney hi waley hain...
Avdhoot agreed ...he quickly rushed to her room...
They all laughed when anjali said ...main issey achey se janti hoon... yeh lardhka shaadi ki rasamon main bhi astha se milna nahi chor sakta...

Astha was blushing watching his picture in her mobile...when he suddenly trapped her in his arms and kissed on her cheek...abi se itna miss mat kariye mujhey...

Shlok...she spontaneously spoke and turned into his arms facing him...aap yahan kya kar rahey hain...sab kya kahein gey...jayiye bahir...

Shlok:itni muskhil se permission mangi hai aapke baba se aur aap chahti hain ke main chala jaon...theek hai chala jata hoon...socha tha ke akhiri baar shaadi se pehley aap ko dekh loon...lekin jab kisi ko meri zaroorat hi nahi hai tu kya faida...he turned and took a few steps...when astha stopped him holding his hand...

Astha:shlok...mera woh matlab nahi tha na...she lowered her gaze...

Shlok lifted her chin...tu seedhi tarah nahi bol sakti ke aap bhi mujhse door nahi reh sakti...she blushed slightly...

He slowly cupped her face...''bus astha kush din aur mujhsey door reh lijiye apni iss duniye main kyun ke uss ke baad aap ki zindagi sirf mujhse shuru ho kar mujh par hi khatam ho gi''...he said as their foreheads came together and she smiled ...

Shlok:bus ab main besabri se intezaar kar raha hoon us din ka jab aap meri dulhan ban kar merey ghar mein aayen gi...he said kissing her cheeks...and she shyly went into his arms...


THE END





Edited by meerab... - 11 years ago
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Wow omgg meerab this was just amazing and literally perfect👏👏 The beginning when they both danced with each other and how Shlok pulling her closer😳☺️ And then the scene outside, omgee kissys everywhere! Aww it was soo cute how Shlok understood Astha and didn't carry on with the kiss! I think these too need to get married ASAP, Shlok can't control himself near her, wonder what he will do when they actually get married😉😳 Oh this Swati I could kill her how dare she shoot Shlok🥺 But Aashlok reuniting in the hospital was too cute! Shlok just needs an opportunity to make Astha feel shy and blush😳😆 The ending, was lovely! Shlok never fails to be his naughty self😆 Finally they're getting married and all barriers will now be out of the way. Just loved the ending. Can't wait till you come back with season 2! To write about their married life! Which will no doubt me amazing👏 it was a pleasure reading this FF, which started off as one of your OS' s which built up to a wonderful FF👍🏼
P.S. wow didn't realise I could write this much😲 sayum should be happy seeing this😉 oh and love you🤗
Edited by ...Ayesha... - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Did I beat aishaa? Btw will unres tonight😃
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Sory frgot to unres😆
swati shot shlok😡 bt ashlok always meant to be❤️ loveeed it so romantc..shlok teases hr whle in hospital too😛 glad ssn2 is cmg..n yeah aftr mariage toh double nirma bnta hai😉
Edited by Aishaa3 - 11 years ago
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Wow meerab...what an ending! Perfect!! 👏 It was beautifully written 😃
Loved the romantic start...their dance Btw never heard the song before that u have mentioned. I listened to it after reading ur story and omg it is such an amazing song...i am in love with it. Perfect choice!! 😃😳 In fact i am listening to it right now while commenting 😆
Anyhoo...later their romance outside and those kisses ☺️ as usual shlok being naughty and astha being shy 😳 And that kiss on the mouth 😲 I thought it was gonna happen 😉 But i am glad it didn't and astha stopped him 😳 Let's save this level of romance for after marriage 😉😆
OMG...what a twist it was meerab 😲 Shlok got shot!! 😲😭 Left me completely shocked...didn't expect it at all. For a second i doubted whether he will survive but then i reminded myself that i was reading ur story and not some script by CVs so u won't be unfair to ur audience and leave them sad and unsatisfied 😉😆😆
But it was all very emotional...esp. Ashlok's hospital scene but really cute. I loved that u gave it a little humorous touch instead of making it super-emotional 😳😆
The last scene was again cute and romantic perfect as an ending of one journey and start of another 😳
Now eagerly waiting for ur next season meerab...i bet it will be super nirma ☺️ 😳 Can't wait for u to start writing abt ashlok's next beautiful phase of their life...marriage!
Lastly meerab i wud like to thank you for this wonderful fiction...it was a great pleasure reading it 😳

P.s. U asked for a long long comment and here it is 😉😆 I hope u r happy with it 😛
Edited by Sam_15 - 11 years ago
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U r ending this ss meerab? 😲😭
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ...Ayesha...

Did I beat aishaa? Btw will unres tonight😃

Urgh 😡😡
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Posted: 11 years ago
Meerab wow u includd bnjara❤️😳
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meerab ye kya kardiya tumne hah..the end itni jaldi ,jaldi se wadha karoo agla season jalthi shuru karoge .wise superb episode I really loved it

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